Comments by Arvid Hokanson

Comment for "The Lo-Fi Ballad of Daniel Johnston"

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Review of The Lo-Fi Ballad of Daniel Johnston

This piece has a strong narrative, great use of sound and is well produced. It's nice to hear new work from David Brown, since many of us know his voice from Marketplace.

I had heard Daniel Johnston's name, but knew little else about him. This piece was informative and made a strong impression hearing Daniel himself and the interview story from the NYT critic.

The length is good too. It could work as a drop in to a local magazine or a segment of ME, ATC or Day to Day.

Comment for "THE COMEDY-O-RAMA "SUMMER ROAD TRIP" SPECIAL with Lewis Black" (deleted)

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Review of THE COMEDY-O-RAMA "LEWIS BLACK" SPECIAL (deleted)

Lewis Black is an excellent comedian and you may know him from his regular appearances on The Daily Show.

This is a funny special, with a mix of interviews, stand-up comedy and sketches. It would work great for a holiday or weekend special. It should be easy to schedule and is not time dependent.

I found myself laughing out loud several times. It's well produced and has a good flow.

The piece could use a few more resets to help listeners know exactly what they are listening to, but otherwise the content is great.

Comment for "After 23: Conversations on Direction"

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Review of After 23: Conversations on Direction

This sound montage lets people in their early 20s tell listeners about life after college. It's definitely intriguing and outside the usual public radio sound. It needs a bit of touching up to make it air friendly, but it's worth putting into a showcase slot and would probably do best on a weeknight evening or on a weekend afternoon or evening.

The sound montage definitely grabs the ear and the use of sound is just as important as what the students are saying. We've all heard and experienced life in our early 20s, so this piece let's us hear the views of the young people in an artful way. It's also interesting to hear what phrases and words are mixed and repeated.

It's good that this type of radio is produced. It helps explore new ways of storytelling outside the usual framework. Nice job Carlin.

Comment for "Story of a Yup'ik Eskimo rapper"

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Review of Story of a Yup'ik Eskimo rapper

A great profile and story. The use of tape in this story is excellent. Ashley does a great job with the story arc and narrative. She lets James tell the story and the tape is powerful. It's also does a good job of addressing social issues through the story of James.

This is the kind of feature that plays to the strength of public radio and the length is good for telling the entire story.

A few longer pauses after James' tape might have helped give the tape a stronger impact for the listener, but that is just a preference of mine.

This would work well in a local magazine or in a talk show to help start a discussion. It would also work well within a holiday special.

Comment for "Cinco de Mayo: How It Went Down, This Time Around"

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Review of Cinco de Mayo: How It Went Down, This Time Around

I liked the way Greg told this in the style of a classic tale. The narrative worked well and kept me engaged. I was glad to hear a a story. It worked as if Greg was telling a story to friends.

The use of sound was strong. I liked hearing several points of view. Some tape from a few more family members, or if possible, some of the potential troublemakers, would have made the piece even stronger.

This style of storytelling is something the KRCB youth do well. It something also heard well in the KRCB "Conversation with Cornel West" piece from Laquoia Simmons.

This would work well in a local magazine program or a drop-in to a news magazine, such as Day to Day.

Comment for "Out on the Streets"

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Review of Out on the Streets

A great job by both producers. They did a great job letting the characters tell the story. The tape told much of the story - and what great tape it is. I enjoyed hearing the first person accounts and exposing me to stories of life on the street. It was disturbing to hear, but necessary, and shows the strength of public radio.

Use this in your showcase slot or as a holiday special. You could play it during the day or the evening.

Comment for "Nuking the Neighborhood" (deleted)

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Review of Nuking the Neighborhood (deleted)

The producers did a great job bringing in lots of tape and letting the voices tell the story. It brought a human-tone to the story. I'm glad to hear balance with the phone interviews near the end of the program. This was good radio storytelling.

This program exposed something I knew nothing about. Even though the topic is not local, I think it is relevant to many communities across the country dealing with polluted areas and government agenices.

This would work well in a 29 minute showcase slot or as 1/2 of a 60 minute showcase slot. It could also work as part of a locally-produced news magazine.

Comment for "Wealth & Poverty: Company Town" (deleted)

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Review of Wealth & Poverty: Company Town (deleted)

This documentary demonstrates a well-produced, sound-rich, locally-focused story with national appeal. An excellent piece to place on PRX. Nice job to Kristi Coale and KALW for a job well done.

This piece was educational and did a good job of introducing the listener to Richmond and its relationship with Chevron. The opening sentence and tape did a great job inviting the listener. As someone who knew nothing about the city or the issue, I felt like I gained a good grasp of the issues and a sense of the city in the context of the Bay Area.

This documentary has a good narrative arc and good flow. I enjoyed the diversity of voices, including the tape from Chevron officials. I was also glad to hear a reset in the middle. This shows thinking in terms of programming and not just production. Most listeners don't hear each program from start to finish without some interruption.

