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Comment on piece: Present Progressive

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Review of Present Progressive

A very impressive piece, hard to qualify. A nice merge between story telling and story showing. Sly remarks dot the landscape with narration, actors, and what sound like real interviews. This might not fit any specific area that I know of, but it also isn't restricted to any specific area. It is worth a listen and to find a place to air.

Comment on piece: "Being Photographed"

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Welcome to Whose World?

A freelance photographer for the New York Times poses the producer, Jake Warga, in a location that the photographer herself calls "a romantizied view of what it's like to be a radio guy." Rather than exploring the natural habitat of the producer and trying to bring out some element of truth, the photographer--who sounds more like a teeny-bopper than a professional working for one of the most influencial newspapers in the country--boasts "I think I made it look idyllic and fun." My guess is that most audio producers would use different adjectives to describe our job. "Hard work" or "tedium with occasional moments of exhilaration" spring to mind. "Welcome to my world" the photographer says. Her world, indeed--it certainly isn't her subject's world.

"Being Photographed" instructs as it entertains, and will lead listeners to look with skepticism at the photos in their magazines and newspapers--even "the newspaper of record." Good job.

Comment on piece: Beep

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Review of Beep

I liked this piece, too, it's a great way to do a commentary on anything -- social commentary, etc. I thought this piece was a little long, but there was an unintimidating creepiness to the caller's cluelessness. This appears to be a series, and I think it could fit just about anywhere because it's not too deviant from a short play format that is somewhat familiar, but it also tackles interesting topics with a unique style and with wit and speed. I would love to hear this coming from my local PR station. It appears that the Tampa station is trying new things, and that's fantastic.

Comment on piece: Apology Accepted

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Review of Apology Accepted

I would love to hear this on public radio. This format could be used to bring a fresh voice to a variety of topics. This particular piece focuses on the individual perspectives of a father and a son during a late night phone call -- I figured out the ending before the end, but it was a sweet ending nonetheless. I'm off to listen to more of these.

Comment on piece: Democracy, American-Style: "Athens to Now: Why Democracy Matters"

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Review of Democracy, American-Style: "Athens to Now: Why Democracy Matters"

I listened to a few of the installments in this series and think the idea has a lot of potential: setting up a cider stand and interviewing the people who visit about democracy. It's a creative spin on the old "Interviews 50 cents" concept.
These pieces would make for an interesting drop-in during most types of news/info/call-in/discussion programs to stimulate conversation, reaction, or to provide a perspective that’s honest and markedly different from punditry.
The only problem is the open and close of these pieces, which all identify the two producers (twice—and often more often than the interview subject is introduced). There is a lot of information in those opens and closes, most of it completely unnecessary. They cause verbal overload—in the first few seconds!
This piece in particular also illustrates another occasional concern with this series—often the sound clip lacks sufficient punch or drags on too long. Several (this one especially) go on too long, really diluting the impact of what he says. If this piece was half as long, it would have twice the power.
Also, I think these segments would sound great if several were mixed together. As soon as you hear one, you want to hear the reaction of others.It isn't fair to an interested listener to expect them to catch them elsewhere. If you have their interest--deliver! Don't make them wait.

Comment on piece: Family Vacation

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Review of Family Vacation

Reminiscent of Sarah Vowell pieces. Funny.

Comment on piece: Naked People

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Review of Naked People

Very interesting piece. Were the descriptions of the pieces of artwork coming from the artist? The direct interaction with the listener was a little assuming. Maybe incorrectly assuming. A less direct approach would have seemed less accusing and more honest. Nevertheless, I enjoyed the prospective on why so many artists like the nude.

Comment on piece: American or not?

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Review of American or not?

Interesting prospective. A fresh compare and contrast on an important international subject.

