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Review of Do You Believe in Science? (deleted)

With Good Reason presents interviews with academics from public universities in Virginia, and in this edition, "Do You Believe in Science?", Sarah McConnell hosts religion professor Mark Wood and Brian Cassel from the Massey Cancer Center, who together teach a course on the cusp of science and religion at Virginia Commonwealth.

"Do You Believe" turns the tone knob all the way down from the television screeching. One of public radio's Core Values is "Belief in civil discourse" and here's a perfect example. Wood and Cassel take the hot issues that have been hijacked for rabid ratings and discuss them with intelligence and humanity.

In the science-and-religion dialog, creationism v evolution is reviewed, with Mark Wood issuing the caution that to damn something as "just a theory" is close kin to deriding something as "just a story". Science and religion both provide stories of origins and transformation, and as these men and this half hour demonstrate, they are not incompatible. Both seem a piece of the species.

The discussion roves to the academic role of women (Are women capable of higher math and science? Well, are men inherently violent – or is that gender trait a social construct?) and sexual orientation, religion, and genetic tinkering. The professors ultimately relate how their students note the strength of religion for end-of-life issues, where science still falls short.

Can a conversation with no resounding triumph be more fulfilling than a well-shouted soundbite? If you believe it can, that's good reason to try this show, and series.

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Review of Alcan 5000 Adventure

KUOW's Patricia Murphy serves as your backseat driver on this Alaska-size drive, The Alcan 5000 from Seattle to Anchorage. It's an order of magnitude beyond the old Baja 500, but without quite all the rigors of the Paris – Dakar event.

This is rallying, not racing, and the participants are infected with TSDs – Time Speed Distance pegs – that reward precision not just raw speed. It's an odd lot, including an ex-marine, a heart surgeon, a motorcycle cop, magazine publishers, a driving instructor from Maine. A large-horsepower, computerized form of in-situ map-reading (Is that Airport Road or Old Airport Road?), the Alcan 5000 is something out of Your Worst Summer Vacation Driving Nightmare, generally with a laugh.

Since it's a rally, in stages, the stage is set every evening for lots of bartime and storytime. You'll discover, for instance, the Simple Green Solution to canine urine residue in motorcycle helmets. And lots more of equally-limited applicability and good humor.

I appreciate that our guide admits to puking on the Carcross Highway after blowing the doors off a lineup of lethargic RVs. In a demonstration of the teamwork integral to these events, her driver and navigator resuscitate her in time for a bloody crash (dodging a rock-hard grader on soft gravel) that takes them out of the rally.

But not our indefatigable Ms Murphy, who hops another car and motors ahead. By the finish line, she ticks off a tally sheet of the gang's defugalties: speeding tickets, stitches, the totaled car, one broken wrist.

Why on (the ends of the) earth? As Gary Webb, that driving instructor says, "When I ride with the people that I teach drivers ed with I’m scared to death. Sitting in car with my two best friends is fantastic."

This is a road trip story that, like the Alcan 5000 itself, is all about the journey, not the destination. It's a winding 20:00 of weekend radio that will appeal to listeners out for a joyride.

[PD NOTE: The attached transcript is evidently from a different edit – it varies significantly from the audio in this full version.]

Comment for "Inuyama Tofu"

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Review of Inuyama Tofu

Right off the bat you'll listen to "Inuyama Tofu", and you'll keep on listening, because Kelly Jones has the well-tempered vocal chords of real pro: pitch, volume, timber all support the text and advance the story.

"Inuyama Tofu" describes the evolution of Japanese tofu, the assault of western food and fast food and supermarket food. By-the-book ax-and-trax writing with good, if predictable, field sound, and a v/o interpreter who is comprehensible and not distracting (if a bit breezy) are perfectly presented. In the end, Takuji Yamato's black sesame and green avocado and purple shiso tofu evolutions help him stave off the beige inroads made by McDonald's and mass-produced soy product.

"Inuyama Tofu" would fit seamlessly in any of the network magazines; the other side of that shiny coin is it seems too seamless. This is an American story recorded in Japan – the same message could be conveyed presenting microbrewers or artisan bakers in the US. The frame seems focused too tightly on just one side of the street – no perspectives on the explosion of tofu consumption outside Japan, or the country's culture of absorbing and perfecting alien elements until they turn, uniquely, Japanese. Aside from being on the other side of the globe, there's not much globalism here.

Jones's tofu is a fine entree to her Japan reportage (the way to the heart of a country is through it's cuisine?); in future episodes, more depth and nuance will help flesh out the real Japan, beyond its American echoes.

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GLOBAL PROGRAMMING on PRX: Review of Khaled Hosseini, The Kite Runner

Remember Afghanistan? America has a war there that, with few exceptions, seems too obscure to retain the mainstream media's attention, much less reportage.

But if you want to explore the future of "globalism" by tracing the history of imperial power vectors, there is no better drawing board than Afghanistan, the playing field of "The Great Game" which, though stepped-on and down-trodden, blooms another day after the colorful visiting teams – from Britannia, the Czar, the Soviets, the Taliban – limp home.

