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Comment on piece: The Singing Yeast Cell

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Review of The Singing Yeast Cell

It may seem like this is only for the technologically-inclined -- but I'm not -- and I still loved it. This piece is a great scientific sound journey into the life of cells and the scientists who study them. The sound is simply amazing - eery and other-worldly -- and it completely takes you out of your environment and puts you somewhere else. This is what radio was made for! I found it fascinating and definitely would recommend it to any programmer who wants to give the audience a wild ride.

Comment on piece: The Most German Day Ever

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Review of The Most German Day Ever

I like the tone of this piece -- the narration is very entertaining as is the background music. You don't have to have lived in Germany to appreciate this. It makes it seem as if the Germans almost have a sense of humor! It's the right mix of bizarre, funny and entertaining -the best part is that the humor exposes the humanity of these people in Krautsand. I hope someone airs this!

Comment on piece: Hollow Victory

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Review of Hollow Victory

Missing toes, internal hemorrhaging, black lung, eating flour and sugar for dinner: the life of West Virginian miners. This sounds straight out of Steinbeck, and like Steinbeck Helen Borten explores the economic problems of rural labor , the political power of the bullying coal industry. Unlike Steinbeck , Borten's piece is not nearly as aggressive in its social criticism. Rather, her investigative reporting is so thorough and her interviewees so compelling, that the listener is sufficiently equipped to draw his /her own conclusions.

When would you broadcast a piece that explores the darker side of American industry, the realities of the working poor? Well, that's the beauty of an election year because just about anything that's political is relevant. This would also work nicely if you paired it with another piece from Borten's series to make a one-hour show. Another option for broadcast is Labor Day but why wait it's six months when this resonates today?

Comment on piece: Going Home: Cristel's Diary

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Review of Going Home: Cristel's Diary

This piece is an amazing document of a young woman, named Cristel, as she is released from prison after serving three years for an incredibly violent crime she committed when she was a troubled (and pregnant) 15-year-old.

Like all great documentaries, the piece offers a subject that is relatable, but doesn't fit into predictable patterns or clean outcomes. When you first hear this piece, there is a nagging feeling that you are about to experience a cliche: showing how "the system" really does work. However, the more time you spend with Cristel, you realize the change she has experienced has nothing to do with the penal system and everything to do with the emergence of her own character. She is the source of her success.

When the piece ends, we see Cristel happy and excited to have a chance at life with her daughter, but everything isn't rosey and resolved. We're left with Cristel commenting on seeing her first sun rise, commenting, "It was so beautiful...it made me think this is what normal life is like. I remember that."

Strangely, it would be a mistake to try to "peg" this piece to a topic or program "theme"--that effort won't serve the piece or the program well--it's too universal for that. Stations should just drop this in as it fits. It is engaging, inspiring, and tremendously human.

Comment on piece: "And I Walked..." Stories from the Border

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Review of "And I Walked..." Stories from the Border

The news in states sharing a border with Mexico will include a stat you don't hear in Montana or Maine -- the current year-to-date death toll of attempted, futile and eventually fatal border crossing attempts. That's the backdrop of this piece about Mexicans crossing illegally, often not making it. There are lots of voices and some good sound. Obvious focuses are on immigration, Mexico-US relations and borders, the piece could fit nearly any human nature or human versus nature theme.

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Review of Harvey Pekar: Stetson Shoes (deleted)

When I worked at a commercial rock and roll station our PD had a list of Spice songs to place very infrequently -- once a shift or so, and they were deep-into-the-album stuff or things we didn't play often so you wouldn't hear it. These songs brought a little spice to the station and people would call way more often about these songs than any others; because they were fresh, people really stood up and paid attention. They also probably told a friend about it.

I give that story because that's what Harvey can bring with pieces like this. They can slide in a few minutes, but bring interest and spice to a station. While the rest of the station might be the important but sound-alike news or interview shows, Harvey can break up the day.

