Comments by Bill Anderson

Comment for "Kohn"

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Brilliant Production

Excited to share this on our local talkshow!

Comment for "Ozymandias drives a Plymouth - (It's just rust and a fin)"

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Review of Ozymandias drives a Plymouth - (It's just rust and a fin)

Richard is a good storyteller. Carefully and sparingly written and sound rich. Maybe too sound rich? Probably not but perilously close to sounding like distracting SFX by the end of the piece.

Still, well mixed and tightly edited and done with a delightful sense of playfulness and humor.

Comment for "Sculpted By Fire"

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Review of Sculpted By Fire

Compelling content, excellent production values. Enough?

This gripped me with the rich, clean sound of thunder and first-hand accounts which introduced the feature.

Well edited. Nicely written. Many sounds and voices all designed to advance the story. Narrated authoriatatively and consistantly authentic.

The sound and voice descriptions had me walking beside her during Barbara's tour of the region four years after the fire.

Add a billboard, create a news hole and an avail or two and you have a really good 59-minute documentary ready to use. The subject matter might not engage all communities but certainly could have "local' ties to many.

Comment for "Abbey Road Reunion"

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Review of Abbey Road Reunion

I liked this because I liked hearing something about the Beatles that isn't a rehash or repackaging of the stories I've heard before.

I didn't like the fact that I sometimes found myself struggling to hear the spoken word above the music bed. I'm old and I'm also old school in that I don't like musical lyrics as part of a bed. It got especially challenging when the audio clips were played because there was already a lot of room noise on the tape.

Nice delivery. Informed. Fairly direct. Conversational. Confident but accessible to the listener.

It seems like music could have been used to better serve as examples for the techniques which were being described by the engineers. Maybe expanded to a point where we hear entire or nearly-entire musical tracks. Could perhaps turn this into a 59-minute radio friendly documentary?

I also delighted in the humor. The John Lennon toilet paper story was hilarious and what a surprise!

Comment for "Wanted: Small Town Doctors" (deleted)

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Review of Wanted: Small Town Doctors (deleted)

This is an important issue and, frankly, I would raise my rating following some edits.

It might have been nice to talk to a doctor motivated by profession versus a doctor motivated by citizenship opportunities but I suppose the realities of working in a rural environment remain the same.

It painted a vivid image but it would be off putting to many urban and rural dwellers to be characterized by "gun shots or sticks".

This was a realistic look at a big problem. Perhaps the dire situation could have been illuminated even more with a personal story of someone dealing with a serious health issue, a health issue complicated by limited access to a physician. Chana points to an intense work load. I would have like to have heard about specific examples.

I'm glad that we heard the doctor, in spite of the fact that he's leaving, cite examples of the positive aspects of working in a rural community.

Lots of potential here. Important story.

Comment for "Prisoners of War: A Story of Four American Soldiers"

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Review of Prisoners of War: A Story of Four American Soldiers

These 4 men have amazing stories and they detail the hell they endured with emotion, clarity and a uniquely human voice. It is one thing to hear someone talk about starvation in a detached manner, quite another to hear someone describe his efforts to stay alive by picking peels off a manure pile.

"Prisoners of War" is well edited and the production values are top shelf. The stories are compelling and important to hear and they don't lose steam as we conclude with them discussing their self-doubt even after living this horror.

As a PD I would have liked to have a 5-minute news hole at the beginning and there is plenty of audio for the creation of a powerful billboard.

I wonder if this would be just as profound with the insertion of narration. The narrator could take us outside the wall of the prison to the scenes happening around the world and within the war zones thus providing context and more perspective. Narration and sound might benefit an already excellent production.

Comment for "Eating Close to Home"

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Review of Eating Close to Home

I liked this. It got me thinking about my own community. Plus, I learned a few things. And his authenticity and passion come through without beating me over the head and the use of sound was purposeful.

I found the opening a bit awkward. Personally, I might have opened by describing the magazine assignment. It seems like the best and most direct way to set up the story. And the early narration was a bit on the stiff side but he found that storytelling voice, if sporadically, as the piece progressed.

Comment for "Cash Now"

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Review of Cash Now

I struggled with this because of my predisposition to think of pay-day loan operators as predators. I have strong beliefs that they prey on people who can ill-afford to pay high interest rates at a time when cash flow is already a challenge.

