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- Emon Hassan
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- ""And Never The Twain Shall Meet""
- Summary: Tim Hildebrand is just a regular, devout,church-going Baptist who is looking for the right girl to share his faith...and his bed.
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Review of "And Never the Twain Shall Meet"
Emon Hassan
Posted on June 25, 2005 at 06:27 PM
Tim is finding it hard to balance restrictions in his religion and his relationships with women. His beliefs pose certain problems in pursuing a relationship and his past experience has made him careful. The piece can be tigtened a little bit more by eliminating redundancies throughout.