Comments by Dmae Lo Roberts

Comment for "Holding On"

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Review of Holding On

You can't get much better than David Isay as producer and for that matter Susan Stamberg as host. The production is sound rich and lively. The stories are personal and unusual. I think the individual stories would work well in any news magazine but as a special it's an odd length (1:13:28). You might be able to take out a couple of pieces to create an hour special. The Longest Diary piece was too happy frantic OCD for me. The better Pullman Porter piece ends short but then it segues into one of the most beautiful and heart-wrenching pieces I've heard - Tossing Away the Keys about lifers in Angola Prison. That piece alone is worth the whole hour. The Bell Museum piece is a welcome relief to the emotions of the Keys piece and is a pleasant musical piece. The Castle Builder is more of a traditional NPR feature. The Mississippi Jews fares better as a slice of life documentary. The Marriage Broker was a nice light follow-up. Great music on Dr. Hepcat though who'd a thought hep would be so quaint? Joe Franklin falls into the frantic happy category for me though I was glad to learn that the Saturday Night Live skits were based on a real person. And frankly, I can live without the sound of fox hunting which is the final story. Should stations run this as a special? Perhaps... if you can make the formatting work and if you like all the pieces. Should they run most of the pieces as features? Certainly! It's all a matter of personal taste and there's a lot to choose from.

Comment for "Vietnam Bones"

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Review of Vietnam Bones

This is an intriguing and somewhat gruesome tale that reverberates now amid the ravages of war now. The practice of taking the bones of war enemies goes back to theft of Native American dead residing in modern day museums. But Deryk Patterson attempts to right the wrong of his father who stole the bones of a Viet Cong soldier. His effort leads him to question and makes some sort of sense about the reasons behind his father's actions. Can we ever understand the actions of a soldier in a war and the most horrific of violence? Was his father a hero? If so how could he take the remains of a human being as a souvenir of war? Producer Karen Brown does solid work here raising questions and offers several perspectives. A timely piece with the election and the discussion of "war heros" and current war we're in right now. I wonder how many "enemy" bones are out there sitting in American homes from wars past. There is a host intro that would need to edited out but this piece would work well on local news magazines.

Comment for "Babyquest"

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Review of Babyquest

Great interview. Great subject. The documentary elements flow nicely together with the trips to the fertility clinic, interviews with the woman's mom and scenes with the sperm donor friend. (Language advisory: Masterbating) This is a timely and worthy profile of an often heartbreaking phenomenon unique to baby-boom age women who waited to have babies. The main interviewee acts an engaging narrator--honest, articulate and speaking for a whole generation. I liked this piece a lot except for most of the music transitions. I would lose much of the music and only use it when needed. I liked the ending music though it cut out rather than fading out. This ran on NPR so of course it would work well on any magazine show. Fertility is certainly a topic that most listeners would relate to and should be heard. Good work.

Comment for "An American at Betty's"

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Review of An American at Betty's

An enjoyable piece. Definitely very English but that's the point. I've never had high tea explained so brilliantly or deliciously. Makes you quite hungry especially if you listen to it in the afternoon as I did. I don't know why Savvy didn't run it. I love the narrator and her accent. The only thing I was confused by was that it's described as an American at Betty's yet we hear the female narrator and then the male interviewer asking questions in the middler. But that can be explained with a proper host intro. This part essay, part food lesson would work well on magazine shows or as a drop-in during weekend programming.

Comment for "Election Signs"

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Review of Election Signs

Fun piece. Takes an upbeat look at the election through the art of graphic design. The main interview of the designer is puntuated with archival sound and music. My favorite quote from his talk is "people want to be different but not too different." That about sums up the 2004 election. More about packaging than substance. This piece would work well on any news magazine show and even though it ran on Studio 360, I think it has local appeal in this election year.