The owner of the operation seemed like a pretty decent fellow, a sensitive guy who cares for and likes people, and I was surprised to hear the words of this likeable guy as he represented a business practice I find reprehensible. That was what kept me engaged but I wonder if other listeners will connect to it in the same manner.

Would this feature work if you were to also, somehow, include the voice of civic leaders who find these operations exploitive and damaging? It would no doubt have to take a dramatically different form but that is the provocative approach that I would need to hear before considering it for airplay.

Comment for "The Hyzdu Diaries"

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Review of The Hyzdu Diaries

With the Boys of Summer ready to take the field next week, now would be a good time to air this polished program.

This is a tale of a performer's rise to "overnight success" status. I say that with sarcasm for this is a diary of a talented baseballer and his uphill struggle to reach the Major Leagues.

The diary captures the emotions of Adam Hyzdu as he chases a dream while balancing the demands of being a husband, father and first time homeowner. It's a story of frustration, faith, success, love, competition and the cruel realities of for-profit sport.

It's cleanly edited, has excellent production values and will prove to be an insightful listen for the baseball lovers out there.

Comment for "Timber! The Aftermath of the Washington Logging Collapse"

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Review of Timber! The Aftermath of the Washington Logging Collapse

Jessica's feature was a story of a specific locale with obvious universal connections about the personal side of changing economies. That attracted me and I wanted to know how this particular work force would adapt...or not.

The stories were intimate, real, personal but some of the audio was a bit hissy and muddy. I liked the report but think it could be edited substantially. Some nat sound could have enhanced the progression while creating a very real location in the theater of my mind.

Jessica, having lived there, brought a unique perspective to the story without undermining the report or overshadowing the stories of the workers.

Comment for "America's Women: Four Hundred Years Of Dolls, Drudges, Helpmates And Heroines."

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Review of America's Women: Four Hundred Years Of Dolls, Drudges, Helpmates And Heroines.

I enjoyed listening to the lecture but as a program director I would hope to have an avail to identify the program so that late joiners could be brought into the conversation. I would also want an opportunity to do a station break so that I could update weather, share an underwriting announcement, do some cross promotion and so forth.

In a perfect world I would have a billboard and a newshole.

Gail spoke quite fast at times and a 15-second id avail and a 60-second break would also allow the listening audience to catch their breath.

Gail didn't begin speaking until about 3-minutes into the program. Perhaps some of the information about the series could be moved to the end of the broadcast and why not drop in some provocative or just plain interesting audio from the lecture just before giving a more stripped down version of her bio? It would give the show some nice production values and perhaps would raise interest.

The first question was inaudible or close to inaudible. Maybe in post production that could be reinserted cleanly.

Comment for "Raider of the Lost Ark"

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Review of Raider of the Lost Ark

I sure enjoyed this. Maybe you will be as surprised as I was by the turn it takes in the final minutes.

Jake is a strong writer and a strong narrator and I stayed involved in his journey through the excellent use of film audio and voices of people he encountered.

Touching, personal, authentic and respectful of subject and listener. And the digression of the floating monk is priceless in its comedic value.

Did he find the Lost Arc? I believe he found his version of it.

Comment for "Turkey Bowling with Nascar Nation"

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Review of Turkey Bowling with Nascar Nation

Heather was in the light-hearted spirit of the subject, but I would like to hear more animation in her voice and hear her being more playful and teasing during the interaction with the contestants.

Liked the fact that early on the concept was explained and I thought the early insertion of the parody song was cute.

Was confused by the Guess Who track and a couple of times I was distracted by the loud background noise (it must be an enormous challenge to reduce that at a race track).

This is so very subjective but I would have considered dropping in the closing song immediately following the audio from the triumphant contestant.

I love the fact that Heather isn't shy about approaching an amusing subject and a subject that is probably going to bring about some criticism.

Comment for "Do you know YOUR credit score?"

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Review of Do you know YOUR credit score?

I will be recommending this to my talk-shows in the event they have a financial planning or money related broadcast coming up in the near future.

This is clear and direct, and in a subject arena that requires the use of numbers, I wasn't inundated with those radio-unfriendly things.

Tanya delivered this with a warm, conversational tone and her interview tracks advanced the story.

People are being taken advantage of in the area of finance, budgeting and investments and we need more of this easy-to-follow-lay-person kind of advice.

