Comments by Dmae Lo Roberts

Comment for "Venice At 100: A Touch of Eden"

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Review of Venice At 100: A Touch of Eden

This is a solid history of Venice Beach during the last hundred years. Certainly no other part of LA holds the fun exotic and celebratory qualities like Venice Beach. I would like ot have heard more of that quality in the evolution of this historic site from a city on its own right to what it is now. There isn't a sense of fun or celebration in this documentary. It is an entirely factual report. Perhaps that's my own bias but a place that has the reputation of Venice needs to for my ears to be more...fun. I liked the use of Orson Wells' A Touch of Evil in the piece and the archival recordings if Hoppy-Land, Hopalong Cassidy's amusement park. We needed more stories like this. There are also some slight pops and clipping of ambience and interview cuts. Yet I do recommend this piece for regional use by stations. California residents would especially find this piece of interest.

Comment for "Rebecca's Name"

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Review of Rebecca's Name

This is not a piece. The major problem is it's a cut of a phone interview. While the story is interesting and it might have made a great piece, it's really unusable as is. Phone interviews are only okay on a local level for a talk show or for breaking news on a national level. Sometimes a producer might want to use a phone interview for dramatic effect. Say you want to call someone while telling the story to check in or if it's phone messages or if the piece is about the phone. But this is something that many producers on PRX have to understand. Why would a station license a phone interview? They can do their own phone interviews if needed. I'm sad to say this because I listened to Jenny Asarnow's other pieces and she shows promise. I just can't recommend this piece to stations.

Comment for "Revisiting Death of a Salesman"

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Review of Revisiting Death of a Salesman

A solid and tightly written and delivered commentary about the personal impact Authur Miller's "Death of a Salesman." The commentator has a straighforward and urgent approach that makes you want to hear what he has to say. This piece would work well as an intro to any Aurther Miller works by LA Theatreworks or as a piece to commemorate Mr. Miller's passing. Certainly there are productions of this great playwright's work in anytown, USA with a public radio station. This commentary would be a great way to highlight a town's production of "A Death of a Salesman" perhaps with a ticket giveaway or some other type of cross-promotion.

Comment for "A View from the Bridge" (deleted)

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Review of A View from the Bridge (deleted)

This is top-notch theatre. Not radio theatre but stage theatre though it's great radio theatre too. There's just nothing better than a script by Arthur Miller, gifted veteran actors and engaging taut direction. What a treat. I never knew that Ed O'Neil (from Married With Children fame) could pull off such a riveting performance as an uncle obsessed with his neice. Mary McDonnell, the Greer Garson of the 21st century, is phenomenal as the tormented wife. This production of "A View From The Bridge" is like listening backstage on Broadway. It moves, draws you in and spins you around inside. Sometimes it's funny and it's a bit disconcerting to hear the audience laughter. But this is the stage. You never know what's going to happen. I can't imagine a better staging for radio of this prize play. Yes, it's two hours, but find a time in the evening and promote the heck out of it. With the two other productions, "The Crucible" and "Broken Glass" make an Arthur Miller festival. I can't believe that no media has honored one of America's greatest playwrights this way. Let radio accept the clarion call and honor this great writer with airing these productions.

Comment for "Pullman Porters and the Making of the Black Middle Class" (deleted)

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Review of Pullman Porters and the Making of the Black Middle Class (deleted)

I really like these interviews. There are two different ones but they fit together and would make a good Black History Month special. The information on the creation by George Pullman of the tradition of Pullman porters is just fascinating and perhaps the most comprehensive to date. Especially poignant is the listing of the many famous African Americans who are descendants of Porters. The second half (after an entertaining movie for grownups piece) is about the apalling poverty and health conditions of children in Africa. I like hearing about doctors who dedicate their lives to healing especially in third world conditions. This is as good as any Fresh Air show. The two halves are also pretty complete you could choose to air the whole hour for break it up into halves quite easily.

