Comments by Will Cervarich

Comment for "What the “Bleep” Do We Know?" (deleted)

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Review of What the “Bleep” Do We Know? (deleted)

Though this piece offers little in the way of a substantive review of ""What the Bleep Do We Know?" I appreciated the commentator's tone. As one of a growing number of millions who've seen this movie, I differ from these millions about one general thing: I strongly disliked this movie. I got the sense that this commentator also was similarly puzzled by the popular acceptance--even admiration--of this movie. As such, I admired his sensible skepticism of the purported wisdom this movie dispenses. This piece raises just a few of the outlandish claims and statements made in "...Bleep..." and justly scoffs. Though I wish the piece was longer and tackled more of the problems I found in the movie, I'm glad to hear a kindred voice concisely articulate a couple of them.

Comment for "Chasing Love"

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Review of Chasing Love

This is an incredible peice! Sexy, thoughtful, spiritual, analytical, anthropomorphic, anecdotal, charming. A wonderful piece with many different tones and rhythms of the vast subject of love, well-explored here. Such a lovely barading of voices, it causes a stirring of thoughts and feelings and memories and dreams within the listener. So neat. A stand alone piece that should be heard this Sunday, February 13, 2005.

A delightful blend of choreographed poetry reading, music, fast-paced and concise interviews, meandering musings, and clairvoyant, sharp-eyed accusations of love.

Whole heartedly recommended.

Comment for "The Graceful Art of Breaking Up"

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Review of The Graceful Art of Breaking Up

A simple, poppy piece about breaking up. A survey piece including: most common reason for breaking up, why fighting is ok, prefered methods of breaking-up, and advice for getting "over it." This piece was amusing, though I'm not sure that was its goal. If you were to pick a daily segment to increase listenership enjoyment in the age ranges 12-16, this would probably do the trick, however, for a grown-up audience, this piece was lacking a little depth. I did enjoy the style of assembling all the different voices. Recommended for a younger, lighter NPR only.

Comment for "Biography of 100,000 Square Feet"

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Review of Biography of 100,000 Square Feet

A well crafted piece that takes a couple of listenings-to to get everything from it. Sometimes I had a little difficulty understanding the circumstances surrounding and implications of all of the different viewpoints expressed. I felt a little left up in the air about what's happened to the people that used to congregate in UN Plaza. They've been pushed on, but where to? How has the removal of the benches and the fencing-in of the fountain effected the people for-whom this space was the most useful? Well united by contemplative soundscapes, this piece has the feel of the abandoned open-space that is its subject matter. Sometimes the wind blows quickly and sometimes, it's still, but it all amounts to emptiness in the end. Though I've never seen the plaza, I feel very acquainted with it having listened to this piece.

Comment for "The Ones That Got Away"

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Review of The Ones That Got Away

A cool piece about a love that just won't work. I empathized and I think most people would find some morsel of truth in this piece. I really appreciate the speaker's distance and perspective from the certainly painful subject matter. The feeling of resolution makes this piece enjoyable to listen to rather than nerve-racking and painful, as it must have been to experience. The resulting radio piece is clear and concise description of only the important details, well-narrated by Michael Nutt. The soundtrack gave the piece a lightness that helped move the piece along, not lingering on any one memory of fouled love, but jumping along to the next one as quickly and nimbly as one advances a CD. Do not be put off by the length of this piece. It's about 5:25, with a well-suited extro of Dean Martin's "Memories are Made of This." This would work well as an insert on ME or ATC, but I believe it would be best suited for a Valentine's Day themed program about love and its incarnations. Unlike the previous reviewer of this piece, I did not miss the absence of all the gory details. I rather enjoyed the sparsity of detail, which allowed for the listener with similar experiences to actively connect to the story rather than be a passive listener with experiences made dissimilar to those recounted in the piece because of incongruities in exact details.

Comment for "What a fellowship!"

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Review of What a fellowship!

"What A Fellowship" is a touching piece that highlights a couple of moments of dedication in a long-standing relationship between a man and his second mother. The speaker's voice is pleasant to listen to--one enjoys his comfort in telling the story, his manner of speaking, and his descriptions that are insightful as well as earnest. The speaker does not over reach trying to make the story something it's not, a trait that I appreciated. The piece would be well suited for a story-telling program or a spoken-word program.

