Comments by Dmae Lo Roberts

Comment for "Novelist and Essayist Mary Gordon" (deleted)

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Review of Novelist and Essayist Mary Gordon (deleted)

This interview is not as sucessful as a prior one I heard on this show. Unless you're familiar with a writer, it's important to give listeners a few hooks or a specific angle to help us appreciate their writing. I didn't get enough of that for a half-hour interview and frankly I would have turned it off were I not reviewing it. That's not to say Mary Gordon is not worthy of a feature or a shorter interview but I didn't know enough about her to help me want to keep listening. She's got some great insight into the writing process so maybe more of that angle would have helped. Her readings of her essays just didn't sustain interest for me though her personal insights about her parents and difficulties for women writers would have been worthy of more probing. Also, I said this in a prior review but that opening music just has to go. It's not that exciting and it goes on way too long. Unless a station's listeners are followers of Mary Gordon, I don't see this show having a broad appeal.

Comment for "The Amethyst Cowboy (2005) (Audio Drama)"

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Review of Hannah Montana: The Amethyst Cowboy

Hannah Montana is a lighthearted fun gal, and I'd love to hear more with her character. She's straight-shooting and not a sellout. Producer Shabbir Hassan shows a great deal of promise in these series of radio theatre he's produced on PRX. They are fun drop-ins of short theatre that could break up a humdrum day especially during the summer. This one is a bit more successful than some of the other pieces though it's still more presentational in acting style than I'd like. But it's got good production values for the most part. Some of the sound effects are too abstract but in general the sound design is pretty darn good. I liked the antismoking and anti-selliing out theme of this radio play. I'm pretty tough on radio theatre and these short films for the radio are intriguing and not the usual hokey stuff you often hear as radio plays. I'd recommend a listen. Might take some creativity in programming but they will definitely catch listeners' ears.

Comment for "A Better Father"

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Review of A Better Father

This is not your heartwarming sentimental Father's Day piece. In fact, this riveting monologue by the gravelly voiced Dave Masch is gut-wrenching and hits you right where it hurts. Who couldn't relate to the pain of a parent making mistakes with their child? The generational lessons and losses in this short and riveting piece are immense. It should be played for every father and teenage son possible. While this is slated for Father's Day, I think it would be appropriate for any special show about parenting and generational relationships. Beware though, the story about the death of the rabbits is not geared for younger listeners at all. I think it would take some finessing by stations to make this work in a larger context. But it would be well worth it.

Comment for "Overweight Kids in California"

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Review of Overweight Kids in California

There's no question that obesity is a national problem. This piece adresses this problem by taking a look at one family's efforts to help their son lose weight by making it a family project and goal. Often families don't understand that the entire family has to change its lifestyle in order for effective weight loss. Not an easy undertaking but this piece does offer positive information that families across the country would find useful. This piece would play well in any state for any station's news magazine.

Comment for "Married to the Military"

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Review of Married to the Military

What a timely and needed documentary. American Radio Works consistently does exceptional work and Married to the Military is another proud entry in its library of docs. This piece by Producer John Biewen traces the lives of women whose husbands are in Iraq. Through diary entries, interviews and field recordings of protests, reunions and daily life, Biewen explores the complexities and stresses of military families and towns that host military bases. At times poignant, even funny but mostly thoughtful, Married to the Military gives us insight into a culture and lifestyle that one can only know if lived. This one-hour documentary hosted by the always engaging Deborah Amos would make a great July 4th special though I'm afraid it will be timely throughout the duration of the war in Iraq. This piece offers a viewpoint that listeners will find intriguing and I highly recommend it for broadcast.

