Hola,
Well this is a very good piece. I love the idea of how you're not from here or there. Your story is interesting and your audio mixes are good in the beginning between the Mexican anthem and the U.S. anthem. I would just recommend you don't speak so close your your mic or what not, because we can hear a lot of popping in your words. Also some fades need to be fixed but overall it's great! Im born here but I can totally relate! Keep up the good work! =]