Comments by Bill Anderson

Comment for "The Culture and Dialogue of Climate Change"

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Review of The Culture and Dialogue of Climate Change

The professor offers much to think about and his thoughts and opinions would be great to hear on public radio. However, for my taste, an interview of this length would have worked better in a studio where the audio would have been of a higher quality and where some editing could take place.

What an interesting subject. He articulates well, not so much as a scientist, but as a trusted or respected person and I felt I benefited from his expertise. He talked to me, not AT me. I do think, however, I would have gotten more from the interview with a better set up. Up front I would have been a better listener, a less confused listener, had I been given some background about the circumstances surrounding his visit to Denver. The lead just didn't give me enough background on Professor Rapley, the controversy over his visit and the direction of the interview I was about to hear. I spent too much time providing my own context and, subsequently, fell behind at points during the interview.

And when the discussion turned to the Antarctic Wildlife Refuge it became unclear to me as to whether or not we were still having the global warming conversation. Maybe that is my shortcoming.

The professor seems to take seriously his position to engage the public and that might make him a great candidate for a call-in show?

Comment for "The Declaration of Independence" (deleted)

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Review of The Declaration of Independence (deleted)

No doubt about the importance and significance of the Declaration of Independence but I would recommend some changes to this before it becomes a radio piece. A simple, albeit well read reading of the Declaration doesn't embrace the strengths of radio.

Why not take it beyond the domain of commentary and create a 59-minute documentary? Create a sound rich opening and tie expert analysis around the narration of the document. Give it historical context and tie it to modern life. Give the listener oppossing viewpoints of interpretation and mix in some archive audio and appropriately suitable music bridges.

There's some powerful language in this document that will illicit emotional responses from experts and men and women on the street, some who probably have no idea what words lie in the document.

Comment for ""Diamond" Jimmy Roy"

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Review of "Diamond" Jimmy Roy

Long live Diamond Jimmy and may this piece find a place on radio. I was drawn in to the subject almost immediately and only a couple of times did my interest wane. And I loved the ending.

Our protagonist, Jimmy, has an enthusiasm, optimism, and charisma worth hearing about. I fell in love with the guy and found him inspirational. How nice it was for the producer to allow me to arrive at my own decision about Jimmy and his world.

On one hand he's employing sales techniques while his honest and principled hand is betraying that slickness.

Dan told a good story. Rather, he stayed out of the way and let Jimmy tell a good story, his story in song and colorful language and in conversation with fellow residents of Braddington. Jimmy's vernacular and his speaking voice simply demanded my attention. Dan was there enough to fill in the gaps with excellent descriptions.

Nice rhythm, nice flow and solid and conversational delivery by Dan.

May have to be edited to fit some station's needs but, if you have a hole for feature work like this, play it.

Comment for "Powwow Dancing 101" (deleted)

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Review of Powwow Dancing 101 (deleted)

I found much to like in Kim's work. The sound recording was good technically and created clear images most of the time. I would love to hear this on the air but only after some editing takes place. I think this could be an excellent feature at 6-7 minutes in length.

Some of the details, minutia, I could live without. The references to the dance schedule and who funded is unneccessary. Beyond that, find ways to let the dancers tell the story.

I loved the dance descriptions and dance history. I also enjoyed hearing the young Alejandro as he described his costume.

Some questions popped into my mind as I listened but they went unanswered. what is a 'double beat'? as an example. What are 'snuff pins'?

I do think the the narrative script could be pared down considerably and, subsequently, the piece could be shortened.

Give me something up front...some of that good field audio instead of the somewhat long narrative.

Comment for "Remembering Remus (W/Music)" (deleted)

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Review of Remembering Remus (W/Music) (deleted)

Jacob has a believable and down-to- earth delivery and does a nice job with his pace.

I think Jacob has more to say. I want to hear about the characters in his family and, as an example, one or two of his fellow performers at the talent show. Share a humorous misstep from that talent showcase or from one of your family reunions.