Comment for "The Legacy and Lessons of Lewis & Clark (an hour-long special)"

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Review of The Legacy and Lessons of Lewis & Clark (an hour-long special)

Veteran Producer Jill Hoyt has created a memorable and thorough examination of the legacies of Lewis and Clark. In four different sections of this well-produced one-hour documentary, we hear about the effects the expedition had on Western expansion and the resulting conquest and exploitation of Native Americans. None of this is preachy or accusatory. In fact, there is a gentle strength to this production that brings together poignant and intriguing stories from scholars and historians. Especially poignant is the last section that asks the question, "What would Lewis and Clark have thought about the resulting actions of their famed expedition?" The answers are revealing and thought-provoking. This documentary is a welcome counterpoint to many Lewis and Clark celebration pieces and one that is highly recommended by this reviewer. Jill Hoyt is one of our best producers who has been doing national work out of Idaho for lo these many years. Her work in this documentary is exceptional.

Comment for "The Lost Colonies :How Jamestown Beat the Odds"

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Review of The Lost Colonies?:How Jamestown Beat the Odds

A rather upbeat Marketplace-type piece on how we're not French. In this short 2:30 piece, Producer Nancy King gives background on how all the early colonies had to find something to trade in order to survive. Early colonies might well have been French or Spanish than English if colonies such as Jamestown hadn't found a product they could send back to England and thus keep themselves commercially viable. This is a different kind of 4th of July piece that gives thought to the funding or our founding fathers. An entertaining and informational drop-in for stations...

Comment for "Up Close and Personal ? The Psychological Aspects of Skin and Its Relationship to Our Sense of Self" (deleted)

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Review of Up Close and Personal — The Psychological Aspects of Skin and Its Relationship to Our Sense of Self (deleted)

I'm very surprised that this is being distributed by PRI. First off there's the funding credit from Clinique. It has the appearance of a conflict of interest that a skin care and cosmetic company is the sole funder of this program. The funding credit is mentioned with a promotional tag line that might sound too much like a commercial for many stations. I know that stations agonize over the wording of their own underwriting so this might be a problem for distribution. That aside the production and technical style of this one-hour is inconsistent. While there is good info and some interesting ways to think about what our skin means to us, I found the phone interview tape quite often distorted. In fact much of the program is distorted. That in of itself should be looked at. Perhaps there was a problem uploading it onto PRX. It was quite clear that the host wasn't in fact doing many of the interviews on the show and his questions were added in a later studio session. That's just too much manipulation for me. I would have preferred a documentary approach to this one hour rather than a magazine style. Just doesn't work as is with two hosts and all the phone interviews and the bad technical quality. This program sadly is not recommended.

Comment for "Movin' Out the Bricks"

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Review of Movin' Out the Bricks

Coco's story is rather riveting. At first some of the transitions felt slow to me. I started to get really depressed when it seemed like she was going to make a bad life choice and move out of her new home rather than change her lifestyle. But then she turned it around and started to meet the challenges, and I found myself rooting for her. That's the mark of a great piece when you get personally involved in the person's story. Producers Dan Colliison and Elizabeth Meister interweaves this hero's journey with tenderness, car and professionalism. It's the small stories that can often be bigger than the headlines of the day. This is no exception. Stations would do well to check out "Movin' Out the Bricks" as a special with another of the Home Place Series half hours. This is really fine work. I'm still rooting for Coco...

Comment for "Memorial Day"

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Review of Memorial Day

Too bad this piece didn't come out before the holiday. I think this would work for Flag Day or 4th of July as well. The beauty of PRX is that it is accessible to a wide variety of producers from all over the world. Sometimes you get crap but more often you find potential gems like this piece. In all its simplicity this piece works like a series of still frames. The producer and narrator is as natural as they come describing what he sees around him and capturing the sounds around him. There are some technical problems that could easily be cleaned up. The narration has a buzz that should be eq'ed out. And the ambiences need to be crossfaded rather than edited. Ambience should also be kept under the narration to smooth out the transitions. Some of the field recordings have touches of distortion. Not quite but enough to alert the ear. I'd encourage the producer to rework this piece and smooth it out more. Still I found this a moving and compelling piece. I'd like to hear more from this producer.

