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Comment on piece: The Never-ending Tax Revolt

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Review of The Never-ending Tax Revolt

A lot of research went into this piece, a lot of sound gathering. It could go with any crazy Californians story, or any look at taxes.

I think the most interesting thing about the piece was the attribution and the reporter's subjective view, which came across in the voicing.

The piece focuses on a myriad of methods for lowering taxes -- the commitment of some grassroots level people to cut taxes at all costs. To me, the piece came across as very subjective. While I think that some producers can steer a piece one way or another through choosing their talking heads or including certain information, this reporter seemed to include all sides fairly, but then subjectively jumped to one side. I'm not sure this is entirely bad. It was interesting, her voicing parts with what sounded like incredulity. To offset, the piece interviewed quite a lot with the opposite opinion from what the reporter had to say.

I think a few technical issues could be smoothed out, with better mixing of the backgrounds of the heads with the reporter in the studio, and better identification, too... maybe. Twice she introduced two people and they alternated back and forth and it became a little confusing. I sort of liked that method, though. I'm torn. The two speakers had similar opinions, so confusion wouldn't hurt too much. Maybe if it were obviously two different people, a male and female, an older voice and a younger, etc. Interesting technique, though. I'll give it stars for trying that, at least. If they had polar opposite opinions, it would backfire.

Comment on piece: NPR Geeks

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Review of NPR Geeks

OK, how geeky would it be of me to point out that "This American Life" is a PRI show. It's no skin off my nose -- I'm not the person running PRI's branding campaign. But still, I'd hope that at least on public radio we could get it right. As for the piece, I like it a lot. It's a great topic that public radio is afraid to tackle. It makes light of who our listeners are but with no malice whatsoever. It's produced in an unconventional manner that is very appealing. I didn't find the last story as compelling as the producer obviously did (I'd have shortened it), but that's a quibble. And you know what they say about opinions.

Comment on piece: "Being Photographed"

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Review of "Being Photographed"

The open for this piece really grabbed me -- always a good thing. The script is very nicely delivered. He's so engaging and personable. I chuckled a few times and had a good, solid laugh at the end. Nice job. Someone -- please air this!

Comment on piece: People Don't Have Anything to Say

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Review of People Don't Have Anything to Say

A cute, little interstacial piece that sounds like the 70s -- when "anything went" on public radio and people felt free to experiment. One could see using this at the close of an hour or as a transition between pieces.

Comment on piece: People Don't Have Anything to Say

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Review of People Don't Have Anything to Say

This short piece is almost without context: People Don't Have Anything to Say? I won't argue the point. But in the process of reinforcing this reality, say something, say anything (!).

I bet this could be developed into a great transition piece for a broader, more engaging program on the underlying shortness of thought that's visible to the naked eye, as long as one's looking.

I liked it and think I want to hear more.

Comment on piece: That Democracy Show

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Review of That Democracy Show

This is a long enough program that they should put it on CD's and market it at rallies and through Greenpeace or organizations like that. But, if you do have the time for it, it's a three hour, well-produced piece that you can drop right into the middle of your time slot (probably need to edit a few bumps), or play it one hour per night for a few nights (what to do about the live callin... just skip it, man the phones again?). Civics class teachers could use it, too.

For now, I've only had time to listen to segment 1. I'm impressed that they've aimed an intelligent politic show at teens.

It's amazing how differently I think now that I'm in my early 30's. Probably I sounded just like most of the young interviewees on the show when I was their age. A dozen or so years later I have think how innocent and (I'm sorry) naive most of them sound. This can be good and bad. They are naive because they are young, and sometimes inexperience can be just what is needed. Maybe there will be a shakeup in the status quo. One interviewee said people should be allowed to have shirts with a phrase as long as the phrase wasn't too outlandish. Well, that's sort of the problem. Whose deciding if it's outlandish?

I find it interesting that teens forever feel that adults don't know where they are coming from, but they think they know everything about being an adult. One of those two groups has been in the other's shoes once. I guess I'm sounding old now.

Then, the pissed-off Staten Island Radio Rookies girl came on and was very angry, which was good. At least there was a young voice, though I tended not to totally agree with her anger, I think that someone needs to be angry. My daughter probably will be a lot like her.

Comment on piece: Carols on the Carillon

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Review of Carols on the Carillon

Radio should be doing a bell story every day as a matter of course. And this is a warm fuzzy to the whole matter of the carillon.

I found myself wanting answers: who thought this was the thing for Georgia? How many bells are there in this bunch? Who casted them? Where are they from?