Comment for "Forests" (deleted)

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Review of Forests (deleted)

This was an enjoyable audio experience. I love the simplicity. Two people sitting in a woods with a backdrop of rich, comforting ambiant sounds. I didn't hear it as an interview. I heard two relaxed people having an intelligent, natural conversation. I was there as an observer, a far cry from what I would have experienced had this been done in a studio. Maybe it was recorded in a studio with the ambiant sound mixed in but it sure sounded like a field recording. The point is that the sound elevated the segment to a much more intimate and engaging level.

I credit Martha Foley for asking her question and getting out of the way so that the authority can give a thoughtful answer. He, by the way, is well spoken,clear and informed.

Comment for "The Bad Map - Is the traditional Mercator map unfair to developing nations?" (deleted)

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Review of The Bad Map - Is the traditional Mercator map unfair to developing nations? (deleted)

There was so much that I liked in this piece but ultimately I felt like it went unfinished. I wanted to hear specific examples of how the mercator map, which distorts the size of at least some developing nations, is unfair beyond the size distortion. Is it an image thing, an economic issue or what? How do the nations and cultures within those nations percieve the size slight?

Andrew has a nice, conversational style and I like his pace. He speaks clearly.

I loved his use of the dining experience of two friends to illustrate how the "facts" can look so much different depending on one's perspective.

A bit of a distraction was the reference to "that's me on the guitar, by the way". I also almost always battle as a listener to hear narration over a vocal music bed.

I hear so much potential and so many positives in this piece but just don't feel it quite delivers.

Comment for ""Unschooled" Children Control Their Own Education"

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Review of "Unschooled" Children Control Their Own Education

Unique, surprising and polished.

I loved the way Jeff teased me from the outset to get my attention.

And thank you for including a skeptical or critical voice. I am also glad that, a concept that might be easy to dismiss, was taken seriously by the journalist.

I could see a followup to this as the concept is applied to children with learning disabilities.

It might even be interesting to follow an "unschooled" child over the course of a couple of years.

Comment for "Compact Discoveries 105: The Dream of America"

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Review of Compact Discoveries 105: The Dream of America

Looking for some thematic classical programming for a holiday or special occasion? This might fit the bill.

Peter Boyer's composition is nice to listen to and the performance is equally good.

The stories of those who traveled here touch the heart and, so well delivered by trained actors/voices, don't distract from the musical rhythm. A nice mix of music and spoken word.

I wish there was a way to make it a complete hour-long package because the additional peices, while strong, seem like nothing more than fill within the context of the ongoing Ellis Island theme.

Comment for "two weeks to kill"

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Review of two weeks to kill

What more can I say beyond the fact that I couldn't stop listening. So unpredictable and I just had to know where the streets and his conscious would ultimately take him. And the weird twist involving the woman from Taiwan.

Descriptive to the point that I could see and smell the locations and delivered in a relaxed, authentic voice.

He didn't offer any solutions or have an epiphany but he was compassionate, respectful and likeable.

Comment for "The Lo-Fi Ballad of Daniel Johnston"

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Review of The Lo-Fi Ballad of Daniel Johnston

I wish I could create "local" radio this strong. Intriguing subject, well written and told equally well through a mix of conversational narrative and audio.

This piece should appeal to music fans as well as those who simply like to study human behavior. The feature, for me, was as much about how we react to art and other people as much as it was about Daniel's musical creations.

Is Daniel Johnston a gifted and troubled artist or a calculating self-promoter or both? Those questions remained long after the piece ended and I thank David for not force-feeding me an answer.

As far as stories go, this one is bizarre, amusing, heartfelt, tragic and, most importantly, unique and interesting.

Comment for "Wagon Train"

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Review of Wagon Train

I liked elements in "wagon train" but felt like too much time was spent describing mules at the expense of the wagon train experience itself. The Cowboys sounded interesting and I would have loved to hear more about their love/passion for the wagon train. beyond what they shared about mules.

I enjoyed the ambient sound. It was rich and well recorded but I wanted more.

Nice close. Humorous and appropriate.


