Piece Comment

Review of Glacier Melts


Intelligent and interesting. Clean edits and good sound. Nice use of sound to make transitions. Mapped out in a manner that was easy to follow with some well placed humor which didn't distract from the story.

The host set up an interesting subject with a nice pace, a good read and well chosen, descriptive language. Eric painted a nice picture in the opening, too.

If I had the venue for this I would air it. I was interested from start to finish.

My constructive criticism: I would encourage Eric to work a bit on his pace and delivery.