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Review of Bigfoot Speaks (deleted)

This is one of those stories that is so perfectly suited to radio, by which I mean it couldn’t as easily exist as a magazine article… nor do you feel like it’s a frustrated short film that begs for visuals. The story is best told on the radio, and the reason for this is that it is about a mysterious voice. After all the decades of obsession about images of Bigfoot, a tape of its voice feels so out of left field, so counter-intuitive... in the most pleasing, surprising sense of the word. Because of this, I would argue, that the actual three-second clip of Bigfoot “talking” is the heart of the story. And so everything before the talking tape should act as a kind of “setting the stage,” a building of the enigma we are about to be presented with. To this end, I would think that LaMonica telling us that the voice sounds a lot like Yogi Bear shouldn’t happen until after we’ve heard it. It steps on the surprise…. a surprise that I would say is wonderfully funny, and you want to cold-cock the listener with something like that. Afterwards, you can come back in and say, “Jeez, doesn’t that sound like Yogi Bear?” and play the tape again, because, holy Sasquatch, it sounds exactly like Yogi Bear. All the same, this is a really fun radio story. Just hearing that voice alone is worth the price of admission.

Comment on piece: Naked People

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Review of Naked People

Zippy editing and some great clips -- "... you can almost see a heartbeat ..." -- are the highlights of this lighthearted yet thoughtful feature on what we see (or don't see) when we see nudes. Shades of John Berger, and Deborah Tannen, and that statue at Justice whose modesty was restored by John Ashcroft.

The narrator lapses a bit when he pretends to know that the listener is having leering thoughts. (Sorry - not that kind of duck.) But these moments are very brief, and barely slow the momentum of an expertly produced piece. Toward the end there's some unexpected, exuberant use of music - and you have to smile. This piece would be much at home on a Studio 360 sort of show.

Comment on piece: Arguing to Legalize an Immigrant Workforce

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Review of Arguing to Legalize an Immigrant Workforce

A decent look at a range of Republican attitudes toward immigration policy, this piece provides good context for Mr. Bush's recent endorsement of an immigrant guest worker program. More depth would have been welcome, but for a brief report, it does a decent job of introducing many of the concerns around this issue. sl

Comment on piece: X-Town

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Review of X-Town

I heard this piece at the 3rd coast festival - I remember it moved me. I'm surprised to say this "private" listening moved me further.

It is a "report", but Cole flashes his personal passport to tell the story right from the top: the water HE uses, in HIS town, the water HE wastes comes from the sacrifice of those he asks to tell the story. It makes your ears open wide, right up front. It makes you trust the narrator.
The speakers are forthright - painfully evocative painting pictures, and feelings, and conflict. THere's something biblical about it. The editorial choices are exquisite with an occasional production flash (quasi-flambuoyant) of the narrator's personality. It's interesting how he's chosen NOT to be just reporting - he seems to want to remind you, quietly, that he may be letting the faucet run, but not without thought and a little bit of shared angst. The opening and close sfx well placed and happily not overdone.

I would be glad of a longer version. I could have listened longer to these people wrassle with the conflict, the nostalgia and the sorrow.

This is an evergreen piece, but especially meaningful around any issue about the planet. Nice work.
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Review of Harvey Pekar: My Father (deleted)

Told in the terse and unadorned style of Pekar’s better comic stories, “My Father” is a classic tale of filial shame and regret, and it’s a treat to hear Pekar’s grizzled voice telling it. Pekar reads like your frazzled dad who begrudgingly goes up to deliver a speech at some union meeting… in a good way. The matter-of-factness of his delivery feels right… plus I’m sure directing Harvey Pekar’s voice tracks must feel like asking for your salad dressing “on the side” in a prison cafeteria. I can imagine Pekar’s story on a show dealing with immigrants, fathers and sons, coming to the New World (a fourth of July day show, etc), or really any place where you could use a short piece about family or regret.

Comment on piece: Hoot, by Carl Hiaasen

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Review of Hoot, by Carl Hiaasen

I put "polished" because none of the other Tones really fit. Mysterious would be a Tone, perhaps Colorful or Descriptive. This is an excellent piece. Reader Matthew Morgan captures the tone perfectly. The reading quality is that of a good audiobook, exceptional voice acting. Hiaasen's writing is compelling and captures you right away. Apparently, the series runs in 30 minutes pieces, meaning that if you have 30 minutes somewhere, this piece will fit. It's aimed at boys and young men, but I don't think the stories are only for them. The topics and perspective is from high school, but that's somewhere we've all been.