New Letters on the Air offers an alternative to understanding a far-off land which serves as historical cipher to the possibilities and limits of cultural cross-currents. In this edition, Angela Elam draws out Khaled Hosseini, author of The Kite Runner – Afghanistan by an Afghan, in English. Hosseini delivers readings from his novel that convey pieces of life more intimately, and more truthfully, than embedded war repeaters.

Hosseini grew up reading classics from disparate traditions – Rumi and Omar Khayyam to Alice in Wonderland and Hemingway, in Farsi. His Kite Runner is built of Afghani storytelling stones constructed on an American coming-of-age blueprint.

Elam's half-hour with Hosseini may well produce the week's longest-lived thinking for your listeners. The down-to-earth story is right here -- just let this kite fly on your air.

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GLOBAL PROGRAMMING on PRX: Review Global Trade: Neither Free Nor Fair (deleted)

With "Global Trade: Neither Free Nor Fair", National Radio Project rolls out a half-hour of well-produced straight-ahead radio that takes on globalism in three neat segments – the curious do-see-do of outsourcing, the burgeoning US trade deficit, and the "fair" trade movement that attempts to return mankind to the increasingly monetized equation of international relations.

Rupert Cook leads off with an especially fine piece from not Asia, America (Latin), or Australia, but from globalism's lost continent, Africa. US rice and chicken are now counterintuitively cheaper than homegrown in Accra; on the other hand New York City parking tickets are now processed in Ghana. Cook gets on the ground with poultry farmers and African bureaucrats and then pulls Jorg Bergstermann from a German think tank for analysis, which yields a nicely broader perspective than the usual Beltway suspects might.

Justin Beck follows with an instructional piece on the trends and ramifications of America's overseas shopping sprees, which provides good clarity on deficit issues, but unfortunately allows the Orwellian jargon of Wall Street ("outsourced", "downward pressure on wages", "displacement", "decentralized decision-making") to pass unchallenged.

Vinnie Lombardo wraps with a story about the maturation of "Fair Trade", which began with coffee drinkers who, like Mia in Sideways, mused on their beverage --and who then actually did something about the pickers they discovered at the far end of their substance pipeline, organizing the trade to pay a decent standard of living. Remarkably, this dreamy do-gooderism has been adopted by Dunkin' Donuts and Win Dixie Supermarkets.

This edition of NRP's "Making Contact" doesn't plunge into advocacy journalism, but it does provide more punch than standard NPR fare, while maintaining sharp production standards. "Neither Free Nor Fair" is worthy to pre-empt a roll-over half-hour of one of the magazines.

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GLOBAL PROGRAMMING on PRX: Review of Grassroots Goes Global

Julie Mashack connects the decimal points in a four-minute feature that tells how grassroots grow global in today's fundraising. Brooklyn jazz notes bankroll Indian Ocean tsunami relief boats, as the local bake sale gets microwaved worldwide. There's a personal connection engendered at the community level that is increasingly driving 21st Century philanthropy. The citizen-based tsunami relief that shamed the US government into substantial action, and Howard Dean's appointment, on the heels of his dot-community fundraising, to head the DNC are exemplars of the trend.

New York is the world in a city, and WFUV continues to produce worldly features that work for stations in towns across America, straightforward stories like "Grassroots Goes Global" that help listeners begin making some sense out of noisy media, one voice at a time.

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GLOBAL PROGRAMMING on PRX: Review of Learning Chocolates in Paris

"In cooking, things rarely get invented, they get modified."

Life may not imitate art, but, as any biologist will tell you, life does follow food. And food and love are two staples in too short supply in public radio's pantry, so PDs -- take " Learning Chocolates in Paris" off the PRX shelf and serve it up for THINK GLOBAL. Listeners will love you for it.

Producer Sarah Elzas mixes simple, fresh ingredients – good writing seasoned with good sound – for a perfect desert feature. The École Ferrandi's "Anglopats" – English-speaking pastry-wannabes from the US, China, Japan, India, Israel, and Mexico – are stirring up a little bit of goodness that's hard to resist.

Nothing forced here, and more a propos how the globe really spins than wonk-drone. Hey, it's Paris and it's chocolate. That's love and food.

Sweet.

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Review of Interview with MST activist Vanderly Scarabeli

There's an important story here, about landless workers in Brazil, but after putting an ear to it for three-quarters of an hour, it remains a mumble on the other side of the planet. This "Interview with MST activist Vanderly Scarabeli" plays like research notes a producer might consult, and excerpt from, for a 4-8 minute feature. In the event, we're shoved in without context and offered nothing structurally compelling to catch us up thereafter.

The interpreter is challenging to comprehend clearly on the radio, especially in a moving car, and her voicings are often right on top of a too-hot original-language track, which makes things difficult to sort out in any culture.

And though it's good technique to give interview subjects some free rein, after a perfunctory intro, we don't hear our (never introduced) interlocutor again until nearly the 7:00 mark. That makes this airtime veer past freedom into a downpour of verbiage without shelter.

Listen, there's a difference between art and the artist, and between content and form. The end of the 20th Century was all about devaluing hierarchies, where a logic of good, better, best was trumped by a sentiment of "But that's how I feel." A corollary of that triumph of emotion was an uncritical elevation of works based upon a preconception of the subject matter, rather than on how the subject was rendered by the author. "It doesn't matter how you tell it, it's about what you're talking about."