Comment on piece: "Being Photographed"

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Review of "Being Photographed"

Good stuff here. He has a strong theme: authenticity. He uses field recordings. A good one shows how seductive being inauthentic can be when the photographer explains that she is really photographing the radio producer she imagines. His commentary is thoughtful and the piece does not rely too heavily on it.

The piece, particularly the introduction, would benefit from more closely targeting the temptation to make radio pieces interesting at the expense of authenticity. The tone of the piece needs to be carefully preserved, however. The undeserved self-depreciating remarks should be excised.

"On the Media" listeners might like this.

Comment on piece: Peace Talks Radio: Seeking Peace on Earth- The Peace Talks Radio 2003 Special (59:00 / 54:00)

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Review of Peace Talks: Making Peace Day To Day

I almost didn’t make it through the introduction of this compilation of excerpts from a local series because the opening tone felt, to me, so saccharine it made me cranky. But I’m glad I persisted because there’s a good amount of practical, useful information contained within a few of the segments, especially for folks who’ve never had any kind of psychotherapy.
For parents, good tips for dealing with conflict, some ranging from word choice to tone of voice, to simply being a kind presence near another’s conflicts. The segment on middle school includes a young woman recalling bullies and other conflicts in her middle school years, and two dispute resolution mediators. A meditation teacher offers some basic Buddhist concepts for creating inner peace and dealing with people who could care less about inner peace, yours or their own. He shares a terrific antidote to fear meditation he practiced heavily after 9/11. A trainer in non-violent communication explains what empathic connection involves. Two work place mediators give a brief and not very illuminating report on improvements in postal service culture. Who can imagine “going postal” becoming anachronistic? The final segment features three African Americans, a city administrator, university student, and diversity trainer, in a frank and instructive conversation about instances of white privilege and injustice. Race is still such a complex, difficult and under-discussed topic, I’m grateful for any public conversation on the seemingly endless need for improving race relations in this country.
The trouble with compiling excerpts is you sometimes have to stretch to fill an hour, and the hour may lack a true unifying integrity. It’s a well-intentioned piece, uneven in quality, that I wish had been split into two half hour segments – perhaps one addressing people, parents, kids, one addressing work place, school, race, the more outer world. As things stand, different people will respond to different segments, some to none, and all in all, it’s on the whole, less than fully satisfying. sl

Comment on piece: What it Takes to be a Good Citizen

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Review of What it Takes to be a Good Citizen

Two women who want to be like each other, but aren't. One is an uber mom, the other an uber political volunteer. Each could spend a little more time doing what the other does, diversify.

One doesn't do politics, the other doesn't do PTA or school plays. Both, the show closes, you would like as neighbors.

This piece transcends politics, it's a good mindset piece and could fit in a variety of settings... soccer moms, busy American lives. I was listening to Fresh Air interview from 1999 today and the subject (Andre Dubus III) read from a book he wrote part of it was how Americans were like little kids, forever looking for the next distraction, unable to sit back, relax and think "wow, look at what I have, and how blessed I am." I see that in this piece, and I see the irony that the uber mom trusts that someone else will take care of that political stuff. It seems implied that this is a bad thing to trust, but in the next frame, there is the political volunteer doing just that, going overboard in politics and bailing the rest of us out, being worthy of our trust, as long as we are on the same side of the fence.

Comment on piece: The Power of One

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Review of The Power of One

Alaska has always sounded interesting to me. Geo Beach pushes this further... Guvner Bushrat, political nepotism, losing to marijuana... An excellent, wide ranging commentary for those looking for commentaries, especially and obviously involving politics and the question "Whose Democracy is it, Anyway?"

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Review of Rob and Kirsten Out for a Leisurely Stroll (deleted)

A nice, good-feeling story. A tad long for the sheer experience of radio. I would have liked to hear more of Kirsten about what it feels like to be lugged 278 yards in the fireman's carry.

It's sweet for a Valentine's Day kind of presentation. Other voices earlier? Sure. A story like this can be told a thousand different ways in the course of a lifetime.

