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- Eric Nuzum
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- "What's Left is Not Who We Are"
- Summary: Ash scatterings at sea, as told by the ship's captain
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Review of What's Left is Not Who We Are
Eric Nuzum
Posted on April 30, 2004 at 11:41 AM
In the piece, the captain offers anecdotes of a few memorable interments, including some of her own personal reflections on death and burial. The structure of the piece is loose and it would be better to focus on just one anecdote rather than two (plus several tangential reflections). The clearer direction would make a deeper impression on the listener.
There is music that comes up occasionally under the narration that is not necessary. It's timidly inserted and doesn't establish a necessary presence. There is music at the end of the piece that is either not phased correctly or not balanced properly (it can only be clearly heard out of the right channel).