Comment for "Das Fuhrer Clean"

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Review of Das Fuhrer Clean

I enjoy Sterling Calver's (sp?) stories. They are vivid and moody. Though his subject matter in this piece is politics, it is the story of meeting a stranger in a bar that shines. I will not say it glimmers--I think it could be a bit shorter--but it is engaging. The only problem is when to play it. It's too long (and maybe even too overtly political) for an All Things Condsidered or Morning Edition soft-feature, and it doesn't quite fit the style of This American Life, where a longer-running first-person essay like this could find air time.

If there is a program out there about story-telling, especially with political themes, this piece is well suited for it.

Comment for "Coming Home"

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Review of Coming Home

Though a little outdated (it references older relics from the Bush administration as current events), this piece is nothing if not vivid. The speaker seems pained for clarity, for resonance. At first, I found this offputting, but as the piece continued, I found the piece more and more vivid, only enhanced by the deliberate pace. The voice we hear is ominous, tired, dark. You can almost hear the plane's engines humming loudly in the background behind the speaker's words, breaths. Sometimes a piece doesn't grab you right away, but slowly enfolds you into its style, tone, mood, achieving better results than if it had grabbed you immediately. This is such a piece.

Would fit in well to a perspectives on war montage. It's certainly anit-Bush, but it moves away from that as it arrives at the real meat of the piece--a soldier describing the effect his death has on his survivors. This piece is substancial; it couldn't just be thrown in anywhere. It would need to be part of something larger.

Comment for "To Hug or Not to Hug?"

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Review of To Hug or Not to Hug?

My initial and main complaint about this piece is the voice of our narrator. I didn't feel that he was honestly sharing his thoughts with the listener. There is something forced about his voice, as if he was trying to produce a "radio voice," but without the equalization and reverb (procedures both this piece could stand to benefit from). It's not that I disagreed with the narrator's insights and argument, I simply felt untrusting of him. I felt that he tried to get a rise out of the listener by exaggerating, both vocally and verbally, the description of the hugs he shares with his best friend, while simultaneously arguing against that same rise he tries to elicit. I will reiterate: some of this is tonal, some verbal. It is problematic, however. I was distanced from the piece when I needed to be sucked into it effortlessly.

Additionally, I would like to see the piece shortened by about 1/3 to 1/2 its current length. This could be accomplished by actually quickening the pace of speech, but should be accompanied by streamlining the argument. There are several false endings. I desired a cleaner piece with fewer tangents.

I did, however, like the idea of the piece. I found it accessible and amusing: the idea. Its presentation was unfortunately lacking.

Comment for "Tossing Away the Keys"

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Review of Tossing Away the Keys

I simply cannot stress enough how much this piece needs to be aired. The rating "very much" offers not even an inkling of the necessity for all people to hear this piece--Governors, Presidents, all people.

I haven't heard anything so real in quite some time. This piece simultaneously made me cherish my freedom and wish I could give some part of it to let these men out of prison. In the current absense of systematic reform to let some of these men out of prison, the radio can at least bring their stories to fellow-human beings. In at least this way, they will not die forgotten, a fear they discuss in the piece.

Exquisitely produced from the recording to the editing, from the interviews to the singing, to the poem, to the narration, to the background of prison noise. This is one of those rare pieces of documentary art that touches deep the mind, heart, and spirit of the listener.

Comment for "Armstrong Williams: Master of Zakazuka"

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Review of Armstrong Williams: Master of Zakazuka

A well-articulated opinion about how to proceed in light of the recent Armstrong Williams scandal. This commentator, with whom I happen to agree, is clear and concise in calling for an independent investigation and the rolling of heads. Not only would I like to see his comments acted upon, I'd like to hear more commentary with this strength of conviction aired nationally. Well-suited for All Things Considered and Morning Edition.

Comment for "PART TWO: The 'Greatest Good' For the Next 100 Years" (deleted)

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Review of PART TWO: The 'Greatest Good' For the Next 100 Years (deleted)

Part Two picks up nicely where Part One leaves off, analyzing, in regard of our National Forests, "the greatest good for the greatest number for the next 100 years." Similarly polished as the first piece, but lacking the somwhat campy historical dramatization soundscapes the first piece included. I was not sad to see them go. This piece offers varied perspectives from parties with something at stake in the future of our National Forests. If only one piece were to be chosen of the two, I'd pick part two. Well suited for Morning Edition and All Things Considered.

