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Comment on piece: The Ice hotel

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Review of The Ice hotel

I've seen TV stories about it and even seen the Bond film that featured the Ice Hotel, but this piece is the first time I've actually got to FEEL what it might be like to go there. Producer Bill Hammack is an engineer who talks every week about all the buildings and things around us we take for granted and tells us stories about them. Sound boring? Think again. Mr. Hammack is a born storyteller and a natural on radio. The tour of the Ice Hotel is filled with sound, music, interviews and his insightful commentary and description. From the flight to Sweden through the arrival to the hotel with frozen chocolates on the pillow to the trip to the Northern Lights to the interview with the architect, this piece is a delight. Why we haven't heard more from him is a mystery to me. Stations would do well to air this piece in the summer when we're sweltering with heat exhaustion. Think of it as a radio cooler. Let's hope that more episodes of Mr. Hammack's programs appear on this site....Dmae

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Review of Low Altitude Flight (deleted)

Okay, this isn't Firesign Theatre or Duck's Breath as far as production values but this improv from the perspective of modern-day passengers complaining about post-Homeland Security flights is FUNNY. I think listeners would love to hear this as a drop-in during local news magazines. There is so little humor heard on the air that's actually funny, I recommend considering these productions to lighten the day. It's topical and unfortunately probably evergreen considering the state of post 9/11 America.... Let's hear more of these pieces...Dmae

Comment on piece: 9/11 Rewrite: Memoir in a Time of Violence

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Review of The Power of Memoir: Fault Lines

Meena Alexander is worthy of a whole hour about her writing and her thoughts. But this piece isn't as successful as I'd like it to be. It has everything going for it...high production values, thoughtful interviews with Ms. Alexander and her students, captivating dramatic readings from "Fault Lines" -- the focus of this piece.

These elements give an intimate, earnest and personal approach to profiling this intriguing writer. What detracts from the delicate offerings is the use of a distant narrator. I would have preferred more interviews from Ms. Alexander and perhaps no narration or at least a reporter who could add to the mood and style of the piece rather than detract.

Having said that, I do think stations should seriously consider pairing this with other 14-15 minute pieces to create an hour special that could deal with literature, Asian issues, commemoration of 9/11, women's topics--the piece could fit several themes. Producers Laura Jackson and Betsy Morgan are to be commended for producing this thoughtful piece. I want to hear more from them. Just with a different narrator or none at all....Dmae

Comment on piece: The Most German Day Ever

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Review of The Most German Day Ever

What a masterfully understated piece! This is one of my favorite Transom finds and its good to see it offered here. From the first sentence, the listener is aware that they are in for some keen humor. The piece mixes a subtle narrative with occasional pauses to savor a scene, or point out something human, yet unexpected. The piece moves along well, returning every minute or two to an ongoing count of the number of (alcoholic) beverages consumed during the visit to Krautsand. Its comedy isn't obvious, which works for and against the piece (it's easy to lose some of the jokes because the production is so smooth--it would be nice to change up the pacing every once in a while to give the listener a chance to laugh without missing something). This piece would make a nice unexpected surprise for a magazine program.

Greeley daftly highlights the absurd humor in the people of Krautsand without making fun of them, which is an achievement in itself.

Buried in here is a great lesson, that democracy and freedom are not things you can take for granted. They require nurturing and care. If you truly value them, you need to sometimes do some apparently ridiculous things--simply because you can.

Comment on piece: Confessions of Teen Stripper

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Review of Confessions of Teen Stripper

This sounds like an interesting experiment that's not quite ready for air. I love the idea of having a commentary that sounds like a monologue. But the producer is being much too kind in assessing the quality of the delivery. At times they hit it right on the mark and it sounds like you're hearing an edited piece made from an interview. But most of the time it sounds like someone reading out-loud off a sheet of paper. In terms of content, I would have liked to have heard more about the feelings and emotions of this woman. This could almost have been done in the third person.

Comment on piece: Spam-o-Rama!

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Review of Spam-o-Rama!

Cute little piece. Nothing especially special. A ripe topic dispensed with in a straight-forward manner. And -- hoping not to sound like a snob -- the "H" is silent in "homage."

Comment on piece: :60: Peepers

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Review of :60: Peepers

This is a totally non-verbal, charming piece of sound--a steady crescendo from one 'peep' to a climax of many and then back down to one. I loved it! I would like to be able to loop it and play it in my office during certain times of day. It is very calming (though mildly irritating at its height, which doesn't last long). I think it would be a great relief from the standard music pieces that are played between segments on public radio.

Comment on piece: Spam-o-Rama!

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Review of Spam-o-Rama!

I really liked this piece. The sound throughout is good and the material is funny and quirky. I would like to know why the Spam contest is happening there - is Spam from Maine? But nevermind, the real Maine voices of those interviewed are great --the drag queen wins the prize.

Comment on piece: The Day My Mother's Head Exploded (Short Version)

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Review of The Day My Mother's Head Exploded (Short Version)

THe part of this piece that captures my attention is how the illness turned the mother into an open person, how she likes sex better etc. I would like to have heard more about that and what the world is like for her mother now that she is "open", not so much about the story of how the illness struck. I also wanted more about the relationship between the daughter and the mother and how it changed. That would make it a stronger piece. THe part at the end about not worrying about work or cellphones, I found, was a bit cliched.