Comment for "Peace Talks Radio: Peaceful Parenting (58:00 / 54:00 / )"

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Review of Peace Talks Radio: Peaceful Parenting (58:00 / 54:00 / or three 29:00 programs)

We all try to model good behavior as parents, as adults, and this gives us much to consider. The studio interviews were done well and I am so glad that a young person, in this case a young man, was interviewed.

Still, perhaps the show would benefit from a short "set up" piece filed from the field. I wanted to hear more voices from the real world and wanted to hear from more young people.

Is there a way to incorporate questions from the audience. If not a live call in component, would it be possible to have call-outs or to solicit phone calls in advance of the recording session? And is there any chance to provide a little levity, appropriate levity to help me release my listening angst and to demonstrate that the people in the studio have human qualities just like the rest of us.

I applaud the fact that we heard conversation about culture and gender and the complexities of being both a parent and child and the peer pressures we all face.

Still, this is purposful radio that respects my intelligence and embraces civility.

Comment for "In Conversation...with John Kain"

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Review of In Conversation...with John Kain

Carolyn sounded well prepared for her converstion with John Kain. Her opening was simple, clear and direct. I liked the pace of the program and there were some delightful little surprises. It is of simple construct and that may be a problem but it is rich in story and thought.

I wonder, from a standpoint of giving stations more flexibility, if it would be possible to offer stations a shorter version or multiple shorter versions of interview segments minus the music.

A station director might be hard pressed to find a suitable 29-minute companion program (Humankind?).

Comment for "Wireless Naskapi Nation"

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Review of Wireless Naskapi Nation

I found myself wanting to hear more about the potential of having wireless access in the remote community and less about the challenges of development and construction. I think that is what my audience would want, too.

My interest was in the educational and commerce opportunities that Sandra talked about. And tell me about other opportunities it will present. I wanted to hear more from the residents...period.

Are there voices of opposition to the plan to 'wire' the community? Share with me those sentiments, too. That is, if they exist.

I believe it was about 4-minutes in that we learned about the challenges of bringing wireless to this remote locale. I would consider moving that to the beginning including descriptions of the terrain, the islolation, the sometimes harsh weather and so forth.

Great to hear a variety of voices and sound. Attention was given to production values. Sandra has a pleasant voice. I like her relaxed style but wouldn't mind hearing a little more personality in the delivery.

Comment for "cosmic connection - laughter" (deleted)

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Review of cosmic connection - laughter (deleted)

Interesting topic and I learned a lot.

It might be more engaging as a radio piece with the addition of a second voice, perhaps the voice of the expert. Perhaps the piece would benefit from the insertion of a short comedic bit from a standup comic or a theater troupe or other sound elements.

It was a bit heavy on the academic side and perhaps at the expense of production values.

Obviously, well researched and credible.

Comment for "EPISODE #407 "Executive Decision!" - Starring Jeffrey Tambor & Chris Hardwick"

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Review of EPISODE #407 "Executive Decision!" - Starring Jeffrey Tambor & Chris Hardwick

Funny, weird, corny. It had me blowing the dust off my old Chicken Man discs.

Animated, sound production values, good voice characterization and well written.

Comment for "The Mississippi Box Project" (deleted)

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Review of The Mississippi Box Project (deleted)

The Box project feature has a number of qualities that appeal to the public radio listener: curiosity, respect for the listener, idealism, attention to craft and more.

The project was well explained and I understood its purpose and uniqueness. I would have appreciated it even more if there was some 3rd party analysis of its success or shortcomings.

Comment for "From Yale to Hack [Two Versions]"

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Review of From Yale to Hack [Two Versions]

I enjoyed this work by Guyon. Honest, sensitive, touching at times and even funny.

Guyon set me up and kept me curious. Okay, how does this guy with this background end up as a cabbie. Later, he finds another way to keep me listening. Inspired by Taxi Driver. Oh my, who is this Guyon Knight?! I must keep listening.

Due to the length I am glad he added appropriate doses of music and his experience at taxi school became more enjoyable when Guyon fell into the instructor's voice.

Guyon bared his soul and I felt his awkwardness at possibly being viewed as an interloper.

In the outset he told us that he needed a place to go. In the end, with a heart wrenching story about one of his riders, we find out where that place is located.

Guyon's deliver can be a bit breathy and maybe some editing of the long-form edition would benefit the piece but I liked this...a lot.

The dilemma may be where to place a project like this. I don't have a place to showcase it. Do You?

