I was shocked when I read the the description. I've known Vaughn for years and I still talk to him. We've been great friends since middle school, and I know for a fact that he isn't addicted to video games. I gave this piece an honest opinion, and I gave it a low score because I feel like it really lacks honesty. I don't think he should be labeled a video game addict for playing video games a few times a week. After this he stopped playing pretty much all together. Aside from the fact that I feel that this story is unrealistic and lacks honesty and his true perspective I feel that this piece is edited quite well. It has a great flow and the timing of the music is sequenced well also. The music choice( Zelda, I think) was great. Whatever video game it from, it was obviously video game music. It's a uniquely themed story. A great story, just doesn't seem like his perspective.