Comment on piece: The Singing Yeast Cell

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Reveiw of The Singing Yeast Cell

This is a remarkable use of radio, a voyage made of sound combining the very solidness of scientific voice and the diaphanous hand of sound art. Actually this is like two voages in one: with sound as translator of cell, you get to be variations of a cell: a mutant, a mother, a daughter (leaving a mother), a drunk..and the other: an occasional subliminal urge to wander in places where science minds go.

This could easily be inserted for pleasure or science - my only fear is the length for NPR news shows - but well worth it ! ( ...notes to producer) But in the end, it is a beautiful thing. Chapeau.

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Review of Mariachi Guys (deleted)

I'm thinking I ought to be smoking something here but I'm afraid I still might not be in on the joke.

I can tell the actors are having a good time but really, this material is pretty much meaningful just to themselves. I was so ready to get laughing after the first couple of lines, but this listener never got pulled back in.

Comment on piece: Office/Gallery

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Review of Office/Gallery

Very amusing piece takes you into workplace culture from an unusual angle. Cool music underscoring and punctuating gives it a bit of a TAL feel. Only problem is too much reverb or something in the vocals, especially the introduction. The subject's voice isn't as caverny-sounding, and I stopped noticing after a while, but it could use a little attention. Good drop into ME were it a bit shorter.

Comment on piece: Turtles

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Review of Turtles

I liked this piece a lot. It is visual and honest without being mean-spirited. The speaker is an engaging story teller, and a keen observer of the human condition; the work is well-scored to quirky music that pulls the listener along, it is present but not in your face.

I cant quite identify when this could be aired, but it should be.

Comment on piece: Outsource This!

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Review of Outsource This!

I found the speaker soooooo incredibly fast that I had to listen 3 times to grasp what was being said, and I felt all breathless and anxious at the end of it. That being said once I did understand what was going on valid points were made, often humorously, and as outsourcing is the word of the day these days this commentary could be aired during ME or ATC.

Comment on piece: Taco Bell Truth Tour March 2-5, 2004

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Review of Taco Bell Truth Tour March 2-5, 2004

A portrait of a moment in a labor movement, not a full report on the issues involved. In this country, labor reporting is scant, so I’m glad to hear or see anything, anything at all, on the working conditions of people you won’t see profiled in Fortune Magazine. Especially in this year of increased difficulties for immigrant workers. Consider this a snack of a report, not a meal. Would work around either ME or ATC reports on labor or immigration.

Comment on piece: Ebony's Story

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Review of Ebony's Story

Ebony's story didn't really come through in her telling of it. And the reporter seemed to be more present than either Ebony or her diaries. David Isay and the Radio Rookies and the kids on Blunt Radio have paved some new ground in the way stories like these are presented and they've set the bar pretty high. It takes a certain kind of power and honesty and fearlessness to pull this off and draw strangers into the private space of another person's life. There's ten million stories in the naked city, but only a few audio diaries.....

Comment on piece: Creativity

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Review of Creativity

In the noble course of exposing children's literature to the world at large, there is enough variation in this content to allow for those, not necessarily in the market for such information, to be glad they tuned in. In the discussion of certain themes of development in young people and their books, like creativity, the discussion ignites plenty of thought that is not restricted to just children's books. That said, it IS about young people's literature and it does a fine job of displaying and dissecting that too. A great early morning show for parents, teachers, grandparents, aunts and uncles and friends of kids...let's see is there anyone left?

Comment on piece: Good Guys/ Bad Guys

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Review of Good Guys/ Bad Guys

The Loose Leaf Book Company joins that estimable list of good (as opposed to bad or very bad) public radio shows that went off the air because of funding issues. Loose Leaf had a professional, dedicated team and while the show was designed for adults interested in children's literature, at least this episode was one kids of a certain age would certainly enjoy. As it happened, I listened to this hour with my 10 year old son while driving to the Boston Public Library. The first segment was an interview with Russell Freedman about his book "Cowboys of the Wild West" which my son promptly checked out and read. There was an interview with Jim Dale, the narrator of the Harry Potter books on tape and other segments with and about books both of us had heard of. The production was first rate, guests and commentaries were very good. Stations devoted to airing more family-friendly content on the weekends should take a close look at these shows and think of running them as an extended special.

