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Comment on piece: Sea Cube

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Review of Sea Cube

a mindbending rendition of something familiar - at first you know something is wrong, you think it's the machine - you smack it - nothing. Once you figure it out, it's over. If its purpose is to embarrass you about your conditioning, forcing you to listen NOW, rather than from memory, it suceeds.
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Review of Fundraisers (deleted)

Short piece that focuses primarily on voices inside the Kerry campaign. Not incredibly cutting edge, but it's interesting to hear the hier of Heinz talking about fundraising woes.

Comment on piece: Brooklyn According to Kalish

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Review of Brooklyn According to Kalish

This program is a great listen. Intriguing, fascinating stuff. This documentary offers a deep view into Orthodox and Chasidic Jewish life that few outsiders have a chance to observe. The intimacy of the piece is almost palatable--leaving you to feel like you should whisper while listening, so not to revel yourself.

The only thing not to like about the program is its title and first minute. Most listeners would immediately ask themselves "Who's Kalish?" and what this program is about? Brooklyn? A guy named Kalish? In truth, the title doesn't serve the program or its subject well at all. The program starts off with the producer describing the program and how it came together. It includes a lot of "I" and "me" references that give the impression that the host is the central presence in this documentary (which isn't the case). However, once the billboard is over and the program's content gets moving along, everything falls into place beautifully and stays that way throughout. The host does offer some occasional personal observations and thoughts, but is very generous and agile with how he weaves in and out of the program.

This would make a great special around the high holy days, Chanukah, or almost anytime. It would be nice if the producer could include a promo or additional support material to help stations promote the program on-air and online.

Comment on piece: Who Needs Registered Voters?

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Review of Who Needs Registered Voters?

The PRPD Local Core Values project indicated that listeners enjoyed hearing news reports from other areas that provide context to local issues and concerns. With that in mind, this evergreen piece would make a great follow-up to almost any story at any time of year (or as part of a program) regarding your local/regional/state voter turnout or registration efforts. It would also make a great lead-in to a panel discussion or talk program on these issues.

The report answers a very simple question: North Dakota has an unusually large voter turnout...why?

The report is light on frill, well paced, and quick (and by the way, it is 4 minutes long, not 5 as the description indicates). However, the piece would be even stronger with more dynamics. The reporter focuses on a small number of interviews with politicians and election officials--if you are producing a piece on voter participation, wouldn't it make sense to include some actual voters in the piece? Also, the report gives the impression that the heavy participation is due to one fact: that there's no voter registration in North Dakota. That feels too simple. Are there other contributing factors (both measurable and intangible), does anyone (including voters) offer an alternative assessment or rationale, or does anyone disagree and think that the lack of registration has no impact?

Still, it's an interesting and thought-provoking piece. Worth a listen.

Comment on piece: Life Stories - Friendship

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Review of Life Stories - Friendship

Several first-person recollections, audio verite pieces, and audio letters make up this hour of programming that is tied together by the theme of friendship and produced from a variety of sources. Each of these segments, in their own unusual way, gets at some real, true, human emotions that we're not often exposed to on the radio. The mix of styles that the show brings together makes for engaging listening and you (or your listeners) are sure to emotionally connect to something in each of these pieces. It's the kind of programming that makes listening to public radio on a Saturday or Sunday afternoon the perfect activity.

Comment on piece: Mud

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Review of Mud

A nice short story in a kind of Selected Shorts/Reading Aloud vein. A good short story, complete with life lessons. Given its particulars of theme and content, it demands a venturesome PD to give it a home.

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Review of Pop Vultures #6 (deleted)

Pretty slick. Great PR as aimed at a younger demo. If you are a PD looking to hit a younger democraphic, Pop Vultures might be exactly what you should carry. Very informed and full of cultural reference and information. I feel out of touch because I don't know about half of what they were talking about. I'd listen to this every week if it were on my local public station.

Comment on piece: Gang database report

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Review of Gang database report

This piece has aired on NPR, so you can feel confident in it's quality. It focuses on the California gang database -- the biggest of it's type in the country -- and how it may be doing as much harm to some innocent youths as it is doing good in putting a stop to gang activity. If you are doing a gang story, or your community is facing these issues, this story will fit (have to chop the lead-in). It will fit best to be Side B to a story where Side A is "Lets build a gang database like California did."

Comment on piece: Garbage

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Review of Garbage

A lot of fun. Not sure where this goes -- that's why there are PDs -- but given the fact that there are 24 hours in a day and there are 7 days in a week, there should be a space on numerous stations for something like this.

A clear, discernable voice. A refreshing and surprising piece that will provoke listener calls. Some may not be so willing to wallow quite in the dark side.

Comment on piece: A Day In The Life Of A Vice Principal

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Review of A Day In The Life Of A Vice Principal

One of those documentary segments that pulls you right into the middle of another person's daily life and gives you a sampling of what it's like as they try to do their job. In this case, it's a job that seems daunting (at the very least) as you listen to all the demands and challenges that are made on a school's vice president and how unflappable and determined she is. The segment is likely to make most of us realize how "easy" our jobs are -- and give a new-found respect for those working the education today.