Comment for "Surrounded By Sage: A Native Son Falls for the Land He Left Behind"

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Review of Surrounded By Sage: A Native Son Falls for the Land He Left Behind

A thoughtful essay on the meaning of sagebrush in Guy Hand's life. Shows the effect that the land or in this case the vegetation can have on a person's life. For us in the Northwest, it's the big tall Evergreen trees. For Eastern Oregonians and Idahoans, it's the desert sagebrush. One tends to think of Tuscon or Deadwood when thinking of the sage but here's another view. Would work well in a news magazine format as a drop-in or essay.

Comment for "Toxic Trail: Rails to Trails Meets Superfund"

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Review of Toxic Trail: Rails to Trails Meets Superfund

Fine piece of environmental reporting. Producer Guy Hand follows the Trail of the Coeur d'Alenes in Idaho that's beautiful except that underneath he asphalt, there is toxic mining debris that nature lovers aren't as aware of as they should be. Sure there are a few signs that say "stay on the trail" or "wash hands before eating" but what does that really tell visitors and yes, even campers. Through essay-like descriptions and a variety of interview sources and outdoor ambiences, this piece draws you into a complicated issue by showing one example of which I'm sure there are many of deceptive Superfund sites. This short doc would work well on news magazine shows. It's a little longer than most features but well worth it.

Comment for "Sisters in Pain"

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Review of Sisters in Pain

It took a few minutes for me to get into this hour-long doc because we've all heard the statistics and have watched The Burning Bed and similiar movies that have dealt with the horrifying realities of domestic violence. But this fine production takes a look at the story of 13 battered women who were released from prison in a courageous act by Kentucky's Govenor Brereton Jones told in three riveting acts. The first act deals with the desperation and despair suffered by the women in life-threatening relationships with their abusers. The second act deals with their time in prison and the restorative effect of working together on a quilt that detailed their sorrow and pain. It was the creation of the guilt that caught the eyes of Governor Jones leading to his decision to release these women. The third act follows their release and their challenges and successes returning to society. I'm not surprised this doc won a Peabody. For anyone who says "we've done domestic violence pieces" -- you haven't done this one. An excellent special for any programmers especially for Women's History Month, Mother's Day, or even the holidays when so much domestic violence can occur... Kudos to these producers...

Comment for "Taking the SAT"

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Review of Taking the SAT

A solid feature piece on the value of the SATS from the perspective of a high school senior. Chris Waddy takes us throught he consideration and the stress he faces along with most students from SAT worry. He interviews a variety of sources from college admissions to an organization that's critical of SATS to a lawyer who tells him a low SAT score didn't affect his career succes. This would be a good feature for any news magazine particularly now with back-to-school shows or leading up to test taking time around the country.

Comment for "RN Documentary: Keeping the Peace"

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Review of RN Documentary: Keeping the Peace

What does it mean to be a peacekeeper? This doc takes on the difficult realities of the role of peacekeepers from the perspective of the Dutch army's presence in Afghanistan in 2002. This is a top-notch doc that gives a wide slice of life look with ample reflection on the realities while questioning the effectiveness of Keeping the Peace. What's refreshing is to hear the concern and sincere mission from the soldiers in re-building the country. Especially now in the time of conflict and violence in Iraq, this doc brings a much-needed prompt for debate and conscienceness raising regarding America's role as a peacekeeper. This half-hour doc would run as an excellent special especially with another Radio Netherlands piece. There are so many to choose from it would only take a quick scan of the titles to put together a great one-hour special.

Comment for "The life of mushing"

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Review of The life of mushing

Jim May is an articulate speaker and worthy of a profile. But the relentless pacing with no breathing space and the use of sound effects and music in the background detracts from what could be an insightful slice of life piece. I think this is worth re-doing simply to add a some breaths. I also wanted to hear sounds of mushing. This piece is called "The Life of Mushing" but where is the sound? I really want to hear him mushing. I want to hear his dogs and his relationship to them. He's a great storyteller but I want to be "showed" more than "told" what this life of mushing is like. This is not to say this piece wouldn't appeal as a monologue to some stations. But it's a bit long as a monologue and I think the subject would be better served with more documentary elements. I hope the producer will rework it because there is potential here.

