Comments by Dmae Lo Roberts

Comment for "Tough Love"

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Review of Tough Love

Tough Love is a great first person diary type story of a divorced mom who is struggling to raise her kids drug-free. The teen years are turbulent and Lisa's dilemma is one to which every parent can relate. In 13 minutes we undergo a fascinating journey and Lisa is a compelling storyteller as she narrates her life. I love the power of radio to draw you into an intimate relationship between teller and listener. Outfront excels in this form and I look forward to hearing more pieces from this show. This is a story that public radio listeners would relate to.

Comment for "America's Most Wanted Seeks Bombing Suspect from Aspen" (deleted)

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Review of America's Most Wanted Seeks Bombing Suspect from Aspen (deleted)

Interesting little tidbit here. America's Most Wanted has been on for years but this is the first radio story I've heard about it. Though I don't think this news story would play well outside Colorado and possibly nearby states, it could be a nice short drop-in for news magazines. I do wish the ambience had been continued under the narration to avoid ambience clipping on the actualities but for the most part a tidy news piece.

Comment for "After Katrina: A Volunteer Reflects" (deleted)

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Review of After Katrina: A Volunteer Reflects (deleted)

This is a fine monologue of a Katrina disaster volunteer. The Bobby McFerrin music serves as effective and poignant transitions between statements that allow the piece to breathe. I'm not sure how much this worker in Idaho relates to other states other than the immediate Northwest. I'm sure that each state has its own volunteers they could spotlight if they chose to. Yet this is an intimate collage and nicely done.

Comment for "The Undiscovered Explorer: IMAGINING YORK" (deleted)

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Review of The Undiscovered Explorer: IMAGINING YORK (deleted)

This exploration of the Explorer York is amazingly researched, fascinating and fun. Host Danny Glover leads us through the history, the myth and the cultural depictions of York, the one African American on the famed Lewis and Clark expedition. As Clark's slave, he had no choice but to go on the journey but as a member of the team, he found more freedom than he would back home. On the return, York was devastated to go back to the bounds of slavery after such a momentous experience. Producer Claire Schoen artfully weaves a creative tale told through readings and even rap. There is not one dull moment in this documentary. Who doesn't love Danny Glover? But there is also a storyteller who introduces different moments and thoughts about Clark. The section on minstrelsy is telling as are the many depictions of York through the last two centuries. This one-hour doc can be aired anytime starting now as part of Oregon Public Broadcasting's Lewis and Clark bicentennial series or on Black History Month.

Comment for "The School of Hard Knocks"

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Review of The First Time I Left Home

A very moody almost dream-like approach makes this piece stand out. Two sisters reveal how they both were kicked out of the house when they were kids because of abuse. It's a poignant and brutally honest piece and it really keeps your attention. What would have made this piece better is the use of the phone interviews. I realize the KC's sisters are far away so the phone had to be used. But they come on with statements rather than conversations with KC. I think this would have worked better if she had been recalling the horrible past with her sisters. Still this is a haunting and an unsual youth-produced piece.

Comment for "Finding Home: Fifty Years of International Adoption"

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Review of Finding Home: Fifty Years of International Adoption

It's been 50 years since the first transnational adoptions with Korean children coming not only to the U.S. but all over the world. The Korean adoptees are adults now and are writing books, producing films and involved in culture camps and training workshops helping young adoptees from China, the Philippines and Guatemala. This documentary deftly traces the history of transnational adoptions through interviews with grown adoptees and the challenges they faced. This piece also gives us perspectives of parents of adoptees with the poignant and heartbreaking story of a woman who adopted a troubled Romanian boy--unaware of the depth of his instability. There is also the emotional story of parents going to Guatemala with their young adopted son and telling him the story of his sister's death. That scene alone is true radio documentary art that reaches deep in the gut and impacts you in a way no other medium could. I urge stations to run this hour-long piece. There are more parents of adoptees and those seeking to adopt as well as adoptees who are public radio listeners than one can imagine. But really these are human stories that deserve to be heard.