Comment for "Buster & SpongeBob in Love"

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Review of Buster & Spongebob In Love

This is definitely not for children. Producer Jonathan Mitchell has created a funny and kinda sick incredibly slick piece out of the Sponge Bob shows. It's the kind of the thing you'd see on the Daily Show and I wish there were an outlet on public radio for it. Made me laugh in a disturbing "am I going insane?" kind of way. Maybe college stations would be daring enough to play this piece. Great sound and well put together. Stations if you can't air this one, check out other pieces by Mr. Mitchell. He's one of our best....

Comment for "Listening at the Border"

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Review of Listening at the Border

Now this is great radio! But it needs more work. As is, what a compelling first person narrative of a military linguist who listens to radio transmissions from North Korea all day long. So many elements to make this a great piece: the storyteller interviewee, the radio transmissions and compelling sound design. Right now though it's an intriguing piece that's too long. And the ending leaves you hanging. A bit of the synth tone used during the piece would have added nicely to the end. But I want to encourage the producer to offer a 7-8 minute version of this. I think that it would make it more appealing for stations to include in their news magazines. I say keep the longer version here as well but offer a shorter module, too. I can easily hear this piece paired with international and military stories. This is a debut piece so I encourage stations to check it out.

Comment for "Bronze Metal - A Sculptural Catharsis" (deleted)

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Review of Bronze Metal - A Sculptural Catharsis (deleted)

This piece really didn't come alive till midway when the actual sound of the foundry and the sculpture creation started happening. It's really much too long for an arts feature with so little happening. The piece could really be cut in half the amount of time and start with the sound of the foundry to tease us into listening to the rest of the info about how to create the sculpture. The producer has a good voice and genuine delivery so it wasn't a matter of the reporter but of the content being too lengthy when we really needed to be "shown" more the process of the artist going about his work. That is the most interesting. I'd rather hear the artist talk about their creation and hearing the sounds while they're working rather than a reporter describing it. At this point, I don't hear this on stations without another edit unless it's a specific art program that would have 13 minutes to spare. I would encourage the producer to do a shorter version because he obviously has talent and it would be worth it to make this piece appealing to other stations.

Comment for "RN Documentary: Misunderstanding Islam"

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Review of RN Documentary: Misunderstanding Islam

This documentary should be heard by everyone in America. We don't understand Islam. We have many ideas of what we think it is but more often than not we are relying on stereotyes and misconceptions. Radio Netherlands has created another outstanding documentary with "Misunderstanding Islam" and though it deals with Muslims in Holland, there is much we can learn here about. Producer and narrator Dheera Sujan brings a personal approach to this discussion with experts and thinkers. I highly recommend this doc paired with another Radio Netherlands doc for a complete one-hour special.

Comment for ""The Open Door" Modules" (deleted)

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Review of "The Open Door" (deleted)

These are two-minute meditations in spirituality done in a completely inviting and non-invasive approach--almost a module form of New Dimensions. The Open Door has cool music and a warm host and honestly the cuts of the featured speakers do give you a lot to think about as you go through your day. I listened to the three modules and found each one thought-provoking. What a great way to start off the day after the plague of bad news we listen to every morning. One little module that gives hope and introspection would make heading out through that door more what? Open? I encourage stations to listen to The Open Door modules and use them as drop-ins, and I encourage the producers to start making a lot more modules so stations can start programming them!

Comment for "Dr. Pong"

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Review of Dr. Pong

This piece isn't as successful as I 'd like it to be and I think it has limited appeal for an American audience. Though the music thread keeps it moving, there isn't enough substance to warrant a full feature piece on this guy. Yes, he's an American who emigrated and started a ping pong bar in Berlin. Okay that's strange so why not go into more depth? What makes him want to be in Berlin? Why table tennis? Why a bar? What do Berliners think of ping pong? What do Berliners think of this guy? Let's hear from the patrons. Let's hear the game with 20 people playing at the same time rather than hear him describe it. This piece needs another edit before it's even close to ready for an American radio audience.

