Well, I thought the topic choice was impecable. It particularly appeals to an older adolescent age group but, also incorporates older generations because of the business aspects.
I was very put back by the pace of this peice. It seemed s l o w
and s t e a dy ; like your grandma's buick.
The reason I didn't turn it off?
The topic was so compelling that it fueled me to the end of the long duration "4 minutes and 49 seconds".
With a little editing work, other audio clips, opposing opinions, and a bit of love; I think this peice could go from "okay, but informative" to "great!".
It sounds like this was a "first stab" towards radio, but it sure is a good example of a great start.
Review of Selling A Papers
Zoe Levin
Posted on July 27, 2006 at 07:04 PM
Well, I thought the topic choice was impecable. It particularly appeals to an older adolescent age group but, also incorporates older generations because of the business aspects.
I was very put back by the pace of this peice. It seemed s l o w
and s t e a dy ; like your grandma's buick.
The reason I didn't turn it off?
The topic was so compelling that it fueled me to the end of the long duration "4 minutes and 49 seconds".
With a little editing work, other audio clips, opposing opinions, and a bit of love; I think this peice could go from "okay, but informative" to "great!".
It sounds like this was a "first stab" towards radio, but it sure is a good example of a great start.