This piece would work well as an insert into ATC for a format breaker special or a local news magazine or half hour special - with a NPR newscast to fill out the half hour.

Comment for "Cigar Stories: El Lector - He Who Reads"

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Review of Cigar Stories: El Lector - He Who Reads

Another fantastic piece from Jay Allison and the Kitchen Sisters. This piece is sound rich and full of information. Well done! Even you heard it when it aired six years ago, it is worth hearing again.

I knew little about the Lectors before hearing this piece. With the interviews and archive tape, the sound told the story - one of the best things about public radio. The story flows well and keeps the listener engaged. The focus is tight and has a strong narrative. The interviews also help the listener paint a picture of the cigar rollers and the Lectors - another wonderful thing about public radio.

This piece would work well on a local news magazine or as a holiday special. It could also work as a format-breaker for a holiday version of ATC.

An easy way to make an hour would be 5 minute NPR/BBC newscast, this piece and then a 29 minute special.

Comment for "Teen Angst 101"

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Review of Teen Angst 101

This piece has some funny segments. Kudos for producing a live performance for broadcast. It is easy to relate to, since we all wrote silly things in high school.

This could work as a drop-in for a local or national magazine.

The piece could use a bit more context, so the listener is up to speed when it starts.

Comment for "An Evening of 75 Laughs with Jonathan Katz"

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Review of An Evening of 75 Laughs with Jonathan Katz

This is great comedy and is perfect for enjoyment on the radio. I laughed out loud several times, especially during the phone calls. This is a funny, funny piece! The piece is paced well and keeps the listener engaged.

This would work great on a holiday or as a special anytime, probably best on a weeknight or Saturday.

Nice work, we could use more of this on the radio.

Comment for "Music At Sea"

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Review of Music At Sea

What a wonderful sound rich piece. Nicely done! I also learned so much listening to this story. The history of ship-board music is something I knew little about.

This piece would fit well in a magazine program, either in a local station program or a drop into Day to Day, Weekend Edition or Weekend America.

Comment for "End of the Rope" (deleted)

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Review of End of the Rope (deleted)

You don't hear radio like this very often. This is well produced with good use of sound and editing. Lots of effort went into this - kudos on producing this.

The skits were good, but I would find some of them hard to follow if I was listening as a typical listener does - which is without headphones, on the go, in the car, doing chores etc. It might help if they were a bit shorter or possibly included some narration, like the kind of narration sometimes heard in old radio theater.

This would fit well after APHC or possibly before or after LA Theatre Works.

Comment for "Can You Hear Me Now?"

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Review of Can You Hear Me Now?

Two good guests to hear from on the subject of the domestic eavesdropping/spying program. The interviews were concise and gave good, authoritative information. Hosting was good with resests, helping listener follow along. When the topic is something newsworthy like this, the sooner it can be produced an put up on PRX, the better.

This good work in a slot where you might normally do local interviews, but need substitute content for whatever reason. You could also pair with another interview for an hour special or holiday program. You could also take one of 14 minute segments and insert it into a locally-produced magazine.

Comment for "Art of the Song #58 with Sloan Wainwright" (deleted)

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Review of Art of the Song #58 with Sloan Wainwright (deleted)

I enjoyed hearing the music of Sloan Wainwright. The interview gave good insight into what motivates her and influences her music. We also heard a nice variety of her music.

This show would work as part of a music block, possibly before or after World Cafe. It would also fit into any folk music blocks. It could also work well in the morning - it is light enough to work on a weekend morning.

I thought structurally the show could use a bit more continuity and flow. The creative corner segment and review both felt a bit out of place within the hour. They would be better both at the end of hour. They are good segments and the placement could be experimented with to find the right spot in the hour. I thought the music review could have used a bit more insight and commentary and less of the music. Otherwise, nicely done.

Comment for "Annual Rocky Mountain Oyster Fry"

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Review of Annual Rocky Mountain Oyster Fry

Great use of sound in this story. Both for scene setting and letting the characters in the piece tell the story with little narration required. Nicely done. I definitely got squeamish, but enjoyed hearing about cooking the oysters and whether folks ate them. Don't know if I would eat them, especially after the slimy description.

Shanna's story has a good arc; the setup with the dinner before the auction, the auction and then what the auction funds for a conclusion. It was great to hear, with just the brief transition by Shanna, the students and auction attendees telling what they expected regarding work. Great use of sound to let them tell the story.

Good subject matter and tone in telling it.

This would make for a good drop-in within Weekend America or Day to Day.

Comment for "One Huge Backyard"

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Review of One Huge Backyard

This piece has lots of sound and makes good use of it. However, I had trouble finding a narrative arc. I got a good sense of life on the island and Hunter's character. The piece would have been stronger with some sort of specific conflict or problem threatening the island or a more immediate challenge to life on the island. The piece, at 7 minutes, seemed like an audio postcard that would be stronger closer to 3 minutes in length.

Samantha did a good job capturing Hunter in a sound-rich format. The piece also was well written, letting the characters tell the story.

