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Comment on piece: The Mascot

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Review of The Mascot

This is a mildly interesting piece, though we don't get much of a sense of the personality of the guy who is the center of it. It may be because he is not that interesting. The only reason I come to that conclusion (rather than suggesting that the piece is not more interesting because of some fault of the reporter) is because mid-way through the piece we hear from another mascot and that guy is very engaging. Some technical points: The natural sound does not have much presence and there is a really nasty edit right near the top. Overall, I wish the reporter had gotten out of the way. She seemed to be trying to impose some sense of attitude on the piece. I would have loved to have heard her try to put this same information across without being such a personality in the story. She almost over-shadows poor Tim who -- as I mentioned is not the most sparkling personality.

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Review of Pop Vultures #5: Will Dave Grohl ever truly defeat foo? (deleted)

Kate Sullivan managed to articulate all of my feelings about the "fighters of foo" within the first 2 minutes of the show! She describes singing as "vocal stylings". I get all of the oblique pop references! I'm sold! I want to be a friend of Kate’s.
On a calmer note, let me state that very, very rarely is youth culture presently so intelligently and entertainingly without appearing pompous. Leave this out of your evening cultural programming and save it for late Sunday mornings when the college crowd is nursing their hangovers with coffee and day old beer. Lester Bangs would approve.

Comment on piece: The Global Condition

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Review of The Global Condition

Beware: the WWW contains powerful and important messages compiled and presented expertly and with great understanding of the subject matter. These are simultaneously the program's strengths and weaknesses.

The presenter moves energetically from subject to subject, without leaving a clear trail for the listener to follow, unless you're journeying along equipped with an understanding in the major (and minor) issues of development cooperation.

The WWW is useful in that it is internationally oriented, something sorely lacking in American public radio. And granted, there is a goldmine of information available, but it's not for everyone. I doubt it was intended to be. Savory, but for special tastes.

Comment on piece: Parody of BBC Sportscast

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Review of Parody of BBC Sportscast

BBC is ripe ripe ripe for parody and the football scores are a low hanging fruit. I think the biggest shortcoming of this piece is its brevity.

Public radio in general needs a bit more of a sense of humor about itself. It has its own goofy mannerisms that threaten to become affectations or blindspots. laughing at them is a good way to keep people trying new things.

Good luck

Comment on piece: Sea Shanties

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Review of Sea Shanties

How can you not love sea shanties? This piece is fun and light-hearted enough to feed off of the playful coneptions most people have about sea shanties. We want to think about pirate drinking songs. We are aloud to with this piece that is both about sea shanties, but also a small community gathering that centers around singing the shanties. A lot of fun. Where would this fit in? I have no idea. But its fun. Gotta love it. Very upbeat, feel good piece. Just don't know where it would go. Ah, who cares, anywhere. Could even be expanded into an hour piece about the music. I'd still listen.

Comment on piece: The Well-Rounded Radio Interview with Dan Zanes

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Review of The Well-Rounded Radio Interview with Dan Zanes

Full Disclosure: my kids and I are Dan Zanes fans. The former Del Fuegos rocker is filling an important niche in making cool family music. Like Pixar movies, it appeals as much to us discerning grownups as the kids. Zanes has enlisted some of his famous pals like Sheryl Crow, Lou Reed and Deborah Harry to sing along with him but he doesn't really need to. The fun and the surprise come from Zanes himself and the dancehall rapper Rankin' Dan (aka "Father Goose") and kids and musicians from his Brooklyn neighborhood. My kids and I enjoyed the Behind the Music aspect to the Well-Rounded Interview. It's a good conversation; the host doesn't step on Zanes; there's music throughout which is woven in fairly seamlessly; it doesn't feel long at 20 odd minutes. We all learned something about the journey of a rock musician-turned dad who wouldn't settle for mass market kids music.
Stations would be doing a service for kids and parents suffering from Raffi-itis (or worse) to run this some weekend.

