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- Jackson Braider
- Username: JBraider
- Location: San Francisco, California
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- "Arcade Girl"
- Summary: Changing values about sex among youth in China, and the education they seek.
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Review of Arcade Girl
Jackson Braider
Posted on March 11, 2004 at 08:30 AM
A good subject, thoughtfully presented. Several problems as the piece now stands: curious shifts in the script -- dense, multi-claused paragraphs in some places; nice, succinct phrasing in others. Outside elements -- the music and the interview -- are very slow in coming. Needs editing, down to perhaps 7 mins tops. Would be willing to listen again.