Comments by Transom Editors

Comment for "Cecilia Bartoli: In her own words"

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Review of Cecilia Bartoli: in her own words

Lovely to break up the radio day with this extraordinary voice singing and sharing thoughts on her instrument. Could be aired any time, but happily Bartoli is touring the U. S. this February and the producers helpfully provide her tour schedule, so this piece is timely to air soon, up and down either coast and in the Midwest. sl

Comment for "Carvings"

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Review of Carvings

What a treat. Some guy in a hotel talking about his heart, lonely longing, carving soap. It’s like a scene from a film, intriguing, surprising, sending you off on your own thoughts. It would be a good drop-in on NPR, news from the middle letter, the one we don’t always hear from….the public. sl

Comment for "Arguing to Legalize an Immigrant Workforce"

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Review of Arguing to Legalize an Immigrant Workforce

A decent look at a range of Republican attitudes toward immigration policy, this piece provides good context for Mr. Bush's recent endorsement of an immigrant guest worker program. More depth would have been welcome, but for a brief report, it does a decent job of introducing many of the concerns around this issue. sl

Comment for "X-Town"

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Review of X-Town

I heard this piece at the 3rd coast festival - I remember it moved me. I'm surprised to say this "private" listening moved me further.

It is a "report", but Cole flashes his personal passport to tell the story right from the top: the water HE uses, in HIS town, the water HE wastes comes from the sacrifice of those he asks to tell the story. It makes your ears open wide, right up front. It makes you trust the narrator.
The speakers are forthright - painfully evocative painting pictures, and feelings, and conflict. THere's something biblical about it. The editorial choices are exquisite with an occasional production flash (quasi-flambuoyant) of the narrator's personality. It's interesting how he's chosen NOT to be just reporting - he seems to want to remind you, quietly, that he may be letting the faucet run, but not without thought and a little bit of shared angst. The opening and close sfx well placed and happily not overdone.

I would be glad of a longer version. I could have listened longer to these people wrassle with the conflict, the nostalgia and the sorrow.

This is an evergreen piece, but especially meaningful around any issue about the planet. Nice work.
vm

Comment for "Maine Traditions: Bertha Voisine, Rug Braider" (deleted)

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Review of Maine Traditions: Bertha Voisine, Rug Braider (deleted)

Bertha has a wonderful voice and presence. I only wish that this were more visual--that I had a better understanding of her rug braiding process and what her rugs look like. This piece would be appropriate for labor day or for any show that explores the artistic process. It could also work for any kind of interstitial programing.CM

Comment for "A Small Southern Town: The Nation's Capital In Slave Times"

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Review of A Small Southern Town: The Nation's Capital In Slave Times

I am a fan of learning history through real human stories. I was worried when I read " dramatization" - but it's not overly so at all. It's more an evocative reading of various accounts, first person and historical, woven with present day inference and confirmation. Intelligent work, nicely edited, abundant sfx. Perfect for black history month/issues. vm

Comment for "Political Awakening: Askia Muhammad's Reflections on the 60s"

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Review of Political Awakening: Askia Muhammad's Reflections on the 60s

Part one is engaging testimony and first person account of the education and political/racial/personal awakening of an afro-american in a formerly uninvolved mainstream environment (L.A.). Askia Muhammad has a disarming approach - mild-mannered and humble but evenly frank. Part one is especially engaging and surprisingly impartial as participant and observer of the civil rights surfacing in the young urban afro-americans. Part two focuses on Black Nationalism - and is much less an observation but more of an explanation of the tenets as well as vicissitudes of black nationalism. Certainly worthy of programming for black history month.
vm

Comment for "Jeff's Diary: Halfrican"

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Review of Jeff in Boston: Halfrican

Okay, this is fourth time I've tried to write a review for this piece. I liked it so much that I thought I'd wait to disengage from it a bit so that I could intellectualize my gut reaction to this piece---but that's not going to happen anytime soon.

Jeff is funny and thoughtful and he tells his story without a smidgen of self -consciousness. This piece is edited in such a way that there is this wonderful sense of immediacy. There's this sense that Jeff is exploring his thoughts on race, his identity, his family, for the very first time and you are lucky enough to listen in on his thought process.

