Piece Comment

Review of Becoming a Man

This was a great topic!!!! In my school the guys always say "YOU ARE NOT A MAN UNTIL YOU HAVE SEX!!! But I loved how you went to your grandfather. Your grandfather spoke with a powerful tone. One suggestion though. Next time lower the volumes of the song in the back or higher your volumes. At points it was hard to understand you when you were talking. But I LOVED THE SONG!! Great choice of music.