Now we know. It matters how you tell it.

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Review of Paul Pena's Kargyraa Moan

Can you whistle and hum at the same time?

That trick contains something of the dissonance of harmonic singing (though Tuvan throat singers don't whistle Dixie, or anything else – they just sound like they've got stereo vocal chords double-barreling out of a singular throat).

Jonathan Mitchell's arts feature "Paul Pena's Kargyraa Moan" is composed of terrific notes: ethereal short-wave radio waves, an international treasure hunt, a serendipitous used record store discovery, a ruined Discman, and howls of frustration that, in harmonic convergence, turn sweet. Eventually, "Big Old Jet Airliner" lands in Central Asia for some Tuvan throat singing. There's a lot of story here.

Jonathan Mitchell is a marvel, a musician in producer's clothing. All his work is informed by his training, background, and talents in music. Here, interview is overlayed on interview, producing a richness of time and location that's astonishing in five-and-a-half minutes. And all the while, Mitchell is masterfully orchestrating a quartet of otherworldly songs.

The sheer focus of "Kargyraa Moan" is its broader limitation, though. It's a microscope set in the laboratory of Studio 360's "The Voice" edition, and MDs will be required to build out something more than the accompanying Host i/o to land this Big Ol' trippy tremolo back onto the public radio dial. Mitchell has "carried me too far away" to come back to regular melodic music so fast. Maybe Jonathan will refashion this vision for wider redistribution

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Review of Elinor Fuchs on Making an Exit (deleted)

"Alzheimer's, heart disease, and stroke... this week, on PrimeTime."

Listen, when that's the leader into your show, you better be very, very good if you expect your audience to last the hour without life support.

Mike Cuthbert is very, very good. Right now, it would be hard to find a radio host who better combines journalistic professionalism with coffee shop conversational ease.

In this edition with Village Voice theatre critic and Yale School of Drama professor Elinor Fuchs, Mike steers a careering discussion of Making an Exit: A Mother-Daughter Drama with Alzheimer's, Machine Tools, and Laughter through the tragi-comic range of our lives.

When Ms Fuchs was growing up, her mom got by pushing paramilitary equipment to foreign governments, selling condoms to the Chinese with Elliot Ness, and collaborating on an anthology of American folk music. Hunter Thompson couldn't beat that.

The whole interview is so like life in its mixture of laughter and pain it tilts toward the Shakespearean.

Ms Fuchs' Alzheimer's-addled mother complains, "I have an intelligence that's being overlooked!"

"Mother, dear, it's not your intelligence. Everybody knows you're intelligent. It's your memory."

Mother stamped her foot and said. "Well, forget all that!"

Then the moment a child knows her parent is no longer competent – Elinor saw her mom didn't know the difference between the hot water and cold water faucets. Her plaintive recitation actually caused me to pause the audio and check my young daughter washing before bedtime, wondering if Isabel will one day make sure I mix my blue and red water right, warm with love.

When radio does that, we've won.

In the second half-hour, James Rybacki – who mixes a cardiac cocktail that's stirring without leaving you shaken – is the silver bullet expert guest: smart, fun, self-effacing.

Your listeners are grown up. Mike Cuthbert's ready. PDs should make time for PrimeTime.

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Review of Bingo: "A totally different world" (deleted)

Bingo: "A totally different world" is a portrait, but without a frame. True, it's very verite and nicely black and white, but with no caption or focused composition, we get blurry Brownie camera instead of proof-sheet insight.

The actualities are bingo-quality, fine grainy grit, but the back-office interviews, where more control is possible, are muddy, pocked with plosives, and swoon through tromboning levels. Then there are some ragged-razor edits that should be either dressed up or stripped down – here they are the ¼-inch of slip showing, nobody's idea of fashion.

"Totally different" contains a documentary concept that with attention could succeed, but it will require more than four-and-a-half minutes and demand the thread that disciplined editing confers – not didactic, but at least engaging the listener's participation. Alternately, it could be a soft feature, but there we want sharp focus and likely a narrator.

"Bingo...totally" is worth restructuring to create a piece intentionally made for broadcasting, with an ear for the other side of the box. Ultimately what airs is the product of a long series of choices, beginning with the choice to take sound out of reality and place it into imagination. Unless those choices are resolutely affirmed, it's not fair to ask that listeners join the effort – that collaboration that's the essence of radio.

Comment for "What Happened at Red Lake?"

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Review of What Happened at Red Lake?

What happened at Red Lake?

The answer can be as straight as ballistics and the fragility of flesh or as twisted as despair and an index finger crooked around the trigger.

MPR's hour documentary offers the question and never the answer, which must be the only answer.

The Red Lake story isn't about being "On the Rez", it's about being "off the screen". As a closed reservation, Red Lake was able to exercise an unprecedented degree of media control in the aftermath of a school shooting. That made the work of reporter Chris Julin and producer Catherine Winter both remarkably more difficult and crucially more important to a larger national audience.

Some things we do again and again when just don't know, or know too well. We wonder at birth, celebrate marriage, comfort sickness, visit in prison, mourn death. A part of us needs to hear this story, again, and you should put it on your air.