This is the kind of story that you could hear on almost any show : This American Life, Weekend Edition, The Next Big Thing, Day to Day, etc...It's a perfect story for African American History Month but it would be appropriate wherever a PD has an 8 minute spot.-CM

Comment for "Frank Schubert, Lighthouse Keeper"

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Review of Frank Schubert, Lighthouse Keeper

What is not to like about this portrait ? A salty old character, who tells it how it is, mocks city-folks' ideas of romance, and reveals that it is possible to get bored of fishing. Short and airable by any coastal station anywhere, at anytime! For the land -bound stations out there, the ambiant sound of seagulls and the gentle rolling sea should be enticement enough!

Comment for "Sea Cube"

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Review of Sea Cube

a mindbending rendition of something familiar - at first you know something is wrong, you think it's the machine - you smack it - nothing. Once you figure it out, it's over. If its purpose is to embarrass you about your conditioning, forcing you to listen NOW, rather than from memory, it suceeds.
vm

Comment for "Peace Talks Radio: Seeking Peace on Earth- The Peace Talks Radio 2003 Special (59:00 / 54:00)"

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Review of Peace Talks: Making Peace Day To Day

I almost didn’t make it through the introduction of this compilation of excerpts from a local series because the opening tone felt, to me, so saccharine it made me cranky. But I’m glad I persisted because there’s a good amount of practical, useful information contained within a few of the segments, especially for folks who’ve never had any kind of psychotherapy.
For parents, good tips for dealing with conflict, some ranging from word choice to tone of voice, to simply being a kind presence near another’s conflicts. The segment on middle school includes a young woman recalling bullies and other conflicts in her middle school years, and two dispute resolution mediators. A meditation teacher offers some basic Buddhist concepts for creating inner peace and dealing with people who could care less about inner peace, yours or their own. He shares a terrific antidote to fear meditation he practiced heavily after 9/11. A trainer in non-violent communication explains what empathic connection involves. Two work place mediators give a brief and not very illuminating report on improvements in postal service culture. Who can imagine “going postal” becoming anachronistic? The final segment features three African Americans, a city administrator, university student, and diversity trainer, in a frank and instructive conversation about instances of white privilege and injustice. Race is still such a complex, difficult and under-discussed topic, I’m grateful for any public conversation on the seemingly endless need for improving race relations in this country.
The trouble with compiling excerpts is you sometimes have to stretch to fill an hour, and the hour may lack a true unifying integrity. It’s a well-intentioned piece, uneven in quality, that I wish had been split into two half hour segments – perhaps one addressing people, parents, kids, one addressing work place, school, race, the more outer world. As things stand, different people will respond to different segments, some to none, and all in all, it’s on the whole, less than fully satisfying. sl

Comment for "Global Culture"

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Review of Global Culture

Listening to Yo Yo Ma discuss music and culture with Chris Lydon just happens to be a great way to spend an hour. If you’re remotely curious about this exquisite musician and the range of his work outside of the classical genre, that in itself is reason enough to listen. In this journey about journeying, there’s fascinating talk of different cultures, musical styles, instruments, conflict, communication. Lydon gives Ma lots of room to expound, and their back and forth is so relaxed you feel like you’re eavesdropping on a leisurely after dinner, cognac-sipping kind of conversation. The production is beautifully mixed with lots of music. Lydon’s intelligence and writing skill are nicely displayed in the introduction and close to the piece. Plus, anyone who’s seen Fog of War will discover that Robert McNamara and Yo Yo Ma have something in common! Both elevate the notion of empathy for other cultures as essential to the struggle for world peace.
This piece can be aired whenever, just to air because it’s so darn good, or in connection to any Yo Yo Ma appearance or new recording, or violent world events (as I said, any time!), UN in the news, etc. Just air it. sl

Comment for "Healthy Babies"

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Review of Healthy Babies

This report does a great job of capturing a day on the job--of illustrating the hardships and rewards of working on the Healthy Babies Project. The sound is great too and there are some colorful, memorable actualities. This would be best to boradcast on a news magazine, All Things Considered or Morning Edition. It would be a good addition to any show on community, healthcare, inner city culture. cm

Comment for "Heartland Medicine"

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Review of Heartland Medicine