Comment for "Taking Liberties"

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Review of Taking Liberties

Timely. Well written, well delivered, well edited and polished. The documentary is easy to follow and has a comfortable rhythm. It is informative and takes advantage of multiple voices, people who are thoughtful and intelligent. I learned much over the course of this 58-minute documentary and relearned some important history that I had unfortunately forgotten.

Superlatives aside, I still found myself wanting to hear more. Example: I wanted to hear someone take issue with the segment about the para-military police work. As reprehensible as the Eugene, Oregon police action was, I wanted to hear it spoken of in terms of number of incidents. I wanted to hear a police voice explaining when, how and why that type of work might sometimes be justified. There were other segments that had me asking for other perspectives, too.

Heavy handed is too strong an expression to use to define the segment about the Carter-Reagan Presidential election but let's be mindful that it just wasn't the intelligence community which supported and elected Ronald Reagan.

This documenatry would be well served by a clock. Give stations the 20/40 local avail and provide a 5-minute news hole at :01.

Comment for "Glacier Melts"

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Review of Glacier Melts

Intelligent and interesting. Clean edits and good sound. Nice use of sound to make transitions. Mapped out in a manner that was easy to follow with some well placed humor which didn't distract from the story.

The host set up an interesting subject with a nice pace, a good read and well chosen, descriptive language. Eric painted a nice picture in the opening, too.

If I had the venue for this I would air it. I was interested from start to finish.

My constructive criticism: I would encourage Eric to work a bit on his pace and delivery.

Comment for "Part 8: David Swan"

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Review of Part 8: David Swan

This short piece was well edited. It detailed some of the grim realities of war, from the act of killing to being injured physically and/or emotionally.

I question why the description of the houses which were searched was included including the reference to Mercedes autos.

I liked the simplicity of this and the narrator just spoke as oppossed to speaking into a microphone.

I gave it a low rating only because we are getting a steady diet of these first-person stories on the news magazines. That's no fault of the producer and not a reflection on the producer's work.

That said, I would use them if the voices were from my community.

Comment for "Measure, Measure, Measure"

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Review of Measure, Measure, Measure

I enjoyed this, especially because I'm a parent of a young adult male, but found myself wanting more background on the young Naval enlistee and a little more detail on the relationship between father and son. Perhaps that would have brought me into the story totally.

Descriptions were radio-friendly clear and simple and the reporter painted a good picture of the bus setting in the outset. I especially enjoyed how she introduced the Navy by describing how dad rolled up his sleaves on a warm day to reveal tattoos, tattoos that he got while serving in the Navy.

I was intrigued by the way she took us through three emotional stages of dad as the day of departure for the Navy approached and became reality.

The story was honest, authentic and respectful of subject and listener. It didn't grab my full attention but it is unique, well produced, well narrated and certainly timely.

Comment for "The Book Show#929-Author Sarah Waters" (deleted)

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Review of The Book Show#929-Author Sarah Waters (deleted)

How many times while listening to an interview of an author have we uttered, 'I don't think the host has read this darn book.'? So it was refreshing to listen to Gretchen ask questions that could only come from someone who knew the author and the book.

I enjoyed the interview and I found myself liking Sarah Waters and got just enough glimpses of Gretchen's personality to make me think that I probably like her, too. I point this out only because I think the show would benefit a bit more if Gretchen would give us a bit more Gretchen. It's a balancing act because one certainly doesn't want to overshadow the guest but radio is at it's best when we invite the audience in a bit more. It builds loyalty and sustains interest if nothing else. While they often take "personality" to a horrible extreme, it is one aspect of this intimate medium that our commercial friends understand most of the time.

That "personality" should extend to include the show elements. Why not drop in excerpts of the book as read by staff members at WAMC? I know it wasn't a call-in show but might there be a way to include a listener perspective. Short Vox Pop as one example?

I enjoyed the interview but found myself most engaged near the end when the questions turned away from the book and focused more on Ms. Waters.