The Red Lake School had the fences, the metal detector, the security guards, the crisis management plan. Jeff Weise was a good kid. He was bad, into gun fantasies. It was a surprise. It was totally predictable. Violent websites are the problem, like video games before and before that death metal music, and television. And millions of times those aren't a problem at all.

The gutter thinking behind Bowling for Columbine is laid bare here. Red Lake had tradition and Native language and separation from modern American society and it didn't make the difference. Demagoguery makes slick movies but not real documentary.

Julin and Winter make documentary. They get the voices and so you get, not answers, but some fellow humans. Heroes and fools and family and a small town that now owns the weight of the world. We would do well to visit them, on the radio, in that prison.

Comment for "Just Like Mom Used to Buy"

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Review of Just Like Mom Used to Buy

Milking the 25-year old Monsanto slogan "without chemicals, life itself would be impossible" for an opening smirk, Sean O'Connor unwraps his "Just Like Mom Used to Buy" essay with the mass-produced predictability of the Oreos, Chips Ahoys, Fig Newtons, Ginger Snaps, and Lemon Coolers he seeks to parody.

The concept and writing are a half-step up from the current menu of national magazine commentators, but still, that yields just a one-and-a-half trick pony. With four full minutes to ruminate and regurgitate, we want a little nutrition – or bile – but "Just Like Mom" provides only empty calories.

The voicings are perfect public radio in the cool, somewhat snarky BBC- imitative newsreader, presenter, host, anchor style. Which is great if you're doing Shearer satire, but it isn't right for this piece (unless it were remade from the angle of a faux-commercial v/o).

O'Conner deserves broader play -- his words begin to uncover some curious corners of culture (I like "cookie catamaran" for some new packaging). But, too much, they sit like toys on display; they don't get dirty digging down to the deeper level where word-play makes metaphor with real illumination.

Play "Just Like Mom" for dessert; just don't expect any stuff of life beneath the saccharine frosting.

Comment for "We Are Comcast!"

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Review of We Are Comcast!

Remember what the dormouse said. Feed your head, daily.

Perhaps it's impossible to derail the runaway train of public radio news that, binging on branding, takes itself too seriously and its subjects not skeptically enough. But The Daily Feed might just be the penny on the tracks to wreck things nicely; if not, it will survive as the smooth, shiny coin of the realm for listeners who still scrutinize news.

Okay, it may not be the first thing that leaps to mind, but Frank Benlin and Max Knobny's Hasty 'Poons are Core exemplars of Honesty, Civil Discourse, and Pacing – Mind, Heart, and Craft. These dudes know news, they skewer it instead of skewing it, and they do it right tight.

Featuring, among others: Swiftboats Against Social Security, Jeff Gannon for Naked Liberty, Al Cada from Cada's Texas Toyota (who sends a "big ol' slathering Texas Ranch sandwich" to a soldier on the frontlines for every SUV sold).

And in this "We Are Comcast" episode, Max FaTass speaks loudly and carries a big shtick. "Dear Comcast, Are you evil or just don't care?"

"Well, we're not evil." Knobny's voicings are a beautiful irritation, itching into your ear, making you scratch your brain.

Smart silly fast fun done. There's the recipe. In your 86,400 daily seconds, you can force yourself to feed 90 of these, second to none.

Comment for "Art of the Song #7 with Robert Mirabal & Eliza Gilkyson" (deleted)

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Review of Art of the Song #7 with Robert Mirabal & Eliza Gilkyson (deleted)

Art of the Song is about music the way Car Talk is about internal combustion. Car Talk is all about the talk. And Art of the Song is art – something godlike that can transpire between mere mortals. Like Judy Carmichael's Jazz Inspired, Art of the Song is about creativity. It is turned-on variety and fusion that's the apex of what public radio can achieve.

Program 7 in the series shows off beautiful negative-space interviewing, where Robert Mirabal warms up and pours through the mic and makes the radio invisible, with a perfectly mixed flute score in and out of audibility like wind in the trees.

Mirabal's spoken word pieces over traditional song produce an especially accessible presentation of both new idea and traditional aesthetic. Diverse, wry, and challenging, Robert Mirabal is just plain hard to resist, as in "Blue Lake":

"Maybe I'll understand the man, Nixon, America, and the Holy Land when I get older. What was more important now was catching up to smelly Starchy Montoya and riding to the dump to look for old bicycle forks to make me a modified chopper with a white banana seat."

And Mirabel's broad sweep finds the perfect counterpoint with Eliza Gilkyson's emotional scalpel singing "The Beauty Way", and with Michael Shorr offering accessible explications of honest songwriting.

I was impressed with the honesty throughout these programs – the editing drives toward narrative, with enough pauses that the listener is compelled to be there with his own answers as well.

I'm not one easily hippotized by New Age revelations, which are too often revealed to be "aged news". I do like to be surprised by something's that bravely goes beyond the confines of genre. It takes a daring eclecticism and some unwashed western humanity to makes a common ground in radio land, and here it is.

Low-key hosts John Dillon & Vivian Nesbitt's Art of the Song is programming that makes a genius PD – there's not a national show outside the tentpoles you couldn't knock off your schedule and come out better with this series.

