Comments by John Hingsbergen

Comment for "Say it Plain" (deleted)

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Review of Say it Plain (deleted)

This is an excellently-crafted and moving documentary, ideal for Black History Month. Characteristic of the American Radio Works series, this is a highly-polished production filled with compelling content that demonstrates the power of long-form radio.

NPR's Michelle Norris hosts this program featuring excerpts from eloquent speakers such as comedian Dick Gregory, the Rev. Dr. Marting Luther King, Jr, Fannie Lou Hamer of the Mississippi Freedom Democratic Party and Representative Shirley Chisholm.

I was especially interested in the 1895 recording of educator and presidential advisor Booker T. Washington.

Whether your listeners lived through events documented in this show, or have merely read about them in history books, they'll be informed and inspired by the actual voices of these speakers

I've scheduled it for use on WMUB for the second year in a row during Black History Month. I can offer no higher endorsement.

Comment for "Carlos and Deborah Santana"

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Review of Carlos and Deborah Santana

Broadcasts of this type are a style of radio that deserves preserving. This type of program, featuring a complete presentation by guest speakers plus interaction with the audience in attendance, is not nearly as common as it once was.

I enjoyed listening to the show and I learned a lot about the latest efforts of the guest speakers, Deborah and Carlos Santana. The subjects alone provided plenty of impetus to stay tuned.

This series has a somewhat quirky format of a guest (or guests) providing a short address to the audience, followed by a Q & A with a moderator...then audience questions relayed by the moderator. The show would be enhanced by allowing audience members to ask their own questions. Heck, why not make the show truly interactive and open the phones for non-attending listener questions or comments?

This series is community service of a type that has become rare on public radio stations. It embodies much of our Core Values.

I am not a fan of the "announcer" who does the program open, midpoint break and wrap-up. I really wish that an excellent series of this type had an announcer who better embodied the style of today's public radio. This guy's working too hard to sound like an "announcer," a technique that "worked" in the 1930's but comes off as abrasive on public radio in 2006. Plus (a personal peeve here) he can't pronounce the letter "W." I guess that's OK on the West Coast but he should particularly avoid web addresses with the "Dubya, Dubya, Dubya."

In addition the midpoint break is artificially inserted into the broadcast....slammed in over a round of applause, completely interrupting the train of thought. This break includes an appeal for listeners to "become a member and support the club." I'm personally uncomfortable with this call to action language and would prefer a more gentle and subtle reference to the fact that "membership and support information are available" etc.

I admire this series greatly and would listen to it if someone in my area aired it, but I'd really like to hear it brought into the 21st Century. How about a nice music bed for the open and close? If the mid-point announcement needs to happen, fade the applause to silence....do the announcement, another little pause and a fade back in. This production is done in a major metropolitan area but it needs some help in achieving "big city" production values.

Comment for "Last Rights: Respecting Diversity at the End of Life" (deleted)

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Review of Last Rights: Respecting Diversity at the End of Life (deleted)

This is an artfully-produced presentation of a complex and difficult issue. The well-written narration, engaging interview clips and music work together to provide a show that goes beyond the norm in production values that reach out and grab the listener's attention.

Despite the slick production values, the interview subjects are treated with dignity and respect, something they are requesting from the systems that provide care for them.

From listening to this piece, I get the feeling that the producers really care about the subject matter. Listeners cannot help but be affected by this compelling presentation.

One of the things I liked most was the interweaving of the very appropriate music. Cleverly and artfully done!

Comment for "Crossing Over with Ruben Martinez" (deleted)

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Review of Crossing Over with Ruben Martinez (deleted)

An enjoyable, somewhat off-beat, feature segment. Based on one long interview with author Ruben Martinez, this piece starts strong with some great natural sound that will draw the listener in.

Interviewer/producer Benjamin Adair narrates the story in a relaxed, natural style. He's "chatting" with the listener rather than "announcing" or "narrating." A very comfortable, non-self-conscious delivery.

I especially like the way the opening narrative fades to make way for Martinez. A clever device that, to be honest, reminded me of the National Lampoon Radio Hour of the 1970's. Kept me hanging on, wondering, "What's next?"

Adair has used a number of off-beat techniques to keep it interesting, including natural sound frequently woven in behind the interview clips

I'd use this as a discussion-starter for a talk show on immigration issues. Would also work well in a magazine with an immigration theme.

There's a reference to "it's Spring" in the opening narration so users might want to consider whether or not to use it in other seasons.

Comment for "Muslims' Christmas Experience"

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Review of Muslims' Christmas Experience

A good piece to remind us that not everyone in our country celebrates Christmas or even Chanukah!

When I was auditioning it, the piece cut off abrubtly. I am writing to the producer to see what happened and see if a corrected version can be uploaded.

I'll complete the review once I can hear the entire piece!

JH

Comment for "War on Christmas? Please."

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Review of War on Christmas? Please.

Good commenry by Noel Black. Very appropriate as a drop in for a local talk show on the "War on Christmas."

The piece has an anchor lead attached, read by Eric Whitney of KRCC and a tag and music bed and creits, wrapping up "this edition of Western Skies."

I would advise leaving the pre and post material off future editions and making the commentary available for customized local station use.

Under existing License Terms, stations would have to air it the way it is presented. Not likely.

