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- Bill Anderson
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- Location: Kansas City, Missouri
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- "Glacier Melts"
- Summary: Glaciologists use wireless sensors to research glacial ice melt due to Global Warming.
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Review of Glacier Melts
Bill Anderson
Posted on July 21, 2006 at 11:54 AM
Intelligent and interesting. Clean edits and good sound. Nice use of sound to make transitions. Mapped out in a manner that was easy to follow with some well placed humor which didn't distract from the story.
The host set up an interesting subject with a nice pace, a good read and well chosen, descriptive language. Eric painted a nice picture in the opening, too.
If I had the venue for this I would air it. I was interested from start to finish.
My constructive criticism: I would encourage Eric to work a bit on his pace and delivery.