Comments by Marjorie Van Halteren

Comment for "Where Is Sean Penn When We Need Him?" (deleted)

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Steve, Paul, Sean and Marge (deleted)

Middle-aged white lady likes it too. In fact, this guy Paul McDonald is well-written, well-recorded and to the point. I hope he's getting air time. He's refreshing.

Comment for "Stranger in Paradise"

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Review of Stranger in Paradise

This well-produced piece about an eccentric artist that was discovered only after his death has two major distinctions: 1) it achieves something that is a real challenge on radio, namely, make the listener see something visual and - by the end - be extremely intrigued by it and 2) it delivers a kind of elegance that would blend very nicely on any station with arts and cultural programming, especially those bastions of serious classical or modern compositional music - but not only those stations - and the text is interesting and poetic. It calls for quiet, rational listening - like lots of good stuff does.

Comment for "Religion of the Founding Fathers" (deleted)

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Review of Religion of the Founding Fathers (deleted)

I enjoyed listening to this immensely - how much does the general public really know about who the founding fathers were - especially on a religious level? Me, I'm pretty much a secular thinker - but the series - With Good Reason - covers a wide range of topics drawing from the University system in the state of Virginia - what an opportunity! It reminded me of a kind of daily programming that I listen to over here on BBC Radio 4 that puts authors and scholars together to discuss topics from the history of ideas - things you may have abandoned when you left school - I never want to abandon school! I'm pencilling in other parts of the series right now.

Comment for "Quidditch, Anyone?"

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Review of Quidditch, Anyone?

I agree with the producer - a clever, radiophonic way for stations to address the Harry Potter mania - all it needs is a good live set-up - I'm not sure the beginning really sounds to me like they're playing it but the end is really good - a lucky little bit of recording!

Comment for "The Black Ghosts of Paris"

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Review of The Black Ghosts of Paris

Part of a series from Canada - "I have two loves -my country and Paris" - a sweet, intimate, and literary subject. Evocative and deeply felt - a woman describing memories of writers in Paris that she never lived. Not a piece about Paris at all, but one about a destination in the head. It's curious - nicely so. At first I thought I wanted to know more about the author to hang on to it - but why really? The ghost of it clings.

Comment for "Galapagos: Preserving the Trust"

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Review of Galapagos: Preserving the Trust

It's an attractive idea - students from MIT going to the Galapagos and taking you with them in sound. The program tells you exactly what it is upfront - an educationally-connected offering, which billboards it nicely and clearly. (And the website is lovely.) The sound running under all the interviews creates a palpable, physical sense of this beautiful place. I had a technical problem that may seem very picky but I think it makes the work hard to listen to. While the writing and reading by the students was pretty well done - the recording of two of the young women is dull and bass-y in the mix - especially against other recordings are so clear and bright. I teach an audio class too and I know how problematic that is on the first time out - but it's a good piece that would work well for any programming that wanted to handle environmental issues while taking listeners on an audio trip - so - in my opinion - this needs to be resolved.

Comment for "Shades of Gray"

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Review of Shades of Gray

This is impressive work - and very careful - it's artistic AND balanced. This piece does not promote abortion. It does not condemn it. But it does provide some very precise information - for example, part one includes a beautifully produced experiential moment of what an abortion might be like - totally unromanticized - just the sound. Unembellished. It's not horrific - just factual and radiophonic at the same time. Also: a young woman calling a clinic and asking questions - like many are probably afraid to do. I imagine there are people that need to know about that. And more. The religious side gets its say, too - but doesn't overwhelm. Stations should be brave and air this. And talk it through. Anyone who would be offended by this program just simply doesn't want to listen to anyone else.

Comment for "Art of the Song #12 with Eliza Gilkyson" (deleted)

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Review of Art of the Song #12 with Eliza Gilkyson (deleted)

Just when you think no one writes songs about anything at all anymore - you get reminded that there are still mature songwriters out there. I liked everything about this program - I appreciated the hosts that are professional but sound like real people; and the work of Eliza Gilkyson really struck a chord with me - there was one song, about a time of life and river of gold, that cut me to the quick. If I have any criticism at all, it might be that there were a couple of times when musical influences were mentioned, such as Joni Mitchell and Bob Dylan and Gilkyson's own father, and the corresponding musical excerpts flashed by alittle too fast - too teasing - in favor of talk. But the talk is great - and - it's an hour. If you like this kind of thing - flies by.