Comment for "The Coney Island Pier"

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Review of The Coney Island Pier

You're either gonna love or hate this piece. You'll either make room on the radio for it or not know what to make of it. Producers such as Seth Lind are good for us to hear. His film background urges him to play with sound differently than we do as radio producers. To the casual listener this piece makes no sense. It's full of rich evocative underscoring and stream of consciousness narrative that doesn't have a beginning, middle or end. It's more of a rich layered soundtrack for a film that we need to visualize in our minds. We're not told what we're supposed to be thinking or hearing - it just is. And because of that, I don't hear this having much airplay for most radio stations. Perhaps a college station. Perhaps a late nite drop-in between Echoes and Hearts of Space. This is the kind of piece you used to like to get drunk or (dare I say it?) do drugs to listen to like Dark Side of the Moon to make up your head movies. Are we past all that on good "old" public radio? I wonder...

Comment for "Sweet Phil from Sugar Hill"

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Review of Sweet Phil from Sugar Hill

Now here's a little gem of a personal piece. Producer Phyllis Fletcher has put together a charmer - poignant, hopeful and funny - about her father who had 14 children with 13 different mothers. Fletcher goes in search of and connects with many of her siblings while we hear letters from her father read by her eldest brother. This is one provocative piece that begs questions about family life, relationships and the different paths a person can take. Although I could have done without the constant music tracks and let the piece breathe more, I would recommend this half-hour piece as a special for Black History Month, Women's History Month and definitely Father's Day.

Comment for "Don Hunter, Cataloger of Sounds"

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Review of Don Hunter, Cataloger of Sounds

A piece about sound should start off with sound. Instead this piece saves its best sound for a montage at the very end. A piece about a sound recordist might have been more creative and make use of collage and montage more within the piece. Reporter Angela Kellner shows promise but this piece needs one more edit and restructuring. Right now it's a straight forward report that almost puts the subject on a bit of a pedestal rather than examining the nooks and quirks of a man whose hobby is recordiing unusual sounds. The actualities are also a bit hissy, and the ambience hiss is clipped. The montage at the end would have been better mixed into the piece rather than ending with the non-stellar slide show. This piece could have been cut down to a seven to eight minute story at most with more creative use of sound. There is a minute of music at the top and a host intro that needs to be edited out if any station wants to air this piece.

Comment for "Electronic Stethoscope"

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Review of Electronic Stethoscope

A solid report on an intriguing history -- the creation of the stethoscope. Producer Catherine Welch does a credible job tracing the development of an important medical instrument. I enjoy pieces about little known history of something we take for granted. She has a variety of voices (one phoner unfortunately) and strong writing that keeps the listener thinking. There is a soq out for KBIA News which might need to be edited out. In future to make the modules more attractive to stations, producers might want to change their outcues to be more generic, "I'm...." This piece would work well on health or medical shows or news magazines that might want to follow up with local health stories. It's very evergreen and would interest most listeners.

Comment for "Trauma and Recovery: A Cambodian Refugee Experience"

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Review of Trauma and Recovery: A Cambodian Refugee Experience

Producer Karen Brown has created a well-thought-out documentary from varied perspectives updating the experiences of Cambodian refugees from the Killing Fields to present. This award-winning half-hour examines in great detail the post-traumatic stress of refugees who survived the genocide of the Khmer Rouge. Most Americans know little of these horrors beyond the movie the Killing Fields. This documentary not only gives voice to the survivors but sheds light on the attempts to heal through Western mental health care and Buddhist spirituality. There isn't any other documentary or piece about Cambodia or Cambodian Americans on PRX. I highly recommend this important piece to air any time.

Comment for "Art of the Song #6 with Cosy Sheridan" (deleted)

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Review of Art of the Song with Cosy Sheridan (deleted)

Pleasant and well-produced program. I don't generally like folk music shows but this one kept my attention. The music simply sounds great. The hosts are professional and informed. The intro delivery by hosts could be slowed down a bit though. A llittle fast. The interview flowed nicely interspersed with music cuts. It's half talk, half music and well-balanced with both. The producers could provide more info about the guest - a bio perhaps - would be good to provide on the page. Detailed description would help stations to decide to preview the programs in the series. These one-hour programs would work well during folk music slots especially as specials.