A real sense of these communities comes through clearly, as does a sense of the three docs profiled. Lovely tape of patient/doctor interactions, as well as others connected to the health concerns of the community. Lots of problematic issues discussed, no lecturing, just the realities. Good production in every way.
Could air any time or in connection to health, family, community, work programming, or if there’s any congressional action around medical/work/rural concerns. So good I want to hear the rest of the series right away. sl

Comment for ""ElectionWatch '04: Participation and the Common Good""

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Review of "ElectionWatch '04: Participation and the Common Good"

Good balance of narration and regular folks’ voices, including some young people. Narrative provides context and moves things briskly along, with occasional music underscoring or providing segue space. Production notes accurately describe content. Some segments are stronger than others, but basically all are good. Any programming offering thread with which to patch our weakening democracy is good programming, and this is well-produced, interesting, and uplifting to boot.
The program is definitely in the public interest and could be aired any time, or in conjunction with programming on housing, justice, education, community, activism. sl

Comment for "Massachusetts"

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Review of Massachusetts

Excellent primer on all things massachusetts-y! from the state muffin - corn, to the state bean - navy. And then there is the music. Assuming that the rest of the series follows a similar format, this would make an engaging and informative weekly series, one for each week of 2004. HW

Comment for "Disability and Dance"

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Review of Disability and Dance

Interesting premise making me want to know more, imagine more about creating dance for the disabled. I was listening for dancers but you hear from directors/organizers and choreographers so the dancer's chairs were noticeably empty. The conversation about whether to use disabled dancers or not was curious but could have been fleshed out some more. Engaging sound bed. vm
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Comment for "Computers, Videos and TV: Their Effect on Children"

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Review of Computers, Videos and TV: Their Effect on Children

Vogel does a good job as an interviewer, knowing when to interrupt when the speaker rolls off on a tangent or seems about to set off beyond general listener knowledge or understanding. The subject matter is not terribly new, but the interviewee is certainly an authority and new parents will certainly stay glued. This is a telephone interview which is not tape-synched which makes it difficult to sustain 30 minutes of holding forth. vm

Comment for "Regina Carter: In her own words"

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Review of Regina Carter: In her own words

Her voice is lovely, the violin is beautifully recorded, and it's just great to hear this brief communication about holding and playing Paganini's violin. Always make me happy to hear people talk about work, and when the work is creating great sound, ahhhh.... sl

Comment for "Family Vacation"

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Review of Family Vacation

Hilarious from the start - good writing and good narration. Always nice to be inside the thoughts of a teenager...The staged adult voices made me cringe a little but mostly they were added humor.
This is a good essay for any cold vacation time of the year (maybe lose the November reference) - and, it serves as a friendly warning to parents - to keep it light!
vm

Comment for "NCM news"

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Review of NCM news

Excellent approach to issues vital to immigrants anywhere in the US but often specific to California. (This would probably limit it being picked up by stations outside California).
The two subjects of this roundup were both engaging and a little different - (the threat of extinction of Mariachi bands !)
The objective of representing immigrants in the news packaged for the mainstream is a good one and NCM does of pro job of that.
America is made of immigrants and if this news roundup were perhaps less focused in California, I could imagine it being heard weekly anywhere. I would certainly listen.

vm

Comment for "Joey Interviews a Cutter"

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Review of Joey Interviews a Cutter

This intimate conversation between 2 young men provides some insight into the little discussed phenomenon of cutting. In an ideal world, you would hear that the cutter is receiving treatment that is helping him overcome it, but you don't, so it is uncomfortable listening; But nonetheless important listening.
Could be used with great effect, as an opener on a youth-focused call-in show, to introduce the subject matter, and prompt discussion.

Comment for "The Perfect Christmas" (deleted)

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Review of The Perfect Christmas (deleted)

If there's a PD out there doing last minute shopping consider this for Morning Edition or All Things Considered on Christmas day ...the 24th will do too.

In this commentary Duffy traces his family's Christmas traditions. Although personal, this essay will likely strike a chord with most listeners as they are prompted to reflect on their own holiday traditions.