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Review of From Moonshine to Armadillos: The Birth of the Live Austin Music Scene (deleted)

This program offers a soup to nuts history of Austin's growth into the live music Mecca that it's become today. The show is more than just contemporary talking heads and music--it features an amazing collection of archival interviews and recordings (including tape of some never-before-heard early Janis Joplin performances, which should qualify as an authentic archival treasure). The writing is acceptable (but a bit leaden), yet the production is well put-together, flowing smoothly between many different elements.

The program's only shortcoming (and it's a significant one) is that it doesn't deal well with its size and length. Productions of this size should treat themselves like what they literally are--programs: they should feature breaks, periodic reintroductions to ideas (and the program itself) as well as regularly IDing voices. This program sounds like it makes the assumption that all its listeners tune in at the beginning and remain engaged throughout. Unfortunately, this type of listener interaction rarely happens. It would be smart to give latecomers a chance to figure out what's going on or provide listeners (and stations) a break once in a while.

The producer should consider re-editing to make it more listener and station friendly, as well as providing a promo or some other support material to help stations promote its airing as an special or stand-alone program. They should also provide a mild language advisory for some mild, yet present, profanity and content.

Comment on piece: Howard Dean: The Vermont Years

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Review of Howard Dean: The Vermont Years

Hour-long hard news documentaries are often like cauliflower: good for you, but not very tasty. This is a noteworthy exception.

The program takes an in-depth look at Howard Dean’s eleven years as Governor of Vermont, done by those who should know best, Vermont Public Radio. The depth and background offered in this documentary are both impressively detailed, yet exceptionally engaging. The mixture of interviews, archival tape and reporting, as well as contemporary perspective and analysis is great radio. Further, the program offers an exceptional degree of balance and objectivity regarding Dean's background and record on important issues. From election/political junkies to citizens interested in learning more about this candidate, this special has a lot to offer.

Given Dean's prominence in the Democratic primaries, this program offers a powerful service to listeners. It would be an exceptional choice for a stand-alone hour special.

The producers have thoughtfully provided an audio promo and complete (!) transcript make it very promotable and station-friendly.

This is an exemplary effort on every mark.

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Review of Emmylou Harris: In her own words (deleted)

Very professional sounding piece, great audio, with only the interviewee being heard. Very polished and intimate. I think this would work best with the rest of the pieces as a series, but each could be cherry-picked if, say, Emmylou was in town for a concert. They are very well produced and since there is no reporter's voice, it could sound like your station.

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Review of The Death of the Christmas Chicken (deleted)

Sounds like 'This American Life,' but could be used anytime you have some time, but obviously during the holidays. Timeless -- doesn't have to be this year, could be used for years. It is also fairly rich in sounds, with some old sound of the narrator as a child, singing.

Sweet sounding. I like narrator's voice in this piece. The musical interludes at the front and back were a little too long, but would allow a talk-over to get in and out of the piece.

Comment on piece: NPR Geeks

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Review of NPR Geeks

Would work best on TAL when Ira is sick and someone is filling in for him, or as a fundraiser spot. Maybe it could be played at a festival where Ira wins an award or if Ira is in town on a speaking engagement.

Comment on piece: A Cook's Notebook: Cold Soup

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Summer and Smoke and Soup

For those a bit weary of "take one quarter cup..." food segments, the Cook's Notebook puts the sensuality back into chopping, searing and savoring. This segment catches Ali cooking cold soups on a warm summer evening to escape the heat of the day, and she peppers, flecks, speckles and braces her essay with verbs that bring you right to the edge of the pot. We feel the heat from that lone gas burner, then feel her cool down as she spices up cool cucumbers and yoghurt by the light of the moon, menaced by rumble of thunder. This is summer in a segment, unearthing memories as well as the sensual rituals of seasonal cooking.

Comment on piece: Carols on the Carillon

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Ringing local and national bells

This piece has a local slant but the unusual topic (a blind Birmingham AL carillon player trained in Belgium and France who performs impromtu concerts as well as seasonal favorites) would appeal to a general audience. The piece has texture, smooth layers and paints interesting word pictures. But the bells harbor a harshness as well as sweetness; the carillon player must play with such force that you sense the "violence under the gentle melody," a parallelism to the strong bones and gentle demeanor of this story.

Comment on piece: Forget Cinderella

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Review of Forget Cinderella

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Review of Hitchhiking Cop Improv (deleted)

I wasn't fond of this piece because the arguing between the two friends turned me off. I didn't find it all that funny, but because humor is subjective, others might. There was good use of stereo sound. I don't know what most PD's would do about the f-bomb, probably beep it. I'd never take out a choice word because it might offend somebody, but I'm not a PD responsible to an audience.

Comment on piece: Housekeeping: Behind the Scenes

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Review of Housekeeping: Behind the Scenes

This would be a good segment in a longer-running feature on "Work" or "Jobs You Never Knew About". The music needs to be more relevant, but otherwise it is a well-done piece.