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unique story


I thought the intro to this story was really interesting and caught my attention. I thought it was cool to see the man's motivation for drinking Soylent, even though I can't really understand why people would drink it if the taste isn't great. I liked how the narrator tried it herself to give a perspective from a "regular" person. I do think the narrator should have tried to use more inflection to make her narrations more interesting, but the information she used was great and she clearly researched the topic.