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- Kerry Seed
- Username: Kerry
- Location: Beijing, China
- Joined PRX: Nov 11, 2003
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- "undocumented"
- Summary: a day in the life of an illegal immigrant
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Review of undocumented
Kerry Seed
Posted on November 28, 2004 at 05:06 AM
All the pieces are in place for this to be a standout feature about the daily realities of undocumented workers. The characters are strong. The story is important. The imagery is strong. But, the pacing is far too slow, and the voices of the Spanish to English translators are more engaged than the narrator's reading.