Comment for "Are we moving yet? (The men of the Fulton Fish Market)"

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Review of Are we moving yet? (The men of the Fulton Fish Market)

This is a slice of life piece with great potential about fish mongers in lower Manhattan. There is a lot of texture to the piece with a variety of voices and the sounds of the fish market. Yet I think at 6:40 it's too long and could be shortened by two minutes. The opening is abrupt and the first minute could certainly be summed up with a host intro. There is much repetition in the comments and some could easily be taken out. Also the ambience track is one steady background stream of general market sound. With collage pieces, it's good to capture moments that can be used as transitions between themes. There aren't any conversations between fish sellers and customers. No interactions really and no individual sounds of people working. This piece needs those little gems. At this point, I can't recommend for stations outside the East Coast. Nothing universal stands out. It's very specific to this market. There would need to be more interviews about what makes people want to go to market like this. What is the connection with sellers and customers? Why do people goto this market? Is this a way of life that will disappear in our culture? Answers to questions such as these can lift a piece from the local to the national realm. I hope the producer will keep working on this piece and offer it to a national audience.

Comment for "The American Spirit in our Kids" (deleted)

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Review of The American Spirit in our Kids (deleted)

How is this NOT public radio? Let me count the ways. First off this is sponsored and produced by the same organization called Junior Achievement. The piece sounds like an infomercial for kids to straighten up and fly right. Second, the first voice is a kid saying this is a program for and by kids but it doesn't sound anything like a kid would produce or even how they speak. The whole production style is highly commercial with tons of compression on everyone. The slant is totally pro-God and country and way too upbeat and simple to be believed. Families and jobs good, Fire bad. They're called "man in the street" interviews but they are all studio interviews. And there are commercials - actual commercials - within the show. And how many kids you know would say this? "The military teaches basic functions that kids don't get these days - discipline and respect and it gives you money for college..." "I think the American Dream is be accepted and for everyone to feel like they're a part of the machine..." I can definitely hear adults mixed in with the kids. That's not to say there are some realistic and deeper thought in this piece but it's so slanted to one perspective, there's no way I can recommend this program.

Comment for "Teen Perspectives on God"

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Review of Teen Perspectives on God

This piece has a lot of potential but there are too many technical problems to recommend this for broadcast. While I love the subject and the differing perspectives presented as well as the style and approach this piece takes, there is too much distortion, pops, mic handling and strange fades/levels. I think that if the narration were done over again and the most technically problematic sections were edited out, there could be a great 4-5 minute piece. I welcome the chance for young people to talk about their spiritual beliefs. This is an important topic and it would be a shame to waste the interview material gathered. I'm a great proponent of youth radio but this piece eally needs to be remixed with the best recordings and the narration needs to recorded at a slower pace and without popping. Please take this as encouragement that we need this piece in broadcasting - just without the technical problems.

Comment for ""Eat Your Eggs" Grandma and Alzheimer’s"

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Review of "Eat Your Eggs" Grandma and Alzheimer’s

Producer Jake Warga has created a loving tribute to his grandmother and her decline through the years. With personal commentary and recordings from various times of her life, "Eat Your Eggs" documents their relationship and Jake's reactions to his Grandma with intimate and finely recorded conversations at various points of their lives. Humor laces the piece so it never gets too down but there are times I want Warga's narration and delivery to be more affected by her decline. Yet, this experience is universal and one that is pertinent as baby boomers are have been caring for their elder parents. This piece could be aired by any station at any time and should be.

Comment for "Things I Love New Orleans"

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Review of Things I Love New Orleans

What a great tribute to New Orleans. Producer Eve Abrams has produced a musical love letter to remember all the good things about the city and why it needs to be rebuilt. She recites the list with humor and heart. The music comes and out like a character who has something to say. Nicely done. This short three-minute module could be used as a pertinent and certainly timely drop-in for music programs or magazines.

Comment for "What's the Word? The Blues as Literature"

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Review of What's the Word? The Blues as Literature

The opening collage of voices with Blues music underneath really grabbed my attention. The continued interweaving of scholars and music makes for an intriguing half hour devoted to discussing African American Blues music as literature. The most fascinating part of the discussion is how the Blues developed and the fact that it's specifically created to rid one of the blues rather than dwell on it. " What's the Word" is developing into a well-polished and enjoyable series. This particular program would work incredibly well during Black History Month though I personally could hear it anytime.