Comment for "Con Toda Palabra: Lhasa de Sela"

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Review of Con Toda Palabra: Lhasa de Sela

A woman sings and speaks in three languages, with English in the lead, so it can be perfectly followed by US listeners. For me, hearing the languages colliding in this piece that sits on a bed of wall-to-wall, intensely colorful music is very pleasurable. I've seen the album all over France and now I will buy it. If I have any criticism of the piece, it might be that there isn't time to learn much about the singer - the structure of the piece is all happening at once. I attribute that to time constraints. However, this piece would make a very attractive drip-in for any magazine or arts program and I suggest that the proudcer provide some tight lead-in copy that helps anchor who the singer is (more specific than the copy on the piece page - more info that's not in the piece, like the part about the record going platinum) and it would be a great piece to air.

Comment for "I Wish"

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Review of I Wish

A lovely sound collage with well-used and unobtrusive music. The interviews start out rather classic but then are often very surprising, individual, and touching. While listening, it reminded me alot of my own beginnings in the 1980's, when myself and a group of fledgling producers started making audio pieces with similiar impulses - they were open, dreamy, hopeful wishes. I wish the radio stays open. I wish this piece to fly out there and find an audience. I wish fulfilling things for the producer, I wish for more wishing.

Comment for "Poetry on Death Row - voices from inside"

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Review of Poetry on Death Row - voices from inside

This program features the voices of inmates on death row - out of necessity they're all on the telephone - which gives the piece a kind of call-in energy - these voices sound exactly like all of the other telephone voices heard on the radio every day - they're so ordinary - even their poetry is basically ordinary - but they are people in exceptional circumstances - and that alone makes it rather eye-opening. The text read by the producer, along with spare music, some additional interviews - including a pretty imaginative prison guard - and an unusual voice reading billboard titles - creates a patchwork of alternating coolness and tension that is appealing. A nice, controlled piece of work.

Comment for "Outside the Dying"

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Review of Outside the Dying

It's late at night as I'm listening to this - and it feels just right. I know there are some people who would consider this 21-minute interior diary of a woman as she moves towards widowhood a bit too dark - but I am personally uplifted by how edgily beautiful it sounds and is. And the many, many listeners who have lived through something related would no doubt resonate with the honesty and depth. Lovely performances, lovely writing.

Comment for "At First Glance ? The What and Why of Skin" (deleted)

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Review of At First Glance — The What and Why of Skin (deleted)

I was quite attracted by the subject - and it is true that the program is packed with information -but too often, just as I was getting interested in an interview, I found myself up against a new segment, accompanied by a piece of music of yet another style - an example: an interviewee is talking about the healthy skin of Buddhist monks and in come rather loud chants under the whole thing, then, "well, we can't all spend our lives in a monestary!" and that subject's gone, with no explanation as to why Buddhist monks may have healthy skin - the first time this happened was in the very beginning: an interesting interview with a serious burn victim and quick - she was gone! replaced by another 50 minutes of a host that didn't seem to know if he should be friendly (he mentioned his cat out of the blue) or radio-announcer neutral (sometime he sounded like he had actually interviewed the people and sometimes he sounded like he was pretending)- and, frankly, not sure if he on commerical or public radio - maybe there isn't supposed to be a difference in style, but that underwriting copy, featuring Clinique, has to be the closest thing to advertising that you're allowed to do on public radio. A bright spot: in the end, the burn victim came back - her final interview segment is the best part of the program - if all of it had worked together that way, playing out each section as fully, it would have been great. There certainly was enough material in the program to pull that off - but maybe not for an hour.

Comment for "A Cook's Notebook: Praise the Pig!"

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Review of A Cook's Notebook: Praise the Pig!

I've listened to several pieces in this series and what I've really liked about is the very original idea of combining a kind of accessible literary approach with the practical passion of cooking and food. In this piece, the author talks about something in a really interesting and frank way - about her relationship with the animals she eats - an idea that Americans don't often openly cotton to but something that here in France is simply understood - and the piece is well-written like the others - but it is much more straightforward and less of a short story - well-worth airing and may even spark some controversy on the air - but I did find myself wondering, is this really part of the same series? It has a different tone and style than the clever short stories I've heard in other parts of the series.

