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Comment on piece: Two-Minute Danger Theater 06: The Voice "Death Stalks at Midnight" Ch 6

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Review of Two-Minute Danger Theater 06: The Voice "Death Stalks at Midnight" Ch 6

I really like these, I think the writing is funny and it's produced to fit the writing (same person?)

I would like to hear this series on my local radio station. Problem is, it doesn't fit the "public radio sound," which I understand is liked and desired by many, if not most, of the people who currently listen to public radio. I'm not one of those. I'm a "public" though, and I'd like to hear these on my station.

Most of the stuff sounds the same every day, too polished and too slow. Mix it up!

I'm betting that if you have some reason to aim a radio show at people under 34, this would be a good bump segment. Even better, use it as a funding drive segment, and call the producer for an interview, too. You could play these during the funding drive in hopes of getting some pledges from the 34 & under crowd (which, would include me).

Does anyone produce content specifically tailored to funding drives? If so, this would fit in there.

Comment on piece: Life Stories - Families: Fathers, Sons & Brothers

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Review of Life Stories - Families: Sons & Brothers

I have had recent cause to listen to some of the work from the life stories collection, and this particular hour remains my favorite. So inspired, in spite of the professional connection, I offer this review:

Interior portraits with character shaping moments revealed with a rare intimacy.These stories certainly can stand on their own, but together, as an hour, they make compelling radio. Allison's delicate "behind the curtain" approach to humanness is exceptionally poignant in this hour. Perhaps because together they expose a male fragility we are still not used to witnessing in the mainstream.

Good for air really any time, but most especially fine for Father's day.

Comment on piece: An Interview with Joe Barbera

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Review of An Interview with Joe Barbera

Barbera talks about the creative process, and his points are well-illustrated by carefully chosen excerpts from a host of favorite cartoons. The interview starts approx. 2 mins into the piece and ends at 21.30; as the producer alludes above, it might be more easily incorporated into a show without the host intro/outro as the sudden appearance of a WNYC voice may confuse listeners! It could provide historical perspective for a show about animation, or excerpted for a show about the creative process.

Even reveals the origin of the cry "yabadabadoo" from the flintstones! HW.

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Review of Harvey Pekar: Stetson Shoes (deleted)

I'm not sure how this left me feeling...odd I suppose but certainly curious. it's a quirky commentary, and nothing even close to the mainstream concern, and just because of that, extremely refreshing.
It's the sort of thing any studio should have on hand to air: "just because". I can hear it coming out of nowhere and being glad of it.

vm

Comment on piece: The Ears Have It! [excerpt]

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Review of The Ears Have It! [excerpt]

I love it that all of us audio folks push the Theater of the Mind, the convenience of audio, the fact that, if you turn the sound down on a movie, you can't readily figure out what's going on, but you leave the sound on, and close your eyes, and you catch 90% of it.

Play this piece during a funding drive, I think it would be an enjoyable short piece and would give the local hosts something to talk about right afterwards.

Comment on piece: An Anatomy of Humanity

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Review of An Anatomy of Humanity

I remember watching the events unfold on television -- I had no radio in the hotel room my family was crammed into while our new home was being fumigated -- and saw two firefighters emerge from the dust of the collapsing first tower, turn to each other and hug, right there on camera, not even realizing they were on camera. I cried when the first building began to fall, and I cried when I saw these two burly men crying and hugging, knowing they'd come _this close_.

That's the feeling I get from this piece. I like to hear new formats, but sometimes a good, straight-forward commentary hits home just as well. This piece reminds me a lot of that day in the hotel room, when we woke up and saw the events. There was a lot of shock, much more grief, but some relief and, for some who made it out alive, joy.

This piece should be played any time they are talking about Sept 11, but I'd like to hear it in mid-spring, when you aren't expecting it. It will ring louder then, when separated from the rest.

Comment on piece: The Power of One

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Review of The Power of One

Geo Beach is one of public radio's most provocative commentators. In "The Power of One" he not only succeeds in deftly describing the extra quirkiness of Alaskan politics but also taps into the universal theme that even one vote can make a difference. Then, he turns the tables on this cliche and makes you almost wish that wasn't the case. Thought provoking and humorous. A welcome addition to any program, especially as the next Presidential election draws near. - Joe Bev.

P.S. - Geo's piece would work very well in 2008, more so than when first reviewed this. I encourage station to run this election piece.

Comment on piece: Christmas in the Trenches

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Review of Christmas in the Trenches

Powerful, little known anecdote about WWI described by John McCutcheon, whose moving song plays throughout the story. His reflections draw explicit connections to Vietnam and of course, current battles. However, the tape of him speaking sounds as though it’s coming to us from 1914, which is a little distracting. Must have been taped on the phone, or else he was trapped in a cave. But one is grateful for the story, no matter, and it makes me long to hear a fuller account from one or more of the soldiers. The producer accurately describes airing possibilities. sl

Comment on piece: First Menstruation Stories

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Review of First Menstruation Stories

A refreshingly frank, informative and very amusing piece by a teen with chutzpah. Good interviewing technique and tape choice, and the production and editing are mighty fine. Could be aired as programming on kids, women, health, transitions, you name it. I would just love to hear Bob Edwards introduce this piece of a morning. sl

Comment on piece: Lady Bird Johnson: Legacy of a First Lady

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Review of Lady Bird Johnson: Legacy of a First Lady

