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Summary: Adriel Luis takes a different spin on the subject of beauty.
 

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A Timeless Piece

As a high school student, I can relate to this piece A LOT. This piece was very dramatic, because of that it immediately caught my attention. I was able to relate to the story in a way that made the story almost directed towards me. The theatrical delivery spoke to me like a song. This piece reminds the listener of a social issue that many people can relate to, ethnicity and stereotypes. Living in a somewhat diverse community, some of the "lyrics" I have personally witnessed. I think the lack of outside is what made this piece unique.This is a "hot topic" meaning that many teens across the country are going to listen to this and relate to it, very well produced and perfect for the target audience!

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Embrace your given beauty

Slip of the Tongue is a deconstructive audio piece produced by Adriel Luis. Through spoken word, Adriel addresses issues that many female teenagers and women face in today’s society. Adriel touches on the social construction and internalization of mainstream standards of beauty, resistance and deconstruction of beauty in relation to ethnic identity, society’s perception and perpetuation of masculinity, and social consumption of beauty products. This is an excellent audio piece that deconstructs societal construction of beauty and reminds everyone to embrace their ethnic makeup and roots.

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Thats not makeup, but make believe.

Adriel's words are powerful, and recited in a powerful way. The poem provides exceptional imagery and metaphors. It was interesting to hear what a boy thinks and feels versus how he acts in a situation where he is attracted to another girl and it was amusing to have the female character so quickly reject. The message about valuing your roots and not comparing yourself to others comes across loud and clear. I think it is important for women especially teens to hear this message because the media is constantly telling them otherwise.

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Review of Slip of the Tongue

This piece was a phenominal gateway into the diverse thought process of young people and their attractions to each other. Not only that but the true attraction they have for themselves. It calls to the forefront just how common it is for the exterior to be depicted in such a way to one person that can offend and even undermine another's perception of themselves. Young people have begun to own their individuality and their roots. We've begun to see things for what they really are and make the choice to either identify and remove ourselves from certain definitions.Adriel's piece is sweet and simple yet his poem addresses so much.

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Review of Slip of the Tongue

I enjoyed listening to the poet. He really moved me by saying that girls emphasize so much on glamour because they think they are not beautiful enough. So they put on make up to cover up how they really feel. Alot of girls should really listen to this piece because it uplifts all girls to know they're beautiful inside and out.

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Review of Slip of the Tongue

While listening to this poem I feel as if I were sitting on the roof of some apartment building one hot and sticky New York night, while drinking iced coffee. This spoken word poem gives new grace and meaning to the art of picking up girls. The entire poem is based upon the metaphor of cosmetic makeup compared to ethnic makeup and background. The final metaphor “this is not make-up but make-believe” sent chills up and down my spine. The poem is skillfully written, and performed with a wonderful rhythm. The reader tells the story so well, that I feel as if they had put their heart and soul into the reading. The only problem is that the speaker has a tinny sound when he speaks. I think this wonderful poem would have been done more justice if he would have recorded the poem again, and checked the mike to get rid of the tinny sound.

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Review of Slip of the Tongue

Program Directors looking to bring fresh voices to the air during Poetry Month or the upcoming Public Radio Collaboration on Globalization will delight in the rhymes flowing from Adriel Luis, a finalist at the Youth Speaks Grand Slam Poetry Finals in San Francisco.

Fine.
I'll tell you about my ethnic makeup
I wear the foundation
layed by my indigenous poeple...

Luis' lyrical talent is impressive, his delivery self-assured, his narrative something we all want and need to hear on the air.