5-Stars, and a bit of the Heavens thrown in.

Comment for "National Poetry Month Commentary"

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Review of National Poetry Month Commentary

April is National Poetry Month? Some kind of rant is sure to follow on that rhetorical question, no? No, because it's not truly a question, it's up-talk, that elocution pollution that's percolating up to public radio? Not hip, it's hip-flop?

And the questions? continue throughout? Finally, the outcue on up-talk leaves the listener not weightless but waiting?

Mr Beatty presents some good lines and a premise with merit, but fails to pursue it beyond the obvious. "National Poetry Month Commentary" sounds like a first draft. Turn the page -- but don't close the book. His other work is stronger, and I think we'll hear more from Beatty in future as he finds his voice in that odd space between book and bar called public radio.

I do however hope he'll eschew the music beds of "Barry, Bob & Me" and "A June Commentary", which are the audio equivalent of graphics in magazines – perhaps pretty at first glance, but which can never change the words themselves. Brian Beatty has good words and honesty, and that will out in the end.

Comment for "GeoQuiz Parody #2"

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Review of GeoQuiz Parody #2

National Geographic magazine's National Geography Bee judge Geo B. adjudicates both Earth & Air...

Geo whiz!

Paul Slavens and Jim Kuenzer have come up with a couple of good parodies of The World's GeoQuiz segment, and they're fun!

These interstitials are perfect to deploy for fundraising pitch sessions – they're short and upbeat and could be used to encourage listener calls in a mock contest that leads to membership subscription.

The parodies are rich with that endangered Core Value species, Humor, outfitted with perfect "Attention to detail – music, sound elements, language." A bit crisper read would have enhanced the verisimilitude, but, hey, it's not the end of the world.

DDs, download GeoQuiz Parodies #1 and #2 for your next fun(d) drive to avoid those pitch break doldrums.

Comment for ""The Skirt Brigade" and "of Foxes and Henhouses"" (deleted)

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Review of "The Skirt Brigade" and "of Foxes and Henhouses" (deleted)

"The Skirt Brigade" and "of Foxes and Henhouses" is professional-strength advocacy journalism. The production is Hollywood slick, and the voices are intelligent and pointed. Problem is, they're all singing a one-note Blue State Blues.

If you look at the media as a zero-sum competition, with Red Fox an enemy to be brought down, hire the hounds from "Voices of Our World". If you think journalism demands more than "Dan, you sadistic, elitist, sexist, racist, anti-humanist pig" at the top of the hour and "Jane, you ignorant, misguided slut!" at the bottom, keep looking.

In "The Skirt Brigade", Kathy Golden tosses softball lobs to Laura Flanders in a back-slapping Yes-fest. There's no challenging the presumption that underpins the argument -- women must think alike (liberal) because that's the "approved" politics for women. If you tease that apart, it's demeaning. Sure Condi Rice is a Chevron Corp and Republican party tool – but she has as much right to be as any man.

In "Foxes and Henhouses" Michael Scherer gets the same coddled treatment with worse acoustics – a bad phoner platform to plug his upcoming magazine piece. Again, Elinoar Astrinsky undertakes no real interview -- no depth, nuance, or follow-up questions.

Throughout, host Eileen Bott's intro and outros are resolutely "on-message" with smarm and up-talk and a familiarity – "You're getting good at this!" and "Yeah, you heard it right!" – that surely will strike many listeners as condescending. I couldn't tell if her repeated anthropomorphisation of Dick Cheney's alma master as "Hallie Burton" was satire or mere mispronunciation. In the event, Ms Bott's material should be labeled as "commentary", not neutral host narration.

Comment for "TOE/Failure"

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Review of TOE/Failure

The Dictionary of Theories states, "At present no theory of everything exists [but it] is the theorist's dream..." It shouldn't be surprising then that some elements of the theory might fail. The "Failure" episode is an example of a stubbed TOE.

Segment I (Score = 0), which limns Peter Choyce's experiences in Hollywood, is a big whiff, like a homerun hitter fooled by a screwball. It's hard to quite imagine who would listen through this 6-1/2-minute leader replete with tinny phone and irony-laden sarcasm that seems an anachronistic holdover from a decade of decadence. The actual opening of the program brings the same relief GE Smith's theme music did after another lousy (Conan O'Brian -written?) SNL opening shtick.

Segment II (Score = 2) boasts some great archival television audio together with important stylistic explication. But the story line of Carl Perkin's v Elvis Presley isn't elevated to something of ringing interest, and the story ends with one of those bad Las Vegas -style hospital jokes that tells all about the "doctor" and none of the patient.

Segment III (Score = 3) is a great mono-rant against the Harvard Lampoon and Conan O'Brian by Herbert G, but it looses its full potential for impact (a possible 4), undercut (rather than underscored) by the self-conscious half- Joe Frank half- TAL music bed that's too happy to call attention to itself.

Benjamen Walker is a wonderful and creative audio producer and Theory of Everything is an exceptional series which is worthy of broad air. You can count on Walker's continued success. Just don't bet on his "Failure".