Comment for "The Orphan Train"

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Review of The Orphan Train

I can't believe this piece hasn't aired... Producer Annie Wu has done a credible and creative job putting this historical documentary together with no narration. She lets the former orphans tell their stories with scholar descriptions and readings of historical letters and articles. Some of the readings aren't as professional or authentic sounding as some of the others but that didn't detract from this engaging near hour production. Someone simply must air this piece. Stations can air it as a special. I don't think it applies only to the East Coast. This doc lays an historical backdrop for current child welfare and foster care issues. It's short enough to run after NPR news breaks or after a shorter perhaps local feature that relates to this piece.

Comment for "Ask the Librarian: Will green tea treat my high blood pressure?"

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Review of Ask the Librarian: Will green tea treat my high blood press

I think this is great idea for a regular series. Librarians are underrated and perhaps the smartest people around. They can find an answer for any question and more efficiently than google. I love the opening music and Jackson Braider is a great host/narrator. The original description says though that it's a series of 3:30 pieces and I think that time would be better. This piece could be shortened a bit. Also, the mix between the narrator's voice and that of the librarian could be leveled out more. She sounded too much in the background. Still, this is a great module that could be aired as a stand alone piece or within a magazine show. I do think that there should be a version without the music and the SOQ out at the end rather than at the intro at the beginning. This would give the series more flexibility to be aired within magazines. I hope to hear more of these piece...

Comment for "Vegetarian for Dinner (es#73)"

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Review of Vegetarian for Dinner (es#73)

The folks at Ethically Speaking are to be commended for devoting themselves on this series that must often be a hardsell for stations. How novel and needed to have daily discussions on ethical living. Though I'm not sure that the music is needed throughout the two-minute segments, I do enjoy listening to the two discuss the right, the wrongs, the what should I do's about taking responsibility for one's actions and words. Modules are a hard sell too. But stations might consider slipping these into spots between music or talk programs. I think it would be good for the producers to consider producing a version without the music to make the modules fit more easily into any station format. Still kudos to anyone who considers the feelings of vegetarians....

Comment for ""On The Paris Coast""

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Review of "On The Paris Coast"

Others might get the humor but it wasn't broad or clear enough to me. It sounds like a bad interview show rather than a satire of it. It wasn't over-the-top enough till the very end and it sounds too much like improv chatter than clever wit. The problem is that it's off the cuff rather than structured as good talk shows need to be. I listened to another piece and came to the same conclusion. The production values are good however and I think the actors sound professional. I'd like to hear more intentional humor that goes over the edge more with a clearer direction. Not sure which stations would air these short pieces as is.

Comment for "Art of the Grotesque"

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Review of Art of the Grotesque

A solid arts feature. Great use of sound to give us visuals without telling us what we're listening to but letting us see it in our minds. Good explanation of the art of grostesque and its historic background. The entire story really makes you want to head right to Sante Fe's art scene and it's a good reminder that the cutting edge, the new movements in art aren't based on either coasts. This would work well on an arts magazine show particularly any stations around the SW region or on the West Coast--though I think it could work for any station that cares about the arts.

Comment for "Sawlady"

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Review of Sawlady

Delightful piece. Fun and well-produced. I've always been intrigued by people who make music from everyday objects, especially thought who have turned it into art. This is a Studio 360-type piece that's never been aired and I recommend it highly for news magazines or as a drop-in for musicshows. Only criticism is that it ends rather abruptly. I think it should have a tail of sound that trails off. It woud be good to upload a version of that.

Comment for "Boum!" (deleted)

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Review of Boum! (deleted)

This is a most unusual postcard. Don't expect a pastoral view of France here. This is Marjorie Van Halteren, one of the most inventive radio producers around. She's been living in France for the longest time and definitely has a non-tourist view of life abroad. Expect a wild ride with this piece. Great to air on news magazines especially after any international news for a different perspective of navigating through a country at peace after lunchtime...