Comment on piece: The Maypole at Merrymount

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Review of The Maypole at Merrymount

Maypole brings alive, through music, rich sound, critical commentary and dramatic readings, a time that is usually only made known to us through history textbooks. Maypole takes you to the land where Thomas Morton lived and, through production, makes it feel immediate and timely. It does this while carefully respecting the atmosphere of the time, through its music and thoughtful narration. There are little images and facts contained through out that bring to life the world of the pioneers. For instance, did you know that dandyish pioneers like Thomas Morton wore slashed sleeves so that you could see the high quality of their undergarments beneath? Who would have thought that the pioneers had a pre-envisioned the ubiquity of the peeping silk thong? New research is presented, old texts are re-examined and a story is told that conveys the excitement and change of the period, and for that I felt thankful while listening. It’s a gift when something so educational can be made entertaining, too. It has a bit of the tone of an educational film, but if you’re looking for splash, there’s always Finding Nemo at the local Cineplex.

I can see this playing any time when people can sit and concentrate. I don’t know if it’s drive time. It might be more suited to the evenings and weekends. It requires your attention, but being schooled usually does.

Comment on piece: Trading One Tongue for the Other

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Review of Trading One Tongue for the Other

Poetry is a hard proposition on the radio. It’s such an inherently conversational medium and sometimes, in trying to decipher the riddles of poetic language, you can be pushed away rather than pulled in—which radio, at its best, should do. Just the same, Dima'api’s poem is full of images that the listener can latch onto easily, and it’s personal and intimate enough to make you feel like you’re being addressed one-on-one, not orated to off a stage. Dima'api’s experience of balancing a new language with an old one feels suited to poetry—as well as poetry being spoken to you across the airwaves.

Comment on piece: Dia's Diary: My Mother

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Review of Dia's Diary: My Mother

In many ways “Dia’s Diary” is a typical coming-out story, the kind often heard on public radio. What sets it apart, though, is the straight-ahead, unadorned style of the story telling and the sincerity of the voice. What’s nice, too, is that there’s a surprise turn at the end of the story, and good radio is all about surprises.

In listening to Dia talk about the inspiration for revealing her homosexuality to her mother—which happens to come from an episode about gay youths on Phil Donahue-- you realize the built-in importance of having these kinds of forums. I’m sure Dia’s story will inspire others, and that’s a good thing… especially when you think back to other eras, not so long ago, in American life when the drive towards such admissions inspired the kind of self-hatred that pushed William Burroughs to cut off the end of his own finger.

The scoring music is a little unwieldy at times but all in all, it keeps things upbeat and Dia’s voice and story transcend.

Comment on piece: A Cook's Notebook: Brussels Sprouts

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Review of A Cook's Notebook: Brussels Sprouts

I thought this must have been a misplaced piece... I found it in fiction. But it's not, it's a nice, sweet cooking story. It probably would help if I knew more about cooking, and perhaps about French. Well written.

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Review of Maine Traditions: Bertha Voisine, Rug Braider (deleted)

Bertha has a wonderful voice and presence. I only wish that this were more visual--that I had a better understanding of her rug braiding process and what her rugs look like. This piece would be appropriate for labor day or for any show that explores the artistic process. It could also work for any kind of interstitial programing.CM

Comment on piece: call to canada

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Get your dimes out for "call to canada"

I understand the division of voices among the reviewers: Voice mail is the missing chapter from Dante's Inferno. Still, a little trim from the discussion of refugee status wouldn't hurt. We get the point pretty quickly.

Still, this is a story that could be rolled out every 3 or 4 months under current circumstances and listeners will be laughing/crying. Ask for permission to cut and trim -- the grass angle goes on too long.

All in all, a lovely concept, nicely done.