Comment for "On the Tip of Aggravated: Homeless Students and School" (deleted)

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Review of On the Tip of Aggravated: Homeless Students and School (deleted)

Here's a voice you'll be hearing more of, and not just because she's tooting the best set of alto pipes to come across the ether recently. Sarah Elzas offers the mic to some folks you haven't heard from, and so achieves Job 1 of a public radio news feature. What really shines here is that "On the Tip of Aggravated" is absent contrivance -- that bogeyman of pubrad assignments, especially those dealing with "kids". Instead, this story is filled with people you'd be interested to talk to, if you weren't scared off by their old clothes or young age. Perfect for radio.

The title comes from 13-year-old Isis's psychological self-assessment, how it feels to be out of a house but still in school, dealing with the cruelties of adolescence. Elzas probes the back halls of students who sound as regular as other teens, except their crashpads are long on crashing and short on padding. "On the Tip" provides the primary source – real students talking straight – and commentary from Agnes Stevens, who advocates for homeless students in LA. Elzas successfully reveals these children as pieces of you and me, like so many people we haven't learned yet.

The end comes too quick, but this is a broadly-airable length. There's plenty for listeners to learn in this five minutes of a classroom without walls.

Comment for "Moving the Village"

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Review of Moving the Village

Gabriel Spitzer's "Moving the Village" is founded upon good writing – clear, explanatory journalism. The documentary benefits further from Spitzer's compelling narration, his voice conveying both authority and humanity. His on-the-ground (and -water) research and writing combine most crucially to explain the underlying science of climate change. In narrative and through well-selected interviews, Spitzer communicates scientific data clearly, without resorting either to oversimplification or jargon.

While maintaining a factually accurate portrayal, Spitzer does not lose hold of the requirements either of storytelling or of radio -- story illustrated with sound. "Moving the Village" follows a narrative arc that launches from the particular of Shishmaref's Inupiaq culture to more general human themes – Why are we where we are? Why is "sense of place" important – how does it resonate beyond the local to the universal? What sense of self does a place impart? In the words of one voice of Shishmaref, there's a change ahead, to being "mainlanders, not islanders".

The success of "Moving the Village" comes not from clinical journalism divorced from real people, but from the precise weave of research, writing, and audio. The ambience is never garish, but the sounds – of a caribou's internal organs being gutted, of huskies and four wheelers, of angry ocean – enhance the story like good punctuation or typography.

Without sacrificing objectivity, Spitzer helps humanize the story through his willingness to place himself in it, splashing through the storm surge.

This is 21st Century radio, where head and heart come together. Great documentary requires this marriage, and Spitzer celebrates it. He gives voice to villagers and also affords alternate views, including the theory that local activities such as building seawalls may provoke as many negative effects as global warming.

In "Moving the Village", producer Gabriel Spitzer deftly avoids the pitfalls and exploits the opportunities for a medium-form environmental documentary. This is great radio that speaks to every village in the public radio system. Get moving.

Comment for "A Way with Words #1150" (deleted)

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Review of A Way with Words #1150 (deleted)

This is total ear-candy for public radio listeners!

Listeners love words, they care about them – and correct our grammar and pronunciation when we don't. Ramp up from Car Talk to A Way With Words – "Talk Talk" – it's totally fun and smart.

The onomatopoetic (Richard) Lederer delivers the friendliest, most pleasurable voice on public radio since Savvy Traveler Rudy Maxa. It's simply not possible to avoid smiling as the verbavore browses through purple mountains of prose and masticates amber raves of fame. Lederer breezily demonstrates that words are the stuff and staff of civilization, yarn of history and culture.

Partner Martha Barnette is making the daunting task of succeeding Charles Harrington Elster sound smooth, and with the single exception of the opening billboard, which pingpongs between them like a chatty Katie Couric on stereo reverb, Richard and Martha's dialog with each other, with guests, and with call-in listeners is fresh and easy.

This show #1150 is a real winner, featuring Robert MacNeil – late of PBS' Newshour, and author of The Story of English – in Part 2. Barnette's interview with the baritone MacNeil about his next project, Do You Speak American? , is a guaranteed crowd pleaser.

But more, week in and out, A Way With Words is poised to make a big hit nationally. ND Mike Marcotte has transformed the KPBS newsroom into a veritable NPR southwest bureau, and his magic is catching. PD Jon Decker has a hot show for you. Producers Stefanie Levine and Jill Fritz know Doug Berman's rule about “The Selection and Shaping of Talent”: “Your callers, or whoever else is on your program – they’re all talent”. Public radio boasts a remarkably intelligent and articulate audience, and the listeners selected by Levine and Fritz lend a mouthful during the call-in segments.

Way.

[Production note: PDs make sure to check the rundown -- AWWW is charted on a standard :20/:40 public radio clock, and 1:00 – 6:00 is an empty news hole]

Comment for "Carthedral"

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Review of Carthedral

"Carthedral" is a professional and polished arts feature. It's got the right writing and good street stuff put together with a sharp digital razor, and many listeners will appreciate this six and a half minutes of auto art.

