Office Artist > Comments > "Office Artist - great topic, could use some editing"
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- Matt Kaufman
- Username: matthewdkaufman
- Location: Palatine, IL
- Joined PRX: Jul 06, 2004
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- "Office Artist"
- Summary: Office Artist Larissa Brown finds beauty in ordinary office supplies.
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Office Artist - great topic, could use some editing
Matt Kaufman
Posted on August 11, 2004 at 11:50 AM
Overall, I like the piece and the concept a lot, but it feels a bit "loose" and could be a little sharper. No need for new recording, just tightening. Would certainly be appropriate for Morning Edition/All things considered.