Comment for "PART ONE: "For the Greatest Good of the Greatest Number in the Long Run."" (deleted)

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Review of PART ONE: "For the Greatest Good of the Greatest Number in the Long Run." (deleted)

A nice piece that makes me want to hear part two, which I'll listen to now. Besides a particularly cheesy descending harp sound effect to show "going back in time," the piece is refined and engaging. I particularly enjoyed the history about the first ranger, Harvy Lickle. Perfect for All Things Considered or Morning Edition.

Comment for "Sexuality: Queerspawn Respond" (deleted)

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Review of Sexuality: Queerspawn Respond (deleted)

Interesting thoughts, though sort of a hodgepodge of a radio piece, lacking any framing. This piece does not stand on its own, though I did find the snippets of stories and voices interesting. This piece would need external framing, however. It might be appropriate as a reference point for a piece about the spectrum of human sexuality. Poor audio quality.

Comment for "Turtles"

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Review of Turtles

I don't think I like this author's work. This is the second piece of his I've listened to. In contrast to other comments posted for this piece, I think his work is subtly self-important. I disagree that the author is a keen observer of the human situation; I feel his observations are carefully placed to highlight his differences from his subject matter. He is most definitely an outsider looking in, and in unexcitedly. I did not enjoy his music choice for the piece. It only enhanced his evident emotional distance from his story. I think the author is trying to mimic Ira Glass, but he lacks the charm or sense of humor that Ira has.

Comment for "Parking Ticket Writer-Long Version"

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Review of Parking Ticket Writer-Long Version

This piece is great! It's a hilarious look inside a world most of us know little about--that most of us hate from the outside looking on. On, but no IN, not in the context of this piece. Our protagonist is a joy to listen to. She's the type of person I'd like to hang out with. She's charismatic, charming, a great story-teller. The interviewer has the perfect touch. He is neither too neutral, too distanced from her world, or too unresponsive, nor is he too involved, too desiring to match the subject's tone, too affable. He strikes the perfect balance between entering the parking ticket writer's world as an observer and entering the world as a participant. I loved laughing with them both. This piece would complement most any broadcast with a format akin to All Things Considered. Universal. Excellent.

Comment for "Music If You Want It"

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Review of Music If You Want It

A beautiful piece. I would have liked to hear more from the patients and/or the nurses, but her telling of the story is very engaging. Her voice complements her violin playing almost as a viola--a little darker, deeper, but with tone and age akin to the violin. It's a simple piece, very intimate.

Comment for ""My Daughter Knocked Out The Power On The Whole East Coast""

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Review of "My Daughter Knocked Out The Power On The Whole East Coast"

A short, quirky annecdote. I have no idea in what context this piece would fit, but I found amusing both the story and the storyteller. A simple glimpse into a family story you'd be more likely to hear around a holiday dinner table. The length is both its biggest strenth and weakness: completely story appropriate, but so short it's hard to imagine finding a context for this piece in which a listener wouldn't be left thinking: 'Well, that was funny... and odd.'

Comment for "Paul Winter Consort and the Sounds of Nature"

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Review of Paul Winter Consort and the Sounds of Nature

An interesting story, especially if you don't know much about Paul Winter (as was the case for this reviewer). The use of Winter's music to underscore the piece provides an appreciated throughline. I enjoyed the distinction drawn between Winter's music and the "new-agey, mood-setting, nature, music CDs popular in the discount stores." It's a shame that the Shaefer interview had to be conducted over the phone. The contrast between the phone interview and the high quality clips of Winter's music and the rest of the piece is jarring. Paul Winter offers concise insights into his style and techniques. Lester Graham's voice is well-suited for the tone of this piece.

Comment for "Chuck Berry and Rock & Roll"

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Review of Chuck Berry: 50 Years of Rock & Roll

Informative, certainly. A lot of the information in the piece was new to me. I enjoyed learning (and would have liked to hear more about) Berry's influence on Rock and Roll. Hearing Berry speak was the most interesting part of the piece. If anything, the piece could be cut to higlight the interview with Berry, himself.