Comment on piece: The Ring and I: The Passion, The Myth, The Mania

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Review of The Ring and I: The Passion, The Myth, The Mania

Jad is one of the best young producers in public radio and this program demonstrates his talent handily.

Most attempts by producers to cover the arts have all the excitement of watching water boil. Those pieces often contain too much polite reverence to offer anything unique or interesting; others come off as didactic or exclusive. In this piece, the producer takes one of classical music's warhorses back to the egg. The results are fresh, engaging, insightful, funny, and fantastic radio. The piece makes one of the most well known works of opera seem new and exciting--which is an off-the-scale accomplishment.

While some classical blue bloods will grimace at the less-than-pious treatment of Wagner's masterwork, others will appreciate its unusual (yet credible) take on a (heretofore) stale and tired subject.

This is one of those pieces that you have to ask why a station (news or classical) wouldn't air this, rather than why it would.

WNYC also deserves accolades for not only supporting this great piece of work, but for providing two (not one, but two!!) promos for stations to get the word out to listeners about this fantastic program.

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Review of Barbie: Ken-Free (deleted)

Hilarious. A crazy reminder that life can be ludicrous in all its forms. You can imagine paying close attention in your car to the speedmonster delivery of a commentary on the goings on at Mattel of all places. An easy hit in the middle of marketplace (on valentines day?)- unless the subject is too dated. (who would know???)

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Review of Social Guidance Films (deleted)

The theme is great and the movie clips are excellent. The piece twists the knife just the right amount when it mixes in the cheesiest film sound tracks at just the right moment.

That said, the piece suffers from the lack of perspectives from people who remember watching the films when they were kids. Or from teachers who played the films in their classrooms. We hear only two types of voices in the piece; that of the producer and that of "analyst/experts" (in this case, a person who compiled DVD's of the films and a social critic of some sort.)

The problem with this approach is that it filters out a lot of emotional punch. These films remain at a distance from the listener in both time and place. The result is an intellecutal and aesthetic payload in which personal or emotional reactions are implied but not actually felt.

Comment on piece: Michael Franti and His Roots

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Review of Michael Franti and His Roots

I don't know Franti's work and still, this appeals to the side of me that's just plain nosey - it's a brief entry into the head of a thoughtful musician and what his influences are. Learned some new bits about other famous musicians so it keeps your ear cocked. Easy conversation with the host who's listening closely.

Comment on piece: Confessions of Teen Stripper

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Review of Confessions of Teen Stripper

This piece doesn't serve its subject well. The experience of the narrator is intense and engaging. However, the story doesn;t have an arc or an emerging theme. It is an incredibly honest and fragile story, it deserves the highest caliber treatment.

Outside of structure, the writing is interesting and somewhat insightful. It brings you close to understanding her experience, but not close enough to feel complete or satisfying. There are several points (such as taking drugs to deal with the difficulties of making through an evening or the debt system--resembling indentured servitude--in place at many clubs) that beg for deeper treatment, but the narrator/writer is too interested in moving on.

The unpolished, unprofessional delivery should be a positive attribute of the piece, but it isn't. Properly coached and produced, the freshness of the narration should add to its authenticity. However, here the woman sounds unnatural and uncomfortable telling her story--as if she is trying to sound like something she's not.

This story could benefit from a retooling. Add some natural sound and music to break up the narration (so it doesn't seemed so rushed), slow down the pace, and edit the script to focus it better.

When producers and stations move out to engage deeper segments of the public, they deserve commendation. However, when handling the stories of others, there is an inherent responsibility to make sure those stories "translate" well to radio.