Comments by Marjorie Van Halteren

Comment for "Christmas in New York, 2001, Ground Zero"

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Review of Christmas in New York

A quiet mood piece...the author's thoughts as he visits Ground Zero several months later to see it for himself. The major thing is: he just writes so damn well.

Comment for "A Character Vault in Bangkok"

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Review of A Character Vault in Bangkok

I don’t know this author or his work – if I did, I might be more interested in his telling of his life in Asia and how he researches. But because I can’t imagine the work, I found the piece to be missing the anchor to draw me in – the true flavor of the writing. He talks about finding characters, first abstractly, then obliquely referring to several tantalizing situations - but I just couldn’t pull it all together to be drawn in – although I did go to the website to try and get some context. Perhaps the piece should start with a well-produced reading from one of his books. Also – I listened to the piece three times – once in download and once as streaming – and besides a lot of P-popping and one very unfortunate edit – there was also a technical problem of another voice coming in behind Moore’s own reading.

Comment for "RN Documentary: Verbal Fireworks"

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Review of RN Documentary: Verbal Fireworks

She might be considered by some The Most Dangerous Woman in America, but to me, Alix Olson sounds like the all-American girl, with her honest idealism and stand-up comedy chops. Nicely produced around a thoughtful, interesting interview in which this slam poet and performance artist performs much of her material from memory. The one four letter word is subtly masked.

Comment for "The Courtyard:Gang Violence"

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Review of The Courtyard:Gang Violence

The idea of extremely diverse people in a community meeting and colliding in a courtyard in a radio serial (or “soap”) is to me a very attractive one. The US doesn’t have a successful, listener-magnet of a radio soap opera like The Archers in Britain – and it could. And it could be peopled with the beautiful mosiac of our country. But I had a real problem with the didacticism of this one – and its sound. Almost all the actors sound as if they’re reading – and not well. Example: one line declaimed, then another line. You can hear the places in the script where an actor is supposed to be cut off like in normal conversation, and they just stopped speaking. There were a couple of performers with a spark of life - which only made them sound like souls wandering in a forest of dead trees. I know that bringing together a variety of intonations that sound different to different speakers is challenging – the only answer is to solicit the collaboration of the various speakers to help each person find a believable performance – try improvisation, try consulting various pairs of ears, try workshopping, anything. Because it could work - but for now, this interesting project is all happening in the mission statement and not in the ear of the listener.

Comment for "In Honor of Veterans"

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Review of In Honor of Veterans

The people being profiled here truly deserve their moment on the air on this or any Veteran’s Day. As one who came of age in the 1960’s and continues to hold a bias against war, I am aware of how easy it is to not truly feel the sacrifice of the individuals who go to war for their country, whatever that country’s reason. It is surely the fact of having spent the last decade of my life on soil where this is regarded very differently that has matured my perspective. In this program, we hear lesser-known voices from the West. The sound collected at the Normandy landing by a brave army journalist is pretty dramatic – and the story of Nebraskan Dorcus Cavett (Dick’s stepmother!) - the first woman marine - would simply make a wonderful film! I do wish the narrator had cut back more and let the sound speak for itself. The drawling pace of the narration is probably a hallmark of this series from the Western Folklife Center – and I did find this narration well written. A quiet program – for a contemplative subject.

Comment for "RN Documentary: Imagination is the Instrument of Compassion"

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Review of RN Documentary: Imagination is the Instrument of Compassion

This is part literary program (focusing on Jonathan Safran Foer, who appears in the program) and part cultural sound essay - but it is all parts elegance, eloquence and soul. For stations that still use reference tones - or trust a fine CD to capture the most delicate beginnings as an audience holds its breath and the orchestra begins. I only wish I'd written about it well before September 11 - but never mind - no hook required.

Comment for "Alaskan Fish Guts"

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Review of Alaskan Fish Guts

AT LAST A RADIO PIECE I CAN SMELL - and one my students in Media Studies and The Nature of Sound will relate to - not just because it's downright musical - they are REGUIRED to work on assembly lines in the summer -and they react much the same. And like my French engineers, this guy studies philosophy -Excellent training to counteract the effects of chewing and swallowing media air for 25 years. Yes, he talks alittle fast - that kind of American speech that slips in and outta there like a' ultra-sound frisbie - but, hey, I think he sounds a bit like the young Ira Glass - and look what happened to HIM!

