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Review of Intimate Strangers: The Florist (deleted)

Pleasant peek into the inside of a florist shop from a communications angle – as in those crucial words directing the florist’s arrangements and those that end up on the accompanying cards. Could be aired Valentine’s or Mother’s Day, but really any time of year, because it’s not overly romantic or sentimental. sl

Comment on piece: Route 66

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Review of Route 66

I'll start with a couple of questions: who's narrating? And what's up with the music? It all sounds sourced -- and totally great. Sounds like a summer story, travel time -- maybe talk it up for holiday drive time around Memorial Day.

Comment on piece: The Slow Path to Democracy in Rio Arriba County

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Review of The Slow Path to Democracy in Rio Arriba County

I know Rio Arriba County reasonably well - having lived there part time for over 10 years and follow the politics. This piece is not anything new or insightful about the particular political issues of a poor, rural, isolated part of the US with some ancient history and problems with education and drugs that put it into the top 10 worst counties in the US. I admire the person who produced it but the context of this county is important - and it isn't he connection to the old Spanish but is the problems of poor, disempowered people having to make it with less than most. The conditions of the schools and health care in rio arriba county are among the worst in the US and that never comes out in this piece. This is an "old story" of local control and power that doesn't have enough freshness to put it higher on the list.

Comment on piece: Christmas in New York, 2001, Ground Zero

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Review of Christmas in New York

This is Beautiful Radio.

Comment on piece: On The Media: Fourth Estate or Fourth Branch?

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Review of On The Media: Fourth Estate or Fourth Branch?

Good volley of authoritative, critical, upbeat font of information, focused on the political doings of this country. It asks a lot of questions, and hard ones that I feel like I haven't bothered with in a while. Discerning but jam packed so you've got to pay close attention..or just wait til the next subject. This is just a partial audio sample.
There are some off-the-wall approaches to subjects like turning to conspiracy theories when the official version isn't working - this is the sort of thought that makes life interesting, and radio as well.
Good brain food.

Comment on piece: Andrew and Racine Go To College

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Review of Stories1st: Andrew and Racine

A day in the life piece from a blind college student and his guide dog. The listener gets a sense of how scary it must be to negotiate busy roads without sight, as the trucks and cars thunder along en route to classes; and how being sightless throws up barriers beyond the obvious visual ones.

This is a free flowing piece, which has some intriguing parts, but also left this listener feeling a bit disoriented and wanting to know more. Despite the personal nature of this piece I was left without a true sense of the subject or his dog, or the bond between them.

It's length makes it amenable to airing with other pieces as part of a show on disabilites, student life or animals. HW.

Comment on piece: Seafood Joint

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Review of Seafood Joint

Hans Anderson isn't exactly Garrison Keillor or Joe Frank--he has his own voice-- but if forced to make a comparison I'd say he's somewhere in between.

"Seafood Joint" is compelling and it's only seven minutes but it feels much longer---in a good way. Anderson is a master of digressions. Throughout his story he digresses from the narrative in a way that manages to enhance the overall direction and momentum of the story. Where would one broadcast this piece? Where there's a 7:05 gap. As race relations is one of the themes it would be an interesting piece to play on Martin Luther King Jr. Day... I could certainly hear this on "The Next Big Thing, " "Radio Lab," or "This American Life"--that is if they have a compatible theme.

Hans Anderson reviewed a piece here, on PRX, and wrote: "I think PR needs a shake up." Well ,"Seafood Joint" would do a fine job of giving public radio a gentle shaking.
-CM

Comment on piece: White House Tapes: The President Calling

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Review of White House Tapes: The President Calling

A classic political process (and persuasion) piece with intimate presidential conversations woven carefully into a 60's and 70's American historical context. History presented voyeuristically. Very compelling.

Comment on piece: Christmas in New York, 2001, Ground Zero

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Review of Christmas in New York

Beautifully executed essay about a Christmas morning spent at "ground zero" a few months after the destruction of the World Trade Center. Of course, it's not at all what the title suggested to me, someone who spent the first 30 years of his life in New York City. The music was perfect for the piece. I'm not sure where it's appropriate programming wise, but it would keep me in my car, in my driveway, until it was over.

Comment on piece: American dream comes full circle

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Review of American dream comes full circle

In under four minutes Sandip Roy effectively sums up globalism and a changing US economy with wit and intelligence .

Roy illustrates the life cycle of the American Dream: people who left India to seek fotune in Silicon Valley are now being laid-off because their jobs have been outsourced to their homeland.

This commentary would be appropriate for Morning Edition, All Things Considered but it would be most effective broadcast on "The Word," or "Marketplace".

Comment on piece: Letter from the Dead

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Review of Letter from the Dead

I'm trying to do at least one review everyday, or PRX won't really be very useful (if stations don't get opinions on what works).

