Comments by Elizabeth Yeoman

Comment for "Honeymoon in Dieppe"

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Review of Honeymoon in Dieppe

This piece has many strengths: A touching story, the author's nostalgic almost haunting voice, effective use of sound effects and music (the narrator singing?), details that take the listener to the places the narrator describes (the stones rolling in the waves, the narrow double bed, the fibers of the wool in the husband's pullover...). However, it is trying to do two things at once. The period feel and wistful story of the honeymoon doesn't quite mesh with the horrors of the battle at Dieppe thirteen years earlier. Perhaps this could have worked if the narrator had a closer connection to the earlier events or there was some other linking of the two periods. It's a shame it didn't work because in many ways it is a beautiful piece.

Comment for "You Only Have To Look and See"

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A reflective tribute to a father and an artist

This elegiac piece explores the life of a photographer, the narrator's father, through reflections on his work and what it meant to those who loved him and worked with him. It offers insights into his way of seeing the world and images of that world. The carefully chose and sparingly used music enhances the reflective mood of the piece. In some places, more precise choice of adjectives, or some other form of showing instead of telling, might have strengthened the narrative. Words like "magical", "lovely", "amazing" and "astounding" don't really help the listener see the images or feel what the narrator is feeling. However, the topic is unusual and poignant and the listener is left with a very clear sense of Ron Solomon, his work, and what it meant to people. A sensitive and moving tribute to a father and an artist!

Comment for "Growing Up in The System"

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Please make a sequel!

Star's eloquent and articulate voice is extraordinary. Her story, juxtaposed with her equally articulate sister's very different take on the same events, is moving and compelling. The listener is drawn in and compelled to root for Star, who has been through so much yet is completely without self pity and still able to forgive and to hope. Hard to believe she did not have a job when she seems to have such talent for radio!

Comment for "Choosers, Not Beggars"

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A startling and insightful story

The story is beautifully narrated, thought provoking and slightly disturbing. There are complex questions here about the notion of choice and some startling revelations about homelessness and mental illness. The upbeat yet reflective voices of the two main characters, Daniel and Gregory, and judicious use of music and sound keep the listener engaged from start to finish.

Comment for "Ode to the Salish Sea"

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Eloquent and thought-provoking

A lovely piece, both informative and artistic. I especially liked the way it began in Hul'qumi'num without translation, the sounds of the sea itself and the evocative almost plaintive rendition of God Save the King.

Comment for "Digital Diary: Berenice's Story from Ghana - Part 3"

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Review of Digital Diary: Berenice's Story from Ghana - Part 3

Berenice brings her world to life for listeners. I've just listened to the first three installments of her diary. I thought there were six and was greatly disappointed to have to stop after three. But presumably there are more coming. Berenice has a lovely voice for radio and her enthusiasm and sense of humour are very endearing. But there is more to this story than that. She is also thoughtful and articulate on serious issues such as the value of education and her concerns for the health and well being of rural children. The diary also makes some effective use of music and sound. I would like to hear more visual descriptions (like her friend's long eyelashes!) of the people and places she introduces her listeners to. I'm looking forward to the next installment!

Comment for "Unquiet Graves"

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Review of Unquiet Graves Memorial Day Special

I remember many years ago hitching a ride with a German truck driver across northern France. As we drove through seemingly endless fields of crimson poppies and bone white gravestones, iconic, almost dreamlike, I asked him, in my limited German, "Was ist das?". "Krieg", he answered, "War". We drove on in silence for a long long way, amidst the remains of our separate yet desperately linked histories. "Unquiet Graves" took me back to that time and place with its haunting juxtapositions of everyday life - food, flowers, conversations - and horror - bodies unearthed regularly to this day, one of them perhaps my own great-uncle, a pilot lost over France in 1917. The rich soundscape - music, a visit from a neighbour, a guided tour, the news from Iraq - and thoughtful narration make us realize how very much "over there" was with us then and is with us still.

Comment for "Ventana Backpacker Vox Pop"

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Review of Ventana Backpacker Vox Pop

An urgent message conveyed in a cheerful understated way. This short unpretentious piece features the voices of novice wilderness hikers. They sound friendly, laid back, not at all earnest, yet they talk about the loss of wilderness very convincingly. Perhaps that topic is almost too big and complex for such a simple piece, but it would be excellent as part of a series of short pieces on related topics, which, I think, is what its producer is working on.

Comment for "Finding Love in a Nevada Brothel"

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Review of Finding Love in a Nevada Brothel

Choosing tones from the PRX list of options - "sweet" - well, I would rather have said "touching" maybe or even "moving" but they weren't in the list. "Intriguing" - definitely. I've always wondered what ordinary life might be like in a brothel. "Inspiring" - it really is oddly inspiring to hear about the relationship between a lonely but decent trucker from Canada and a generous-hearted Nevada prostitute who describes herself as "a real people person". Not to mention Mom, the Madam, who looks after everybody, gives common sense advice to truckers in tears and makes sure the place has high standards of health and even higher levels of confidentiality. I also really liked the sound of this piece - not a lot of fancy sound effects, but just enough to give a sense of place. And, as luck would have it, both the trucker and the prostitute had great voices for radio. A really lovely piece!