It's nice to hear intelligent conversation about the literary world but a half-hour interview by phone with lots of popping sounds will test a listener's fortitude.

Comment for "Andean Harvest"

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Review of Andean Harvest

I enjoyed listening to this piece because I was able to see a physical space and a culture that I was not aware of previously.

I thought the reporter was effective in using simple, active and powerful words to describe that space and culture.

The sound helped advanced the story and was never gratuitous. The report was thorough. It was well edited.

He respected his subject and his subjects without passing judgement, something that is so easy for us to do as outsiders from more affluent and developed locales.

Comment for "Episode 4: Desgregation through Food"

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Review of Episode 4: Desgregation through Food

We are an enlightened bunch but we can also be guilty of sharing narrow perspectives. This piece was refreshing to me in that we heard about a strong willed, if not prickly woman, a woman representing a diverse background.

And it made me think. It made me think about the 'third place' establishments in my community and how creative we could be in presenting our 'third place' locations.

It made me wonder if we have similar public servants including those who are under the radar screen. Who is the Ruby Chow of Kansas City? It made me think about ways to dig a bit deeper to bring interesting stories to my audience locally.

I was thrilled to hear a unique and mostly untold historical aspect of one of America's great cities. I was inspired to hear about a legacy of public service.

This was perhaps long on narration but I found the reporters (recreation) reading the newspaper headlines creative and inspired.

And what a wonderful concept for a series! Breaking bread while engaging in meaningful conversation. It is so common and perhaps so overlooked as a place, as an environment where learning takes place and ideas and positions take root.

Comment for "Juvenile Sentencing"

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Review of Juvenile Sentencing

From start to finish...this piece gripped me. From the initial description of the detention center to the first hand accounts of the detained...it gave me, the father of two teens, chills.

Before listening I suspected it would paint a sympathetic picture of the convicted but it was as honest and objective as it was real and gritty.

Good use of music and good story telling by the narrator.

Comment for "Street Music: Folk Songs for the Five Points"

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Review of Street Music: Folk Songs for the Five Points

Thank you for taking me to your neighborhood. You did a nice job of creating a sense of community in one corner of New York City.

It would be nice to hear this on New York radio but it might be a tough sale in the Heartland.

This was cleanly edited and the narrator did a nice job of defining folk music while sharing the museum's philosophy on this sonic art.

The narrator was warm, inviting and authentic in voice. He respected me as a listener.

In closing, the piece left me wanting to hear the sound of a manhole cover!!!

Comment for "Gawker Media: Information with Attitude"

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Review of Gawker Media: Information with Attitude

Interested in seeing what direction we are headed as the new media/new platform revolution continues?

This piece does a nice job of illuminating the blogger's world. We get a clear picture of content creation by people who aren't necessarily from the ranks of journalists. Meet bloggers in honest terms and hear what outsiders are thinking.

The work was presented roughly so it is unlikely I would air it. However, I'm glad I listened.

Comment for "Bogus Electronics"

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Review of Bogus Electronics

I found this piece full of surprises and walked away with a better understanding about why I should be wary of knock-off products. It was an interesting report.

Good and clear expert analysis but I always hope for something beyond phone connections. I say that knowing that it simply isn't always possible.

I did find the explosion a bit off-putting. That was a sound effect, right? If so, it undermined the seriousness of the report. If not, I'm literally blown away.

Jean did a very good job of providing the facts. I did want to hear more voice inflection, however, and a little more fluidity in the delivery of sentences.

Comment for "What about Hurricane Victims in Chiapas? - Two Minute Version" (deleted)

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Review of What about Hurricane Victims in Chiapas? - Two Minute Version (deleted)

Two minutes is not enough time for this interesting subject. Lose the opening and closing music and expand it by giving me the government's position on the resources that were said to be directed to the Cancun tourist area. I thought the last sentence, 'when the government will do anything is anyone's guest' was heavy handed.

I like Peggy's voice but the pace was a bit too fast and commercial for a public radio audience.

