Well, I thought the topic choice was impecable. It particularly appeals to an older adolescent age group but, also incorporates older generations because of the business aspects.
I was very put back by the pace of this peice. It seemed s l o w
and s t e a dy ; like your grandma's buick.
The reason I didn't turn it off?
The topic was so compelling that it fueled me to the end of the long duration "4 minutes and 49 seconds".
With a little editing work, other audio clips, opposing opinions, and a bit of love; I think this peice could go from "okay, but informative" to "great!".
It sounds like this was a "first stab" towards radio, but it sure is a good example of a great start.
It was interesting to hear the comparison with immigrants coming to the united states, and the view from someone within the united states. Great insite towards what the young people of rural America are faced with. This peice clearly illustrates that us Americans are struggling to create a well lead life.
Comments by Zoe Levin
Comment for "Selling A Papers"
Zoe Levin
Posted on July 27, 2006 at 07:04 PM | Permalink
Review of Selling A Papers
Well, I thought the topic choice was impecable. It particularly appeals to an older adolescent age group but, also incorporates older generations because of the business aspects.
I was very put back by the pace of this peice. It seemed s l o w
and s t e a dy ; like your grandma's buick.
The reason I didn't turn it off?
The topic was so compelling that it fueled me to the end of the long duration "4 minutes and 49 seconds".
With a little editing work, other audio clips, opposing opinions, and a bit of love; I think this peice could go from "okay, but informative" to "great!".
It sounds like this was a "first stab" towards radio, but it sure is a good example of a great start.
Comment for "Leaving the Mountains"
Zoe Levin
Posted on July 22, 2006 at 10:58 PM | Permalink
Review of Leaving the Mountains
It was interesting to hear the comparison with immigrants coming to the united states, and the view from someone within the united states. Great insite towards what the young people of rural America are faced with. This peice clearly illustrates that us Americans are struggling to create a well lead life.