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- Joshua McNichols
- Username: jmcnichols917
- Location: Seattle, WA
- Joined PRX: Dec 07, 2007
Piece Information
- "BP"
- Summary: Taking blood pressure measurements becomes a family tradition in mortality.
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Review of BP
Joshua McNichols
Posted on December 10, 2007 at 06:56 AM
I enjoyed this, but thought it would have benefited form a slightly slower pace. I felt like it needed a little more room to breathe. The narrator's voice is excellent, but could use a little bit more variation throughout the course of the piece to show a greater range of feeling and break up the length.
Also, I wasn't quite convinced by the music, it tended to distract me. I think that introducing the music more deliberately at limited strategic points would help this piece.