I'm finding out as I'm reviewing these pieces that almost all are really good in the existing boundaries of public radio. This one would be great on any public radio show, toss it in the middle of Morning Edition. Maybe it could be expanded a bit to spend a little more time on Indian culture and their dead. That could lend a unique perspective to the topic... a eulogy about how death is handled in India. Cool.

Comment on piece: Matching Outfits Not Included

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Review of Matching Outfits Not Included

Okay, so I'm to review something Ira Glass co-produced, something already aired on TAL? Umm, It's good.

Comment on piece: Challenger Softball Team

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Review of Stories1st: Team Effort

This is well produced, it sounds terrific.

If you are putting together a sportsmanship series, or anything about mentally-challenged children or how their parents cope, this would fit perfectly. I'd like to hear more about how the woman says there is *no* meanness in a challenged-game, where the "normal" kids are complaining, back-stabbing, putting down, etc. There were several smaller, stories-within-stories that I think would work well instead of the broader angle. Perhaps you could cut three or four different stories from what was surely left out and end up with this overall view, but then some closer glimpses. Make it a 29 minute piece to air as a "special" or something. Yeah, I know... who's going to air that? I'd like to hear an honest piece about what the "normal" kids think. Has anyone ever done that? Would the levels of cruelty be high, or low?

My deal with the rating is that it would be nice to hear different styles for pieces like this. That's it. This is well-done, but I feel that it sounds a lot like other stories and I think PR needs a shakeup. If you like PR the way it is, this and are going for this type of story, it's well done and provocative.

Comment on piece: Dia's Diary: My Mother

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Review of Dia's Diary: My Mother

A heartfelt first person account of the difficulties faced by a young transsexual woman as she confronts the fear of rejection of her true self, versus the desire to be honest with her mother. At an early age, Dia became convinced that her mother would not accept her orientation; but happily in this case, when her secret was eventually revealed, Dia's mother comes through with acceptance and love. This piece deals more overtly with coming out as gay rather than transexual. Music is well-used in TAL-esque fashion !

The length and content of the piece lends itself to airing in many scenarios, youth/gay/family oriented shows. HW.

Comment on piece: If Kids Must Work

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Review of If Kids Must Work

A revealing picture of what life is like for the 2/3 of the world's kids living and growing up very quickly in developing countries. This is a free flowing piece, a collage of voices, from Africa and Central America. It consists of interviews with all the parties involved, from the kids themselves, to the parents to the NGOs who aim to help them. The kids interviews are often translated/read in english by Western kids which is a effective juxtaposition. The parents featured often expressed pride that their kids can contribute to the families wellbeing; the NGO's offer a pragmatic view of their work in developing countries, which recognises the needs of the families involved whilst trying to encourage/enable school attendance etc to improve.

Could make a powerful contribution to a program focusing on western kids lives, or any program dealing with issues facing the developing world HW.

Comment on piece: call to canada

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Review of call to canada

This is a great piece. Ultra-clever concept. This piece would make a great segment on a larger program or magazine show.
The piece follows the course of a phone call to inquire about emigration to Canada from the US. It criss-crosses the boundaries between the real and the surreal, and bounces back and forth between sincerity and aloofness. Kind of like a smart, earnest prank phone call. It's both a graceful protest and humorous narcissism. The piece shows that being creative and clever doesn't require a lot of technical whiz-bang and that political commentary doesn't need heavy-handed preaching or factual recitation to make a strong point.
My only criticism is that it's about twice as long as it should be. There is a phenomenal, award-winning, 8-minute segment here with about 7 minutes of material that could fall away without diminishing the piece.

Comment on piece: Laughing without an Accent

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Review of Laughing without an Accent

I really like many public radio-esque stories, but so many are serious that it starts to drain your emotions after awhile. This is a good comedy relief.

I like the way that she chats with people at the parties, jokes around. It translates well. It's like the difference between a book and a movie. In a movie, you can't get into the character's head, but here you do. Yeah, we all know that, but in a diary, it's good to get OUT of the diarist's head once-in-awhile, too, and joke around with an audience.

Comment on piece: Matching Outfits Not Included

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Review of Matching Outfits Not Included

This is an engaging study of character, family, relationship, trust, acceptance, and grace in a community…of two.
Would be good to air on Valentine’s Day, as part of a compilation on any of the above-mentioned topics, or as a break from the big news of the day. sl

Comment on piece: Justice Talking: Exporting Democracy

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Review of Justice Talking: Exporting Democracy

A brief but useful warm-up report preps us for the debate that follows. Two impassioned, intelligent, opinionated gents have at this meaty topic, spurred on by thoughtful questions and Adler's skilled hosting and pointed questions. This is what I'd call public service programming at its lively best. sl

Comment on piece: RIT Video Game Masters

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Review of RIT Video Game Masters

Even if you're not a video game aficionado (confessing here, NOT) this piece offers interesting look at related aspects of this area of technology. sl