Comment for "Different Colors, Same Family"

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Review of Different Colors, Same Family

Is Maine really the whitest state in the country? Somehow I'd like some stats on that. None-the-less, this is a pretty important piece. Not a lot of stories about transracial adoptions. As more and more adoptees are coming of age, awareness of cultural and personal identity is being more fully examined. Adopting parents are quite earnest and sincere about providing cultural ties and education for their children. This story shows three different families at different stages of their family life. Producer Elizabeth Chur has done a credible job shedding life on the changing face of families in America. This piece would tie into any community as more and more parents are looking to other cultures and countries to complete their families.

Comment for "Gravity" (deleted)

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Review of Gravity (deleted)

I really like these modules. Who wouldn't want to have mind-bending conversations with a scientist? It's like dropping into the professor's study to chat about the natural world. The two converationalists draw you in and the effect is thoughtful and fun. I could hear these pieces for Earth Day drop-ins or for June 5th's World Environment Day or anytime during the summer when we're out and about in the outdoors. It would be great to hear these pieces while gardening or on the way to a hiking trail. A couple things would make these pieces better technically. The announcer at the top and end is mixed at a higher level than the conversationalists. Also, the bird sounds don't work for me throughout the whole piece. Ideally it would be good to use them as a sonic id with the anouncer and then fade them out when the discussion starts. You could bring them back up again for the end credits. I don't know what the intent is for the bird sfx. Is it to make us think they're outside talking about this? If so, it doesn't work. They are clearly in the studio. If you want that sound then you need to record discussions out in the natural world. And getting rid of the ums, uhs, and uh-huhs would be a good idea. That's just too relaxed sounding to my ear. Still I think these pieces are wonderful drop-ins and I encourage stations to check them out especially as the summer approaches

Comment for "Dying for Water: Indians, Politics and Dead Fish in the Klamath River Basin"

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Review of Dying for Water: Indians, Politics and Dead Fish in the Klamath River Basin

This is a great piece of work. The piece isn't just another environmental documentary. "Dying For Water" weaves cultural stories, myth, history, science and even Scotland into this sound rich tapestry. The interviews are authentic and intriguing. Great voices and there is humor as well. Not your usual fare when talking about endangered species. I love the traditional singing though I had trouble with the sound level of the singer/guitarist. She probably would have been better miked further away. It was a bit off putting. The host grew on me. At first I found him intrusive after hearing these great textured voices and wonderful archival reports from Native America Calling. But after a while I got used to his casual and friendly delivery. I just wanted him to link the other voices and topics more and follow the mood of the documentary more. Still great stuff and highly recommended. Stations in the Northwest and California should really take a listen to this piece. Salmon is one of our very pertinent concerns and this exploration by Hoopa Tribal Radio is a contender.

Comment for "Now You MOMbo: Hour 4/ Moms Acting Up/ School" (deleted)

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Review of Now You MOMbo: Hour 4/ Moms Acting Up/ School (deleted)

A slick, well produced, light-hearted and deep hour magazine show that puts a face on mom activism. This show is for stay at home, working and friends of moms everywhere. Host Nancy Olesen is like one of the long lost Satellite Sister. Articulate, warm and a great conversationalist. To discount this show as just a special for Mother's Day would not do this show justice. Important issues are discussed here. No it's not the earth shattering news of the day but the real trials and tribulations of everyday listeners who have committed to child rearing and could use some help, support and recognition. I do wish there was less poetry and commentary but more of Olesen's compelling interviews or some produced feature stories. Now the problem for stations to air these shows. There are only five of these shows on PRX. I don't know if there are more. MOMbo is structured as a weekly show. The only thing I can think is to schedule a whole week long tribute to parenthood (cos these shows celebrate childcare which can be about both parents) or weekly special month. I think it's harder to do schedule these magazine shows the way they are structured rather than the documentary one-time special. So if there are plans to do more of these in the works, then there needs to be info about it on the description page. Stations also need some inventive ideas about how they can frame these shows otherwise they will be relegated to a once-a-year airing on (of course) Mother's Day. I think these can be used for much more than that.