Comment for "A Cook's Notebook: The Madonna's Eyes"

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Review of A Cook's Notebook: The Madonna's Eyes

This series of thoughtful essays by Ali Berlow would work as drop-ins during morning edition or weekend programs especially during the holiday season. An intro and outro would be needed because there's no tag or outcue. These are well-written and softly spoken reflections using food as metaphor for life and living.

Comment for "Astonishing variety of Lewis&Clark kitsch on display" (deleted)

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Review of Astonishing variety of Lewis&Clark kitsch on display (deleted)

I love stories about small town museums run almost as mom and pop places. Here is an unusual one in Ilwaco, WA that's more off-beat than the unsual Lewis and Clark Celebration stories. The collection features kitsch from prior decades and celebrations. Great comments by the curators describing the Sacagawea candy bar and Lewis and Clark gin and vodka labels. Plenty of sounds complete this fun piece. Takes you right there and makes you want to see it for yourself. Would make a great drop-in for morning edition cutaways or local magazines.

Comment for "Paul Winter Consort and the Sounds of Nature"

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Review of Paul Winter Consort and the Sounds of Nature

A great non-holiday winter piece. This piece would work well anytime in December though it's suggested for Winter Solstice. The music is lovely in this solid arts feature featuring Paul Winter
elaborating on his music and use of animal sounds. The five minutes flew by for me and I wanted more. I would suggest following up this piece with another cut of Paul Winter music and ending a local magazine show with that tail of music for it's closing credits. Or as a drop-in between Paul Winter songs.

Comment for "Scaring Ourselves to Death: Conquering Fear in a Time of Terror" (deleted)

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Review of Scaring Ourselves to Death: Conquering Fear in a Time of Ter (deleted)

This is an important piece especially in light of the fear factor that resulted in the recent presidential election. Since 9/11 the terror threat has been a daily presence in American lives. But this piece addresses how not to let that fear rule us. The opening is a complex and effective montage that sets up a couple of straight-forward interviews with the host. I felt enlightened listening to this show and spot checked some of the other shows in this series. Stations would do well to check these shows out. I think they would work well in the evenings or weekends or as a noontime thought show. I far prefer this format to Talk of the Nation.

Comment for "Stories of Love and Marriage at the Towers"

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Review of Stories of Love and Marriage at the Towers

This is the second time I've listened to this piece and it's still fresh. A lovely, lovely piece. Moving and poignant amid the post 9/11 reality. This originally aired on NPR's All Things Considered for Valentine's Day but this piece could air during the holidays as well. It's about love after all. Enduring and memorable. I could see famillies gathered around the radio listening to this during Thanksgiving or the winter holidays. There is an intro and outro that would need to be edited out for local broadcast. But it would be worth taking the time...

Comment for "What's the Word? Literary Feasts"

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Review of What's the Word? Literary Feasts

For those who haven't seen the movies, "Like Water For Chocolate" and "Babette's Feast," this half-hour piece might be a satisfying meal discusing the books from which these books came. But for those who have, there might be a sense that there isn't much new material in this documentary. Some people might have the opposite reaction and love the discussion of the familiar scenes from these sumptuous films inspired by sumptuous books. In general, this series would be more appealing for the over 50 crowd. It's an old-style production - very straight forward and literary. This series could very easily follow EuroQuest or Radio Netherlands half-hour docs.

Comment for "I Write the Songs That Make Your Cell Phone Ring"

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Review of I Write the Songs That Make Your Cell Phone Ring

I really can't see stations running this piece. It's a phone interview and though the interviewer is skilled, it's just a basic phone interview that could use another round of editing. Nothing stellar. The subject doesn't warrant an eleven minute phone quality piece. While this could have made an interesting feature with sound (we're talking about jingle tones for cell phones here) this just isn't all that interesting as is and I can't see a station paying to run this as opposed to conducting their own phone interview.