Comment for "Luke Hurley"

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Review of Luke Hurley

New Zealand has a thriving arts scene and I hope we hear more about it from Producer Andrew Dubber. This half hour piece works well as an interview/music program. The production values are top-notch with the right mix of music and interview. However, it doesn't delve deeply enough for it to be a documentary. I would have liked to know more about Luke before he was a musician and what made him turn his back on his impending fame. The "mental illness" was probably depression but Luke didn't seem to know that nor did he seem to receive any treatment for it. He credits recording a new album for getting him out of the shadows but without knowing why he sunk into it in the first place one wonders if he will sink back. I was left wanting to know more and I think Luke is worthy subject for follow-up interviews if the producer would want to produce a documentary about him. As an interview program though this could be easily paired with another half-hour music program for a one-hour music special.

Comment for "OCCANEECHI POW WOW"

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Review of OCCANEECHI POW WOW

Native American culture is often consumed by mainstream America for its art, clothing, jewelry and spirituality, but in the last few years non-Natives have been heading to the Pow Wows and many nations have been opening up these events as cultural festivals for the general public. This piece gives us the insider perspective of the Pow Wow replete with sounds to help us experience it ourselves. This piece would fit in any news magazine program especially for station that do not presently do much Native American programming. An audio note: There is a two minute tale of music that would be great to end a magazine show with under final credits.

Comment for "RN Documentary: The Last Dutch Outpost - the Enduring Legacy of New Netherlands"

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Review of RN Documentary: The Last Dutch Outpost: the enduring legacy

Can't help thinking that this piece could have been more interesting than it is. This production has a "PBS-TV-style" to it. Lots of narration telling us about the history and experts talking. You imagine still shots cross-dissolving. The only problem is that this is radio and I'm not getting much in the way of pictures in my mind which is what a radio piece should do. That's not to say this isn't another well-produced piece by Radio Netherlands. Just not as imaginative as some of their other pieces. Yes, it's a history piece but it doesn't-- what's that phrase? Oh yes-- "make history come alive!" This just didn't happen for me with this piece. The last third was the most interesting regarding the British soldiers taking over the town. Perhaps if it had been condensed into a shorter feature, it might have worked better for me. It's still a solid half hour that could be paired with another Radio Netherlands piece. Also, realize I am coming from a West Coast perspective here and I suspect East Coast stations might have more of geographical connection to this history, especially those in NY state. Give a listen and judge for yourself...

Comment for "Musicians in their own words: Summertime 2004 tour kit"

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Review of Musicians in their own words: Summertime 2004 tour kit

This is a great series. The music and interviews are so beautifully recorded and mixed. Lovely, just lovely work by Producer David Schulman. The only slight exception is the David Byrne piece that sounds like it was recorded in a very "live" room. The Byrne piece has a different sound from the rest of the pieces featured. But overall the content of the interviews brings out nicely nuanced stories about the process of creating art and the personal motivations behind the artist. These pieces can be aired as short pieces within news programs or as a half-hour. Tight host intros and outros have been neatly provided. This is a well-thought out production and quite useful for cities that are hosting these musicians in their hometown. Schulman even provides a touring schedule! Is this guy organized or what? Stations, programmers, check this out...

Comment for "Fight the Bush"

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Review of Fight the Bush

Maybe it's because I just saw Fahrenheit 9/11 and I'm still reeling from the idiotic statements captured on film of our President, but I liked this piece. Feels like a perfect companion to any movie reviews of Michael Moore's work or just as a release from the day to day grim news topics. It's not exactly funny but it has a lightness to it and was fun to listen to. We need more commentary that isn't about people telling us their thoughts but about using the sound and the sound bytes all around us to make us think and draw our own conclusions.

