Piece Comment

Interesting, well-written feature


Aarti does a great job of using description to paint a picture of a completely visual medium: fashion. Her narration is fluid and never redundant; she manages to avoid the common trap of explaining what a piece of tape will say instead of letting it speak for itself. Aarti makes the feature personal at the end by discussing what she learned from her research on Seattle's sustainable fashion world. This is a well-written piece that doesn’t allow the listener’s attention to drop even for a moment.