This is an excellent, uplifting journey through Ladybird Johnson’s life, and her growth and transition to first lady under tragic conditions. It’s wonderful to hear her voice, rendered here in excerpts from interviews she's given and speeches she's made. It is especially poignant to hear a portion of her first audio diary entry, made the day after JFK’s assassination. Nuanced choices of music are a production plus, but the strength is in the spoken word. Wisely chosen excerpts create a rich experience. The hour contains a wide range of voices, from historians to those who worked with her or know her, and they pinpoint her influence on LBJ, and on the capital, and the nation –– particularly in the areas of environment, race, and education. She truly is a force for good. sl

Comment on piece: Big Fire Healthy Forest

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Review of Big Fire Healthy Forest

This is a straight-ahead report on this recent legislation and an impressively complete overview of the issues and context of the story. The arc and structure of the piece are excellent and it keeps the listener engaged throughout its length.
The production style is pretty cut and dry reporting—there isn't much flash to the piece. It might benefit from a more-engaging and/or creative opening touch, but this is a minor concern.
The piece would make in an excellent lead-in for a talk program on forest policy, forest fires, or this specific legislation. It would also work well as part of a general magazine program.
Another note: The reporter periodically lapses into an unusual vocal rhythm that is distracting, extending and underemphasizing the last word in a sentence (DA-DA-DA-daaa, DA-DA-DA-daaa).

Comment on piece: The Child Soldiers of Uganda

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The chilling power of narrationless voices

Narrationless documentary is a challenging production choice, but it is pulled off well here. The difficulty is that you really have to give the piece your full attention, or you will lose track of who is speaking and miss some of the implied narrative thread. Use of sound is OK, if a little predictable in spots--the sewing machine in the sewing classroom, for example. It is the children's voices which are strongest element. These children were forced, on fear of death, to do terrible things, and the calmness of their retelling declines to simplify the emotional impact of their ordeal and its aftermath. At the end, the bright music of the rehab camp effects a powerful affirmation without slighting the unresolved darkness of what has gone before.

Comment on piece: The Stories of September Eleventh Families for Peaceful Tomorrows

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Review of The Stories of September Eleventh Families for Peaceful Tomorrows

I think it is especially interesting to hear now, two years later, because it really took me back to that time, that feeling of awe and sorrow in the days immediately after the event. I also lost my father this year. So, I really related to the man from Ithaca's flashback stories as well as everyone's grief.

I'm really impressed with how you were able to piece together such a long program with no narration whatsoever. The spare use of music served you well.

I especially loved the first half. The second half hour was also well done, and very, very important. I've been thinking about why it didn't hold my attention as well as the first, and I think it is because the second leans more towards exposition and less towards anecdotal storytelling. In my opinion, if the piece was shorter, the lessons learned in the aftermath would stand out more prominently in the mix.

Comment on piece: American Muslims & the Media

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Review of American Muslims & the Media

a news analysis whose writing, delivery and editorial choices elevate it beyond the standard with simplicity and clarity.
excellent to accompany anything dealing with Sept. 11, racial bias, profiling and the difficulties of keeping an even journalistic hand. Production is a little rough but it's a provocative piece.
vm

Comment on piece: The Never-ending Tax Revolt

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Review of The Never-ending Tax Revolt

A solid standard news approach to a subject that could stand a little more heart, a little more "man on the street " in order to inspire further thought on the benefits of smaller government and privatization.

vm

Comment on piece: What Big Teeth You Have

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Review of What Big Teeth You Have

This is a humorus portrait of brotherly dynamics. Not only do we get a glimpse into boyhood behavior but we get some insight into the pathology of fear.

The production of this piece is conventional. Frank links interviews with narration and music. The anecdotes are entertaining and quite visual. This piece is very versatile. It stands alone but it could also be a nice addition to a show about siblings, childhood or the psychology of horror.-CM

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Review of The Day John Lennon Died (deleted)

A wide range of voices (identified at the end of each piece) from diverse points across the globe, converge in lamenting the murder of John Lennon; this work reveals how intimately lennon's death intersected with the lives and personal situations of those interviewed. The recollections are interspersed with carefully chosen examples of his music, making this piece a welcome addition to the airwaves on the upcoming anniversary. Conveniently presented in 2 lengths for twice the broadcasting opportunity!

HW

Comment on piece: The Stories of September Eleventh Families for Peaceful Tomorrows

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Review of The Stories of September Eleventh Families for Peaceful Tomorrows

Captivating. Very appropriate application (and removal of) scoring, brilliant editing of the documentary interviews. Most: the overall flow describes a sweep, an arc of emotion and thoughtfulness that can only be described as absolutely human. Too often, shorter news holes cause a preemption of how feelings progress over time. In "Stories of September Eleventh", Scott Gurian is patient, and brings out something deeper. Well worth the wait. Bravo.

[This review refers to the first of two 27-minute segments.]

Comment on piece: Thanksgiving story

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Review of Thanksgiving story

I liked Andrew's story, it gave me a new perspective for Thanksgiving. I have certainly never thought "Great, my father is alive and gets to leave the army in our home country and join us in another country!" This piece could have been a lot more emotional but I'm glad it wasn't. It's hard to listen to tough story after tough story.

So, this piece fits on every radio near a Thanksgivings table. When they do a show that includes "Alice's Restaurant" and an easy going perspective like this, I'll be listening. Toss in a David Sedaris commentary and highlights from a football telecast, too.

Comment on piece: The WASPs: Women Pilots of WWII

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Review of The WASPs: Women Pilots of WWII

We get historical context, personal reminiscence and observation in this lovely blend of ambient sound, music of the time, archival tape, and the voices of a small group of women pilots. An interesting, informative, engaging portrait of these women and of this period in history that is so beautifully produced it’s nearly cinematic in effect.
Could be aired any time, but certainly around WWII or aviation anniversary dates, or as part of programming about women in America, jobs, changes in society, and, of course, war. sl