Comment for "Riverside Church Barber"

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Review of Riverside Church Barber

This is a good local piece. It needs work to be a national level piece. Here are obstacles to this becoming a great piece. First. Ambience. It clips on and off rather than continuing under the reporter trax and a number of the actualities are clipped sounding too abrupt coming in and out especially the ending which needed ambience to trail off. Second. Narration. Too reporter-ish. This is a feature that's crying out to really get to know this Barber and the narration signals this is an "objective" news approach rather than an intimate documentary approach. The content of this piece is worth working on another version. I suggest finding ways to limit the narration and letting the subjects tell their own stories more. Also, look at the adjectives chosen to describe the piece..."inspiring, sentimental and This American Life-esque." So far, it's none of those....But it could be. Definitely worth working on this piece more...

Comment for "Reclaiming Islam: A Woman's Perspective"

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Review of Reclaiming Islam: A Woman's Perspective

This is a good series and the producers are to be commended for taking on Arabic content from a woman's perspective not just with with this piece but with a prior piece "Lolita Unveiled" also on PRX. The production values are high and I like this narrator though at times I think the overall piece could use less compression. But that's nitpicking. I found this an engaging and thoughtful piece and partnering it with Lolita and perhaps some of their other pieces would make a great half-hour or one-hour special for any station concerned with Middle Eastern topics. I hope to hear more from Producers Laura Jackson and Betsy Morgan.

Comment for "Fresh Direct to Honduras"

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Review of Fresh Direct to Honduras

Simply put this producer is good. How refreshing to hear a sound rich reporter piece. Sylvia Maria Gross has put together an engaging and highly listenable piece with a variety of sources and sounds. She handles the tranlation voice-overs quite well, better than I've heard on national shows. And it's a fascinating immigrant story detailing the physical connection families have to homelands by sending actual goods to loved ones they left behind. This piece also shows the disparity in the standard of living through the telling of the personal connection in shipping goods. This piece would work well on any news magazine show though perhaps it's longer than the usual reporter piece. Any station with immigrant communities, (and isn't that all of them really?), would do well to air this piece. I don't think this is a uniquely NYC feature. Most communities would have a connection to this piece.

Comment for "Mami Basketball"

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Review of Mami Basketball

A novel twist on the basketball story with Mexican mothers in the Bronx who take over the courts every afternoon to shoot some hoops. Basketball is traditionally a woman's game in Mexico and these women in the Bronx sound quite experienced. This piece highlights the cultural and gender clashes on the courts between the moms and the kids. Great sound, great interviews. The only criticism is focusing more on the women and finding out more about them and their world outside of basketball. But a great feature for news magazines especially for the summer.

Comment for "Korea: The Unfinished War"

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Review of Korea: The Unfinished War

Another fine production from American Radio Works. This sound rich documentary looks at the often forgotten war - a war that is has never been resolved. Producersn Stephen Smith and John Biewen examine what made the Korean War specific and unusual in history through rare archival sound and interviews from soldiers both white and black who fought in this war. The only thing missing for me was the perspective of South Koreans who also fought and died. Perhaps that's too much to cover in an already complex documentary. The reporting however is top-notch as are the production values. Though the obvious choice is to run it on Memorial Day, this doc would work well anytime as a special for any station.

Comment for "Nightfall in Chester County"

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Review of Nightfall in Chester County

NIGHTFALL

Another great piece from Helen Borten. I'm very impressed with her whole series this comes from her series - A Sense Of Place. This tale of the once oppressed now oppressing is universal and gives thought. Nightfall takes you to may sides of the clash of Quaker farmers and the migrant workforce that attempts to unionize. It's great to hear a documentary with so much sound material of events actually happening - a "you are there" rather than a "I'm telling you what happened" approach. My only question is does this piece need to be updated with an outro? I'm not sure how long ago this piece was made and it might help if the producer could put an outro that would let stations know if this is still an ongoing problem in Chester County or somehow give an update to the piece. Otherwise, stations would do well to look at running this piece with other A Sense of Place pieces to create a great one-hour special during the summer.

Comment for "Summer Camp"

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Review of Summer Camp

What a delightful piece and perfect for stations to air during the summer. The camp experience is something young and old can relate to and Borten brings together voices of all age ranges to describe and recreate the joys and challenges of summer camp. This is and sound collage at its best and would work well with another of Borten's half hour pieces to create a great summer special.