Comment for "Commentary: Refugees, Evacuees--Let's Call the Whole Thing Off" (deleted)

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Review of Commentary: Refugees, Evacuees--Let's Call the Whole Thing Off (deleted)

There has been considerable disagreements about whether to call the Katrina victims as refugees. While the term might not be legally sound, many believe that it describes people who are seeking refuge from a horrible experience. This commentary brings the discussion to light in a thoughtful way and offers several differing perspectives. Though the voicing could have been recorded in a less live room, the producer offers her insights in an upbeat way. This could air as a drop-in for any magazine.

Comment for "Forgive and Remember (#132)"

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Review of Forgive and Remember (#132)

What's great about this series is the way it makes you think about your day to day questions. Should I say this? Should I act upon my gut feeling? People might think "shoulda woulda couldas" have no place in their lives but the reality is we go through each day pondering ethical dilemmas. "Ethically Speaking" addresses these questions in a radio playful style with two people simply having a conversation. No judgment, no sermonizing, but an entertaining thinking through of life's quandaries. Sometimes the conversations could overlap more and sound less scripted but in general these well produced modules that could air as transitions between one-hour shows or in magazines.

Comment for "Huntsville Prison Blues"

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Review of Huntsville Prison Blues

I hate to sound like the president of Long Haul productions' fan club but this piece is pretty amazing. In less than ten minutes, we go from prisoners counting off their names and i.d. numbers in roll call through their release into the world again and their reunions with loved ones. It's all done through sound with no reporter telling us what to think and what to picture, and it's mesmerizing. It's as if we're one of the prisoners going through all these emotional and physical changes - total immersion. The piece is described as documenting a "typical release day" but this piece is anything but typical. Though it was made four years ago, it's still topical and riveting. I don't think this piece just specific to Hunstville and would apply for any listener across the country.

Comment for "Crime and Punishment: The Clean Slate Program" (deleted)

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Review of Crime and Punishment: The Clean Slate Program (deleted)

The two minutes of this piece is explanatory and a lot of the info could be given in the lead. The story really picks up when we hear from ex-cons who are applying for the Clean Slate program and from those in favor and against the program. Certainly it's an intriguing idea and one that other states would be interested in hearing about. While this feature is solid and covers many perspectives, the first two minutes really doesn't draw in as much interest as the rest of the piece. Also the story ends abruptly as if the KALW reporter outcue was edited out. Something would need to be done with the ending in order for this piece to be used by a station. Perhaps the station could use transition music to fade under and segue out of it. Ideally though the piece should be revoiced at the end so that it sounds more final than abrupt.

Comment for "My God"

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Review of My God

We certainly have not heard much about the spiritual life of American children. This piece jumps right in and gives us three different monotheistic perspectives from 12 year-olds who are Jewish, Christian and Muslim. There is much to be commended in this examination of religious values and its effect on the raising of children. Anyone who has interviewed children knows how much they really do want to talk about their beliefs or non-beliefs in God. Hence my dissatisfaction with what is a promising documentary topic. There is not enough of the kid's perspectives and too much reliance on news style and the need to have adults comment on kids. The structure of this piece is less documentary and more extended news feature. The rapid paced, gasping for breath, delivery of the narration in the first five minutes of the piece was relentless and didn't do justice to the thoughtful premise. The best parts are the kids frankly and we needed more of them at home with their families, interacting with other kids, socializing in the real world and pop culture and how they deal with it. Still I'd recommend stations give a listen because it's certainly discussion-provoking and something I would listen to if I happened upon it on the radio.

Comment for "Japan-Asia"

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Review of Japan-Asia

Japan has had a long history of imperialism and waging war with its neighbors particularly China, Korea and Taiwan. But the atrocities of World War Two have not been fully addressed. This backgrounder piece by Steve Herman does a fine job of explaining the long history of resentment by China and Korea toward Japan now seeking a diplomatic answer to these resentments. It may be too little too late and this piece highlights the mounting tensions that exist in Asia. This piece could run on any Pacific Rim station.

Comment for "Back to School"

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Review of Back to School

I like this piece a lot and I welcome Eve Abrams into the fold of radio producers. She has put together a thoughtful vox pop of kids and their thoughts, worries, fears, expectations about going back to school. The ending is a little jarring and needs a final statement or some ambience or music fading out to make it more of an ending. Right now it just stops. There is a great deal of hiss on the piece that can't be overlooked. It's a shame but this piece can't be broadcast because of the technical quality. If this hiss issue could be resolved, then it would be worth another listen and review.