Comment on piece: Spam-o-Rama!

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Review of Spam-o-Rama!

Cute! An item about everbody's most dumped upon luncheon meat couldn't be otherwise. The presenter does a good job of conveying the atmosphere of the restaurant and you get a chuckle. In the Netherlands, where I live, it's called SMAC. Don't ask my why. For some reason, it does not elicit the same eye rolling response. An excellent "And finally..." piece for the end of your current affairs segment.

Comment on piece: One Last Haircut

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Review of One Last Haircut

Good story, fits anywhere, talking about haircuts or not. Maybe use on April Fool's Day, but as a true story (fun to play with listeners like that... pick the true story).

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Review of Barbie: Ken-Free (deleted)

A fun ironic take on Ken-Barbie breakup. The exploration of what might happen if other toy characters go dysfunctional is easily the best part and what makes the whole piece work.

Comment on piece: Wt Wd Jss Do?

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Review of Wt Wd Jss Do?

Ahh. It's great to have Ian back. I really missed him. This peace is really funny and reminds me of some of my favorite pieces from the I Gotta Go anthology.

Having listend to this and a few others on the site I'd say they're read slightly too fast, even compared with classic Ian.

Comment on piece: The Day My Mother's Head Exploded

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Review of The Day My Mother's Head Exploded

Other reviewers have already sung the praises of this story: a daughter's account of her mother's near death experience, her mother's new persona, with musings on what it all means. There are two versions of this story: eleven and twenty minutes. If you have a "showcase" program that can handle the longer version, you may prefer it to the shorter. In defiance of conventional arithmetic, I think the eleven-minute version is just a bit too long, and the 20-minute version is just about right. How can this be? There is a level of detail in the longer version that makes many of the anecdotes more entertaining and meaningful. The narrative flow, to me, seems easier to follow. I got more of a sense of two-parallel-stories-in-one, which seems apt for a mother-daughter character set. Both versions are fine, to my ears, but I liked the longer one more (usually not the case for me, by the way).

Comment on piece: An Interview with John Kerry

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Review of An Interview with John Kerry

The interviewer does a bad job of asking questions. They are a bit long, are leading, and insert the interviewers personal opinions.

Comment on piece: Johnny Comes Home

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Review of Johnny Comes Home

This piece demonstrates soldiers' and citizens' abilities to justify the cost of war. By questioning the death of two little girls and saying that he has to trust in the information given to him by his coworkers, John demonstrates the naivity and leemingness of those who do this country's dirty work.

I think this would be an excellent "All things considered" piece.

Comment on piece: The Day My Mother's Head Exploded (Short Version)

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Review of The Day My Mother's Head Exploded (Short Version)

Producing a piece about brain aneurysms and dying mothers can make for some pretty bummer radio. Thankfully, this piece avoids all those pitfalls without getting sappy.

This is an unusual story with lots of unexpected little twists, often producing a lot of unanticipated (yet very human) moments of humor. Listen, and you to may believe that heaven is being a vegetable farmer in Vietnam (you have to listen to get that joke).

The piece is a bit too long, but some fantastic interview clips with her mother (who did survive) keep things moving. The only distractions are some occasional sounds effects (ambulance noise, hospital monitor beeps). These are so unnecessary. Since these are not authentic sounds recorded at the time of the events, they are superfluous. The story is so strong that they aren’t needed.

For stations, the piece would make a nice drop-in for a variety of magazine-style programs. A possible connection would be Mother's Day. The piece has an intro and outro that are better read by the local host.

Comment on piece: 'LaOtra' Female Vocal Quartet, Uruguay (4min)

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Review of 'LaOtra' Female Vocal Quartet, Uruguay (4min)

This portrait of La Otra--an all-female quartet--is also a nice sketch of Uruguay. The impeccable editing of music and interviews leaves us with a solid grasp of the group's musical sensibilities and with an understanding of the cultural climate in Uruguay.

This piece is perfect for "The World," (Jake, bandage up that bruised hand of yours and keep knocking!) "Savvy Traveler," or one of the breaks as offered by the new ATC clock.

Comment on piece: The Ring and I: The Passion, The Myth, The Mania

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Review of The Ring and I: The Passion, The Myth, The Mania

There is nothing not to like here. The interviews are fun and insightful, great characters everywhere. Intriguing settings -- I'm particularly fond of the slightly out-of-tune piano and the behind-the-scenes at the Met stuff. My only complaint is that the program itself is Wagnerian as defined at the end: knowing the task is impossible, the Valiant Producers still pursued this particular grail (oops! wrong opera!). In sum, Bravo!

Comment on piece: Interview about "Portrait of Billy Joe"

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Review of Interview about "Portrait of Billy Joe"

I'm a Billy Joe Shaver fan, yessiree, and any exposure he gets is way overdue and just fine in my book. Interviews with the director, producer, and tape of the man himself offer a good sense of why someone would go to the trouble of making a film about this unique singer songwriter, this grace guy, this terrific performer. And then you get to hear him sing. Air around any date he's in your town, or as a little culture nugget.