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Comment on piece: Area-Code Chic**

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Review of Area-Code Chic**

A nice piece to drop in wherever. The title is a bit misleading because, as this story goes, the area code is more about geography than it is about real estate. Maybe some daring PD will air this in South Nebraska?

Comment on piece: I Can't Get It Out of My Head

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Review of I Can't Get It Out of My Head

Richard Paul elegantly documents the rise and fall of the jingle. in deconstructing the psychology behind it we also get an interesting insight into American culture. Who knew that cable television and our ever- decreasing attention spans would put an end to this time-honored advertising tradition? Who knew that a day would come when the jingle would be eulogized? Like a jingle, this piece is hard to get out of your head. Unlike a jingle ,it won't be easily displaced by the next thing you hear.

This piece stands on its own. If you have the time you should braodcast it. This would also be a good fit for Market Place, Weekend Edition, All Things Considered, and On the Media.

Comment on piece: Welcome to Camp

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Review of Welcome to Camp

This piece resonated with me, but then I'm fresh from an airport luggage search caused by my casual mention of a lack of fondness for a certain public official. Okay, I'm an idiot. I was surrouned by teens from the George H. Bush H. S. in Houston. But I digress. Very on-the-nose satire about our rapidly deteriorating civil, legal, and human rights. Good quick drop-in, but risky around hard news.

Comment on piece: RN Documentary: A Conversation with Archie Roach and Ruby Hunter

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Review of A conversation with Archie Roach and Ruby Hunter

This poignant half-hour brings us close to the experience of this couple, both musicians of similar heart-rending background. Ruby describes the experience of being taken from her aboriginal home, put in a car, told she was going to see the circus, and instead ending up in a foster home. Archie was fourteen before he learned the truth of his own past, and simultaneously learned that his real mother had just died – his foster parents were told his family had died in a fire. Ruby and Archie met on the streets where they gathered with other aboriginals living on the margins of society. Their lack of bitterness is remarkable. The Australian narrator’s empathy and respect are clear. She lets their words, spoken and sung, carry the piece, but steps in to provide context, ask questions, and draw parallels between their music and country and western and blues music. As the program ends, the narrator expresses the hope that former struggles over land rights will be transformed into a uniting factor, because love of the land is something shared by all. What I’ll remember is Archie talking about the destruction of tribal people forced to see land as an economic base rather than a spiritual one, and the soft sound Ruby makes after she says, “Our homelands became national parks.” In many ways their story evokes our own country’s treatment of Native American children and could be included in programming on indigenous cultures. Would also fit with programming on family, community, music, survival, and racism.

Comment on piece: The Times They Are A-Changin': A Radio Symposium on Bob Dylan & His Times

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Review of The Times They Are A-Changin': A Radio Symposium on Bob Dylan & His Times

I really enjoyed listening to this on WFUV (New York, NY). The members of the panel were all insightful and provacative, as well as lively and entertaining.

Comment on piece: Mock Funding Credits

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Review of Mock Funding Credits

Thank you. Thank you for this clever bit of writing poking fun at underwriting credits. Public Radio takes itself a bit too seriously -- just listen to the fund drives. This short piece, however, offers a great way for listeners and staff to giggle at our own expense. Thank you.

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Review of Confusionism (deleted)

Short piece of Bushisms. I'm not sure where this would fit, maybe in a montage of funny things Bush has said or done?

Comment on piece: The Anniversary Party

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Review of The Anniversary Party

I'd like to hear pieces like this in between some not-too-serious fare so as to liven up the airwaves a bit. This is pretty dark and might get the phones going if that is what you are looking for. Any show or station looking for a little more attitude that most PR stations have might look to air pieces like "The Anniversary Party."

Comment on piece: Little Odessa in Brooklyn

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Review of Little Odessa in Brooklyn

This might be the best mini-documentary I've ever heard. Well produced with a lot of found sound and appropriate interviews. Very good variety of sound. This piece would fit on any PR station in an area with a large recent immigrant population, especially Russian; someplace like Spokane, WA, might have an interest in this piece.

Comment on piece: 50 States in 5 Minutes

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Review of 50 States in 5 Minutes

Hey, this isn't the kind of thing you hear every day. I sort of wished you knew which state *every* song was linked to, but most of them were self-evident and it was a really satisfying listen. If the piece were nested in the right context, it would be the kind of thing you'd tell people you heard and be grateful to the eccentric person who took the trouble to make it, and to public radio for putting it on.

I should mention that this piece is the tip of the iceberg. The producer has put up ALL 50 STATE SONGS IN THEIR ENTIRETY here on the PRX, enough for a weekly series for a year!

Comment on piece: Johnny Comes Home

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Review of Johnny Comes Home

Rupa Marya’s documentary “Johnny Come Home” tells the story of Marine Veteran John Marchelleta’s recent experience in Iraq. Told retrospectively, Marchelleta’s narration captures how the uncertainty of death breeds contradiction. A lone violin sets a fitting ambiance as the marine remembers one night in the desert that changed his life forever. Following a strict mandate and using the extensive skills and recourses provided by the military, Marchelleta remembers the night his battalion was ambushed by Bath loyalists. The following morning’s discovery of the dismembered bodies of two young girls forced Marchelleta to question the purpose of the U.S. led invasion and sketched an image in his memory that still haunts him months after returning home.