Comment on piece: Parody of BBC Sportscast

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Review of Parody of BBC Sportscast

I generally don't like parodies on the radio much, and I almost didn't even bother to listen to this little batch (includes underwriter announce and geo-quiz parodies)from KERA. But these are really funny! And what can really recommend them is that they will still amuse listeners who haven't heard the originals. That elevates them beyond the simple dictionary definition of "imitating for comic effect".

Comment on piece: Mock Funding Credits

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Review of Mock Funding Credits

Thank you. This was a little treat. We'll take it for our next fundraiser. This kind of work could easily be integrated into live pitching. It's better when we beat people to it, and make fun of ourselves. - J.A.

Comment on piece: Birthday Protocol

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Review of Birthday Protocol

This is a pretty straight-ahead, public radio style commentary. Therefore, it would fit in well with a magazine program or collection of stories. While it isn’t a very adventurous piece, the piece tells its story well and delivers.

The piece is autobiographical, but doesn’t feel narcissistic. The writer does a good job of letting the listener inside of his jokes without making them too obvious.

The piece is themed around birthdays, but is undated and can be used at just about any time of year.

Comment on piece: The Well-Rounded Radio Interview with Burnside Project

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Review of The Well-Rounded Radio Interview with Burnside Project

Last year, the music industry released more than 3,800 CDs--and that was a down year. This fact drives home the point that there is a constant flow of new albums and artists. This makes the premise of most music criticism and reporting very simple, regardless of media: demonstrate why this artist and their music is above the fray. In other words, why should a listener care? Most music "journalism" (term used loosely) acts as a filtering system, helping listeners/readers/viewers figure out what's interesting to them and what isn't. That's the long and short of it.

Radio is in a unique position compared to print media because radio can mix its reporting, interviewing, and criticism with the actual music.

This piece focuses on a New York group called the Burnside Project, combining interview segments with musical excerpts. While the group does have some interesting musical moments, this 25-minute piece forces the listener to do too much of the work. The producer lays out all the points, yet the listener is left to connect them on their own.

After a 1:27 spoken introduction, the interview begins. Music is woven in on occasion, then the piece ends with a previously unreleased recording. Unfortunately, the piece does not have much of an internal structure, the interview seems loose and goes on and on without much of an idea what or why this discussion is important. For example, about midway through the show there is an extended discussion about the band’s writing process. The singer summarizes his efforts by saying "Sometimes I write pages and pages of lyrics." Never is it really explained why this is significant or important. No context is given to the discussion. This happens over and over again during the piece.

At 25 minutes, the piece is too long and needs some editorial guidance to bring out it’s best points. Cutting it down by half, ideally by three-quarters, would better serve the artist and the best segments of the interview material. Further, there are some minor issues with host diction and production (the interview segments have some occasional light distortion). However, the producer’s enthusiasm and passion for music journalism is palatable. With time and more experience, he should grow into an impressive talent with much to offer.

This piece, at this length, would be difficult to place on most public stations. An edited, much shorter version, may be more useful to AAA stations and college stations which focus on contemporary music and approach it with a broad palate and wide musical view.

Comment on piece: Immigrants and Democracy

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Review of Immigrants and Democracy

Linea Abierta is a precious resource throughout "Aztlan". The Collaboration folks were smart to include Radio Bilingue. The round-table guests are articulate, insightful, and informed. I don't live in Cali anymore so I can't say how representative such opinions (Bush es un mentiroso, por ejemplo.) are in the Central Valley. I only wish there were more Spanish-language outlets for this kind of programming on the East Coast. !Si se puede!

Comment on piece: Sea Shanties

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Review of Sea Shanties

A friendly fun exposure to the sea shanty -learning and laughing are alwyas a good combo. Some of the recording in the bar is a little distracting as is the homemade "key" the group sings in at times.

There are plenty of other moments however where you are drawn to upright attention; a couple of singers and speakers that are gold.

I think the piece would be easier to place if it were cut back to about 5 mins (notes to producer) - I think it would buff up the gold that lies within.