Comment for "The Bottle King"

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Review of The Bottle King

The first thing that strikes me about this piece is the skill of the presenter/producer. She writes really well, and poetically - she reads it with attractive clarity and ease, and the production is impeccably professional. The sound is recorded perfectly, and the many gems of actuality and sound that she has chosen shine like the colored bottles described in the piece. However, despite all that, I don't seem to be able to convince myself that the subject at hand warrants over seven minutes. It doesn't seem to go below the surface. It's a piece of Americana - a really appealling guy collects bottles in New England. Why? A link with the past? For me, it's all light and surfaces - I long for a theme bubbling under the surface to render talented and skillful work really great.

Comment for "Barbara's Story"

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Review of Barbara's Story

In this piece, a young Polish immigrant tells her own story - and we meet a few of her friends as well. The work here is careful and meticulous - it's simple - which is a virtue - and well done. The best part is the way the subject completely drives the piece - she does it with such direct calm and assuredness that I simultaneously marvel at how good she is behind the microphone and meantally acknowlege the work that has gone into directing and editing her as well - I do find the story a bit meandering, and in the final analysis a little cool - but it has a lovely ending that goes by a bit fast if you're not focused on it. The piece is really a minute shorter than advertised - over 1:00 of music plays out.

Comment for "Joan Allen"

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Review of Joan Allen

I agree, Joan Allen is a terrific actress - but the piece does nothing to show/explain/enlighten anything particular about her except that she's in alot of films - the clip from the director cuts off just as it's getting interesting - I don't understand the name of this series - "Movies for Grown-up's" - I like the title - it suggeets that it's either literally about movies or in fact MIGHT BE little movies for radio for people with maturity - meaning, vivid, creative, daring, etc. which is a nice idea. This one is rather a competently produced and pretty traditional "trac and ac" piece - alittle rushed-sounding - thus the very short clips - perhaps trying to fit into its length.

Comment for "Media Savvy Pope? Erg"

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Review of Media Savvy Pope? Erg

Considering how things are today (which they are more today then ever, right?) there must be those days when Ian Shoals does not know where to point his mouth first. Here he's on decidedly provocative ground. Before the cards and letters come in, I'd like to say that there are some ideas in this one that are so interesting that I get the impression that he's having a little trouble pulling off his usual verbal waterfall style - some of these lines don't quite throw themelves away so easily. "The pope media savvy? At one time the Church WAS the media." And you, Ian, were arguably our first blogger. Yes, one day the commentators may finally run out of things to say - hope you won't Ian - Ian? Don't go yet...

Comment for "Wim Wenders; Land of Plenty"

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Review of Wim Wenders; Land of Plenty

Piece is very nicely done - the dreamy, soundrich clips for the film provide an effective background.

I've seen Land of Plenty. It's an interesting film, even beautiful, touching - from the director of Wings of Desire, Paris, Texas, to name two that so many people in the US have loved - it is dead accessible - but unlike Farenheit 911, fascinatingly ambiguous and generous to more than one point of view - the news that Wenders can't get a distributor to take it on is a bit of a shock to me. It's because they can't pigeonhole it - or because of fear? That's not the America I lived in until I was 40. I'm wondering whether stations will treat this piece the way the distributors are treating the film (and their audiences). Wake up, people!

Comment for "Here There is No Moon (U.S. version 26:37)"

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Review of Here There is No Moon

A beautiful, compelling and constructive half-hour about suicide - it's art - and it could even save a life. Hard to get both for the price of one - but here it is.

Comment for "Family Separation"

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Review of Translating

This is an example of a piece where it was the subject that got my attention - the statistic is amazing - there is one snippet with a young girl talking about her mother having to know what everything means, even about car insurance when she doesn't have a car - plus the story of a young boy who just stopped talking in school and here's why - those two moments stick out. The piece overall is professional, if a bit too classically "trac and ac" - (which tends to make my ears turn off) - so maybe next time make more of the narrator's own impressions. Why not? I love the music of his voice/accent - nice to hear this voice, one that's not exactly like every other voice - this could go into the news time to break things up.