Comment for "Bharati Mukherjee"

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Review of Bharati Mukherjee

Novelist Bharati Mukherjee is a great interview. A great voice, well articulated. Someone you could listen to for hours. This half hour interview offers insight into her work and one perspective of South Asian culture. I didn't know much about her and now I want to read her books of which there are seven. Her newest books i The Tree Bride and she reads excerpts oh so beautifully for this half hour interview show. She also talks about her writing process towards the end of the interview. This program was originally for the collaboration but really it can air any time. The show is well produced (though the opening music goes on too long for my tastes) and is a complete half hour that could be paird with any half hour documentary. In fact it might be a good follow-up to an international documentary or another South Asian or Asian show.

Comment for "The Night Karol Died" (deleted)

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Review of The Night Karol Died (deleted)

I wish this piece had been done by a radio producer with the sound capturing this moment. There is no sound except the music, bells and the Pope speaking -- all recorded on a CD library somewhere -- which was intended to make the piece emotional rather than the writer's words or delivery. This commentary is by a print writer who isn't quite comfortable with the mic yet or with short emotive description. At least that's the way it sounds. The writer needs work adapting to radio still. And for goodness sake if he's on a regular beat, let's give him a mic and MD recorder to travel with him so he can capture the fabulous moments that such as the one he witnessed The Night Karol Died.

Comment for "The Play's the Thing" (deleted)

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Review of The Play's the Thing (deleted)

This is a top notch radio theatre production with impeccably acted and delivered monologues by Ron Rifkin and Christine Lahti. LA TheatreWorks has once again produced a stellar play that works as the most intimate and emotionally compelling radio piece. The theme of corporate and ultimately personal responsibility for actions and choices is ideal for the PR Collaboration. This one-hour piece would work well after or before a discussion with local groups about corporate responsibility and consequences of actions. Heavy themes but these are heavy times we're living in...

Comment for "Inuyama Tofu"

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Review of Inuyama Tofu

This is a great feature piece for the PR Collaboration. The universal themes of small business up against global market forces are something that every American business person could relate to. The corner Tofu shop is dwindling in Japan as much as the independent bookstore. Western influence has changed the tastes of Japanese young people as much as McDonald's has changed the eating habits of Americans. This is a well-produced, sound rich feature and would work well in any news magazine show especially if a station could make the connection to the struggles of American independent businesses.

Comment for "Hollywood Beauty Reigns in Asian-American Eyes"

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Review of Hollywood Beauty Reigns in Asian-American Eyes

I have so many problems with this piece. First off, one could argue that NYC is not the biggest Chinatown. I believe that San Francisco is larger in population. But really why do this piece? I'm tired of pieces that once again point to the "foreign-ness" of Asian Americans. So what if there is a blonde Asian American? Doesn't she have the right to have blonde streaks as a white girl has the right to have black streaks on her blonde hair? And is the surgery really being done by Asian Americans or Asian immigrants? There is a difference. And there are Asians who are of mixed descent who are born with creases who would like to have more Asian looking eyes. Where are the other perspectives? Why base an entire story on one author's book? If this is for the Global collaboration, then it's really not doing service to the theme. This piece doesn't say anything more than women are being conned into plastic surgery regardless of race or ethnicity.

Comment for "Workforce Flexibility and Caring for Aging Parents" (deleted)

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Review of Workforce Flexibility and Caring for Aging Parents (deleted)

This is a informative and much-needed hour discussing what many of us are going through or have gone through dealing with aging parents and managing our work and family lives. The show is broken into two half hours. The first talks about workplace flexibility (or unflexibility in many cases) to enable workers to care for their parents. Legislation and policies need to be in place to prepare for the 2010 when one-third of the workers will be 50 or over. The second half focuses on the difficulties of taking care of aging parents especially if we haven't had good relationships. The author of "Doing The Right Thing" - Roberta Satow- give several scenarios to help people in this situation to better manage their anger and guilt while being a caregiver. Very sensible and practical advice is given here. Stations could easily run this has a one hour anytime. Certainly the public radio audience is graying by the minute and I would safely assume a great bulk of the audience is going through the elder caregiving experience now.

