Comments by Jackson Braider

Comment for "The Book"

User image

Review of The Book

My first thought of this is a kind of shaggy-dog story, but this is straight from Mr. Poe. Well-written and compelling. Anderson has a good crisp voice for this kind of thing. And for 11:38, there is nothing but that voice: no efx, no music.

The issue in our timeblock world is the length. Anderson, in some dark-humor corner of his mind, suggests this as a possible fundraiser. He might be right. Knowing the waywardness of the pledge clock, the piece could, without too much damage, be broken into three or four segments.

But do pledge arteests have the courage to say "help me" in a hingey sort of way? It would be great if they tried.

Comment for "Reserved for Father"

User image

Review of Reserved for Father

I love Elizabeth Dribben's delivery. This is radio at its most finely tuned dramatic -- never too much, just a breath above too little. Some listeners might feel cheated in the end, but that is part of the story too. A no-brainer for PDs. Any innocuous short spot on WESUN is worth sacrficing for this.

Comment for "Behind Barbed Wire"

User image

Review of Behind Barbed Wire

A wonderful occasion for a story -- German POWs return to visit the Maine town where they were imprisoned. Okay as is, but a little scattershot, trying to cover too much ground in one story. There are probably three or four stories actually lurking in this piece.

Comment for "The Fair"

User image

Review of The Fair

A lovely piece, available in numerous formats. Each one can be considered in its own right, but each has its own particular strengths. Regardless of the medium (audio or A/V) the producer's narration is a wonder.

Maybe stations can make a deal: use the audio version to knock out tiresome stretches in WESAT or WESUN and mention that listeners can catch the A/V at http:www.wxyz.org

Comment for "The Last Christian Standing"

User image

Review of The Last Christian Standing

It's hard to stop someone when he/she has hit the mother lode. There isn't a moment in this story I would go, "Hey, what's happening? -- and yet there are dozens of moments in this recording when I, as listener, could (should?) have said, no.

An incredible rant, dead on. Thank god there are other avenues in really odd places!

Comment for "Mother's Day Diary"

User image

Review of Mother's Day Diary

Brilliant. Thank God some stations haven't filled absolutely each and every minute this Sunday. If they are wise, they will find three minutes EVERY HOUR to play this. This should be a perrenial (a word I still can't spell after a month of gardening) from year to year. PRX needs to develop a calendar that will recognize the shift of holidays from year to year. Wait a minute! I just wiped away the last tear.

Comment for "Jimmy & Jewel: A Love (?) Story [short version]"

User image

Review of Jimmy & Jewel: A Love (?) Story

I love much of this story. Jewel's voice is great. I think there are other voices to discover in English (sp?) -- I wonder what your mother would say? Where are all the wagging tongues? There is more to this story. Did the Viagra have a doctor's prescription? What does he have to say for himself?

There is much love in this story and for that alone it deserves our attention. A few tucks and trims, and there is not a program I would not recommend this story to.

Comment for "Ethics and Opinion (es59)" (deleted)

User image

Review of Ethics and Opinion (es59) (deleted)

Business school and medical school curricula tell us, ethics have arrived. The real ethical question is this: do all dilemma fit in the same 120 second box? The Pro/Con structure is an exhausting one for the listener, particularly when the clock is so fixed (he said this, then she said that -- even the he/she dichotomy is grindingly wearing).
My point here is this: people really do need ethical education. But the rigorous adherence to the 2 min code fails to capture the contribution of choice to the ethical problem. Why the pro/con structure? Ethics often involve gray. Lose all the assertions; give some play to doubt.

Comment for "RN Documentary: Six Ways to Vermeer"

User image

Review of RN Documentary: Six Ways to Vermeer

This is a really fascinating effort: three authorities, no narrator, all talking about a singular painter about whom we know almost nothing. Engaging, smart, enthusiastic commentators. The best bits are the intense descriptions of various paintings -- for example, the description of the pearl in "The Girl with the Pearl Earring." The program covers the gamut of Vermeer's art as well as the mystique surrounding Vermeer. Instead of playing that third repeat of the first hour of WESUN, this, bundled with a set of shorter PRX pieces to fill out the other half hour would be surprisingly engaging radio.

Comment for "RN Documentary: Searching for Fuel and Other Tales from Zimbabwe"

User image

Review of Searching for Fuel and Other Tales from Zimbabwe

All of the Radio Netherlands pieces coming out of Zimbabwe courtesy of producer Eric Beauchemin are solid, down-to-earth reporting. There is so much godawfulness going on in Zimbabwe right now, but thanks to the governmental expulsion of all foreign reporters, Beauchemin's pieces are doubly startling. PDs could do far worse than drop a repeated hour and drop in a pair of these compelling stories.