Comment for "Part One: Introduction to VegOil"

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Review of Part One: Introduction to VegOil

This is an example of how many folks are podcasting. The technical quality of the voice recording is raw and sounds like it was done in a kitchen with quite a bit of hiss. Though the information about Veg Oil is valuable, it's basically a straight read throughout of what sounds like a print article. This is not radio and not broadcast quality. In order for it to work on radio, it would have to be recorded in a quiet (dead) room with a mic that doesn't make the female voice sound tinny. The read would have to be coached so it sounds more conversational. Right now it's too fast and too much like reading a laundry list. There is no doubt the producer cares about her material and is quite knowledgeable. She also has a cool web site, so my hope is that she'll re-do her work with better equipment and work on her voicing.

Comment for "Dear Birth Mother"

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Review of Dear Birth Mother

What an unbelievable follow up to Babyquest, Long Haul's previous piece about a woman undergoing fertility treatments. The access the producers had to this woman's journey as she undergoes the process of transracial adoption is phenomenal. Every scene is so rich in detail, emotion and doesn't pull any punches. From the ethical discussions of a white woman adopting a Black baby to the tensions between her own mom and finally to the unreal scene of receiving her baby from the birthmom in a restaurant. These are all gems of human interaction you could never write or fictionalize with any verity. Dear Birth Mother is an achievement in documentary making and the topic is one that would be very pertinent and dear to public radio listeners.

Comment for "Crafting a Sound Response - Sept. 11 Memorial"

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Review of Crafting a Sound Response - Sept. 11 Memorial

This is more sound rich meditation than commentary. With thoughtful, evocative writing and delivery, Producer Michael Joly offers us his individual response to the destruction of 9/11 by his act of creation. Throughout this short piece you hear his crafting of a flute as he goes through all the stages of grief while making a flute out of a piece of wood. The piece builds to a bit of a frenzy and then at the end, there's an "ah" moment with the long slow note of the flute... then a mournful song. This is one stand out piece. It can easily be aired on any news magazine on the anniversary of 9/11.

Comment for "WMRA Story Corps Special" (deleted)

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Review of WMRA Story Corps Special (deleted)

Producer David Isay's brilliant Story Corps project is the shining answer for any radio producer who has ever worked with badly recorded oral history recordings. It can set up in any town anywhere and people do come with their stories. But what to do with all these random stories after they're recorded? Does letting people conduct their own interviews garner great stories that can be produced into intriguing radio pieces? This special one-hour production by WMRA is one of the first stations to produce a showcase from Story Corps . I urge stations to skip forward to the end and hear these stories. One is by a doctor who traces the major success story of his career--the giving a much-needed heart to his patient and the other is by a father whose healthy young son remarkably foretold and prepared for his own death. These last two stories are beyond amazing. The Story Corps idea is so monumental that I'd like to see it used as a way to create the most interesting productions possible. I would suggest that stations solicit a theme or a particular goal when promoting the Story Corps unit's stay in their town. I commend WMRA on this first launching of a special. Stations would do well to listen to it and learn how they too can create specials. Perhaps airing this before a Story Corps visit would inspire the community to come out in droves to be a part of this amazing project.

Comment for "The Cottage"

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Review of The Cottage

Stuart McLean may be Canada’s answer to Garrison Keillor and he certainly has a similar delivery to his live audience, but perhaps you need to be Canadian to understand the jokes. I never thought American and Canadian humor could be that different but if this piece is an indicator then we're worlds apart. Perhaps an American programmer might find ths piece funny but I just don't get it. Also, the length and format is problematic for a station. At almost 14 minutes it doesn't fit easily into a news magazine. Also, it's a live performance with audience laughter and response in the piece. That can be disconcerting in the midst of a magazine show which is how most programmers are using modules. I would suggest international producers really consider the formatting and styles of American stations before submitting work that doesn't easily fit into the few slots possible on stations. It's a hardsell to get your work on stations as it is so really removing obstacles of format and style is crucial.