Comment for "Here There is No Moon (European version 31:54)"

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Review of Here There is No Moon (Long Version)

What a haunting, emotionally compelling piece of work. Why do people want to kill themselves? There are several answers touched upon but no one can come up with one definitive answer. How could there be? Certainly the people in this piece talk about pain and the immeasurable loss they feel. They can see no end to it except the end of life. The voice collage moves fluidly like the waters underneath the Golden Gate Bridge from which many have jumped. There statistics that wash through from experts (some on the phone line as if they were our crisis lifeline) about the 1200 people who jump off the Golden Gate each year - the five minutes duration of time between the decision and action--these hold dearly long after the piece is over. Susan Stone is an unheralded radio artist and her work simply must be played. Stations ca pair this with another mental health piece to make an hour-long special. There's a shorter version that fits within the half-hour time slot as well. May is Suicide Prevention Month. There's a hook for stations. But really we all know someone who has entered the night where there is no moon. Don't we?

Comment for "Bioprospecting in Chiapas"

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Review of Bioprospecting in Chiapas

A solid series about how NAFTA is affecting Mexico and its residents. This particular piece deals with pharamaceutical companies in conflict with Mexican healers and their knowledge of indigenous plants. This is a classic example of cultural consumerism. Pharmaceutical companies think nothing about taking a plant in a country that isn't theirs and patenting it to make a profit. How the Mexican healers are battling this is the crux of this piece. The producers are to be commended for these sound rich and varied pieces. I think they are a must for American stations to air. The only criticism I have is a mild technical one. There are soft p-puffs (not full pops) on the narration voicing. I'd soften those a little for future pieces. Other than that, I say station check out these pieces!

Comment for "At Risk Youth Design Sweatshop-Free Fashions"

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Review of At Risk Youth Design Sweatshop-Free Fashions

A solid news magazine piece about youth message-driven art making a statement against sweatshop labor. It's inspiring to hear about youth care about who makes the Nike sneakers and the conditions they work under. This is a very positive piece and could fit in any magazine show. The local tie-in is that we all wear clothing that is potentially created by sweat shop labor. This one act by youth to highlight that reality is an important statement.

Comment for "Letter"

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Review of Letter

I like these pieces from Monika Mueller's series a lot. Another reviewer called them haikus. That seems appropo. Her voice is dream-like with an edge that draws you in. I'm not sure what she's talking about but it isn't the words. It's the feeling you get listening to her. I'd say run these during April poetry month. But run a bunch of them with some dreamy cool music in-between. Remember Pink Floyd's Dark Side of the Moon and listening to it late at night when you're half asleep and getting all these fantastic mind movies in your head. With the right music in between, these dream poems could really work. Of course what station would do this? A college or community station definitely. Anyone running Echoes late at night would be drawn to this as well. I do think it would make Mueller's work more marketable if she could string her series together herself with music and have it ready to go as a half hour or even an hour....in the meantime, stations, give it a try...

Comment for "What's the Word? Chinese Women's Poetry"

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Review of Chinese Women's Poetry

The first five minutes of this half hour is redolent with humanities boring scholar production values. But when the poetry finally starts to come without as much explanation then it starts to become interesting. There are three segments dealing with Mandarin Chinese poetry in the Mainland and Taiwan. It started to come alive for me in the 2nd segment with more poetry and more music. the 3rd section explores contemporary poetry and the women's movement in Taiwan. It's a difficult subject. Most Americans know little to nothing about Chinese history let alone poetry. I commend the producers for tackling this difficult topic. I would have preferred a more exciting beginning with poetry collages or a collage intro so we know that there will be three acts to this piece. The narrator has a good voice but she needs to present these three segments with a hint of excitement. I'm afraid that a lot of programmers will be turned off by the first few minutes and not listen to this intriguing look at Chinese women's history. That's really what this half hour offers --the way the poetry is nearly the only reflection into women's lives. I urge programmers to think about pairing this half hour with another half hour poetry piece for April or with another Asian piece for Asian Pacific American heritage month in May.