Comment for "South Africa and the Zimbabwe crisis"

User image

Review of South Africa and the Zimbabwe crisis

All of the Radio Netherlands pieces coming out of Zimbabwe courtesy of producer Eric Beauchemin are solid, down-to-earth reporting. There is so much godawfulness going on in Zimbabwe right now, but thanks to the governmental expulsion of all foreign reporters, Beauchemin's pieces are doubly startling. PDs could do far worse than drop a repeated hour and drop in a pair of these compelling stories.

Comment for "RN Documentary: On the Rampage - Zimbabwe's youth militia"

User image

Review of On the Rampage: Zimbabwe's youth militia

All of the Radio Netherlands pieces coming out of Zimbabwe courtesy of producer Eric Beauchemin are solid, down-to-earth reporting. There is so much godawfulness going on in Zimbabwe right now, but thanks to the governmental expulsion of all foreign reporters, Beauchemin's pieces are doubly startling. PDs could do far worse than drop a repeated hour and drop in a pair of these compelling stories.

Comment for "RN Documentary: Under Siege - God's men in Zimbabwe"

User image

Review of Under Siege: God's men in Zimbabwe

All of the Radio Netherlands pieces coming out of Zimbabwe courtesy of producer Eric Beauchemin are solid, down-to-earth reporting. There is so much godawfulness going on in Zimbabwe right now, but thanks to the governmental expulsion of all foreign reporters, Beauchemin's pieces are doubly startling. PDs could do far worse than drop a repeated hour and drop in a pair of these compelling stories.

Comment for "Dapo Sings on Waikiki"

User image

Review of Dapo Sings on Waikiki

For 3:17, you won't hear a word of English, and even as I write this, I am torn by a sense that I should be aware of what Dapo is singing about, where the Naxi come from, and so on. But the sheer oomph of his singing is great.

Presenters might talk in and around the piece without doing too much harm if they were to get more info about Dapo, the Naxi, and the content of the song.

Comment for "Yo-Yo Ma: In his own words"

User image

Review of Yo-Yo Ma: In his own words

Yo-Yo Ma is possibly the most congenial human being on the planet and it shows on this episode of In Their Own Words. I would urge classical stations in particular to find the three and a half minutes in their otherwise relentless walls of music to drop this in.

Comment for "Naked Barbies and Deflated Basketballs: A look inside the world of collectors"

User image

Review of Naked Barbies and Deflated Basketballs: A look inside the world of collectors

A nice enough story as is, but it could profit from losing a couple of minutes. Then it could fit nicely in one of the news mags. Nice mix of voices.

Comment for "Sheridan Expressway"

User image

Review of Sheridan Expressway

A perfectly good piece of reporting for stations in NYC. To make it of interest to PDs beyond the tristate area, it might be matched with other stories about traffic, highway, and transportation mayhem.

Comment for "Massachusetts/Mongolia Sister Stations - Introduction"

User image

Review of Massachusetts/Mongolia Sister Stations - Introductory Piece

Hard to know where to begin, but if we are ever going to escape the echo chamber of our culture, it might very well be with something like this. The baby camels kill me -- do they wag their tails (do they have tails?). Jay sets the table wonderfully here -- as per usual. College stations trading with college stations, for example. And we don't always have to go 3/4s of the way around the globe to do this (or 1/4 if you go the other way).

Stations are logical traders, but what about producer pen pals? And how do we find stations and/or producer partners elsewhere?

Comment for "Packin' Heat" (deleted)

User image

Review of Packin' Heat (deleted)

A really interesting subject, a good story. Could be shorter. One troubling element is the shifting back and forth of voice from first person to more traditional reporter. Maybe there are really two stories here: What does it feel like, as a vegetarian, to shoot a gun? And then there are lying lies telling us guns make life safer and the streets more crime-free.

Comment for "Area-Code Chic**"

User image

Review of Area-Code Chic**

A nice piece to drop in wherever. The title is a bit misleading because, as this story goes, the area code is more about geography than it is about real estate. Maybe some daring PD will air this in South Nebraska?

Comment for "The Ring and I: The Passion, The Myth, The Mania"

User image

Review of The Ring and I: The Passion, The Myth, The Mania

There is nothing not to like here. The interviews are fun and insightful, great characters everywhere. Intriguing settings -- I'm particularly fond of the slightly out-of-tune piano and the behind-the-scenes at the Met stuff. My only complaint is that the program itself is Wagnerian as defined at the end: knowing the task is impossible, the Valiant Producers still pursued this particular grail (oops! wrong opera!). In sum, Bravo!

