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- Arvid Hokanson
- Username: ahokanson
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- "A Wall Of Our Own"
- Summary: Re: the wall on our southern border, Ian's modest proposal
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Review of A Wall Of Our Own
Arvid Hokanson
Posted on October 24, 2006 at 03:29 PM
This piece is good in spirit, but is read way to fast for the average listener to actually hear and absorb it. If it was re-done at about half the speed, it would be much better. Also, the humor is good, but would be better communicated with a bit more inflection in the voice.
A good start, I like the humor in the piece.