Comment for "1990 Bobbie Louise Hawkins - First Story"

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Review of 1990 Bobbie Louise Hawkins - First Story

This piece is part of a series on Beat Poets and it would work well if a station ran several of these pieces as part of a special during April poetry month. I don't always like writers reading their own work but Bobbie Louise Hawkins' voice as well as her writing really draws you in. She's a good storyteller with a textured voice. This is also a live reading and a couple times you hear the audience responding. That could be distracting to listeners. I don't know if this is something that a station can run as a standalone without some prep. She's not as well known as Allen Ginsberg but with the proper intro and as part of a series, it could be a real plus.

Comment for "Talking About Abortion: A Resurgence in Sound"

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Review of Talking About Abortion: A Resurgence in Sound

It pains me to say this but this piece is just not ready for broadcast. The production is obviously an earnest labor of compassion for the producer but frankly it's a mess. There is no cohesive journey to this one hour production. Though there is occasional narration, it doesn't help to give us a beginning, middle and end. Beyond sharing gut-wrenching stories, I don't know why I'm listening to this. It's painful but without direction or guidance, I just want to turn it off. Then there are the technical problems. There are phone interviews mixed in with much too long actualities and attempts at collage with voices shifting to different channels for no apparent reason. Sound effects and music appear supposedly to underscore the horror stories of abortions - legal and non. I commend the producer for taking on this tough topic but it just doesn't work. There are so many technical and structural problems and not enough variety of storytelling that I can't recommend it for broadcast. I recommend the producer or any station wanting to air a thorough and artful examination of abortion to listen to Shades of Grey also on PRX. Again I commend the producer for attempting this monumental task and encourage another draft if possible.

Comment for "Japan-Allergies"

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Review of Japan-Allergies

Reporter Steve Herman doesn't quite have an NPR-style voice but that's a plus. He's old school voice of authority and the report is solid news. Whether an American station would want to air a piece about hay fever in Japan is another question. I would think that stations are more likely to pair this with it's own pollen count reports. Perhaps Pacific Rim stations might be interested in giving this piece a lesson. I hope Herman files more pieces from Japan though and keeps them coming.

Comment for "Womanpower" (deleted)

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Review of Womanpower (deleted)

These are two half hour interview shows that are being paired together for Women's History Month. I like that these are produced by women and about women unlike a lot of Women's History Month offerings on PRX. Part one is the better half hour only because of the technical quality. Jeanine Boucher-Colbert is quite spell-binding as she talks about her work with prisoners in Brazil. The opening however is a bit off-putting with the "Sisters Are Doing It For Themselves" intro. Just felt too heavy-handed to me. Part Two has good content and a fascinating guest but alas, it's phone quality. I don't know why producers keep putting phone quality work on PRX. Most stations would never license a phone interview that they could do themselves. It's shame because Beatrice Clark is a great guest. These half hours would work well on activist community radio stations.

Comment for "Street Sounds"

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Review of Street Sounds

A lovely piece about street music in Bart stations in the Bay Area. I love the ambience and the recordings of people singing and playing. The comments are not as effective though as the musicians describing their music and then playing. The first musician and the ltter part with the guitarist and singer is the best cut. I'd say cut some of the comments in the middle and get the piece down to five minutes and get to the middle part faster....to that singer/guitarist. That's just great tape. With a proper lead any station in any city with street musicians could use this piece in local shows.