i think this piece is hilarious and there are so many stories involved with driving and first times driving. nice diversity of voices.

those levels aren't too hard to fix. watch your levels as you're editing, instead of going by your ears. you can even turn the sound off and just make they're consistent. also, new bit of criticism, slow down a bit while reading. cause your writing is smart and you swallow some of your best lines.

i love when the music cuts out as the guy gets a speeding ticket! good comic timing.