This piece gave a new light to the long debated violence vs. videogames debate. Kirsten's story helps others to see how bonding can take place in unexpected ways. The sound effects were used very effectively, even adding the computerized "game over" toward the end of the piece. My only problem with the piece is how uneven the volume of the piece is; the piece is very quiet toward the beginning and gets louder toward the end. I was very impressed and humored by the piece! Congrats!