Comment for "Becoming more successful can be dangerous to your health"

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Review of Becoming more successful can be dangerous to your health

Michael has humorous essay that stays on point from start to quick finish.

I think it is written well but read it to me one more time with meaning! Give me a bit more theater in that voice and use pregnant pauses and other devises to sell the lines that are clever and/or cute & funny.

My wife hit a fence post...she must really be happy. Get some good news...slice a finger tip. Those lines teased the tickle bone. Deliver them with a bit more theater and you'll have me guffawing.

Regardless, nice work.

Comment for "A Jethro Tull Christmas With Ian Anderson"

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Review of A Jethro Tull Christmas With Ian Anderson

Looking for an 'out of the ordinary last second' Christmas special? This is the one, especially for stations who program rock and related genres of music.

Excellent production values and rock solid (pun intended) musical recordings.

Ian Anderson has a great voice, a stylish delivery and he sounds honest, warm, funny and personal. Good balance between music and Ian's conversations.

Hear a great version of 'Moondance' and find out who motivated Ian to relearn flute technique. Laugh at good natured references to Eric Clapton and "slightly grumpy" Christmas music.

I liked this a lot.

Comment for "NABJ History"

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Review of NABJ History

I had no idea that the NABJ's existance is tied to such a significant moment and period in American history and profound moments in at least one journalist's career. That made it worthy listening for this former journalist and, while I waver a bit, I think the average listener would find it equally engaging.

It might get a boost from a newly written lead. I also want Angela to keep growing as a presenter but she kept me listening from start to finish.

I didn't care for the Temptations song insert (It was the Temps?). At the very least, it would have benefitted from tighter production values when the song was used in combination with Angela's narration.

Good listening, however, and I sent it on for one of my producers to consider for airplay on her program.

Comment for "tributary - word of the day"

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Review of tributary - word of the day

I like the simple and tasteful intro. I enjoyed being surprised by the "word of the day" meanings but it was a bit much to digest in 3-short minutes. Perhaps through more inflection and use of pauses and other delivery techniques I would have gotten even more nourishment. Still, pleasant listening that respects me as a listener.

Comment for "Home Planet:A Naked Thanksgiving by Cheryl-Anne Millsap"

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Review of Home Planet:A Naked Thanksgiving by Cheryl-Anne Millsap

If you have a place to showcase this...you should. It's clever and amusing and our commentator is perfectly animated in her delivery. Parents will love it.

Comment for "Here on Earth: War Letters" (deleted)

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Review of Here on Earth: War Letters (deleted)

Loved the opening. Slick. The montage was clever and clean and I'm hit between the eyes shortly after that. I had an immediate desire to keep listening. I thought it wise that you set the show up BEFORE introducing your guest.

I'm assuming the callers were screened because not a single call brought the show to a screaching halt like we know some can. The callers advocated for me as a listener and advanced the show to new levels. I absolutely loved the question (comment?) from the cynical, angry sounding man who referenced "delusional" issues.

Coming out of the break with a strong clip from the father launched yet more engaging conversation.

I only wish that Andrew had been on an ISDN line. The phone line, for this radio guy, gets a bit tiresome after a while. Especially when the guest plays such an important role.

Comment for "Virtuoso Voices - Evelyn Glennie (Playing Barefoot)"

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Review of Virtuoso Voices - Evelyn Glennie (Playing Barefoot)

Give me more. Ms. Glennie had an energy that makes me want to hear more about how she approaches her craft beyond the barefoot aspect. That giggle at the end tells me she has a personality that would keep us interested and engaged in the conversation.

Comment for "22 A Snail's Pace?"

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Review of 22 A Snail's Pace?

The opening gently and warmly brought me in...the pretty piano followed by natural sound. Nice.

And I learned a lot about this tiny creature in a short time period but wasn't hit with too many facts to digest in that limited time frame.

This might sound a bit too PSA-ish but a rewrite of the closing precautions might remedy that some. Word the advice in a more conversational tone perhaps.

Still, I learned and I feel a little bit smarter.

Comment for "A True American Hero"

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Review of A True American Hero

I liked this for two reasons: Dick, although he read too fast at times, read this with an enthusiasm for his subject and he offered some surprises. For example, I had no idea that Gene Debs garnered nearly one-million votes in a Presidential election and I had no idea how significant his contributions were on behalf of working Americans.

There are little nuggets in here that say much about the time period and an overlooked American.