Comments by Taki Telonidis

Comment for "The Culture Is Changing"

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Review of The Culture Is Changing

Not being a hunter myself, I wondered how much I could to relate to a story about the decline of hunting culture in Vermont. Surprisingly, this simple montage of voices helped me appreciate the sense of loss felt by these hunters. One woman talks about how meaningful it was to learn hunting skills from her parents, and her disappointment that her children are not interested in learning them from her. A man talks about how deer hunting tunes you into nature and your surroundings, and another about the bond hunters develop with land on which they hunt. In a very short time, this piece gave me insight into a culture that has always been foreign to me.

Comment for "Silvio"

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Review of Silvio

?The world according to Silvio??that?s what comes to mind after hearing this piece. Sylvio is an offbeat artist, and in this 5-minute stream of consciousness, he shares his thoughts on the definition of art, one?s moral obligation to make things better, the church, American women, living frugally, and his loneliness. At times he is preachy, at others intolerant, and sometimes incoherent. His honesty and energy are engaging however, and I was surprised several times by what he revealed about himself. I don?t quite know what to make of Sylvio, but I did enjoy the roller coaster ride of his musings.

Comment for "RN Documentary: Paradise Lost"

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Review of RN Documentary: Paradise Lost

Paradise Lost is a sobering documentary about the poor conditions in Haiti, and the government?s inability to improve the quality of life for its people. Healthcare, poverty, corruption, crime, and lack of services all are addressed by the reporter and the experts (mostly from Non Governmental Organizations) who appear in the piece. As one might expect, the picture is very bleak, although the report manages to highlight a couple of encouraging developments. The reporter?s narration is competent, if a little formal, and the report does a good job of providing history and context to today?s situation. Where the piece falls short however is in building compelling scenes, and including the voices of ordinary (non ?expert?) Haitian people. There is a powerful scene near the top of the story at a maternity ward, and I found myself wanting to hear more first-hand experiences such as this, rather than the analyses of professionals. Nevertheless, it?s important that Haiti not be forgotten even though it?s not in the headlines these days.

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Review of PIE (deleted)

PIE is a slice of life from the People?s Inhalation Exhibition pie eating contest in Portland. It?s all actuality and sound (there?s no narration) and it does succeed in taking me to this event, conjuring images of contestants stuffing their faces with apple pie. I like the idea of this piece, and found several moments amusing, but it would have been stronger had it been shorter. The piece included all three heats of the competition, and much of what was said by contestants was repetitive. A substantial portion of the audio was distorted as well, which at times made listening painful to the ear. This is a fun audio postcard that would have benefited from one more round of editing.

Comment for "The Native Plan"

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Review of The Native Plan

This is a Columbus Day special made up of stories, music and poetry from several Native American tribes in the American West. The strongest element is a sound piece by Jessie Boggs about the revival of canoe building in the Pacific Northwest. The narration and sound succeed in taking me to these waters, and the actualities convey the importance of the canoe tradition in maintaining Native language, community, and family identity. This special also features poetry, a nice variety of music, and two compelling essays about poverty and prisons from a Native American perspective. The issue I have with this show is that while individual elements are good radio, it doesn?t hold together as a whole. There is no theme that unites these pieces, and the host transitions don?t create a narrative thread. The host?s writing is sometimes clich?d and no real connection is made between the show and Columbus Day. Despite this shortcoming, there are several individual pieces worth considering for rebroadcast.

Comment for "Virtuoso Voices - Andrew Litton (Walton's Henry V)"

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Review of Virtuoso Voices - Andrew Litton (Walton's Henry V)

This is an actuality in which classical music conductor Andrew Litton talks about a new composition by William Walton that sets to music some of William Shakespeare?s Henry V. It?s good as actualities go, and could be useful if proper context were added. For example, it could be part of a classical music announcer?s introduction to this work, or in an arts feature about the composer.

Comment for "The Case of the Empty Lake: Or, How We Learned Stop Whining and Love the Salamander"

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Review of The Case of the Empty Lake: Or, How We Learned Stop Whining and Love the Salamander

This is a fun story. Two students at Stanford University set out to discover why a lake on their campus which years ago played host to skinny dipping, bonfires and windsurfing, is now a muddy hole. The simple answer to their question is an endangered salamander that lives in the lake, but the story turns unexpectedly complex as the students learn that the salamander is preventing worse things from occurring there. This piece works because it captures the maturing, albeit in a small way, of these two college students into people with a more complex understanding of the world around them. The reporters? voices work well, as does the writing and sound; in one scene they try to record what salamanders hear at the lake. Music is used playfully even if somewhat predictably, and the actualities add information and texture. This piece could have been a bit shorter, and there are a couple of transitions in the storyline that aren?t quite convincing, but it?s generally a good ride.