Marya’s documentary captures the horrific realities of war and through its narrative provides a very personal feel. Marchelleta comments that the, “war is about getting Saddam out, not sacrificing people”. The documentary succeeds in demonstrating this contradiction and the dire affects it holds both for the victims of war and those caught under the wheels of the war machine they once believed in.

Comment on piece: Kohler Factory

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Review of Kohler Factory

Solid arts feature. The kids voices at the top are full of life and the sonic arrangement flows well, although it bogs down a bit in the middle. If you were doing a series on artists or residencies, this would be a good addition. I think the visual environment might have been better drawn. I didn't get enough mental pictures and I know there must have been plenty available. You'll need to cut off Kurt Anderson's Studio 360 intro and outro, and you need to be careful of an ambience cut at the end. It would be better to upload pieces like this without the program hosts.

Comment on piece: Elviscop

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Review of Elviscop

Profiles are not usually my thing but this is a delightful and beautifully produced piece. A graceful and entertaining blend of many sounds and voices--the Elviscop, those who work with him, his fans and, of course, the King himself -- that are woven together in a way that is surprising, funny and touching all at once. A tribute to Elvis and the inherent value of following your dreams...whatever they may be.

Comment on piece: An Insider's View of Freak Radio

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Review of An Insider's View of Freak Radio

A solid straightforward news-type piece on the state of things at Freak Radio. Given it's a "pirate station", I was hoping for something a little more edgy, some more examples of what IS on the air. I was curious about the station's "personality" - (though everyone's on-air names are intriguing....Reckless, Skidmark, Uncle Dennis). Since there wasn't an actual news item then I think this might have been more engaging as a portrait piece - not just talking heads. In fact this piece is good background but this listener wants to hear/know more. notes to producer.

Comment on piece: Christmas in the Trenches

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Review of Christmas in the Trenches

Nice mixing of music and actualities. Mood fits an evening show, perhaps "cross-themed" with peace and war issues. Would be a excellent series part on music related to war.

Comment on piece: NYC Taxi Medallions

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Review of NYC Taxi Medallions

A very informative piece. Professional sounding - rich mix of narration, interview clips and sound effects. Awesome voice. This producer is certainly talented.

Comment on piece: This American Cheese

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Review of This American Cheese

I'm with Kyle. This guy's nailed the TAL way. It's no stirring indictment - there's no bite like you might expect from a top notch Gouda or Gorgonzola - but hey, for 2:35 minutes, it deserves a chance to shine on air and garners its share of chuckles. Well-produced, coherent.

Comment on piece: Katie Becomes a Mom

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Review of Katie Becomes a Mom

This story itself is very powerful and very moving. But Katie tells it in one fell swoop. I was waiting for a break, even just a pause in her story so the sad, poignant parts would stand out and I could process them. The story is told very clearly, one thing happened after the other. I just wanted some pauses so it could sink in.

Comment on piece: Spam-o-Rama!

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Review of Spam -o-Rama!

That’s right folks SPAM is no longer the plain Ham in a can your mother knew. With inventively named dishes and spokespersons like Spamish Rice and Spamela Anderson respectively, this mostly pork dish is reaching new heights of culinary enlightenment.

In this piece producer John Basile takes a humorous look at a local Maine tradition by the name of SPAM-O-Rama. The piece is fun, light not at all to serious and just a plain good time to listen to. The audio quality is good as is the narrative writing, I certainty got a good laugh in and found myself craving of all things… Well you know.

Comment on piece: Too Curvy and Not Enough Shoulder

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Review of Too Curvy and Not Enough Shoulder

Some truly lovely tape here. Kelly is totally sweet -- I love his opening scene, and there's another bit of wonderful tape from him towards the end. What we have here is a bicycle encased in vaseline, and a teenager who talks about the seat of a fast bike as being his favorite place to pray. Beautiful.

The mom, though, feels superfluous. I'd rather have spent the time getting deeper into Kelly's world. He's such a sweetie, and he somehow doesn't seem to know how appealing and unusual he is, but there's that loneliness -- he can't find a soul to shoot baskets with. What's going on with this kid?

Alternatively, you might go the less-is-more route, use the existing tape of Kelly, and tighten this into a 2-minute piece. Give us something that whirrs past headed down the mountain, and leaves us wanting more.

True confessions: I was lured to this piece by seeing that Gillian Welch is in the mix. So maybe I'm too close to the music to have a valid perspective, but my main quibble with this piece does have to do with the use of music. I often felt distracted from the main story by trying to track the correspondences, and the non-correspondences, between the song and the two characters. (The music levels are also a bit hot.) It may be that the only thing standing in the way of this being an utterly delightful piece is the urge to match the story to the music. Dare to lose it. Try to find the shape of the story that comes from Kelly. You might do better by having the narrative carried along by wild sound, instead of by the song -- you could figure out a way to tape Kelly actually cruising on his bike, then use that as your "traveling music." There's a lot of promise here, and I'd love to hear it fulfilled -- then, maybe, we could hear some Gillian Welch.