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Review of The Death of the Christmas Chicken (deleted)

This is a wonderful short piece told with humor and affection. The producer conveys a serious message on the value of shared family memories without being overly sentimental. This is a very engaging personal commentary that brings the listener into a comfortable sense of intimacy with the teller of the story.

Comment on piece: If Kids Must Work

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Review of If Kids Must Work

As the first reviewer stated, the juxtapositon of working kids with a translation of their words by English-speaking children is a strong component of the piece. This feature of the story could make it a good piece for helping children in first world countries gain an understanding about the lives of children in developing countries. The piece serves the listener well by touching on the differing perspectives of child labor and by contrasting children working to assist their families with outright exploitation of children in the labor market.

Comment on piece: Acadie Found

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Review of Acadie Found

Lovely sound, well recorded, refreshing, soothing, carries you off to a smiling state.

Comment on piece: The AIDS Highway

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Review of The AIDS Highway

This narration-less program begins with descriptions of the general situation of Ugandan children orphaned by AIDS pandemic. The program shifts back and forth between teachers and students. Students talk about their circumstances, studies, and hopes for the future. Foreign and Ugandan teachers describe their small schools. They offer details as to how the schools are funded, what the programs are and how the programming is planned to train the students in creating everything from cash crops to community. Most of the tape is presented talking-head style, but occasionally interspersed with wonderful tape of music and singing, and the alive sounds of the school in the background. Less talking head, more spontaneous tape would have made the program more compelling, but that’s a minor aside. sl

Comment on piece: Thanksgiving story

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Review of Thanksgiving story

we like it when we are so easily pushed to refresh our perspective. simple and moving . One immigrant nicely juxtaposed with "first settler" immigration..
an evergreen commentary for Thanksgiving
vm

Comment on piece: Teen Retail Psychology: Playing the Popularity Game at Work

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Review of Teen Retail Psychology: Playing the Popularity Game at Work

I love Youth Radio's material, and this piece has a lot to offer, but it has a bit of personality disorder: it needs to decide if it wants to be a reported piece or a commentary.
The premise of the piece is interesting: the reporter/commentator offers that retailers have caught on to the power of a shopping companion who tells you that you look good in the merchandise you are trying on. Thus, the retailers encourage/require their employees to have those type of dressing room bonding moments, even if it is not a sincere or genuine interaction. The not only offers a window into the experiences of youth as retail consumers, but into the "emotional labor" required of retail employees.
The split between reported piece and commentary is a light one, but should be noted. At points during the enterprise reporting (and especially at the very end of the piece), the reporter/commentation slides in her own opinion about the subject--which is confusing.
This would make an interesting segment on a general magazine show with some possible uses in programming about marketing, the teen economy, and young people in general.

Comment on piece: The Rise and Fall of Third Parties


Review of The Rise and Fall of Third Parties

Tight. Succinctly addresses the spectrum of issues involved with third-party politics. I think it would work just fine anywhere outside Minnesota - the state is a good choice for geographical focus on the issue given the continued impact of third parties in state politics there.

Comment on piece: ZUD2K3

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Review of ZUD2K3

This is very interesting stuff with a fascinating story behind it. I've listened to three of the posted pieces, both contemporary and archival, and thought they were all kinda weird and fun (especially the "Dial-A-Trip" stuff from the early 70s). I think there are several potential uses here as part of a larger program. The modern recordings can serve as a folky commentary--definitely not mainstream thinking, but still engaging. The archival stuff could be a lot of fun as part of something bigger--I'm not entirely sure what that "bigger" is, but the potential seems obvious.
One thing that is missing--this stuff is so interesting and the back story is so good--why isn't there a feature about Zudfunck? A fully-produced feature/interview would probably find a lot more use by stations than the individual pieces.
A warning--the audio level on all these Zudfunck pieces is really, really, really low. Too low, in fact. As a result, they are pretty noisy. Both these may prove problematic in their use in radio broadcasts. I wish the audio quality were better.

Comment on piece: "More Civil Liberties, Less Fear"

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Review of "More Civil Liberties, Less Fear"

This module/segment is a clever idea: set up a cider stand and interview the people who visit. It's a creative spin on the old "Interviews 50 cents" concept. This particular segment features an interesting voice and perspective.
Some notes:
* Some of the edits are pretty obvious and should be tightened up a bit.
* The producer's voice appears at the beginning and end of the piece voicing a one-sentence overview and some credits. This is distracting and unnecessary. The interviewee is the content here and the presence of host (and all the extra information) forces the focus of the piece to blur. Is it essential to credit the producers twice within a 90-second piece (which, incidentally is more often than the interviewee himself is identified)? Save credits and introduction for the local hosts at stations that license this piece. This will have the added benefit of making the piece more useful to stations.
* Consider mixing several of these together. As soon as I heard this guy, I wondered what the other cider stand visitors had to say. It isn't a fair pay-off to expect me to tune tomorrow or whenever the next segment airs. The interviewee's response is really interesting and got my attention--why not roll with it and feature a few more? If time is a concern, gang several shorter responses together.

Comment on piece: Life in a Brothel

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Review of Life in a Brothel

If you are going to do a piece on "life in a brothel"--it might be a good idea to go to an actual brothel. Instead, this piece is an extended phoner with an author who had spent time in a brothel and wrote a book about it. This places the listener three layers removed from people who work/live/patronize brothels. It's too "hands off" to ring as real and authentic. This extreme disconnection zaps the substance from the subject. This might make for an interesting three-minute piece on the book and its subject, but it doesn't work in this extended format.