Comment for "Early Signals"

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Review of Early Signals

TRES FORT! Very noisy in the best of all possible ways. Who still alive remembers the swamp of noise from which it all came? And what will those not yet here be born into? Run this for fine arts listening -- with Jonathan Mitchell's brilliant "Vinyl" - but don't forget to place a little something quiet in between to cleanse the ear-palate. Love, Pretentious and Proud of It

Comment for "Schadenfreude: The Phudie Mart" (deleted)

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Review of Schadenfreude: The Phudie Mart (deleted)

Let’s say upfront that I go for comedy – and that in trawling around prx for some yucks I’ve listened to other Schadenfreude pieces and (along with a couple of other groups) I enjoy them quite a lot. What I like most about their work is the gentle, but intricate attention to character, which also comes out in the writing. This piece, a mockumentary about a food market, is no exception, with individuals that I can palpably SEE: the employee in a stiff brown tie who refuses to take a vacation, the affable nut in her cowboy boots, the “loose cannon” in open shirt. However, in my mind better not to announce it as a documentary – because to parody a doc successfully it should really fool you, especially in a sea of radio where almost everything is documentary around it. This however sounds like comedy from the get-go (with the reporter as straight man – why not - everyone needs one!) – might as well go with it. Also – I was less happy when piece strayed from the subtlety – the screaming fascist from corporate headquarters – too much. Don’t need to do that to keep surprising me – the little stuff gets me first.

Comment for "My Muslim Hairdresser"

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Review of My Muslim Hairdresser

The piece is really simple – a good interview, well-recorded, introduced and obviously extremely well-edited. This young woman is really eloquent on the matter of wearing the headscarf – which is under hot debate in Europe – as well as hr view of her hairdresser profession. She couldn’t state her case with more directness, dignity and conviction. I was interested in knowing a little more context – how long has she been a Muslim – was it just reading about it that attracted her? But perhaps that doesn’t matter. We need to keep a voice like this one out there.

Comment for "Environment: Recycled Art" (deleted)

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Review of Environment: Recycled Art (deleted)

"Only in San Francisco," I thought - busy institutions that make sure that at least some of the "Niagra Falls" of waste at the dump is transformed into art. Or is that true? I have no idea. The interviews are good, the recordings are excellent, eventually there are some details that help paint a picture so that I can visualize what's being talked about - I waited a bit to know -art? Where? Why? What does it look like? I had to listen more than once to completely grasp the context. Do other cities do this? Does anyone go see it? Some of the young reporter's pronunciations whizzed by me too fast. Have I been away too long?

Comment for "Vampire Dreams"

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Review of Vampire Dreams

He insists he's a vampire and she insists she's a therapist – there are also a couple of other characters and some atmospheric sound as punctuation. I think the story is quite fun to listen to. Radio plays consisting of close dialog in a room can hold the attention pretty well if the writing is intriguing – and this writing is good and often rather literary – adapted by the author from her own book. Eavesdropping on these sessions as well as the therapist’s problems outside them is entertaining late night fare – especially on Halloween, which is coming right up! (Attention: language advisory called for, I think) However, I feel duty bound to reflect on the performances (apparently it’s my thing): the two leads have VERY attractive voices. The woman is particularly sexy. They needed to work against the cosmetic qualities of their voices and “lift it off the page” with more energy and intensity. I find myself wondering why she’s so flirty in the first session. He’s controlled and – well – alittle announcer-ish. This is a play of 80 minutes – at the end it gets pretty hot – they needed to find more range at the beginning to be able to make it for the long haul. I believed the ending – which may make up for a lot – but there were too other parts I didn’t.

Comment for "Living Room"

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Review of Living Room

A short story woven with a song sung on acoustic guitar – I liked the idea. The voice of the singer and reader is deep and sonorous, and I liked the song, “Living Room.” The story starts out at the top sounding very promising, Cheever-esque. Then the song comes in – lyrics are intriguing…then the first cliché pops in…”livin’ on dreams…(well OK that speaks to me fine)” then living room living room…and the end of the story was a paragraph of – (really sorry) – clichés. What happened to the couple in the car? I know there’s supposed to be a poetic, thematic link between the song and the story – I listened to the piece four times and I didn’t find it. Take this neat idea and work it some more – ‘cause I think this is a rough draft.

Comment for "Remembering August Wilson Drop-In"

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Review of Remembering August Wilson Drop-In

In this short excerpt he explains exactly and clearly - how he did what he did – following the voices of his characters – and saying, since most people are anxious to talk and talk out loud about how they see the world – aren’t we all though? and Wilson just listened – and not granting dignity to those lives over ten centuries but revealing their dignity for the world to see. And what an ear he had! I recorded Wilson for one of my very first “professional” interviews for a radio piece that never aired (pretty much because I didn’t know what I was doing and couldn’t “track and ac”). Wilson was just starting out too and was taken by surprise that anyone wanted to talk to him. “Me? I’m just a cook.” It was at the O’Neill Playwriting Conference in the cafeteria and he was workshopping Ma Rainey’s Black Bottom. I remember he seemed a bit distracted – and he said, “Well, you see, I just realized that I’ve written a play where a guy gets killed and so it’s my fault.” This excerpt from New Letters slips that curious comment from 20 years ago into perspective. I can’t find my own tape but this one is so much better. It’s so wonderful to hear his voice. Drop, drop, drop-in and away!