Comment for "Immigration: Human Trafficking"

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Review of Immigration: Human Trafficking

This is an important story and one that's difficult to do because of the danger for the victims of human trafficking. I commend KALW for taking on this tough topic. This report by Pueong Vongs and Stacey Fowler covers a lot of ground from the perspectives of the victim and the people trying to combat this billion dollar industry. The majority of people either work in bonded servant inhumane conditions or are sex slaves with no sight of escape. This "business" harkens back to the early Gold Rush and the selling of Asian women forced into prostitution and indentured servitude. It's noteworthy that things have not changed all that much and this piece sheds light on a little discussed subject. The feature is a good length for most news magazines. The narration though a little stilted doesn't detract from the research and the perspectives offered here. While I would have wanted more emotional impact in this story, this is a good solid offering from KALW.

Comment for "Culture of the Mind"

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Review of Culture of the Mind

As much as I like Hana Baba's work in prior pieces such as her Angel Island feature, I really think this piece needs another edit and the voicing redone. The story is a good one. For too long cultural differences have not entered the discussion of mental health. There are some good interviews and sound in this piece but it's way too long as a feature at 11 minutes. I think it needs to be around the 7-8 minute range so that it will flow more cohesively and keep listener interest. The narration also needs to be redone to match the tone of the piece. Reporters often make the mistake of trying to sound the same and offer the same delivery with every story. While consistency is good, each story deserves its own way of telling. The opening was rather shocking to me in the offhand delivery of the narration. To talk about Iris Chang's horrific suicide so casually without explaining culturally why she would commit this act does the very thing that the mental health professionals in this piece are trying not to do. Sadly, I can't recommend this piece right now though I know it would be stronger and more effective with a rewrite.

Comment for "Post-Combat Mental Health"

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Review of Post-Combat Mental Health

Highly topical feature about returning soldiers from Iraq and mental health issues. This piece was prompted by the killing of a wife by her husband soldier. A good majority of vets are coming back with post traumatic stress disorder and this piece addresses what's being done to help these men and women. This is a solid and thorough feature and definitely would relate to any region of the country. This piece would work well on any news magazine. There is no outcue however and there is a short music trail that could possibly work as a transition to another story.

Comment for "Shakespeare in prison"

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Review of Shakespeare in prison

A solid report on how art can change lives. Shakespeare is the Olympics of acting so having prisoners (some who were illiterate) is a major challenge. This piece describes the process of rehearsing and learning how to perform "A Midsummer Night's Dream" and how it teaches literacy and increases self-esteem and communication skills. Though it's mostly a fun approach and doesn't delve very deeply into any prisoner's story, this is a nice drop-in for the summer. I have a feeling that access was very limited and the focus had to be just on the production itself. Still it would make a good addition to a news magazine.

Comment for "First Flight, First Hand"

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Review of First Flight, First Hand

Entertaining sound rich recounting of the Wright Brothers' historic flight. Great archival material and well-written narration makes this piece by Producer Hal Cannon a fascinating listening. This isn't the happy story of inventors revered and successful. One died an early death. The remaining brother quit aviation soon after weary of fighting patent lawsuits including a dispute with the Smithsonian. There's even a brief recording of Wilbur. This piece would work well on any news magazine show. Certainly the topic of early aviation shouldn't be limited to the Wright Brothers Anniversary date. There is an NPR news tag outcue though that should be edited out and a station could easily back announce the producer credit.

Comment for "World Vision Report - Show 76 - Air Date - 062605" (deleted)

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Review of World Vision Report - Show 76 - Air Date - 062605 (deleted)

It should be noted this series is produced and (I gather) funded by a Christian organization and is predominantly carried by Christian stations. Having said that, I found this half hour of stories interesting and professionally produced. The stories focus on individuals who are making a difference to combat poverty, disease and horrible living conditions. These are positive, life-affirming stories that focus on topics and people around the world. The features don't tend to be too investigative. There are no other sides or perspectives on the topics. They are profiles that take an uplifting approach. I don't mind in this context because we certainly need hopeful stories amid all the depressing news we get and I hear nothing to indicate these aren't well-researched and authentic stories. Because this is a series, I think a station would have to commit to airing these as a weekly series or combine two of them to air as a special.