Piece Comment

Review of Homestead Childhood


As a young child Grace, along with her mother and stepfather, moved to land in Double Adobe, Arizona, to build their new home. But as time went on their plans weren’t working out as they had originally intended. What started out as an exciting adventure for Grace had become more and more miserable as the years passed. When she was a teenager she moved to Tucson Arizona, where her mother later joined her after breaking up with her stepfather.
This piece was one of my favorites for its interesting story and well-thought- out, well-put-together content. But there were a few small questions I had that the story didn’t answer, such as her age at different times though the piece and her name, which I acquired in the story’s description. Overall, though, I thought this was an excellent piece.