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Office Artist - great topic, could use some editing


Matt Kaufman

Posted on August 11, 2004 at 11:50 AM

Overall, I like the piece and the concept a lot, but it feels a bit "loose" and could be a little sharper. No need for new recording, just tightening. Would certainly be appropriate for Morning Edition/All things considered.

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  • "Office Artist"
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  • Summary: Office Artist Larissa Brown finds beauty in ordinary office supplies.

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