Piece Comment

Review of Where Were You Fifth Period?


This piece is about ditching and the excuses told by the students. A good technique of this review is that the answers are told in a collage format with music in the background. This makes the story more interesting and it really makes you want to hear more. The answers were funny One weak point in the story is that there should have been narration in the beginning about what the story is about and maybe even telling the listeners what inspired her to create this story and how a teacher got the answers out of her students, especially the one who ditched her class.