Comment on piece: Global Culture

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Review of Global Culture

Listening to Yo Yo Ma discuss music and culture with Chris Lydon just happens to be a great way to spend an hour. If you’re remotely curious about this exquisite musician and the range of his work outside of the classical genre, that in itself is reason enough to listen. In this journey about journeying, there’s fascinating talk of different cultures, musical styles, instruments, conflict, communication. Lydon gives Ma lots of room to expound, and their back and forth is so relaxed you feel like you’re eavesdropping on a leisurely after dinner, cognac-sipping kind of conversation. The production is beautifully mixed with lots of music. Lydon’s intelligence and writing skill are nicely displayed in the introduction and close to the piece. Plus, anyone who’s seen Fog of War will discover that Robert McNamara and Yo Yo Ma have something in common! Both elevate the notion of empathy for other cultures as essential to the struggle for world peace.
This piece can be aired whenever, just to air because it’s so darn good, or in connection to any Yo Yo Ma appearance or new recording, or violent world events (as I said, any time!), UN in the news, etc. Just air it. sl

Comment on piece: Meaning of Life Show: Episode 1 - Music

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Review of Meaning of Life Show: Episode 1 - Music

This show was well done. I like the sweet voice of the female host, Fiona, and the theme is excellent. I think the whole thing or some parts would fit a lot of shows and formats, anything to do with music.

One question was something like 'do you think you could enjoy life without music' and the answer was no. I agree with the answer. No, you couldn't enjoy life without it, it's essential. I think a section presenting a theory on what life might be like without music would have been great, too, but this piece wasn't missing anything.

I've heard stories that homesteaders used to buy songbirds to have on the lonely homestead just for the sounds. Otherwise, there was nothing to hear besides the occasional gust of wind, certainly no music besides that made by the homesteader and the sounds of their work. The husband and kids were working on the field, there was no creek nearby, few if any farm animals. The silence sometimes maddened them. Imagine that problem in our noise-polluted world, often maddening for the opposite reason. The mice section of this piece was interesting. The Heavy Metal Mice didn't do well. Gained weight, didn't like each other. Was it because it was in a minor key often found in HM, or was it the loudness?

I don't know if a lot of the popular songs I heard in the background have are licensed, that might need to addressed, too.

I surfed to Scott's web site and found that he produces personal multi-media biographies, which is an awesome idea. I just had to say that. Imagine the great-grandkids having a DVD to watch to learn about their grandparents (better buy a spare DVD player to save for them, too, in 10 years they'll be obsolete, of course).

Comment on piece: Porkchop

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Review of Porkchop

I think it's unfortunate that I had to choose "experimental, offbeat and esoteric" to place this piece because I wish stuff like this was much more common, and that more people would get it. Chelsea has done a few like this that I like a lot. I also find this amusing. If you use it, don't introduce it, just play the sucker and then don't say anything but "Produced by Chelsea Merz" and leave it be. Those that get it will love you for it, those that don't aren't gonna like it no matter what your explanation will be. More people will get it than won't.

Comment on piece: Fresh Pond Trees

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Review of Fresh Pond Trees

Golden ears recording of an evocative sound of two trees rubbing together in the wind.
But the narration goes in two directions at once, perhaps too cautiously in either. Science or poetry? Mathematics or music? The piece itself seems caught in the middle of a choice it asks us to make.
Describe the scene dispassionately, and let the metaphors fall where they may; or be more fully engaged to evoke even more personal images, mergin speaker and sound.
A real gift. Luscious, glossy, detailed and memorable sound image. What a find! Thanks!

Comment on piece: Healthy Babies

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Review of Healthy Babies

This report does a great job of capturing a day on the job--of illustrating the hardships and rewards of working on the Healthy Babies Project. The sound is great too and there are some colorful, memorable actualities. This would be best to boradcast on a news magazine, All Things Considered or Morning Edition. It would be a good addition to any show on community, healthcare, inner city culture. cm

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Review of The Day John Lennon Died (deleted)

Engaging piece about how disparate people in far-flung places were first made aware of his death and how it impacted and effected them. An artist as powerful, controversial, and timeless as Lennon is bound to bring up a variety of emotions, and it shows in this piece. As someone who started out simply as a "pop" singer and developed into an important voice in politics and global issues, it makes a striking case for how important a pop singer can truly be in people's daily lives and attitudes.

Comment on piece: Heartland Medicine

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Review of Heartland Medicine

A real sense of these communities comes through clearly, as does a sense of the three docs profiled. Lovely tape of patient/doctor interactions, as well as others connected to the health concerns of the community. Lots of problematic issues discussed, no lecturing, just the realities. Good production in every way.
Could air any time or in connection to health, family, community, work programming, or if there’s any congressional action around medical/work/rural concerns. So good I want to hear the rest of the series right away. sl

Comment on piece: An Interview with Joe Barbera

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Review of An Interview with Joe Barbera

This is a meat-and-potatoes Q & A about the production and marketing of the Hanna-Barbera Cartoons. The audio on the cartoons is of much higher quality than the audio of the interview. Unfortunately the interview is the bulk of the segment.