This piece would fit well in a magazine or showcase program about life in the Northeast or life in rural/smalltown America.

Comment for "The Young Marquis' Howlin' House Party! Show #1"

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Review of The Young Marquis' Howlin' House Party!

A funny, whacky music show. Nice job producing it on the NPR clock. This would fit great after American Routes or in place of one hour of the program. It could also follow a blues or jazz hour or work as a holiday special for music stations.

I like the flow and choice of music, I found my toe tapping several times. It would be helpful to at least have a playlist to post to a station website. I also like the experimental sound of it.

If you are going with the Marquis angle, let the listener get a better sense of who this strange, mansion-dwelling character is. Why does he have these crazy parties, and how did Jackie Chan get invited?

When is it going weekly?

Comment for "The Night I Met Cornel West"

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Review of Conversation with Cornel West

This is great radio. Very well produced. I really enjoyed this piece. It is authentic, real and engaging. This is what public radio does well. I extended my lunchtime walk to hear the entire piece while listening to it on my iPod. You could call it an iPod moment.

I learned a lot and got a perspective of Dr. West that I have not heard before. I also enjoyed learning about how Dr. West's message affected Laquoia's decisions in life and how his words influenced her feelings about her father. Adding the first-person tape from Laquoia and the interview tape from the walk with Dr. West helped make it authentic. It was good to have tape from outside the studio and lecture hall.

This would be good for a station-produced magazine program or as a drop-in to the Tavis Smiley Show, since Cornel West is a regular guest on the program.

Comment for "Border Radio: The Big Jukebox in the Sky"

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Review of Border Radio: The Big Jukebox in the Sky

The sound of this show makes me think of a mix between A Prairie Home Companion and American Routes - it sounds like a great variety show. Not something heard very often on any radio today. It's nice to hear lots of great music for this hour. This is a music special and not a documentary, but you get a good sense of the importance of border radio and the music from the songs.

Comment for "Girls from Cambodia with newshole"

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Review of Girls from Cambodia with newshole

This is an outstanding documentary. I recommend finding a slot to broadcast it. It is sound rich and compelling. There is a good narrative throughout the hour. The producers did a great job of letting the girls tell the story.

The writing and ambient tape gives a good sense of place. It provides continuity and sets scenes, but lets the tape tell the story.

The stories are disturbing, but important to hear. This is great public radio.

Comment for "American Jews in the IDF: One Day at the Border Crossing"

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Review of American Jews in the IDF: One Day at the Border Crossing

This piece has the tone of a story from This American Life. The tone is conversational and authentic. The honesty helps convey the story of life in the Israeli Army. It also gives a good impression of what it is like being a young soldier. It could be stronger with more tape about the emotions felt by Matt. But it was good to hear his reasoning for his actions at the border crossing and to hear his impressions about the reaction to the newspaper article.

The story has a good arc. A few spots where the music made the transition may have helped with some narration and/or continuity. However, unnarrated pieces are difficult to produce and this one is well done. The music does keep the piece flowing. The Kruder and Dorfmeister is appropriate for this piece.

This would work well in a station-curated magazine program or a story-telling program like This American Life.

Comment for "Dogs of New Orleans" (deleted)

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Review of Dogs of New Orleans (deleted)

The production value on this piece is poor - making it hard to focus on the content of the essay. The background sound, which is unexplained, drowns out the voicing in most of the story. Unless you're wearing headphones, you can't understand the words. Otherwise, the essay style and conversational tone are authentic sounding.

Comment for "A Painting a Day"

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Review of A Painting a Day

The use of sound in this story is excellent. The audio from the truck, the farmer moving the cows and interviewing Harry in the field conveys a sense of place. Coupled with Lu's description, you can paint a picture of the landscape. Also, the tape of Harry is well edited and placed, requiring little narration. Lu does a good job of voicing with a conversational tone. Their is a good arc to the story - giving us a start of heading out in the morning and finishing the day with the unexpected stop for the cows.

Well done.

Comment for "Rediscovering Barbara Jordan" (deleted)

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Review of Rediscovering Barbara Jordan (deleted)

This is an outstanding documentary. We received excellent response from listeners. I was impressed with the amount of archive tape, especially from Ms. Jordan. Hearing the speech about Watergate from the floor of Congress was riveting. Listening to the audio clips from Tom Brokaw, Bill Clinton and others helped provide context for listeners who don't know Barbara Jordan. A job well done by KUT.

Comment for "A Red State Thanksgiving"

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Review of A Red State Thanksgiving

A well told story with a good tone for the holidays. The writing keeps you engaged, with good use of humor to keep listeners interested.

Also, good use of first person and good writing to let listeners imagine spending Thanksgiving in the South.

Good for showcase shows. Nice job.

Comment for "TOE/Cell Phones"

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Review of TOE/Cell Phones

This is very funny - espcially the last 10 minutes. Creative and different sounding. Good narative and use of tape. Fresh approach to our use of cellphones.