Comment for "Orson's Shadow" (deleted)

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Review of Orson's Shadow (deleted)

The LA Theatre Works intro usually says “you have the best seat in the house for…” and I admit I agree – and in particular Orson’s Shadow is a treat. Austin Pendleton’s backstage drama about Kenneth Tynan, Orson Wells, Joan Plowright and Lawrence Olivier is a well-written, enthusiastic labor of love and extremely entertaining. The cast includes Martin Jarvis, who is so well known in Britain as an actor for radio drama and spoken word on the BBC that there is actually a send-up version of him on Radio 4’s Dead Ringers right next to Tony Blair and Dr. Who. All this to say that perhaps it’s Jarvis’ influence as a performer at home with a microphone that has this cast doing a bit less projecting out to that live audience and more playing into the ear at home than other productions I’ve heard. (The others probably have the same background as well.) I’ll keep listening to this company’s plays for my own pleasure – hoping to hear more as enjoyable as this one – but still mourning the fact that the US seems to have very nearly given up on producing radio drama that innovates with the special characteristics of the medium we love in any way at all.

Comment for "This American Life: After the Flood" (deleted)

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Review of This American Life: After the Flood (deleted)

When something like Katrina happens – we hear about it night and day – yes, even in Europe, so far away, it remains the lead story for days and days. But at the end of each day you’ve learned less than nothing from the bite-sized media chunks orchestrated by editors that we don’t see or even trust any more. From the diary of Anne Frank to the slave narratives to the poems of WWI soldiers to: THIS PROGRAM! There has never been any substitute for witness. Giving a soul at least twenty minutes each - it makes a difference. I realize I haven’t heard as many TAL programs as other public radio listeners have. I’m going to listen more often – I hope I can count on this show to stay out there at those inevitable crucial moments in the future.

Comment for "Art of the Song #36 with Tim O'Brien" (deleted)

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Review of Art of the Song #36 with Tim O'Brien (deleted)

Another installment of this hour-long series weaving music with interviews and other contributors. I want only to paint the picture of this listener, stealing the time for a walk in the sun, and a dance straight down the center of a dirt lane cutting through the beet and bean fields of Northern France along with bluegrass singer/songwriter Tim O’Brien – when what did she turn around and see but a young Flemish man behind a bemused grin and the wheel of small Renault truck – patiently waiting for her to just bop on out of the way. I was much too happy to feel embarrassed. It doesn’t matter when you come from or where you’re going – the show is about the singer, the song, and the important idea that creation is a magical mystery that is nonetheless accessible to all.

Comment for "Leisure Time" (deleted)

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Review of Leisure Time (deleted)

Several young people interview each other about what they do in their leisure time. It’s nicely produced with many charming moments – young girls shopping, a boy looking for girls, a dedicated violinist. However, I felt strongly that too much material had been included – a boy looking for girls is funny, but when he meets one, he takes the mike and does a less-than-interesting interview. The recording with the violinist meanders along, with her talking about everything including riding the bus and then she suddenly mentions she once sat next to a homeless person – a striking moment - I then start getting an overall picture of how young people can spend their youth disconnected from the realities of the world at large – a possible theme! The piece ends with a cogent interview with an expert about the role of leisure in our lives today and I wondered why this interview did not inform the rest of the program. It was not until I went on the website to read about this project that I understood that it was a workshop for high school students learning to do radio. While reading I became very impressed by the students – they did a good job considering it was the first time – but standing alone as a broadcast offering, this piece needs an overall editor to cut down some of that material and to shape it. Plus after deducting the time of the prx announcement, the show comes in at about 30:50, which, from what I know, is an almost impossible broadcast length for programmers.

Comment for "America- The Beautiful?"

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Review of America- The Beautiful?

...and blunt while musical, to the point. A punch unpulled. A stand taken. Un petit trompe d'oreille in a broadcasting motif. Give a listen.

