Comments for My Criminal Life

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This piece belongs to the series "Incarcerated Youth Speak Out"

Produced by Mark

Other pieces by Blunt Youth Radio Project

Summary: This dreamy feature puts listeners in the mind of Mark, a young man who feels hopeless against the cycles of drugs and violence in his life.
 

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Review of My Criminal Life

A powerful piece that gives us insight into how a 19 year old young man feels to be in prison. The juxtaposition of what he feels and his mother feels is very moving. The choices of audio effects and overlapping voices really serve to help us understand his hardships and lead us to sympathize with him, or all men who have been jailed for making the wrong choices in life.

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This piece raises some real questions that only a look inside a person can stimulate. It is very much to Mark's credit that he is able to describe his plight in a way that makes one wonder what it is that prevents him from changing. We are puzzled that he cannot change when the ingredients seem to be present to support change. Yet the will or desire or need to change just doesn't seem to be there, while the hurt his lifestyle provokes is severe enough to prompt suicide attempts. This is an enigma laid out is a terse four minutes. The solution would seem to require many times that.

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Mark's mother's voice acting was a little trite, and the acting was rather juvenile; I mean honestly, who cries on the radio anymore? Much improvement on the entertainment aspectof this piece could have been show here with some blood, gore, oh, and a little more talent. I'd rate this a B, because I was bribed to, but otherwise, this is a secret C- in my book of Hall of SHAME.

I think this piece shows alot of promise, if fixed properly. It's raw, but maybe just too raw to hit America's airwaves with a vengeance. The effort should be applauded though, of course.

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Review of My Life as a Criminal

Young people began public radio more than three decades ago, but for the ensuing generation they failed to properly recruit new listeners and producers. Today, public radio is constructed with a bifocal glass ceiling of 50-somethings. Blunt Youth is one of several important projects to stop squinting and see the problem clearly, putting young voices behind the mic and looking for young ears.

Ironically, "My Life as a Criminal" scores higher in revealing its older subject, the mother, than the juvenile criminal of the title, Mark. With Mark's mom, the piece achieves something that radio excels at and which is hard to fake, especially to media-savvy young listeners – genuineness. "You walk through the house and look in his room and everything's there. But him."

After a radio verite open though, Mark's portions of the feature are littered with the detritus of the old CBS News President Van Gordon Sauter's Theory of Moments, "moments of feeling, moments of visceral emotion – no matter how manipulative," Ron Rosenbaum points out, that "have become the signatures of broadcast news and a certain kind of TV-magazine show".

The TAL-soundtrack, the overamped ax (jail door slamming), the evident reading of a script by the subject ("I started doing intense work on my addiction, which brought up hopelessness, anger, and hurt from past traumas." -- who talks like that?) subtract from rather than reveal Mark's humanity.

I've worked in a jail (though not a prison) and I know there's far more to Mark than comes across in this "Moment", notwithstanding his arresting suicide recitation.

The problem may well be more the result of form, a standard 4-1/2 -minute feature, than the potential of the content. If public radio is to avoid the downward slope of reality TV, memoir must have more raison than, "But it's true". Story and resonance are still the prime directives, regardless of age.

Mark does provide revelatory passages where he opens up and gives up a piece of real boy. "You come in here, your world stops, ya know?" Yeah. That's the genuine place where Mark's story needs to start.

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Review of My Life as a Criminal

Great radio. Marks story will rip your heart out. Through his struggle with addiction, incarceration, self loathing, trauma and attempted suicide there is a lot to digest about the state of penal system in America. I wish more material like this would hit the airwaves.

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This piece gives a small view into a cycle of hopelessness that keeps many people like Mark stuck in a self-destructive lifestyle. Pairing his reflections with his mother's memories creates a powerful emotional core that makes the story accessible beyond a simple fascination with the criminal system and the people entangled in it. Blunt ROCKS! So does Kerry Seed.

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I think that this BLUNT series is one of the most important projects happening in public radio today. Big, big BIG thumbs up to the courageous young people who created these, and to BLUNT for heading up the project. I suspect we're going to hear a lot more important and amazing radio coming from Long Creek in the months and years to come.