Comment for "Closing of the Navajo Hopi Relocation Office"

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Review of Closing of the Navajo Hopi Relocation Office

This is a story about the relocation several decades ago of Navajo and Hopi Native Americans from a section of Arizona so that utility companies could have access to resources. While this topic could have made for compelling radio, this particular execution is not as successful as it might have been. The reporter tells the history of this relocation by chronicling the people, corporations and legislation involved. There are too many details in this account, and it?s easy to lose track of players and events. The reporter has a pleasant voice, but her narration is edited together awkwardly; words are clipped and breaths removed, making it sound unnatural. The story also includes several actualities, and again they don?t contribute as much as they could have. Some are difficult to understand, as they were recorded on noisy phone lines. The most effective actuality is near the end, and it talks about native people?s connection to the land, and the consequences of having to leave their place of birth. Having some of this information near the top would draw in listeners, and help them appreciate the tragedy these people have suffered. This point could have been made even more effectively by gathering tape from people whose families had to be relocated instead of relying on spokespeople of the tribes. This is a chapter in America?s history that is worth recounting, albeit in a clearer and more radio-phonic way.

Comment for "RN Documentary: For the Love of Bridges"

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Review of RN Documentary: For the Love of Bridges

Setting out to make a radio documentary about something as visual and static as bridges is definitely taking on a challenge. And while this piece from Radio Netherlands effectively communicates the reporter?s passion for these structures, it doesn?t quite succeed on other levels. The narration is competent, and the interviews touch on several interesting themes--bridges as a source of national pride, bridges as key to the economy of Holland, the effect of computers on bridge design?but they only touch on them. I wanted to hear least some of these ideas developed more thoroughly. The structural backbone of the piece is a contest to build a small bridge out of compressed sand, a scene that is revisited several times over the course of the story. While this is a creative device, the event doesn?t provide the drama necessary to pull the piece together. Between visits to the contest are a series of interviews with bridge historians, engineers and architects. Each person makes an interesting point or two, but in the end they were not particularly compelling characters. The use of sound and the mix were competent, but could have been used more artfully to enhance the story.

Comment for "Gigging: A Cherokee Elder Spears for his Supper"

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Review of Gigging: A Cherokee Elder Spears for his Supper

This audio postcard put a smile on my face. Though the story is modest in length and in scope--a Native American elder (Hastings Shade) builds a traditional fishing spear then puts it to use in a nearby river? it achieves more than I expected. The first half of the story walks through the process of crafting a ?gig? in a forge. There are a few funky edits, and the soundmix could be a bit more finessed, but it takes me there and paints a picture. Then as Mr. Shade tries out his new gig, he speaks briefly about the ethics of food gathering from a Native perspective, and how important it is for him to pass on this ancient ritual to his son. I was drawn in by the wisdom in his words and by his gentle humor. We could all learn a lot by spending the day fishing with Hastings Shade.

Comment for "The Tribal Beat for 8/27/06" (deleted)

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Review of The Tribal Beat for 8/27/06 (deleted)

There are two stories worth considering from this weekly Native American news magazine. The first is about Equine Therapy, using horses to treat people with substance abuse and emotional problems, and it begins at 6:35 into the show. The piece explains the history and cultural importance of horses to the Southern Ute Tribe, and also points out that early indications are that horsemanship is helping patients acquire self confidence and coping skills. I like the topic quite a bit, but this piece does have its faults. The reporter?s narration and writing are not very conversational, and there are several audible edits. Most importantly, there is no scene of one of these therapy sessions. Hearing an instructor teaching these skills would have helped me understand how and why this is an effective program. Despite these shortcomings, I found myself intrigued by Equine Therapy in a Native context, and wanting to learn more about it.

The second feature is about homosexuality in Native America, and it presents a refreshingly different perspective on the subject of same sex marriage. In many Native cultures, gays are referred to as Two Spirited because they have special access to both the male and female worlds. They are treated with respect and given great responsibility by the community. The reporter puts together an effective narrative that features a lesbian spiritual leader from Phoenix. The writing is clear and the narration is relaxed and inviting. One element that I found lacking was the audio quality of the interviews. The microphone should have been closer to the speaker and the interviews conducted in places with less background noise. Still, the content makes me pay attention. This 5-minute piece begins at 17:30 into the show.

Comment for " Arabs and Americans Find Common Ground Through Music"

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Review of Arabs and Americans Find Common Ground Through Music

This piece looks beyond the nightly news for signs of easing tensions between the US and the Arab world?and finds them on the dance floor. Reporter Rana Sweis postulates that music of the Middle East is a growing influence on American pop music and that this blending of music cultures can lead to greater mutual understanding. It?s a compelling concept, but the execution was not as effective as it could have been. Visiting a night club in Washington, DC, a particularly international city, left me wondering if clubbers in other American cities would have the same appreciation for dance tunes with an Arab beat. I also wanted a song or two to be explored a bit, so that the commingling of musical influences could be more effectively revealed. The writing was solid as was the narration, but the mix could have been more musical. In each case, a song was snuck in, established for a few seconds, then faded under and out. Despite these issues, I found the perspective refreshing and the message powerful.