Comment for "Blind Workforce"

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Review of Blind Workforce

It’s an important subject – and I hope stations take advantage of October as World Blindness Awareness month. (aside: I listen to a show for visually-impaired people on BBC Radio 4 over here – and they did a survey and found out they had a large number of sighted listeners – like me – because the experiences of blind people are interesting!) Now here’s my problem as a listener - it did not get or hold my attention. The carefully read and written copy, the professionally collected and edited interviews are moving past me like the usual wallpaper. Sorry the listener has been harsh. Now the producer (not a journalist exactly, but a producer) will push that listener aside and attempt to offer some constructive (I hope) reasoning. What’s the essential point? People’s attitudes towards blindness? They’re not getting jobs – even though they’re qualified? You decide. But rather than sprinkle the points all over the place, its better to begin the piece with piece of actuality (or copy, but it has to get my attention) that communicates what it must on every level (the way it sounds as well as what it says). Draw us in. You need to organize all those speakers so I can hold in my ear who they are. Then take us on an arc we can follow. It’s not about turning the news into show business. (We don’t need more of that, do we?) It’s about understanding how people listen, and forming, shaping, and sharpening the arrow of your own truth so that it hits it’s mark.

Comment for "Dog Talk. . . Offramp"

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Review of Dog Talk. . . Offramp

Dying is easy! COMEDY is difficult! (forgot who said that – maybe someone could write in and tell me). These people – from the Offramp series – pull it off – they’re genuinely funny -- in that sort of National Lampoon Radio Dinner throw-away low key manner. To better assess this piece, I listened to some others in the series – which comes in half-hours or drop-in’s. I’m glad to attest that the group is consistently good – with a folksy character that manages to be downright sophisticated – quintessentially American. Their kind of gentle, throwaway touch is so delicate –(plus it’s improvised - they’re very talented and/or nicely, invisibly edited because they rarely misstep) – that I think they need to get in and out after 3, 4 or 5 minutes. Many of their routines – like this one about a call-in veterinary program – are radio “trompe d’ear” (like Bob and Ray and Firesign and others who have used the radio context as their palette) – so I think it’s best just inserted into the real context. If you have a half-hour of these guys all strung together (and I listened to one of the half-hour offerings as well) you have a very decent show, but you lose that, “wait, what’s this, oh, it’s those guys again!” And it SHOULD be them again. I heartily recommend the drop-in’s to stations that can. Then – once they have their following built on air (which they seem to have on their own station in Florida), then half-hours or even hours of “Best of” would go over nicely. Perhaps Offramp should provide a fund-raising special.

Comment for "HV029- Old School"

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Review of OLD SCHOOL Special

A pure delight. Katie Davis hosts an hour of material revolving around the teacher/student experience while contributing some lovely work of her own – as well as providing a slice of her own life. The program actually misted me up with a kind of double pride. One, because I’ll be going back to class at the university in a couple of weeks, and hope I don’t forget to keep trying to be the kind of teacher portrayed in two of the pieces; and secondly, I’m proud of my fellow producers being showcased here. These days, what with podcasting and audio blogging out there, audio production can be just about anything – which carries its own kind of immediacy and excitement, I don’t knock it. But this is so solid – I hope THIS brand of care and professionalism will never be thought of as Old School.

Comment for "Novelist and Essayist Meghan Daum"

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Review of Novelist and Essayist Meghan Daum

I like writing, and writers, and listening to writers talk about writing - so a series like this will keep my interest. The host's approach is very soft - the beginning of the program almost lulled me into a state - but in fact, the host is also someone that really knows her writers and writing, so there's not a dumb-down second in sight. I found the subject of this edition, Meghan Daum, sharp and interesting - there is one moment where she discusses at length a controversial essay in her collection - and I was frustrated in mid-listen about not getting to at least hear it among the samples read - but there were reasons for her not to read it- so talk about getting you to go out and buy the book!

Comment for "Bible Salesman"

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Review of Bible Salesman

I listened to this piece several times, deciding, if I just heard on the radio, in passing, in the car, say, I would have been very intrigued - would have marvelled at the iconic personality of the man interviewed, the astonishing moments in word and voice – my interest piqued by the appearance of the son. What a great idea, a Bible salesman. But - I’m told from the intro posted for stations (and me because I read the blurb on prx) – it’s already someone else’s idea – there was a film in the late 60’s by the Maysles – I go on the web and read about the film – I see a clip. It seems amazing. So now – the listener is hungry to know more. The piece isn’t about the film. But it isn’t really profoundly about the guy either. And now the “radio critic on assignment” (for lack of another expression) asks, why interview a subject already documented in a film – even use clips from that film – without doing more with it? The guy is decades older – that could be interesting – has his attitude about what he did change? If it hasn’t, how is that interesting? I see it’s part of a longer series about people working – that gives is a kind of context – but this is a long way of saying: needs composition on some level – disappointing due to opportunity missed.