Rebecca Caldwell welded a bug on top a Cadillac hearse. It is not your usual car. But still, we don't get the real feel of crawling around death, as with Baudelaire, "Like the maggots to the corpse", or other edgier implications

Caldwell's "Carthedral" isn't pedestrian, it's Art, which by some definition must be more than the sum of its parts. Lightman's "Carthedral" - The Soundtrack, though, is somehow less than the sum of it's perfectly fine elements, all of which are good, though the near-uptalk on o/c makes for something like an over-the-cliff finish line.

Leyna Lightman had the eye to catch this opportunity, and I'll look forward to her next arts piece where she follows her ear farther. Sometimes whacky doesn't fit into normal, and sometimes form can corrupt content. Sometimes you have to smash the glass to see the paint underneath.

Comment for "Electricity: Paying the Price"

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Review of Electricity: Paying the Price

Sandra Sleight-Brennan is a talented veteran producer of public interest radio pieces. Hers is not advocacy journalism a la Pacifica, but emotionally rich radio that digs far deeper than the soundbite and the first impression.

The Ohio Valley Coal Company is conducting longwall mining under Dysart Woods that's producing some irreparable damage to pieces of Ohio's natural and architectural history. That mining is also producing the electricity to run the computers and radios that make this story possible.

"Electricity: Paying the Price" opens like life, right into unexcused dialog. And throughout the piece, Sleight-Brennan leaves just light-footed tracks, she stays out of the way as a narrative presence, instead committing the silent hard work of editing and producing that brings us – the word isn't actualities, which drips a bit of posturing – she brings us real people's real words, and the thoughts behind them.

Sleight-Brennan is present as in interviewer, though, and I like that. Her gentle company in the story – "Uh-huh." "Mmm." "How scary was that?" – take "Paying the Price" out of the rectangular box of radio and into the worn seat of breakfast nook conversation.

Ultimately, the listener is not served a neatly-packaged moral, but instead is invited to listen and think. And likely talk about his piece when it's over.

Perhaps because we're immersed, the wrap comes surprisingly quick, and some prepared back-announce to outro with would help frame "Paying the Price" most advantageously.

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Review of The Voices Of Civil Rights Project (deleted)

Next week do the regular thing on your station for 167 hours . Then make sure you find a place of honor for this one hour.

Because "The Voices Of Civil Rights Project" accomplishes what only radio can – a soul-to-soul connection. And "Voices" takes up the special charge of public radio, to do good, to give voice to the people. There is something wonderfully educative about learning the very inside of another human being without facing the made-up rouge and blush of a book's cover, judging only the words, in black and white.

The letters that provide the primary source content of this hour are as varied as America but they are consistently, disarmingly honest. The production and packaging of "Voices" dispenses with the funeral procession pace of old-style docs – Prime Time Radio host Mike Cuthbert, AARP's Rick Bowers, and Wade Henderson of the Leadership Conference on Civil Rights provide sharp, personal commentary that frames the vignettes simply and elegantly.

Really, this massive project represents a remarkable success for inclusiveness and broad-thinking on the part of AARP, LCCR, and the Library of Congress. "Voices" is not just a gift shared between races and cultures, it is a bequest to a coming generation.

Incidentally, the companion website also presents terrific content, including arresting images from former WESUN commentator and Newsweek photographer Lester Sloan.

"One of the most interesting things I learned during my 70-day photographic odyssey across America," Sloan says, "is that average people can be both heroic and regal just being themselves." Keep your ears on this prize and, an hour from now, you'll know just how insightful Lester Sloan is.

[Production note: "Voices" ends at 54:00; the balance of this hour is filled with a PrimeTime "Postscript" feature.]

Comment for "New world of Adam"

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Review of New world of Adam

Radio Anyway has a mission statement to provide "good storytelling, complexity, our world inside many worlds". And Lou Blouin delivers with "New world of Adam", a modern day Big Chill that grieves over the lost soul of Lou's collegiate friend Adam. This extended feature is founded on good writing, articulated narration, and network-standard production elements.

Lou's relationship with Adam ("But I know you Adam... and you're not a real big fan of capitalist ethics..") allows for deep digging interview questions, but Adam is a teflon-armored MLM prophet now ("If a member of that congregation has enough money, they can just pay for the roof, and the minister then can do what the minister is supposed to do!") who answers his old friend with the empty candor of an insurance salesman. Adam's arc has gone from college tripper (or at least dope smoker) to reading the biography of President Gipper, which caps the story for Lou.

This feature fills the ATC "A" or "C" segments, and listeners want to hear full-featured radio of that length, so buy it and try it! A single caveat: Lou is an accordion player, but his choice to score "New world" with accordion music distracts or at least doesn't support the storyline. The music is all Paris cafe society, while the story is profoundly American.

Comment for "My Criminal Life"

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Review of My Life as a Criminal

Young people began public radio more than three decades ago, but for the ensuing generation they failed to properly recruit new listeners and producers. Today, public radio is constructed with a bifocal glass ceiling of 50-somethings. Blunt Youth is one of several important projects to stop squinting and see the problem clearly, putting young voices behind the mic and looking for young ears.

Ironically, "My Life as a Criminal" scores higher in revealing its older subject, the mother, than the juvenile criminal of the title, Mark. With Mark's mom, the piece achieves something that radio excels at and which is hard to fake, especially to media-savvy young listeners – genuineness. "You walk through the house and look in his room and everything's there. But him."

