This is a well told story. It's a good use of letting the tape tell the story. I really enjoyed the portion at the Boys & Girls club. I like the narration, it's conversational and engaging. Taking a breath for a pause after some of the actualities would give them a bit more strength - to let the listener really get the impact.

This could work as a segment in a local news program or an insert into Latino USA.

Nicely done!