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Comment on piece: Exodus '47: Inside Out

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Review of Exodus '47 - Inside Out

Gripping story telling. Instead of the usual historical documentary - this work reveals very quickly the personality of the protagonists which makes the story alive, almost like a vibrant novel. The editing is creative and playful and keeps you in the room with these three lively jewish men.

I read the book, I saw the movie - this works as easily but it is even more dramatic - because it's the real thing !! - this stuff is all the most salient bits of the commerical story. There are such moving moments in the telling, you could never write anything like it.The interviewees are an eloquent colorful goldmine, and Cole handles the material respectfully, masterfully. The editing, writing and delivery keep a perfect pace - there's no lagging, no time for wandering.

Highly recommended - any time

Comment on piece: Crayola

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Review of Crayola

sweet story - who has no feelings for crayola? It was right and good to pay tribute on the anniversary and the producer is to be credited for that.

The production was a little heavy handed and I was chomping at the bit to hear more from the young colorers themselves (you can hear agressive coloring in the background) rather than the very laid back speaker. She loves crayons but not as effusive as you'd want.

I miss the fat crayolas...they're not so easy to find in the giant pack.

Could be difficult to place outside the anniversary year except of course, for the first day of school !

Comment on piece: Tupperware

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Review of Tupperware

I got enthused listening to this story--a real this American life odyssey. I liked the technique of multi-tracking, layering sound tracks over each other. This was most obvious when dealers told of the perqs that flowed from being a dealer.

What was confusing was that I didn't hear of anyone making money selling Tupperware. Party guests bought Tupperware for their hostess. Sales people got paid off in Tupperware. Who pays the electric bill? I wondered.

Comment on piece: GeoQuiz Parody

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Review of GeoQuiz Parody

No pans or slams. Recall your mother's words: "If you don't have anything nice to say..."

Ah! Ah!!!! I... Want... To... Say... What... I... Thought. Must. Be. Nice!!!!! Must. Not. Speak. True. Ah! Ugh! Opinion!!!! Uh! I think this is ... I want to say that this is ... Be nice! BE! NICE!
Judge for yourself.

Comment on piece: The Well-Rounded Radio Interview with Burnside Project

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Review of The Well-Rounded Radio Interview with Burnside Project

Before I heard this piece I had assumed that I would write that whether one enjoys it or not depends on whether you like Burnside Project (who I must confess to not being familiar with until now), but this is not the case. The band comprises a trio of engaged and engaging musicians whose enthusiasm for their work is infectious. This well rounded radio interview is aptly named: providing an insight into the artistic process and the nature of the musicans' collaboration, and also revealing the dramatic impact of digital editing software on music composition. In addition there is ample use of their music throughout the interview for those not already in the know.

Don't be put off by the host's somewhat speedy and fact-filled preamble, (I felt a bit breathless just listening); he is clearly knowledgeable and interested in his subjects, and appears to be a natural fast talker! HW

Comment on piece: 8 Minute Soulmate

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Review of 8 Minute Soulmate

Good use of sound, works well for any relationship show, Valentines, how the dating world has changed with technology.

I think that doing reality-style shows would work just as well on radio, maybe better, because of the closeness of radio. This wasn't quite like that, but it would be interesting to wire several people for a date and record everything they do or say, interview them afterwards, then produce a show. You could cover things and do things reality TV can't. Plus, it would be cheaper. If reality TV didn't turn me off so, it would be worth a shot. I bring this up here, but it re-triggers that idea in my head. The 8 minute date.

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Review of Alimentary, Watson (deleted)

Improv like this might be lost on the radio. I can't quite put my finger on it. This piece was well produced, good voices... but it just didn't click for me. Odd because I've liked the other pieces Offramp and 60 Second Radio has done.

I put Experimental because I haven't heard a lot of stuff like this. Maybe I'm just not listening in the right place. I heard a piece last month on Transom.org where the woman who produced it did the narration by ad-lib, and they put together the best takes. That, along with attempts like this, keep radio fresh. I guess this piece, IMO, lacked highly compelling, content. Not bad, it just didn't turn that corner.

Comment on piece: 8 Minute Soulmate

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Review of 8 Minute Soulmate

This is a polished, seamless piece that takes us along on an "eight-minute date", a scheme cooked up by a dating service whereby singles shuffle from one new date to another, with only eight minutes to find out as much as they can before moving on to someone new. They take notes and afterwards visit a website that helps sort out who is interested in whom, and whether the feelings are mutual. It's fun to listen to, partly because you get to eavesdrop a bit on these quickie conversations, and partly because you can't help but reflect on whether such a contrived system adds to or detracts from the romance of it all.