Comment for "Elephants and Sex"

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Review of Elephants and Sex

Very good piece, collected and conceived and fashioned together by a real pro with a long track record of work that is anything but ordinary. It’s a bit from the Michael Moore school in the sense of – you have something you want to say, and you work around that piece of dirt until you have your pearl. This piece is essentially comedy – but like all great comedy it’s dead on true and therefore deadly serious. (PS Karen Michel was doing her thing long before any of us had heard of MM. And then there’s the totally unbalanced Harry Shearer, whose podcast I never miss.) Was this piece censored? Surely. If I concentrate I can just channel the discussion that went on about pride in “balanced reporting.” The USA is, I think, the only country that holds to the dream that its media is balanced. I don’t think it’s working anymore. It’s broke. Someone fix it! In the meantime, I’m sure this piece can find a home in many places. Put some more out there, KM.

Comment for "Love and War"

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Review of Love and War

There are a number of pieces out there now about what it is for ordinary men and women with lives and families to go to war - because we never stop trying to wrap our minds around that rite of passage and what it means to all of us . This half-hour look inside families as they approach and walk through that door is particularly good. Excellent interviews - and Helen Borten writes very well too. The piece is from 2002 - and is poised at the moment on the eve of the current "situation" - historical - but far from dated. Opportunities for relevance abound - sadly.

Note: (Description states program was produced in 1994 but that's not accurate).

Comment for "Starbucks Bob"

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Review of Starbucks Bob

I admit it. Now that I have an ipod I can download these Ian Shoals pieces and listen to all of them end-to-end like one of those little animations you can make with a pen and block pad so when he says I gotta go he doesn't. I'm reviewing this one though - because it's very funny. I like the line just before "I gotta go." I don't know, Ian, I really don't. Keep it up though.

Comment for "Frozen" (deleted)

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Review of Frozen (deleted)

Again, this is impeccably produced. I love the acting, just love it. And behind acting like this there’s a really good director, so bravo. However, the name of this series of plays (most likely stage plays, they’re not radio plays and don’t really use the medium of radio as a primary element) recorded before an audience is “The Play’s the Thing,” and I liked this play about a serial killer and the people into whose lives he has brutally intruded less than I did the performances. Overall, I did not feel it added up to what I had hoped it would. Much is known about the events at the beginning, even from the description, and also from the producer/host’s introduction. Little that was revealed to me later on surprised or enlightened me about much of anything. Although the moment-to-moment texture of the writing is lovely, if you’re going to take me into this kind of territory for two hours, you’d better not just leave me there to fend for myself with nothing to chew on. I found this play presented a fundamental, obvious question (“is it evil or environment?”) and - in a very interesting scene between the prisoner and a victim, seems to begin to go somewhere (her extreme behavior seems strangely right) – but then the revelation of a wrongdoing near the end seemed beside the point – and at the end of two hours I felt not much further along than where I started with it.

Comment for "Proof" (deleted)

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Review of Proof (deleted)

If you aren’t likely to be in New York or Los Angeles any time soon – or if you don’t have the money for a ticket to a Pulitzer-prize-winning play performed by stars – and those prices ARE a scandal - here is an opportunity to experience it – and hardly an opportunity to be sneezed at. The original play Proof is only four characters and revolves around dialog, so little is lost here. The star, Anne Heche, had just performed the play on Broadway for six months, and obviously enjoyed her chance to put the play into her voice, as she explains in an interview following the performance. We get the full benefit of her work: she’s indeed marvellous, but all the performances are top notch. I’d like to think that there are radio stations out there that would be able to offer their listeners this opportunity and trust them to enjoy what is nearly two hours – time well spent in my opinion. But also in my humble opinion, although the piece has been thoughtfully chosen and performed as well as possible for radio (occasionally the audience seems to respond to something we can’t see, and that is mildly irritating) this is still theatre competently presented for audio. By no stretch of the imagination is this radio drama. Does anyone besides me care?

Comment for "#2 Show" (deleted)

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Review of #2 Show (deleted)

This episode set in a summer camp was very upbeat – bright and a little loud in fact – I did wonder if the host always shouts into the microphone like that – perhaps it depends on where he is in any given program. However, I think that wherever it is, he really takes you there – the camp nostalgia was delightful and the musical talent of the staff and campers was impressive. On one hand the host is uncannily Keillor-like – but on the other I’m sure it’s not studied, it’s just an accident of geography. And this one aims even farther North. All in all, I find this show a breath of very fresh air from Canada –the Canada of right now, today, tonight – we’re served up a live, truly authentic setting – you are there! Isn’t that something radio does best?