Give some attention to the aforementioned and I would likely recommend the peice for airing on one of my news magazines. Why? Because it's a unique and interesting untold story.

Comment for "RN Documentary: Not Enough Tears"

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Review of RN Documentary: Not Enough Tears

I loved the way this deeply personal story was introduced. References to armed revolutionaries, love stretching beyond death and the soundbite in which the daughter talked about a story that is "...too shocking to tell the truth." All that, early in the presentation, raised my level of interest.

Soon, however, I felt like an interloper who was encroaching on the personal and tragic story of a grieving family. The very real drama wore me down in the end and I was left reflecting on the horror of the incident and not the lessons learned.

I was grateful that I was given context for this family's personal horror in respect to the unneccesary deaths of tens of thousands of Sri Lankans. That context came some 5-minutes into the show and about the time I was looking for background.

Good use of sound and music and appropriate music at that. Clean edits and incredibly authentic in voice. The gun shots might turn some off but it drove a grim point home for me.

I must admit that I had to work hard to understand the heavily accented voices, especially that of the husband, and I found myself desiring additional narration as we progressed through the story.

Would I air this program assuming I could find another half-hour segment that would be suitable and somewhat complimentary? Probably not if only because I feel I have so much other content to use that tells the story of Americans and citizens of Iraq in a war that is top of the mind and top of the hour on the radio dial in the U-S-A.

Comment for "The Whale Plan"

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Review of The Plan- Whale

You want me to review a 29-minute radio feature about whales? My kids have grown up and I don't have to do cuddly whales anymore!

I entered this 29-minute program with a bad attitude and arrived at the other end with a smile on my face and feeling a little bit smarter.

Now, I have no idea where I would place this in my lineup but it mostly held my attention and I found the experience amusing, entertaining and at times informative. It is difficult to find shelf space for half-hour programs let alone half-hour programs about whales.

This was a 9 segment half-hour of trippy, odd, humorous and human stories. It ranges from the angelic singing of Laura Anderson to the flatulent sound of a killer whale as recorded by Jay Allison.

Looking subjectively, I might have stacked the 9 elements differently by putting the brilliant 'Just Another Fish Story' closer to the top. This is an example of how slick editing of multiple voices- first hand accounts- an instrumental bed and a pregnant pause can be used to tell an interesting story without narration. Loved it. What a clear mental image Molly Menschel created.

And Jay Allison had me in stitches as he dryly told the story of love...between his wife and whale.

I could have done without the National Lampoon Radio Hour bit but that's probably because I wore out my Lampoon records years ago.

Comment for "The Teacher by Billy Collins"

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Review of The Teacher by Billy Collins

If you have a two minute hole...this would fit the Bill (pun intended). Narrated professionally and delivered intimately, this Billy Collins work plays to a number of our core values including pacing, authenticity, substance and respect for the listener's intelligence.

The piece was delivered with just the right amount of inflection and the voicing was clear and resonate.

The poem itself had a playful moment, was contemplative, personal and transitioned well from the pages of a book to the airwaves.

My challenge would involve placement. My two minute holes are used for local news inserts or for the dissemination of other information.

However, I would strong-arm a producer into putting it as part of poetry themed talk show.

Comment for "Gerry Adams on Conflict (Longer Version)" (deleted)

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Review of Gerry Adams on Conflict (Longer Version) (deleted)

Wow, something a radio station could play on St. Patrick's Day that goes beyond celebratory fluff and beer soaked commercialism which sadly represents St. Pat's Day in America.

It's important to note that this could be played on the air any day as it provides context and relevance during these days of war.

We get a brief glimpse of Gerry Adams' public side and a more in depth look at his personal side. It sounded honest and underscored the listener's value for finding solutions.

In under 6-minutes we hear about tests of one's religion, his history with the IRA and the harsh lessons of armed conflict.

It is simple in production value but that does not damage the piece. I didn't always understand the context for some of the cutaways from Adams speaking privately to him speaking publically but still found some strong moments in a truly unique and human voice.

It may not tell a full story but there are things worth holding on to in this production.