Comment on piece: "And I Walked..." Stories from the Border

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Review of "And I Walked..." Stories from the Border

How to translate voices speaking in another language without awkward voiceovers? How to convey meaning when listeners don't speak the same language as your subject? This piece solves that eternal public radio problem artfully, with Bowden's descriptions and gently overlapped voices in Spanish.

Comment on piece: 8 Minute Soulmate

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Review of 8 Minute Soulmate

Curious title - and a good premise for a piece - a singles rotating 8minute date scene (like musical dates...) great ambient sound so we get to feel like we're hovering over the scene - very effective, made me feel squirmy. The speaker is quite forthcoming so I ended up feeling the narrator was a little too present at times, telling us what the guy feels, or probably feels. (further notes to producer) Regardless, it would make a good spot within a series about being single, the dating service industry. I was rooting for the guy..

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Review of The Endless Winter (deleted)

I love this story. It seems too many times, even on the radio, we are subject to the "PR" version of a story. As light as this story may appear, it took guts for Greg to pull back the layers and show the other truth. On a deeper level, this story tells us how the media too often laps up the spoon-fed version of a story. As a member of the press stumbling on this story, Greg easily could have done the same. But he took the hard route, and pulled together a very interesting piece. He also demonstrates a great use of ambient sound and pacing. Totally worth your listen.

Comment on piece: Katie Becomes a Mom

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Review of Katie Becomes a Mom

This piece is a very intimate with a conversational tone that, due to the subject matter, when coming from a radio speaker can be rather shocking and almost discomforting. Yet the speaker, Katie, gives is utterly honest with her story and this is the most lingering effect of the piece. You have to listen, because it feels that someone is talking to you and not into a microphone.
The piece does not have the legs to stand on its own, but if placed in the appropriate surroundings, perhaps a longer piece highlighting teenage pregnancy and looking for a more dramatic and personal edge behind the statistics to help drive a point home or to take a discussion into the realm of the personal, if showcased appropriately this is an excellent piece.
Heed the advice about the last few seconds.

Comment on piece: The Last Christian Standing

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Review of The Last Christian Standing

This piece lives up to the descriptors in the summary: experimental, offbeat and provocative, and it does so without any music or other sounds, just the narration of a story. But a cleverly written story it is, one that comments on good and evil, Christianity, the future (it seems that one hundred years from now executions will be through some sort of brain-sucking method), media influence, a martyr's ego, and lots more, not necessarily in that order. If your station is willing to "experiment" with simple narration (and has a fifteen-minute slot available), this piece will appeal to sophisticated listeners, even those who join it midway through. Would have some appeal in connection with all the hooplah surrounding the Mel Gibson movie (late Feb, 2004) about the crucifixion of Christ.

Comment on piece: I Can't Get It Out of My Head

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Review of I Can't Get It Out of My Head

This is a wonderful piece of reporting, combining the silliness of people remembering jingles, the vintage jingles themselves, the psychology of jingle-writing, and the status of jingles in advertising today. It is tightly edited and Paul's narration is snappy.

Comment on piece: Disturbing The Queen Worm. . . Offramp

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Review of Disturbing The Queen Worm

This didn't quite work for me, but perhaps I couldn't suspend the scientist/realist in me sufficiently to go with the flow; the improvised nature of this work is interesting, I liked the characters: 3 old geezers indulging in idle banter, but I felt the piece could have been more satisfying if it had been shorter.

Comment on piece: Life Stories - Jobs: Women at Work

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Review of Life Stories - Jobs: Women at Work

The very best of this kind of first-person radio.
The first piece, the audio journal of a young pastor in Chicago, is the strongest. I was transported into the church and into Susan Johnson's world. In a beautiful patchwork of sounds, voices, music and reflection we can hear a young woman straining to hear the call of God as she goes about the disparate activities of ministering to an urban community. Jay Allison's Life Stories Collection are a rare radio treat. They could air as an extended series at any time.