Comment for "Rhubarb: The Daffodil of the Vegetable Garden" (deleted)

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Review of Rhubarb: The Daffodil of the Vegetable Garden (deleted)

The subject is a magnet for all of us gardeners (aw, c'mon, the public radio listenership has to contain an alarming percentage of those). But what I like about this piece is its varied textures: while a bit random and leisurely in structure and pace, it hits my ear like a colorful, tossed salad of vivid sounds dressed up with the presenter's sweet narration - I like the friendly, folksy music and interview snippets up against her gentle British accent. If this is a series, it would be an attractive one during the planting, growing and eating months! I'm going out now to get a plant. I'm into it - again.

Comment for "Local News Sucks"

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Young Ben's on the case

Veritable tip of the iceberg, Ben! It's great to see that a person that is of an age that probably means he grew up with this kind of "news" all around him can still react so strongly to it. His ending comment about "listen to KBOO for nothing but the truth" is - I hope - meant to be a little ironic - AND it's a shame that those clips are so badly recorded - but that does not take away from the fact that - they suck, they really, really, totally - suck. Every single night.

Comment for "Travels with Mom"

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Review of Travels with Mom [L.Massett]

I don't think there is anyone making pieces for radio that is more stripped away and unpretentious than Larry Massett. What a nice find for Mother's Day - very subtle, very gentle - it starts out a little slow but the ending is some kind of magic - so true, so true.

Comment for "The Best Confession (2005) (Audio Drama)"

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Review of The Best Confession

This one held up better for me than the other one in the same series - in general, the idea of short, emotional dialogs around technology is a good one - the idea of short self-contained radio drama (3 min. approx.) is a good one - to my ears, so much radio drama - especially short ones - CONTINUE sound to me like "the only joke is - it's radio drama!" The tongue being firmly lodged in around 1945. THIS one is shooting for better than that. Give it a chance.

Comment for "Flashforward (2005) (Audio Drama)"

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Review of Flashforward

Well, listeners could be intrigued by this little story - and they well might want to know more - but I think it would be more because they didn't quite get it the first time.

How did these people get there? Memory travel, time travel, what? Where is that music is coming from? The actor as the doctor is a bit voiceover-ish which is reinforced by his being the one that gives the title.

A bit more internal, and subtle in the acting, less stage-y - and short pieces like this are well worth working on, though. I agree with Hans, in terms of length, less can be more. The writing has plenty of potential.

Comment for "Time in Film"

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Review of Time in Film

First of all, in all of Jonathan Mitchell's pieces, the music is expertly done and chosen so they're going to sound excellent on the air of any station that uses music to strive for professional elegance. Plus the sound matches it.

Plus I particularly like this piece because it really makes the listener think about how media (here, film) affects everybody's perception of time - it's an astonishing, present day truth that's has been so gradual that perhaps we don't think about it enough - or at all.

This piece is from Studio 360 - I think about how - because of prx - it could be a nifty little piece of luck for stations be able to cherrypick these top-notch, cultural pieces (that are so respectful of the listener's intelligence) after the fact of the program - and even when the station does not subscribe to Studio 360.

Is it?

Comment for "Clockwise: Mayhem Ensues"

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Review of Clockwise: Mayhem Ensues

A cool, modern cruise over ground covered by writers from J.G. Ballard to P.K. Dick about time falling backwards -- but this time faster and funnier - a vacuum-packed can of writhing quotables - and not a bubble of dead air in sight. Good, clean, NPR-friendly, sci-fi entertainment.

Comment for "Pop Vultures #19: Usher & Breakup Songs" (deleted)

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Review of Pop Vultures #19: Usher & Breakup Songs (deleted)

Oh, this is such a pleasure - maybe it's because I work with young people, I don't know - I stumbled over this program because I needed to know who Usher is (don't ask) - and this came up in the search - I love the way they talk, so unselfconscious - and the production's professional - depends on the audience you may have, programmer, but if you'd like some 18-30's to stick around...they MIGHT...(I did...I'm 53 by the way.... I read that the series was cancelled. Shame. Put on what's there.

Comment for "An Encounter With Hunter S. Thompson"

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Review of An Encounter With Hunter S. Thompson

I like the straightforward quality of the anecdote, the way the words paint the picture - you can see it happening - and the earnest way Paul McDonald says "he loved his life." Short, simple, well-written - a nice, personal obit.