Comment on piece: Thinking Outside the box in Catholic School

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Review of Thinking Outside the box in Catholic School

This is a straight-ahead news report that could be used as a component of a general magazine-style show or special on changes in education or religion. The piece has the makings of a very interesting story, but hits some marks and fall short of others.
The story is interesting: a Philadelphia pastor notices that Catholic families were moving out of his neighborhood and thus reducing the number of people his church serves. As a result, St. Thomas Aquinas opened its church and school up to the community--to any student or family in need of their services. Instead of primarily Italian-American, African-American, and Latino students, the school now has a more diverse student body--including Vietnamese, Indonesian, and Filipino. The parish offers Mass in four different languages.
The piece itself is well-produced and well written. The producer obviously knows how to put together a solid piece of work. However, the content of the piece itself only offers us the "what" of the story, but devotes to time to exploring the "why." The situation at the church lends to some contextual questions that the piece doesn't answer, such as: What is the impact of their action? Is this the first Catholic church to try this? Will other inner-city parishes be forced to make similar moves? And so on. Further, the piece lacked a solid premise or purpose. It told the story of the parishes change, but it was hard to see what the point was. It is a rich story, it should have more of a point or punch to it than what I heard.
This piece is a solid piece of reporting, but I wish there were less detail and more depth.

Comment on piece: The Earth Chroniclers

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Review of The Earth Chroniclers

A free-flowing collage of voices and views that are predominantly pro-environment, and that paint a rather bleak picture of the future of the globe; told through a Canada-centric lens. Includes a wide range of voices that are excellently recorded so that you feel like you are right there with them, out in the forests, standing by mountain streams.

Some may find the lack of traditional structure/narration disconcerting; in addition, one might not give a rarely identified voice the credibility it deserves, without appropriate context. However if this style of radio is for you (and it might not be for everyone), eventually you go with the flow and hear the words and it doesn't really matter who is speaking. The beauty of this piece is that its narrationless-ness (?!) allows latecoming listeners to dip into it at any stage, without feeling that they have missed out.

Musical/poetic interludes give the listener a chance to digest what they have heard, as do evocative descriptions of various natural habitats that the subjects find themselves in.

A final and minor point: dont be put off by the opening music which is a bit grating, could be just my personal taste! HW

Comment on piece: Trading One Tongue for the Other

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Review of Trading One Tongue for the Other

Straightforward poetic piece from a young man straddling two worlds/languages. Beautifully honest, sadly removed. Nice fluid motion between languages and accents with plenty of content. THis is short piece that could fit an evening show but still there are one or two strong words that might restrict it's placement on air.
vm

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Review of Funk: Great Auk Graveyard (deleted)

A nature documentary of the uninhabitable yet vital Funk island. An enthusiastic colorful approach to the subject, I kept wanting to SEE this documentary. The sound is quite evocative but there are some drawbacks, particularly: one of the first local speaker's accent is very difficult to decipher, so you find yourself leaning in, which can be a good thing - but not for everyone. If you stay with it there are some fine moments rich in history and sad in extinctness. good for science and ecology focus, though the length is a little awkward. Further production notes will go directly to the producer.
vm

Comment on piece: Thanksgiving story

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Review of Thanksgiving story

This commentary approaches perfection: well-written, well-produced, an interesting voice, original ideas.
The story itself shows what Thanksgiving can mean to modern immigrants and exiles. Sentimental and poignant without being sappy. I can't imagine anyone who wouldn't love hearing this piece. A very useful piece for Thanksgiving, plus some potential in a longer program about immigration or multi-culturalism.

Comment on piece: PowerPoint at Gettysburg, rev.

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Review of PowerPoint at Gettysburg

I thought that the piece made for a very interesting commentary about the way that communication can be lost in the enthusiasm that accompanies new ways to communicate ideas. It was short and sweet, and didn't overstay its welcome. The point about the sounds effects was amusing and well-made.
It sometimes seemed as though the sound got louder and quieter as the piece progressed, so that I was having to turn the volume on my computer up and down a little when the piece switched between the main commentary what sounded like a telephone interview. The voice that was reading the power-point parts was kind of muffled, and sometimes unintelligible.
This would be a really fun little piece to hear between longer segments.

Comment on piece: Irrellevence

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Review of Irrellevence

Listening is like popping into a wild little time capsule. Reminded me of Randy Thom's great broadcasting-through-the-stratosphere collage from the film "Contact". Do wish this sound could be fuller, louder, more present. Could be aired around any late 60s anniversary dates, or just dropped in anywhere to make someone give their head a shake. sl

Comment on piece: Route 66

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Review of Route 66

You can't review The Kitchen Sisters. They start out at the top. I came to this piece with a reverence for route 66 already in my heart, and the sisters lived up to it. This is why I love radio.

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Review of Thirty (deleted)

This heartfelt piece is a free-flowing journey through many people's memories of the lives and deaths of 2 friends. Beyond the memorialising it has a broader appeal, touching on what we leave behind, and the long term impact we all have on those around us.

Could provide fodder for discussion on shows about legacy, death, loss and grieving.

One technical note: there is a recurring clicking sound, most prevalent in first 30 seconds or so; pretty sure this isn't meant to be there, could be an uploading issue or something!?
HW

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Review of Intimate Strangers: The Florist (deleted)

Pleasant peek into the inside of a florist shop from a communications angle – as in those crucial words directing the florist’s arrangements and those that end up on the accompanying cards. Could be aired Valentine’s or Mother’s Day, but really any time of year, because it’s not overly romantic or sentimental. sl