Comment on piece: Elviscop

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Elvis is a police officer in Kittery, Maine

This is a great example of a piece that takes a funny story concept - an Elvis impersonator who is also a police officer - and takes it deeper to teach you something. You'd be surprised at the connections between being Elvis and being a police officer. "It's all about the uniform," as Chuck would say. (And it's not just the cop who wants to be Elvis - the real Elvis actually wanted to be a cop - one of Elvis's 'proudest days' was getting the DEA badge from Nixon).

The piece is sound rich, with concert footage mixed with cop car footage. The transformation of Chuck's Maine accent to his Elvis accent is magical. And the story ends with one of the later stage Elvis hits (from the 'jumpsuit' years) - "Suspicious Minds." Hearing chuck croon along with elvis with a cop car in the background was enough to turn this Elvis novice into an Elvis fan.

A sure bottom-of-the-hour crowd pleaser for any type of show.

Comment on piece: Dear Harold

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Review of Dear Harold

Great piece -- would work great for any relationship segment or show, especially about breakups. I could see this as part of a Theme show, or during Valentine's Day (as counter-point to the lovey-doveyness, except for the ending).

Comment on piece: One Last Haircut

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Review of One Last Haircut

Man, what a great bit. Storytelling at it's best. This piece could be a great closer for a variety of shows. Great clipper sounds and simple straight-forward narrative--one your listeners are sure to enjoy.

Comment on piece: Duane Jarvis' "Delicious"

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Review of Duane Jarvis' "Delicious"

Very Nice--Straightforward. I like the fact Steven lets the record spin almost throughout the entire piece(s). The segments I listened to (I and II) worked particularly well with just Duanes' narration. It seemed to provide a nice back and forth between the acts and tracks. The only thing that I felt was kind of distracting was the echo on Duanes voice. He must have been recorded in a very big room.

Comment on piece: Queer Youth Valentine

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Review of Queer Youth Valentine

A vox pop piece featuring "on the street" Q&A with GLBT teens about Valentine's Day. If matched with other features and/or interview segments, it can provide a unique perspective from a group of articulate youth.

Comment on piece: Homeschooling Dance Party

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Review of Homeschooling Dance Party

The setting of the piece makes it hard to take more than just a superficial look at homeschoolers' social lives. But Hillary did a good job capturing the feel of the event, and its unusual nature. Her attention to the similarities between these kids and traditionally-schooled teens was careful and thorough.

The sound was fine, although nothing particularly innovative. What was at issue was the way kids feel about their lives, however, so the audio served that purpose.

Finally, Hillary's delivery was - unsurprisingly - oh-so-This American Life. Studied, relaxed, and terribly familiar.

Comment on piece: Confessions of Teen Stripper

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Review of Confessions of Teen Stripper

Reasons to put this on the radio: 1) The topic is one that affects a lot of people, though most listeners may only have vague notions about it; 2) The tone is unpolished and real, in a way that makes you feel as if you're in one-on-one conversation with the speaker; 3) in just four and a half minutes, the piece paints a remarkeably detailed picture, I think.

Other comments: At first, this sounds like an interview with the questions slightly awkwardly edited out (was it?); then the speaker warms up and moves through it more smoothly. By the end, I was really drawn in. The lead-in (and out) about the newspaper is the awkward part.

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Review of Earth & Sky parody "Air & Dirt" (deleted)

Well done. These could fit almost anywhere. I've listened to a variety of these -- they could be used en masse on April Fool's Day in replacement of the 'modules' it is making fun of (in this case "Earth & Sky"). There are also some BBC parodies.

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Review of Journey to the Underworld (deleted)

This reviewer was happy to hear more fiction for the radio. I'd like to hear this as part of the Offramp show to see how it fits.

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Review of The Tribe of Als (deleted)

When I was a kid I used to think I wasn’t cool enough to pass for a Joel. Our minds are so inclined to make connections—to develop theories, to create meaning out of what’s random. Do we ultimately have to claim responsibility for our name? I hope not. My middle name is Stuart-- “Stuey” for short. Charming, well conceived, and well executed. It makes you think about a phenomenon you may not have given a second thought, which is always a good starting point in a radio story. It would be a nice addition in a show on parenting-- about naming your child and the albatross you might be saddling them with.

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Review of The Tribe of Als (deleted)

This is an engaging morning drive-time piece that will get you talking all day about first names, what they connote and whether they fit or not. The piece is well-produced and the variety of voices gives the piece a nice texture.

Comment on piece: Fred Christina Remembers Everything

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Review of Fred Christina Remembers Everything

There is something enjoyable about hearing from a person who takes pride and pleasure in his work. And after 64, that's right, 64 years of waiting tables at a fancy restaurant in New York City, that's how you would have to describe Fred Christina. A polished and pleasurable story indeed, probably as much so as a dining experience at The Plaza.