Comment for "Elephants and Sex"

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Review of Elephants and Sex

Air this piece right now. Especially now. Can't believe it hasn't aired anywhere. Producer Karen Michel has created a provocative, sound-rich report on the sexual habits of Republicans during the convention. Not exactly scandalous but it isn't what you normally hear about conservatives though hey please this shouldn't be a surprise. Michel went to several sex clubs - amazing - and got people to talk - even more amazing! There is an NPR news tag on the story which would need to be cut to air locally. So stations might cut out the Outcue and back announce the producer credit. This is fun, upbeat and makes you ponder. Might be an unsual way to balance all the pro-Bush victory rhetoric on mainstream media now.

Comment for "The Gathering - A Modern Thanksgiving Story"

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Review of The Gathering - A Modern Thanksgiving Story

An unusual and thought-provoking Thanksgiving special. I love the sound of the fire crackling while people are talking reflectively about the meaning of giving thanks and the relationships between Indian and white communities. This holiday I usually call "Genocide Day" but this program brings about the true meaning or what should be the true meaning of what ought to be a day of reflection rather than feasts and football. The producers did an admiral job of creating a native talk circle for the radio, and I encourage stations to run this instead of a more traditional Thanksgiving special. This is the kind of thing you want playing while families are sitting to dinner. Very inspiring....

Comment for "Funding Spot:Tossing Away the Keys, with Dave Isay"

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Review of Funding Spot:Tossing Away the Keys, with Dave Isay

This is an effective and inventive fundraising spot. Stations could use these pieces during pledgedrives quite easily. They could also use this as a model to create their own fundraisiung spots. Listeners need to hear the personal stories behind producing great radio to understand why becoming a member is so important. Take a listen to these...

Comment for "B-Side: Jobs"

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Review of B-Side: Jobs

To dismiss this series as a youth or student production would be a great disservice to the talented producers of B-Side. This is clearly a creative labor of love with the highest production values. The stories are intriguing and I applaud the artistic use of sound. Some of the stories however are better than others and the pieces move so quickly from one to the other that it can be jarring. Most of the stories are engaging though I think I've heard too many Elvis as a joke stories. The blood and guts clean-up guy in particular should not be played at any mealtime. These shows are crying out for an editor. A decision needs to be made either to take us on a journey with depth, meaning and some sort of throughline or to do away with the magazine structure entirely and give us the scavenger hunt adventure. The show uses structure and a theme but without a clear purpose or intent. We are left wondering why we want to listen to these stories. If we're meant to hear oddball stories then go for it. If there is something to be gained from the people we are encountering in this production, then helps us understand what that is. That said I eagerly await more productions from the B-Side. This is refreshing radio and a station could choose to pair two of the half-hours (of which there are many) to make a special you aren't likely to hear anywhere else.

Comment for "Silent Movie: A Radio Story" (deleted)

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Review of Silent Movie: A Radio Story (deleted)

A fascinating topic for sound artists but I wonder how it would fare for a general audience. Producer Aaron Henkin has created a lovely sound mix for this piece, and it really is enlivening to hear how music is being created for silent movies such as Ben-Hur. At 9:35, it's a bit on the long side. I think cutting it down to 7-8 minutes would help its listenability and would make it more attractive to stations wanting to run it on news magazines or drop-ins during music programs.

Comment for "The Economist Swing-State Reports: Arkansas"

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Review of The Economist Swing-State Reports: Arkansas

A solid political essay if you don't mind a BBC-type voice commenting on American politics. Stations could air this on news magazines. There are commentaries offereed on all the swing states so it might be interesting to stations to hear one on their state and possibly air a local essay as a comparisan and alternative perspective. The producers offer this piece with/without music and intro to make it easier to include in local news magazines or as drop-ins.