Comment for "The Most German Day Ever"

User image

Review of The Most German Day Ever

This is a smart, engaging and delightful piece that is at once incredibly parochial and yet wonderfully worldly-wise as well. A refreshing story that PDs would do well to find time for -- say, after 9 mins of hammering the listener with pledge, these 13 mins will win your audience back.

Comment for "Arcade Girl"

User image

Review of Arcade Girl

A good subject, thoughtfully presented. Several problems as the piece now stands: curious shifts in the script -- dense, multi-claused paragraphs in some places; nice, succinct phrasing in others. Outside elements -- the music and the interview -- are very slow in coming. Needs editing, down to perhaps 7 mins tops. Would be willing to listen again.

Comment for "Alzheimer's: Losing a Mind"

User image

Review of Alzheimer's: Losing a Mind

Somewhere on PRX we need to allow for docs with windows for the news. I mention this here because 60 secs. into this story, where we are just getting to meet our host, we are then thrown not exactly into a tangent but somewhat off direction by essentially a news magazine-like story on Alzheimer's.

The host, new to my ears, is pleasant enough to hear. The writing is good. What is lacking here for me is the sheer hard edge of fact. We tend to use words like "epidemic" unquestioningly; "lots of money" cited early on is obtuse (how much, for example, is the government devoting to Alzheimer's research?).

It's hard not to be sympathetic to any Alzheimer's story, but when the purpose is to call to arms, it is more important still to equip us with knowledge, not pleasant sensibility.

Comment for "CNN's Robert Novak defines fraudulent? Now that is the pot calling the kettle black."

User image

Review of CNN's Robert Novak defines fraudulent? Now that is the pot calling the kettle black.

A piece that needs an environment where it would be balanced with its political dark side -- Ann Coulter in a leather mini-skirt immediately leaps to mind.

Comment for "call to canada"

User image

Get your dimes out for "call to canada"

I understand the division of voices among the reviewers: Voice mail is the missing chapter from Dante's Inferno. Still, a little trim from the discussion of refugee status wouldn't hurt. We get the point pretty quickly.

Still, this is a story that could be rolled out every 3 or 4 months under current circumstances and listeners will be laughing/crying. Ask for permission to cut and trim -- the grass angle goes on too long.

All in all, a lovely concept, nicely done.

Comment for "X-Town"

User image

Review of X-Town

Readers of Andrea Barrett's novel The Forms of Water will know the story of rural Massachusetts towns in the '30s sacrificed for vast reservoirs to keep greater Boston swimming. Ancient loss remembered is often the loss most keenly described and there are wonderful interviews here. But seeing as how this is clearly a piece in progress with different versions in the offing, I will apologize if I see this as an opportunity to nip certain production problems in the bud. First and foremost, the music selections convey neither place nor time. The music here has nothing to do with the 1930s; it has nothing to do with Massachusetts. This is a story from the era of the WPA, not This American Life.

Which leads me to another point: the voices documented are great already. They are all perfectly capable of saying what they feel and, more important, feeling what they say. There's no need to paraphrase when they can speak for themselves.

Finally, the story is too sparing with water itself. Zap Mama once used filling glasses of water as a rhythm track for an entire song. Toilet flushes, gurgling pipes, spitting radiators: water is noisy. I would lose the narration by the bathroom sink near the top. Get the running water, sure, but keep the narrator in the studio.

This is a good story as is, but why shouldn't it be great?

Comment for "Mud"

User image

Review of Mud

A nice short story in a kind of Selected Shorts/Reading Aloud vein. A good short story, complete with life lessons. Given its particulars of theme and content, it demands a venturesome PD to give it a home.

Comment for "Garbage"

User image

Review of Garbage

A lot of fun. Not sure where this goes -- that's why there are PDs -- but given the fact that there are 24 hours in a day and there are 7 days in a week, there should be a space on numerous stations for something like this.

A clear, discernable voice. A refreshing and surprising piece that will provoke listener calls. Some may not be so willing to wallow quite in the dark side.

Comment for "Carols on the Carillon"

User image

Review of Carols on the Carillon

Radio should be doing a bell story every day as a matter of course. And this is a warm fuzzy to the whole matter of the carillon.

I found myself wanting answers: who thought this was the thing for Georgia? How many bells are there in this bunch? Who casted them? Where are they from?