After a radio verite open though, Mark's portions of the feature are littered with the detritus of the old CBS News President Van Gordon Sauter's Theory of Moments, "moments of feeling, moments of visceral emotion – no matter how manipulative," Ron Rosenbaum points out, that "have become the signatures of broadcast news and a certain kind of TV-magazine show".

The TAL-soundtrack, the overamped ax (jail door slamming), the evident reading of a script by the subject ("I started doing intense work on my addiction, which brought up hopelessness, anger, and hurt from past traumas." -- who talks like that?) subtract from rather than reveal Mark's humanity.

I've worked in a jail (though not a prison) and I know there's far more to Mark than comes across in this "Moment", notwithstanding his arresting suicide recitation.

The problem may well be more the result of form, a standard 4-1/2 -minute feature, than the potential of the content. If public radio is to avoid the downward slope of reality TV, memoir must have more raison than, "But it's true". Story and resonance are still the prime directives, regardless of age.

Mark does provide revelatory passages where he opens up and gives up a piece of real boy. "You come in here, your world stops, ya know?" Yeah. That's the genuine place where Mark's story needs to start.

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Review of Budapest: Wine, Song and Women Who Look Like Zsa Zsa (deleted)

Russell Johnson's research is solid, his writing very good, and the sound collection strong, though the mix is in places a little jumpy. All the ingredients are here for a great goulash, but someone needs to stir the pot – you can't taste the paprika.

Johnson's trax delivery is speeded-up sounding it just keeps coming without a pause or breath to digest what's just been described the effect is like watching a great movie on fast forward. And I was tripped up in one line where cafe was pronounced two alternate ways in the space of three words ("kuh-FAY' after CAF'-ay"), pushing internationalism a little to far in too short a space.

Though the humor here is a crucial antidote to much of what comes from across the waters on public radio, "Budapest: Wine, Song and Women Who Look Like Zsa Zsa" gets a little shtuck on the way, one too may jokes a slow-pitch lob where you hear the punchline coming an ocean away.

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Review of A Tribute to Spalding Gray

In "A Tribute to Spalding Gray", Jon Kalish invites listeners into the Gray Club with a triple decker of personal interviews (where Kalish is conversationally present) seminar presentations, and Gray's trademark monologs.

The radio is very, very good to Spalding Gray, whose live performance scenery depends upon only his plaid shirt, plain table and chair, and glass of water. Little is lost when his monologs are brought from the theatre or cinema to the ether, and spoken word is superior to the print versions of his work.

Spalding Gray has a high quotient of fans among public radio listeners, perhaps because his startling honesty is met in kind by the directness of the medium. That honesty has a harder edge in this later material, where Cambodian joints are replaced by Irish fractures.

Next thing I knew I was lying in the street completely covered in blood, Kathy writhing next to me crying, "I'm dying I'm dying." And I said, "But I can't straighten my leg." [And] there was cow medicine everywhere -- it was a local veterinarian [who crashed into us.]"

Selling his house for money reminds Gray of his father, and what subsequently happened to his mother. "That's what led to her madness. So it's not my story I hope."

But it is. This tribute captures not only the brilliance and spark but also the descending trajectory of Gray's shooting star.

Kalish ends with a personal goodbye, which fits the acolytic style of the piece, really a remembrance in Gray's own voice, just as his performances really comprised a series of his lives, remembered.

[Production note: 15:05 -15:18 = Station ID to KCRW, which must be stripped for rebroadcast, which we hope for, broadly. -gb]

Comment for "Media Mea Culpas Encouraging Sign"

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Review of Media Mea Culpas Encouraging Sign

WQUN's Paul Janensch, who teaches journalism at Quinnipiac University, presents a serviceable piece about media mistakes in 2004. Janenesch has a classically handsome, Kevin Phillips -like voice that affords his pronouncements aural authority.

But though "Media Mea Culpas Encouraging Sign" addresses the ear with a neat vocal envelope, the card inside plucks no heartstrings – it's more annotation than commentary.

The generic intro "The media itself made news a lot this year. Media commentator Paul Janensch says the news was both a (sic?) good and bad (sic?)." doesn't really give the piece enough legs to blast out of the starting blocks.

And in closing, the "On the one hand, on the other hand" Solomonic tone (Yes, it was bad that important news organizations made serious mistakes, but it was good that they ultimately were willing to undergo an assessment of what they had done...) and "Eat your peas" admonitions (Wouldn't it be nice if government, corporations, unions, universities, hospitals, and other major institutions felt a similar accountability to the public?) seem products of a historical print editorial style that sounds dusty and flat.

I'd like to hear more of Prof Janensch's voice and learn more of his media criticism insights. If the approach is essentially factual analysis, a better vehicle might be a short four-to-five minute investigative journalism feature that can provide a more detailed and deeper exegesis. Alternately, I'd be just as happy if Prof Janensch's would fire away with his real opinions and emotions rather than smolder around the edges.

The cases he cites, from USA Today, New York Times, Washington Post, and CBS Television represent clear and deplorable derelictions of duty to the American people by the Fourth Estate. They can provoke only true outrage – not mere tut-tutting – from journalists and citizens alike.