Comment for "Iron Chef Geo Beach"

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Review of Iron Chef Geo Beach

This is a station break from WKSU. In addition to the weather, underwriters-- the standard station break fare--Geo Beach offers some interesting historical facts that tie in nicely with the station's classical music identity. I particularly like hearing the school cafeteria menu. It's details like these that do give station breaks some flavor and sense of place. It's also quite polished so you don't feel that you have downgraded from listening to NPR to the local station, which is hard to do. It's difficult for many lcal NPR stations to keep the quality consistent when switching from local to national public radio.

My understanding is that this is to serve as a model for other stations. If there are program directors o who want to reinvent their station breaks than consider turning to this for inspiration.

Comment for "Columbia Remembered...Atlantis, Go For Launch"

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Review of Columbia Remembered...Atlantis, Go For Launch

A well-woven, deep and prismatic look at this tragedy and the issues it raises about the space program’s value. So very poignant to hear the voices of the astronauts and spend time with them as they discuss the work they’ve set out to do. The tape of the astronauts and mission control as trouble becomes apparent is wrenching, suspenseful, despite the known outcome. We’re brought close to the aftermath through the voice of the forest ranger that found the flight recorder, and engineers discussing their efforts to figure out went wrong. A down-to-earth human angle is touched on in a visit to the hometown of the female astronaut who will command the next space shuttle. As she speaks of the practical pre-flight concerns and of their space station tasks, I find myself saying a quiet prayer for their well-being. Discussions about safety and cost concerns, and alternate ideas for space exploration, as well as the opinions of some plain old citizens about space carry us to the end of the program. This fascinating piece reminds us what a mistake it is to ever be blasé about space travel.
Air around the anniversary, or in future, around the time of any launch. sl

Comment for "Cujo Christmas" (deleted)

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Review of Cujo Christmas (deleted)

Funny saga with happily suitable sound accompaniment running underneath. Don’t want to give any of the story away. Not maudlin, not sappy, just a delightful one-of-a-kind holiday story about a very specific reason to rejoice. And you get to hear a doggy sung xmas carol. Can't beat that. sl

Comment for "Matthew and the Judge: Juvenile Court Diary"

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Review of Matthew and the Judge: Juvenile Court Diary

It's a privilege to be so deep inside someone's head and in this case,
inside the heads of two people on opposite sides of "the bar." I like the
way the material is organized. We meet Matthew first and get a sense of him
before we actually know everything he's done wrong, and we get to know the
judge a little before we hear them together. It's very moving to hear the judge's journey from compassionate hope to resigned disappointment, and to hear Matthew's parallel journey from hope to despair. I wanted to put my head down and cry as this piece drew to its close. Knowing Matthew is dead makes the close of this piece that much more heartbreaking. It's beautiful, respectful and could air any time, but certainly when there is big news on youth crime. sl

Comment for "The Last Place: Diary of a Retirement Home"

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Review of The Last Place: Diary of a Retirement Home

What to say? This is a poignant piece. A lovely piece. It is so good, so essential to hear from older people. With everything becoming so youthcentric--even Public Radio--it is important to listen to where where we may eventually end up.

The view from the retirement home is at times bleak, sweet, and touching. It is rare that we get to witness mortality in this way.

With a transcendent piece like this you really don't need a particular context in which to broadcast it.

If you want your listeners to stop everything they are doing, if you want your email and voicemail overflowing with gratitude--then air this piece. If you don't have a 27 minute gap then consider making room for this.

This piece originally aired on All Things Considered. I could also hear it on This American Life or Weekend Edition. -CM

Comment for "Stress Test"

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Review of Stress Test

This one has a wonderfully lively style. The editing is pure pleasure and the narrative voice is smooth and real. I had a moment of wondering if it was going on too long, and the ending isn't quite the payoff I might have hoped for, but I was engaged all the way through and would air it on our station without hesitation as an ear refresher. -JA

Comment for "Grass Fed Beef"

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Review of Grass Fed Beef

'I can't talk right now, I'm listening to a radio show about grass fed beef.'

It's true, you might say this if you were listening to this piece on the radio, which is an indepth and balanced exploration of the cattle industry.

Corn-fed cattle vs. those raised on grass is at the center of this piece and inevitably larger issues are addressed: our economy , environment, and culture .

This show would be comaptible with a larger show on the economy or environment. It's something that would work on "Living on Earth," or All Things Considered, if it were shorter.

It's informative and versatile and the interviews give this piece some personality.

CM