Comment for "Home Planet: None So Blind: A Thanksgiving Story"

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Review of Home Planet: None So Blind: A Thanksgiving Story

A thoughtful reflection about thankfulness and memories.

A good commentary or talk show drop in for Thanksgiving. Useable as a discussion-starter about the nature of gratitude.

Comment for "Finding a Spiritual Home"

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Review of Finding a Spiritual Home

A good commentary for use in magazine shows, especially during the holidays.

Nicely written and delivered. A thoughtful piece from a "younger" writer.

Comment for "Lewis Lapham-Editor Emeritus, Harpers; Author, Pretensions to Empire" (deleted)

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Review of Lewis Lapham-Editor Emeritus, Harpers; Author, Pretensions to Empire (deleted)

One episode of a series of weekly presentations before the Commonwealth Club of California. The content of this broadcast is of potential interest to wider audiences due to the controversial subject matter, namely a suggestion that President Bush should be impeached.

This program is typical of the "Civic Club" broadcasts that were common on many public radio stations 20 or 30 years ago. It follows the standard format of a brief introduction followed by a presentation by the guest speaker and an audience question and answer session.

The speaker, Mr. Lapham, is not a very engaging speaker for radio. He is obviously a print journalist sharing his ideas before an audience. Regrettably, the show would be more appealing to a wider audience if the speaker were more entertaining. No indictment of Mr. Lapham. Just the facts of life for radio today!

Mercifully, Mr. Lapham concludes his formal "address" after about 15 minutes and begins to take questions submitted by the attending audience. This helps to pick up the pace of the broadcast.

If your listeners appreciate C-SPAN-style coverage, this program will fit right in. This is community service of a type that has become rare on most public radio stations. It's too bad that more stations do not still air programs of this type. If you air such a series on your station, and you are retaining audiences for it, congratulations. This one would be good for holiday "fill" or for use in an "off-week."

PDs will want to know that there is a mid-show announcement that includes a call to action, inviting listeners to become members of the Commonwealth Club of California. This mid-show "pitch" occurs very abruptly and is somewhat jarring, breaking the mood of the ongoing broadcast. This appeal is repeated in the program close.

This program could benefit from the use of an announcer who more closely emmbodies the Core Values of Public Radio. This is a good show that has been weakened by the process of post-production.

Comment for "Skywalkers of Akwesane"

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Review of Skywalkers of Akwesane

Mohawk Indian culture at work in the big city. A sound-rich documentary about people whose roots are in the earth, working hundreds of feet in the air.

An interesting view of how a native culture adapted and made a unique contribution to modern society. An insight into the personalities and motivation of those who chose to risk their lives for the thrill and high pay of steelworking.

Interesting, sound-rich piece. Well recorded and narrated. Production values live up to the best of public radio.

Early in the piece I felt it could use better setup, putting the piece into context. As with most good documentary work, it built steam and drew me in as I stayed with the story.

Not for background listening. Take a half hour and enjoy a glimpse of a world most of us will never experience!

This would be a good special for Labor Day but useable any time, especially for stations that serve major cities.

Comment for "Foster Care Utopia"

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Review of Foster Care Utopia

A good sound rich, NPR-style piece. Well written and edited with plenty of good quality interview bites.

Reporter Karen Brown does a good job convincingly narrating with the public radio style we have come to expect. I really like her vocal quality and delivery. She's rock solid and mature with the energy of some of NPR's younger and most-promising talent. I'm thinking Andrea Seabrook.

How to use this? This story is specific to western Massachusetts, so consider using it as a talk show setup for a discussion of foster care options, children or family issues. This could also be integretated into a local documentary or segmented show on an appropriate topic.

This is a well done network-quality piece.

Comment for "Power To The Peaceful: An Interview With Anti-Flag"

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Review of Power To The Peaceful: An Interview With Anti-Flag

"Old people are gonna die" and a naked guitar player. Not your everyday average public radio fare. Zoe Cordes Selbin has put together a fast-paced and engaging piece about a band I've never heard of.

This is a good piece for use in a youth-oriented talk show or in an alternative music format. I'd be sure to "wrap" this with some of the music being discussed.

This is NOT a politically-balanced piece. Stations will want to consider adding your own "balance," however you define it.

Techically, there are numerous over-zealous edits. I'm wondering if this isn't a "technique" that I haven't heard about...kind of like hand-held, wobbly, out-of-focus footage in music videos. This super-tight editing is only distracting in Zoe's question tracks.

A good merger of youth culture and political activism. We need more efforts of this type.

Comment for "staff meeting 2"

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Review of staff meeting 2

Clever little series.

Well-written and generally well-executed. I'm getting a little tired of the music track. Frankly, I would prefer something a bit less foreground.

Comment for "staff meeting 1"

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Review of staff meeting 1

Clever concept.

Comment for "1-day drive promo for New Member Challenge"

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Review of 1-day drive promo for New Member Challenge

An honest straight-forward appeal to the listeners.

Friendly, personable.

The only thing I would do differently is "nail" the end with a repeat of the web address.

Comment for "1-day drive Erika's Mom 1"

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Review of 1-day drive Erika's Mom 1

Very Dave Lettermans Mom-ish.

Who is "Erika?" I guess that would explain who "Erika's Mom" is.

Clever. Cute concept.